manmarziyaan…new dimensions…chapter 24(last chapter)

Chapter 24 (last chapter)

Thanks a lot to all of u for supporting me till date…I never wrote in my lifetime,still u all bear me n my brain eatings but the encouragement I got from all of u that is quite heavenly…thanks to all readers who read ffs here…n one request, plzzzz support each n every writer here…ur comments gave them that happiness n excitement even that is out of imagination…coz its only u people who can make them feel special in writing…thanks a lot ?…sincere hats off to all writers here…

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Dawn was about to vanish as sun prepared to come…polar wind,the chilled breeze Shivered the spine inside body…yet Arjun was all awake since last night…he passed his night just by watching his lady love who lied beside him…radhika slept peacefully,Arjun caressed n patted her in between affectionly…after radhika love confession he was so excited n happy he was not ready to leave her for one second,for one cm distance also…sun rays started to spreading across the room…radhika opened her eyes lazily to see Arjun stared her with a smiling face…Arjun hugged her tightly n asked u slept well yesterday?? Radhika nodded…he said her to get refresh soon n invited to go out…

Arjun went out to check reception of raguna n asked them to book any ice house igloo for them…Arjun took radhika inside to show her the beauty of ice house…(guys just imagine your fav ice house…m imagining frozen ice house)…he sat down on his knees holding a ice crown…

Arjun: I know radhika m not a perfect guy for u,I gave u so much pain but yet I want to be with u till the eternity,until my each birth…but I love u so much that is even I can’t describe it words…I’ll make u happy…will u please Marry me…

he was so emotional…radz took that ice crown n made him stand up…she said isn’t that obvious I’ll marry u only…as she marked Arjun was emotional she wanted to cheer him…

radhika: Arjun don’t u think it’ll be little early ,I just confessed u yesterday n u r all excited n uncontrollable now…

Arjun could feel the her hidden laughter : Yes I m not in control…if my girlfriend will be so hot n sweet then how can u expect me to b a saint…

Arjun brought a cake with dry fruits overload n told radhika to cut it…he said u know how polar area are…everything convert to ice with a fraction of moment…so I bought this one…next time I’ll give everything u want…they cut cake n celebrate their proposal day…

Arjun : lets go back to India …I’ll inform my di…i v to ask ur family for ur hands…n I can barely resist now…
Radhika laughed at his statement…they both started walking with holding each other hand…..

AFTER 3 YEARS

Prerana was beating her head with her hand…she literally shouted now both of u stop now…else I’ll throw u out from my house…then both of u brothers do whatever u want…both Neil n Rajiv stopped…

Neil with his cute dimple smile: Mom do u think we were in fight…how can u think that..

Rajiv with puppy face: Yes maa…look at us how we get along with each other…
With that both brother side hugged n exchanged a hi fi…

Prerana: Even god can’t be able to understand u both…what radhika want u just ask her n gift that..why fighting…even my daughters are more intelligent…they are girls but they went for shopping without any chaos…

Neil: Chasini is mine…i know what is better for her…

Rajiv: What…she is my sweetie…now u stop ur nonsense…we will buy what I want…

Prerana: Enough boys…u both utter a single word I won’t leave u…when u’ll grow up…now go n ready…if u will miss ur flight then I don’t know what ur radhika will do to u,but Arjun surely kill u both…

Sam n shree are enjoying their times..Sam regarded shree as her lil sister…sam asked shree how much u happy after marriage…shree blushed n said di u know…sam said to shree that don’t misunderstand Rajiv’s feelings for chasini…i did a mistake in past…so I told u both of them are gems …never get jealous of them…shree smiled n said m not narrow minded di…i respect their bond..n I got a loving family only because of him…so how can I forget that…sam happily hugged her n said we’ll get ready for our trip…

Priya slept peacefully…saurav came n think I only heard about kumbhakarna but I witnessed it today…he already tried four times to woke her up…he took some water n poured her face…she jerked n said if u have any enmity with me that u tortured me…saurav pinched her cheek n said my lovely dear wife did u forget what is today…we r getting late…priya checked date n jumped out from bed…she ran toward bathroom…

Arjun wake up from his sleep but still his eyes closed he searched his side on bed n find empty…he thought I have to do something serious…she never obey me…again gone without waking me up…radhika came to room n found bed empty…she thought Arjun went to washroom n turned to go…Arjun came from back n hugged her …

Arjun: how many times I have to tell u that I want to see u in morning first…u always left me n I got fear…

Radhika: How much stubborn child u become day by day…

Arjun: Child n stubborn…let me show u if m a child or grown up man…

He tightened his grip n come closer to her face…radhika pushed him towards bathroom n said brush urself first…Arjun give a smile n hugged her gently said happy first marriage anniversary n happy birthday to u …be ready for my surprise…radhika wished him…

Before going to bathroom Arjun wanted to tease her more…

Arjun : Btw u don’t mind those marks I gave u on ur neck…he winked…

Radhika ( fake anger): U shameless…coz of u I v to wear turtle neck dress which I hate…do that again I’ll not leave u…

Arjun: I’ll do that again n again…what will u do…i wanna see…n most importantly if my wife is hot n beautiful what I can do…

