Manmarziyan 2 states chap 18

Hloo all i’m back with the comedy ride. I’m over the moon for the comments you guys are giving . So monday we know what will that word will do so only wanted a happy ride of this . So please do comment your views as you like this….

Enjoy the ride….

Saral was about to call radhika. He took is mobile and called her.
A computer voice came ; ur account balance is too low to make a call. He looked at his mobile and the dog outside made a face that was more than enough for his insult. He gulped and gave an angry glare to the dog. It saw him and his glare and it stood up and gave a grave glare and barked He gulped and ran upstairs and closed his room.

Saral ; tam – andha naayukku een enna kanda ivlo kovam varudhu??
eng – why is that dog is in grave angry in me ??
Dog’s mind voice ; dare not give me that look to me again else i will take ur flesh from ur…….. Thigh?? No no not enough of flesh will get well what about stomach. Yuck he eats all junk food. Chest…… Yuck he sweats badly…… Fine let me bite his thigh which will be better for my health and smiles thinking him with bandage in his legs and the way he walks hopping and the dog laughed. Tha tha came out of the dog and he laughed at his tricks.

So now u guys guessed it. Tha tha possessed the dog which was seriously better choice of him and then he taunted whenever saral was about to think of radhika.

Ardhika and nesam were updated by tha tha of his taunting and they will die laughing. But saral was planning to meet radhika the next day.
Saral called from landline.
Radhika ; kon hai ??
Saral ; tam – cone ice ah?? Chellam naa mama pesaren da…
eng – cone ice ah ?? Dear im saral speaking ya……
Radhika was breathing heavily as why that mongoose called her.
Radhika (with frustrated voice) ; enna ?? (what ??)
Saral jerked in his seat because of her tone.
Saral ; he he he
tam – chellam nalaikku unna veliya kutitu polamnu iruken da adhan kekalamennu…….
eng – dear tomo i want u to take u oitside. Thats y wanted to ask u……..
Radhika thought best way to make him scared as he does not know hindi, new city ha ha ha a devil replica of radhika painted red head having horns a tail and hand with trishool that too red. (guys do u all remember tom and jerry when they want to taunt each other there would be a devil and an angle. Im not using angle because radhika herself is angle adadaaa kavidha kavidha (waa kavitha kavitha)…….

She smiled and sang a jingle ; u and i in this beautiful world. Saral disconnected the call and shook his body as if he was getting electrical shock.
Radhika blasted in laugh and rolled ver the floor.
Sam ; oye madam what happened ??
Radhika ; saral called me and said ge wants me to take outside.
Neil ; what did u say ??
Radhika ; I said yes coz that’s the best way to make him run.
Arjun saw her lying over the floor and laughing was looking at her.
Radhika ; arjun katappa called. Katappa is the nick name for saral. Donno y they kept the name but they fixed katappa.
Arjun ; ennadhu (what……)
Radhika who saw arjun’s face was laughing like hell by pointing at his face. Nesam who saw that too joined her. Then arjun too smiled and sat on the floor pulled her and said “ok what he said???”
Sam ; he asked ur girlfriend to come out …..
Neil ; she said yes.
Arjun ; so what plan is this girl has ??
Radhika ; super u found out . Yes i have a plan and the plan is ………. Back ground music pink panther’s music. (now dont ask me why the plan was not written as that was their plan and they did not even say that to me so im restricted to say that to u).
All the 5 (tha tha of course) nodded.
Radhika ; tam – therikka vidalama……
eng – shall we make the blast………

All nodded with a wicked smile in their face and tha tha laughed big and banged the screen……..

Next day…….

Saral mother called him. She was a hindi serial addict dont think that she will see that in tamil dubbed version. But for her she wants her son’s marriage in north indian style.
So she called him . Hmm she was like an over acting mother character. Imagine anyone who comes to u…..

Meena (saral’s mother) ; saral ohh beta how r u ??
Saral ; tam – ippo endha serial paatha effect ??
eng – why is the reaction ?? Which serial did u see ??
Meena ; nahi beta ……
Saral ; tam – beta enga ma tharanga ?? Ella verum soru dhan.
eng – who is giving me beta only food…..

Beta tam meaning daily wages for drivers, in hindi means son.

Meena banged her head for his stupid reply. She cut the call. Saral saw the phone and said “kudumbamey loosah ??” (is the total family loose ???).

