manmarziyaan…new dimensions…chapter 20

Chapter 20
Hii all…thanks very much for your supports…how come I reached at chapter 20,I can’t believe it…this is all because of u guys…i just wanted to end this ff within 20 chapters…but it’s on way more to do…I’ll end it with a happy note for sure…where is thena…i missed her ff like hell…if she’ll not reveal her suspense I’ll be mad within no time…

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At Neil home

After Rajiv cured Neil took him home…although he let him to do everything he put some restrictions for Rajiv …Rajiv is a free spirit person so he thinking ways how to escape from that…he asked help from prerana to free him,he badly wanted to go outside…prerana sighed n said u know how much he possessive for u even he doesn’t allow me to cook for u…he did it by himself just because he feared if any infection will happen to u…Rajiv made poker face said maa how could u handle such irritating creature neil gaai…just then Neil entered with a bowl of porridge…rajiv felt he would vomit any moment…Neil said I heard everything..Rajiv replied I said it for u to listen n made a puppy face n said if u torture me today with ur food or with ur long debate I’ll elope…neil said that would not going to happen n I do all these coz u just discharged from hospital…he become emotional…rajiv tickled him on his belly by looking him sad..both brothers laughed out…prerana was happy seeing both of them..she thought m sorry neraj…

At Arjun home
Arjun come out from his room after his nap…he saw priya stood in front of couch n taking some snapshots…he thought why di took photos of old furniture n went near to her…he wanted to laugh aloud as he came to know why priya took snaps…radhika slept there with a funny position by putting one leg upper side n another leg touched ground with a half opened mouth,messy hair n hands disorganized…both bro-sis duo tried to control themselves but they couldn’t…radhika woke up hearing their laughter n looked at them puzzled …Arjun found her cute with her half opening eyes n messy hair,,as he wanted to pinch her cheeks but resist himself…

priya asked her ( she continued her laughter): My doll why r u sleeping here…

Radhika: Woh di, I felt suffocating last night,so I came here…btw why r u laughing…

Priya avoided: Nothing, just go freshen up n make some masala tea for us instead of coffee…

After radhika went priya looked at Arjun…he was squinting…

Priya: Now what happened to u??

Arjun (with a little loudly): Di how could u make her work just after she woke up…she is special person here…we could make that…

Priya (with widen eyes): Omg…i can’t believe it…u r being over protective for her now…i can guess what will happen after ur marriage…u will definitely forget everything…

Arjun: Oh di…it’s not like that…m just…( he was trying to find words)

Priya laughed hard…she patted Arjun’s head n said mad…but I liked ur protectiveness towards her…even I want u should always take care of her…Arjun hugged priya n said thanks di for coming back to my life again…priya told Arjun go for shopping for their engagement…he nodded yes…right then saurav entered kitchen yawning without looking surrounding…priya put her hand on her forehead…she said i have the most promising creatures..one being funny,other is mad and the last one is boring…oh god Rajiv is better from all of them…they missed him a lot…

At samaira home

Samrat n piyali discussed about Sam’s marriage …piyali said we all know Neil n Sam loved each other…lets make their marriage…samrat said that’s ok but still we should wait for our children to ready by themselves…if they wanted this marriage right now or not…sam entered n with her excitement she said m ready paa…no worries…samrat laughed n said bachu I can see that…btw we are waiting from Neil’s side…prerana entered with Rajiv saying then don’t wait…we would be happy if it will be soon…Rajiv said yes I want my bhabi to come our home early to free me from the torture of my neeeel gai with a poker expression…they asked about his health condition n Sam took Rajiv with her letting the elders talk by themselves…

Rajiv asked Sam about their friends come love story…they were talking like brother n sister…manya come n seeing Rajiv whistled…said hi handsome not to think about only nesam…think about urself also…she started giving poses…rajiv said first of all I will not marry in this birth n secondly my heart is already occupied…sam asked who’s the lucky lady…he didn’t answer anything,but said i just can’t marry her only for her happiness…n after I know about my disease I m determined on my decision…nobody can change that…Sam decided to talk with Neil about this matter…