Radhika took a pillow throw at him ,before that he entered bathroom hurriedly with a mocking laughter…

It was evening…Arjun home decorated with flowers…both get ready to came down…they praises each others look…Arjun put his palms on radhika’s eye took her to living room…when she opened her eyes she saw the most adorable persons of her life…Arjun said hows my surprise…radhika had tears in her eyes…neil n Rajiv stood at two side of her…they said enough of emotional drama ,now celebration time…ankush n teji are busy decorating cake…all are wishing them happy married life n radhika ‘s birthday…they were happily chit chatting with themselves…they laughed in between…

Eleders saw them happy…dilip said now m at ease that they are together n happy…sila Devi n prerana nodded…they said nothing is there more lovable than seeing ur children’s brightened mood…mala wished god will bless them…they will be together forever…they discussed to take out some photographs of their happy moments….now all are posing for photos….their bond will become more stronger with each passing time…if they are together they can conquer the world…a bond of pure love,affection,joy,sharing,caring established…new sun rises spreading the rays of happiness…

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This is the end of my ff…i don’t know if u feel it a incomplete ending or not…but I personally think happiness n togetherness is most important things in life…so I ended it here…thanks all for ur inspiration….

Credit to: Rosie

65 comments

  1. Gauri

    Rosie darling this was an amazing FF and a beautiful way to end it…loved it and now want the dark fiction update …pls plspost soon 🙂 love you

  2. I am going to miss this episode but glad it end it in a good way. Brillent writing Rosie, well done in this episode and I know you’ll do great on Dark action flic. 🙂

  3. priyap

    woahhhhhh……3 cheers to you ……………according to me it was perfect ending ………………..loved it completely ……… i’ll miss this FF alot …………….. love you ……..tc

  4. Rosie its too gud I liv it……I luv neil&rajiv fight……aradhika cute conversation n bedroom I luv iy totally…….Yup bear hug fr u….tc

  5. subha

    amazing episode rosie……….i love it…….ending super……but miss u r ff (this) thank u…….tc

  6. feby

    di….aap really maandey di ke vajah se hot romance likhne lage ho…kya baath hae… u made me also to blush…lol…all r advancing in romance except me…uf…lol…ending was suprb…mindblowing… and with a real happy note…. felt bit bad tat u ended it… but ya… i will surely keep tis one close to my heart…. and u evn kept ur words..u waited for me to come back for ending tis..love u alot…..will miss this one……muah……

    • Thanks my feby baby…how could not I wait for u when u told me…me writing romance plzzzz don’t make romantic writers to hide…m happy seeing u back..lots of love ?

      • feby

        lol….. how is ur granny….. is there any improvement…????and iam really telling….u r now writing awesome romance part….in last part also…it was awesome….

      • Feby baby looks like u r gaining knowledge regarding romance…lol…padho padho…btw what about ur next academics???

      • feby

        gaining knowledge toh ho gaya.. maandey di ne sab kuch samjha diya na apne ff me…aur specifically boln toh us suhaagrath ke description me…. my god…..woh knowledge digest karne ka inthezar tha….. woh ho gaya… ajeeb lag raha hae…par ab badi ho rahi hun na…teekh hae…lol….abha di ke ff jaise bolun…”feby baby has grown up!!”.. lol….ya….architecture only…whn enquired every1 is ready to give me admission coz of my marks…. but iam trying for govt. quota… and they r telling i can get in tat too…so waiting eagerly for it…otherwise i will go for civil engineering….no one can denying admission….i will get on the spot admission and my parents can go and demand it rather than asking for it…. so iam now happy….waiting&waiting for the best outcome of my hardwork….baaki sab kuch bhagvan ke hath me….lol….

  7. Sathya

    Rosie… it is a very cute episode with a good lovely ending. You done a great job in ur first attempt as a writer. Now you are proving yourself in your second ff which no can dare to write it (Dark fiction)…am so happy for you..keep rocking as always like this.. god bless you 🙂 🙂 🙂

  8. oh darling y u ended so soooonnnnn 🙁 🙁 🙁 i was expecting more from u :O :O am sad coz u ended ff soon 🙁 but same time happy for ur super happy ending 😀 😀 😀 its really cute 😀 😀 loveddddddddddd ittttttt much 😀 😀 neil n rajiv are really awesome 😀 😀 😀 superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb darling 😀 😀 loved it from core of my heart 😀 😀 love u 😀 😀 😀 and of course dear as u said ll try to give comments for all ff darling 😀 love u 😀 take care 😀

  9. Chinmayi

    Rosie it’s very cute and happy wala ending…tq for writing this for us…plss post dark soon 🙂

  10. Wow Rosie dear…..amazing…now its perfect ending…this ff have reserved a special place in my heart forever……gonna miss it…thanks dear for giving this lovely ff….eagerly waiting for dark ff…lots of loves n hugs for u…tc…muaaaahhh…

  11. Wow my heroine Rosie…Lots of roses for you…Actually this ff is like a rose itself having beautiful essence of story n fragnance of romance…n last epi is really very beautiful by every way…will miss this ff always..i knw we can meet in your powerful ff Mmz Dark..love this ff always..love you dear..