Radhika texted him to come by bike and to the hyper city mall.

He changed his dress with light green shirt and pink pant. He stepped down and a stray dog which was going that side saw him. He died the next second. His uncle saw that and he shouted ; tam – ada nasama poravaney unnoda dressah pathu naaye sethupochu da.
eng – you stupid hell the dog died seeing ur dress.
Saral ; ha haaaa haaaa (rajini style laugh) magizhchi…. (happy) Think the way rajni kant will say in kabali style.

He goes to the hyper city mall and was looking at it wuth open mouth . Suddenly a house fly entered his mouth and saw his cavities and thought worst mouth ever and came out and inhaled some pure air.

Arjun came with nesam and radhika in a big car. Saral saw the car and saw sam sitting he saw her and his jaw dropped the way she came out . High heels with max knee level dress. He stepped his foot front towards sam but neil twisted her hand and slowly he wrapped her hand over his waist like a bond slowly wrapping his hand over his bond lady for the mission. Then she steeped down. Radhika she was looking damn gorgeous then he stepped out………. Arjun like a………. Use any words to explain his charms. Then tha tha stepped out with his ghost wife. Saral was just followed them like the Vodafone pug dog. Now u remember what she sung u and i in this beautiful world….

Saral stepped inside the mall. Immediately neil came from other side and took the petrol from the bike. He made the tank empty and kicked the bike for 2 to 3 times as he saw the way sam and radhika.
Neil (spoke while kicking the bike) ; saley………radhika and sam ……. Kill u damn it. And the bike head turned towards him and was speaking to him like what did i do to u??
Neil ; sry bro……

Saral called radhika and she attended the call.
Radhika ; mama…….. Saral was in moon when she called mama.
Saral ; chellam i want to meet u now……
Radhika ; turn back.
Saral turned and she smiled at him. Arjun amd nesam were buring looking at the way he was flirtling with radhika. Radhika slowly walked towards him and said ; mama nee mattum chennaikku poi oru velaya pathenna naan inga padichu mudichuttu anga vandhuduven appa dhane namma kalyanatha pathi amma kitta pesa mudiyum ??
Eng – Mama if u go to chennai and find a job there and i will also finish my studies here and then we will speak about the marriage….. Saral was showing his 32 teeth she twisted him and said after marriage dear. She started from there and he was jumping in happiness.
Saral ; radhika pakkava ??? Radhika who was walking just smiled at him and when she turned her face changed.
Radhika ; tam – poda pooo……
eng – go yaar go…..
They came out as they had pther plans to do and when saral took the bike and he was kicking, kicking and kicking…..
Bike ; hmm he was also kicking u r also kicking. What wrong did i do ??
Saral was kicking and saw radhika waving her hand and she turned and said ; matna da mavaney….means pakdgaye saaley….

She said he will leave to chennai… All shouted and they all went to the other place and enjoyed the time.

Precap – saral to chennai…. Collage starts and masti starts….

So thats it for today guys. Do you all like that ?? Wasit big enough ?? Do comment ur views. love u all ….. stay blessed and always smile……

43 comments

  1. Jara

    |Registered Member

    Omg my stomach is aching ….beta yaru kodukranga lol… Pona Epi la naayu madhikala dis Epi even worst EE kuda madhikala lol… Saral pavam ka…nenga chanceh ila…therikka vituteenga…love u loadzzzz…

    • S.v

      |Author

      Jara jara jara saral paavama ?? Avan dhaney radhika kitta flirt panna adhan. Thank u so much . Love u too

  2. Jessie

    Ena ma ippadi vaariteengale ma… oru eeku kooda vittu vaikala.. low balance ..lol..but cavities… why..avan toothpaste la uppu illaya hahaha.. Sv .. kalakiteenga.. avan katappa illa kaalakeya..lol andha kavithe..kavithe.. aha.. !Rads oru valiya sadhichuta.. perum Magizchi..!! Ghost paatiya!! Loved this Laughter ride.. I really admire ur talent on writing humours.. u bring it in each n every scene… πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘TC n loads of love

    • S.v

      |Author

      Avan toothpastela uppum deep clean unarvum illa. Lol ur comment made me laugh like hell kalakeya. Y ??? remember the dialogue of that onnum puriyadhu….. rofl love u soo much jessie ma and thank u soo much

  3. Shree

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    Ada ponne!! Unna Kovil kati kumbidanum!! Atadi!! What is this? Dog analysing which body part to taste.. kadaisila.. Tigh.. lol.. Thatha is the show stealer!! You and I… I still remember that.. Radhika rolling on the floor.. lol… Aiyo naaye Setu pocha? Why this kolaveri? Yen Inda sodanai.. Rip to the dog.. mall..