At afternoon Arjun was ready to go for shopping…he called priya n radhika…but at the mean time priya acted like she doesn’t feel right…she said u both go n m going to take rest…radhika said di I’ll stay with u…priya said then u want Arjun to bring my dresses for me…no no that won’t happen…suddenly she got some idea n whispered in radz ear why don’t u left me n saurav alone to spend some of our quality time…return late today…radz blinked eyes in positive…when they entered car Arjun’s phone beeped…he checked it was msg from priya…it said that go my brother I gave u ur time to spend with her alone,live your life”.. Arjun jumped with happily n pecked his phone…radhika was like who the hell sent message which make him do such things…she stared him…Arjun smiled at her…they drove off…

Ardhika went inside Madison fashion house n brought up the dress within no time…Arjun thought there is nothing to do now how I kept her with me…to his surprise radhika asked him for a long drive…he felt immense joy in his heart…Arjun asked her where she wanted to go…she told where u will take…Arjun was like if something happened to her or she’s enchanted…he told her after they have dinner they will go for ride…she nodded yes…

Arjun took radhika restaurant…they sat ,some college girls who sat near them…by seeing Arjun those girls started their discussion among them…radhika didn’t know why but felt angry on their statements…she stared at them angrily …Arjun shook her for making orders…she pointed some items on menu hurriedly n tried to listen what they discussed…

1st girl: Look how handsome he is plus he is very hot…
2nd: U r right…I can do everything to get him…
3rd: The girl must be lucky who get his love n affection…
4th: See how m gonna fall on him n he will carry me on his hands…

With that she walked up to them but before reaching Arjun, radhika stood in front of her like an angry bird…seeing her frowning girl just acted to be faint n fall down on Arjun…Arjun stood up holding that girl but radhika’s anger was at peak…she took the full jug water n poured on that girls face…girl abruptly forced to come out from her dream world n said sorry…Arjun said ok but radhika fumed…in between their eating Arjun lost by seeing radhika but she was busy staring others if anyone looked at Arjun…even she didn’t know what happened to her…she noticed those girls stared at Arjun constantly after all that happened…she couldn’t held anymore…she stood up with a jerk by banging table with her both hand n went near those girls…Arjun couldn’t able to figure out her weird behaviour…she went to them n asked where do u think u looked at…dare to look at him again I’ll snatch ur eyes…she smirked…then she literally shouted Arjun’s name n said m going,if u want to be here u can n stormed out of restaurant ….

Arjun came outside n asked what happened to her…she said nothing,I just don’t know but I cudn’t tolerate anyone who approach u…Arjun smiled…she understood what she said so she clarified I mean not only u,same goes for my closed ones also…she was all embarrassed sat in car…Arjun was smiling thinking she started to feel for him…he thought so miss chasini seemed to care for me…but why she stayed so silent…he took her hand n kissed on her knuckles n said calm down…now we are going for our long long long driving…she asked how many longs are there n both started laughing…

Arjun first took radhika the orphanage where they raised…they met Rana kaka there…he asked about priya n seek forgive from radhika…radhika said all right its all settled now…Arjun donate some money for orphanage….

after that Arjun took radhika outside of city where Neil took him last time…it was a full moon night…cool breeze touched them…Arjun stood seeing lake deeply…he was reminiscing the previous incidents n a smile crept on his lips…radhika asked him the reason…he took her hands in him n rubbed affectionly…he told her his life history from childhood how he was neglected by his father,how nandini created rift between him n priya n how Neil brought him here after the truth came out,how he searched for her…he said I never thought Neil would become my friend…but everything sorted out because of him…my father was right, m a Satan child,i always create darkness but after knew u,i lost myself n my dark path…u r the light of my life n everything for me…i can go to any extent for u…he was becoming emotional…radhika hugged him tight…he was awestruck coz this was the first time radhika initiated the hug…he hugged back her tightly to feel her for eternity…radhika consoled him by saying who told u r a Satan n spread darkness…if that’s the case then why everyone around u are so happy…u r a diamond who needed some polishing at that time for shine but now u r a gem…

so don’t think so much bad about urself…she said m proud n thanked god for sending u on earth…Arjun got his solace with her talking cos he never shared anything with anyone …radhika wiped his tears within his embrace…Arjun smiled n kissed on her forehead…he said can we stay here tonight?? She replied we can but tomorrow is di’s engagement…how did u make all arrangements then…Arjun become a little sad but said don’t forget u owe me this…u will accompany me next time drive but promise me you will stay with me that time…radhika said ok now lets go…he lifted her up headed towards car…radhika said I can walk…he said I know,but I wanted u not to walk…they both drove back…