  12. Sv

    Im a bit emotional now. How can u bring up with all emotions at a same tome. Pls write another ff of our manmarziyan pls . I will miss this badly. Im actually crying and pls dont stop ur writing dear.

    Rosie u are an awesome writer. I want more from u. This ff gave me a lovely twin sister. Stay blessed love you so much and bear hugs and kisses. Muuhhhaaa.

    Bring up with some happg and romantic love story . I wanna read that from u dear.

    • Ayeee my little twin don’t b saddy else I’ll cry…we will b always in touch in ur ff or my dark…about me writing a love story…don’t know…coz m realistic so more than writing by imagination its easy for me to write something really exist,real fact with little fictional touch…k think about that after dark…lots of love ??

      • Sv

        what ever u feel like writing write but dont stop writing. i wanna see u with many ffs . pls dear. love u lods and stay blessed . love u

      • Very big applaud for ur encouraging…I’ll will write whatever I know u r there to read…my lovely twin I’ll think to write os after dark…?? b happy…smile always ??

  13. deeva

    After reading ur last epi I wish it could never stop but darling I know every thing has to end one day… but u r incredible…. fabulous…. amazing…… what a beautiful end…… it was lovely….. love u take care dear…… ??

  14. sammy

    Now Rosie di let me cry ..no will stop me today .oh god …my vision is also blurred.. I can’t say anything further…Awesome ;super; mind blowing; excellent; heart touching; …ff ..I will miss it:-( :'(

  15. Supriya.

    Di u nailed it….I don’t have words to praise you….m speechless…. Di this ff will always stay in my heart…..I will always cherish those memories where I laughed…. I felt happy and sad sometimes becoz of this ff…..di yup I agree….. And the lived happily ever after z my fav end……love you soo much……plz update dark fiction…..keep rocking…

  16. Dev

    Apt ending buddy….all happy happy….joys n frndships……lovd d ff…….will miss it
    Love u lots…hugs….tc

  17. Fatarajo (Cricket fan :P)

    Hey Rosie was a silent reader of ur ff will miss it a lot ur ff is just mindblowing dear keep it up

  18. aastha

    didi its really nice……..happy that everything ended all and well……….Arjun’s proposal scene was nyc…………..neil and rajiv fi8ig was really cute…………ardhika mrng scene too……..loved his surprise……………..love u…………TC………

  19. Shanaya

    Very very very nice dear i luved it!!!! U know i went back to 90 page to read ur 1st update n so on Was very time consuming but truly it was worth it!! all the best n good luck??????

  20. Gianna

    Awwwwwww what an ending Rosie. Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. Stay blessed my dear. ???

  21. Shree

    Oho mamma… Going all senti.. It was beautiful.. Smooth and simple…. Three year leap…. Rajiv and Neil!! Lol.. Sam and Shree are enjoying.. Prerna!! What will the poor soul do? Loved ardhika….. wow!! Birthday -anniversary!! Cool!!

    Loved it to the core…. Will miss this ff…. Miss you… Update dark soon…. And sorry for the late comment

    Love you loads… Tc… Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Lol….my daughter don’t b senti…its k if u late or could not comment…i understand ur study pressure…u came finally…big thanks…lots of love ??

  22. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding ff …loved the way you narrated each n every details of the scenes n character’s expressions. ..ardhika romantic moments were veryyyyyyy cuteeeee. ..arjun’s emotional proposal in ice house n rads teasing so lovelyyyyyy. ..neil n rajiv fit over rads present was really hilarious. ..Sam n shree cute convo on fraj’s friendship bond with rads was really awesome. …ardhika sooo cute romantic moments….ardhika anniversary n rads bday celebration was beautiful n amazing. ..very awesome n incredibly beautiful happy ending….loved it to the core…..very interesting n unique lovely story. ….I’m gonna miss it. ..but will be with u in your dark ff…that one very interesting, unique n lovely story as well just like you…incredibly awesoooooome. ….love you loads. ..lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh. .♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

  23. Diii u r the best…u r the best…if write like mad then u will also appreciate me I know…coz u r very sweet n kind hearted…loved ur nature for that…u owe me a treat at usa…i would like to have ur hand made siwai…mouth watering…awwww…lol what m blabbering here…lov u a lot for ur encouragement n support…???

    • Roma

      Hey my sweeeeeetheart sissy…I’m ready to treat you always…as I’ll be honored to have u with me in person…love you loads my sweeeeeetuuuu….muaaaaahhhhhh. ..bear hug… 🙂 🙂 🙂

  24. neetz

    I started reading this ff recently and its been a beautiful.story… and m a person of happy endings and loved todays epi… lil sad tooo coz its finished ..

    • Thanks a ton neetz…m glad that u liked it…i hope u will like my second ff dark: action flick…lots of love ?

  25. Ameena

    Perfect.
    Satisfied with the end.
    Gonna miss it.
    Love ya.
    Your writing skills are good.
    Keep it up.

    • Amu u poped out of any where…m really very happy to see u again…thanks a lot dear for giving ur glance…lots of love ??

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