    Adiye.. unta plan solalena Vera yaruta soluvanga. Nee dhaane writer.. unnake teriyame va?! Pink panther!! Tadan tadan … tadan tadan tadan… Tadan ttadaaaaannnn. lol.. I be detective now..

    Beta va?! Omg lol.. Ivana vachi oru whole comedy series panalam.. verum soru.. avan adukum laik illa… Ammave Hindi terinji vachiruka apo ivanuku enna kedu… Oops sorry… Hehe.. ponne paruvala la?

    Magizhchi aa?! *beep beep beep* to him.. I saw Kabali day before yesterday and I’ve had enough listening to it.. #kabalida .. lol..

    Omg!! Pavam anda bike.. enna pavam panucho.. Neil kicking it.. cursing rasam… head turn.. apologies.. lol.. Ada sandalame.. eeyum madikaleya. Enna kodumai sir idhu? Terika vidalama?or is it odalama? Lol mama.. Saral ku full on kushi.. lol.. from pug Ippo full on serious college lover boy ayiduvan.. saniyane.. po po.. bike paavum.. I pity it now… romba voda vangiduchu..

    Ponne I love you so much!! Every update I end up laughing so much.. I’m literally covering my mouth, trying hard to catch breath… Appa is sleeping on the sofa and I’m here connecting the WiFi and reading.. vayiru valikidu po.. cheeks red and paining..

    love you love you!! Love you so much ponne!! En love a konjam purinjiko please.. naa unna bayangarama love pandrein.. Pleeeaaassseee..

    Romba senti aayiteno?

    Post soon di.. Love you 😍😘

    • S.v

      |Author

      Athadi nee enna panna enna ?? i’m laughing like hell oru mini update lol. Yaar shree that plan would be so nice when you see executed not by saying and sathyama enn kita solala….Nee enna vena sollu no problem at all it is just a comedy damakka. He he he i wish you laugh loudly. Love you too i’ll understand you come my dear. Rofl Love you lods dear.

  4. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Finally my stress buster was posted..Yayy!!! πŸ˜€ OMG!!!Jaan!!That was so funny..Radhika is road runner for Saral.. πŸ˜‰ lol..Bechara bike got all the kicking today..Haha..Thatha aatma in dog..God!!Seriously jaan!!How can you think so many ideas??Please share your brain with me naa,pleasee pretty pleasee.. πŸ˜€ Stay blessed and lots of love.. πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€

    • S.v

      |Author

      He he he my brain i am still wondering that . Lol you can share my brain anything for my jaan lol. Love you lods jaan alwyas smile jaan and be happy

  5. Brin

    Outstanding and very funny the dog was very funny only to know it was dada ji, eagerly waiting for the next update. πŸ™‚

  6. Sammy

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    Haha tha tha possessed dog. .fly ..entered in his mouth and came out. ..hehe that was funny ..dog died ..lol ..and saral towards Sam ..awesome . Amazing chappy hubby ..I am on the floor now ..thanks for the update really ..it is the best thing happened in the morning πŸ™‚

    • S.v

      |Author

      Wifie thank you so much. Sure i know the effect of monday so all mondays will be a damakka mondays with this 2 states . Love you lods my wife. You are my soul. Oops so romantic. he he he love you

  7. Sree

    |Registered Member

    I cant stop laughing.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Saral oda dressing sense thangala paaaaahhh 😡😡
    Pavam anda stray dog. Aniyayama ada konutan😒😝😝
    How can u think like this and all. I mean bike talking and dig too talking. Everything was very funnyπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    ‘Beta enga matharanga’ anda line la na vilundhu vilundhu sirichenπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    When radhika said ” mama ” i was on rolf cuz i imagined her saying in the way like in old movies they use to say.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Very funny ep … Waiting for nxt
    Love u 😘😘😘

    • S.v

      |Author

      He he he thank you so much sree nalla siri and i love the line beta enga ma tharanga ella maasa sambalam dhan. Funny line to the core. Sure dear will update them once i finish with my other ff updates . Love you soo much for those words dear.