Priya preferred her engagement at home instead of a hotel…so the house decoration was on Neil n radhika…if Rajiv tried to do something got a big debate session from Neil…so he sat at one place n looked here n there…Arjun busy with guests…sam helping priya getting ready…mala Dilip n Ankush reached home…sila Devi greeted them heartly…teji zubin n kritika busy with other small arrangements…finally the time…

Everyone ready with their dresses…priya wore her designed wine coloured lehenga which gave her a goddess look…everyone praises her look…sam wore a royal blue gown for matching her performance…radhika preferred cream coloured saree this time…when they all came out all boys mouth hung opened seeing their ladies…Rajiv went to priya n said sorry girls but nobody can compete her today n winked…Neil went near to Sam n whispered Sammy I want to marry u here now,u looking killer today…he looked here n there,give a quick peck on Sam’s cheek…Sam blushing hard…she took priya on stage…radhika stood there alone when Arjun patted on her shoulder…Arjun said anyone can barely resist himself after seeing u…i myself wanna kidnap u from here n took u away …only u n me…radhika stare at him…

Ring exchanged between saurav n priya…she signalled Arjun to do their performance..both pair did their dance but this time more sensuously…(( sorry guys I can’t describe dance coz already typed a lot on my phone, my lappy damaged))after all the ritual n performance over,they were at a ease ….coz that day was hectic for which everyone felt exhausted…priya n saurav’s marriage was also fixed…so they will be getting busy afterwards…even nesam marriage is coming…all were busy discussing how will they prepare for marriage…saurav got message some scam happened with add branch PEARL at Oslo…those cases were handed by Rajiv before …radhika told she’ll go instead to handle…cos Rajiv was not completely fine n business is also important…that was a big shock for Arjun…his love story just getting on track…he became sad but didn’t show it…

Next day morning Arjun took radhika airport…he was sad but something stuck on his mind suddenly he became happy…departure time always hurts but Arjun fixed his mind…he hugged radhika tightly n said don’t forget me plssss n keep on contact with me this time…she nodded n went waving byeee…Arjun called piyali n said its time for me to return London as the project is almost complete…others can handle it…he said he had to look after his construction company now…so he will go back next day…piyali said yes hearing his determined voice…at his returning back to home he thought I can’t let u go away from me…for me u r the most important person now…it will be easy for me to meet u maximum if we will be within European country…wait for my surprise baby…he smiled n went home to pack his luggage…….

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Precap: Arjun surprised seeing radhika at London,their fun n happy moments…marriage preparation

Guys pls let me know how is this…my fingers aching badly by writing on phone…can anyone know suha ‘s whereabouts….i miss her…

Credit to: rosie

41 comments

  1. Supriya

    Di a big wow….rajiv nd Neil ka scene z my personal fav….loved radhika’s jealousy….the way she answered dat girls was just too gud….I was laughing catching my tummy…..di u rocked it…do update soon…..waiting for next one……loads of love…..tc

  2. Rosue I still have your dark flick wali ff saved yr.. Its so hard to get into that zone yrr.. I was late about that ff so I didnt commented and about this I still havnt read ittt.. I am gonna love it i know I am sure 😀 🙂

    • Roshni don’t b feel burden yaar…i know politics conspiracy action something many people can’t digest…i told u something I personally feel m not also a writer…i just wrote this one what me wanted to see in mmz..but dark I just too realistic with updated news of recent activities of world…so it was easy for me…but How u all write fiction I can’t even dreamt that to write…dark may b my last ff…I’ll b a reader then…oops I bored u…Rosie stop…????

  3. Gauri

    Wow I am happy…its all happy moments around…last time you scared me with the precap..I thought its separation…but thanks to you 🙂 love you 🙂

    • Abha lets dance…cos u r happy…u got scared…don’t be…coz I personally go to Bangalore to scare u…u should cook for me…thanxx?…not to forget ice cream ??