  8. Sreee

    |Registered Member

    Accho akka wowww…i have no words to tell…hilllarious…beautiful…and antha nai seththu porathu…omg ennakku sirichchu sirichchu vaere valikkuthu…pavam antha nai entha naye pathu sethu pochu….rads in devil’s form….ohh u just nailed it….wonderful writting akka…thank god u r writing this one..so ennnakku eppe tension nallum ,all i have to do is to browse for this ff…ofcourse…dad illatha pothuthan,illa naan sirikkurathu paththu ,ennai kovilukku kuttitu poi veppalai adichuduvanga….just love u so much akka…ungal entha sevayai mechchi ungalukku naan nagesh pattam tharen…..keep laughing like us….muahhh….bear hugs😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • S.v

      |Author

      Omg vepalaya why your laugh was that big?? Yes if you have any tension come to 2 states as the main moto is a stress buster,, Big words Nagesh is a legend dear. I’m may be just his foot dust aana thank you for those big words. Love you lods dear.

  9. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    S.v dear just give yourself a big hug for me, this is more than hilarious can’t tell u which part I loved the most coz I loved all of it darling. Am laughing so hard and am going to read it again what a great way to start my Monday. Now am sure my day will go well coz I will read this again n again. Thank u and love u

    • S.v

      |Author

      Thank you so much gianna you made my day gosh you always encourage me . Have a happy monday and happy week ahead dear. Love you lods. Thanks for the hugs tooo…

  10. gayathri

    Sv my darling hw r u ????? Sry im nt keeping well nw a days dts y late cmt bt u made me laugh like hell nw my stomach is paining its a cmdy dammaka I luv to core I missed you a lot dr luv u muhhhaaaaa…… πŸ™‚

    • S.v

      |Author

      Gayathri where were you dear ?? Missed you … You fine ??? Thats the punishment laugh and let your stomach hurt. Lol Love you lods dear. Bear my hugs and kisess tooo

  11. Ritu

    Sv dear again u made me laugh like hell..I love u for that..hilarious chapter..tha tha possessing the dog OMG πŸ˜‚ Saral..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ god I pity the bike..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ superb dear…u r amazing ..really wanna know the secret how u come up wid amazing ideas..waiting for nxt…post soon and plz update ur SS last shot soon..m dying to read that.😊 love u..tc

    • S.v

      |Author

      He he he secret is the stupidity happens on a daily basis including me doing stupid acts. And dear happy news your last shot is done will update tonight and let me know after you read them . Love you lods

  12. rossy

    Aaaahhhhh….m seriously going to kill tu…where my comment vanished…aaargh m really frustrated…how funny comment I gave now I forget everything….
    First salral balance low…then tha tha possessed dog…omg then his pink green combo dress n stray dog died…lol..after dog’s pov now bike’s pov…m gone seriously…i laughed hard yesterday midnight for which my parents thought if I m possessed by ghost which is impossible though…coz I can possess ghost but they can’t πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    • S.v

      |Author

      he he he rosie happened to me too and so i was frustrated and i copied pasted again and again and the effect , i memorised all the words. Lol well hello how can the ghost posses us when we our self is the big ghost , he he he i included me too here. Ya you will posses them with your charms. Love you lods my sweet twin sister.

  13. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Sv I can’t stop laughing…it was hilarious …dog’s POV and then poor fly OMG… how does these ideas come to you mind girl I am amazed πŸ™‚ loved it to the core and the icing on the cake tha-tha with his ghost wife … don’t know about Saral’s 32 teeth mine are definetely dancing …. loved it yarr stay blessed cutie pie πŸ™‚ stay blessed πŸ™‚

    • S.v

      |Author

      Didi thank u now im showing my 32 teeth. Di im in moon di for those words. Thank u soo soo much di . Love u soo much didi.

  14. Roma

    Wowwww SV….it’s hilaaaaaaarious n very lovelyyyyyy. ..I just loved it to the coreeeee. . …I love this story very very much. …sv my dear I love the way you told, how dog was talking next fly was talking….n even bike was talking…I was rolfing. …hehehe. …lol….rads plan worked….so glad to read this unique splendid story. …keep it up honeyyy. ..love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug β™‘β™‘β™‘

    • S.v

      |Author

      Awww roma thank u thank you thank you for your comment. U r my spl person. He he he more to go with this comedy ride. Love u lods Muuhhhaaa……….

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