  4. Shree

    Wowowow!! Mamma!! You rocked it today!! Radz sleeping… Love Priya!! Shopping.. Dinner was wow!! The poor girl had a while jug of water poured on her… Lol the punishment for messing with Radhika… Long drive… Past revelation.. Pain… And not to forget my Rajiv!! Being treated like a kid!! So cute!! He needs it… Why is he frowning?! Elope?! Lol… Loves someone?! Okay.. Nice… Loved the engagement.. Radz leaving.. Arjun upset.. Hahahahaha.. In London.. Fun.. Love the precap.. Waiting for the next one.. Post soon…

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • Oh my daughter…crazy about Rajiv…what u should crazy about mama…?? lol…don’t worry ur ride will be there…all in all radhika will realize her feelings very soon…Arjun u can guess his happiness…then my weapon…finishing this ff…go n study…else I’ll give a good debate session to u like Neil…tc?

  5. Wow dear its pretty awesome 🙂 🙂 🙂 I loved Neil n rajiv part its cute n superbbbbbbbbbbb 🙂 🙂 🙂 waiting for a rad moments 🙂 take care 🙂

    • Thanks a ton suga….i love ur name the emos u always gave…sibling relationship always difference…i have obedient n displined brother…i missed him a lot as he had his job at Delhi…tc?

  6. Dev

    All wonderful moments….specially rajiv n neil….n priya n arjun…..lovd d bro bro n sis bro combo…….n radz jealous was remarkable……lovd d epi….frm d core……
    N rosie as 2 moro is sunday ill read d action flick 2moro….n nc epi……love u n lots of hugs….keep goin.n smiling…

    • Thanks a ton dev….u really going to read dark…but pls don’t read if u r burden…m seriously saying this there is much more conspiracy n politics n action…everyone has different choices…n I respect that…
      Siblings are always undefinable relationship…u keep enjoying Sunday…c ya later buddy…tc??

  7. Gianna

    Rosieeeeeee love love love this so much, neil taking care of rajiv so cute, sam eager to get married wow, rads pouring that whole jug of water so funny, jealous arjun is always a treat but jealous Radhika is a better treat. And their long long long drive. So Radz is going to suprise Arjun so excited for that. Loved every part. Love u girl. Tc ???

  8. Awesome episode, your also an amazing writer too. Both of your fan fiction are really good, well done. 🙂

  9. aastha

    loved it di………….I want to say more bt not in a mood coz my results r coming tmrw……..I’m scared………..plzz do pray for me………………

  10. Hey Rosie darling….amazing one…full n full happy moment…I loved it to the core…very excited precap…waiting for next one…love u …tc..muaaahhh..

    • Hey Susi dear thanxxx a lot…ur comment,I always wait for that…hope u like further chapter…it will end soon…tq for ur support ?

  11. natasha

    dhi amazing epsiode dear wen will u upload nxt epsiode plz upload it fastly plz plz plz

    • Thnxx a lot Natasha dear…next I’ll post tomorrow evening for sure….Its already at its climax…so I will end soon…

  12. natasha

    ohh u will post tmrw to TU donno wen tis ppl will update dear sum tyms they wont upload the whole day donno wats wrng wid tis ppl y wont they upload the episodes whole ? sum tyms i feel lyk hitting them . ur gng to end the nxt episode or u ending tis ff if at all ur ending tis ff plz dont do it …… plz plzzz

    • U will get to read next episode tomorrow within 12midnight…i promise…m going to end this ff within 4-5 chapters…happy that u liked it dear…tc

    • U will get to read next episode tomorrow within 12midnight…i promise…m going to end this ff within 4-5 chapters…happy that u liked it dear…tc??

    • Sorry dear…everything has a end…n I can’t drag it..u can know from my ff m very poor at writing romance…love is ok but romance…now everything is settled…so I thought it is best to end now…glad u liked it…btw m writing another mmz political ff: Dark..i know many people don’t like politics but now a days politics. N terrorism affection would badly…so I tried it for showing some reality…thnxxx again

  13. Roma

    Omg Rosieeeee, wowwww lovely episode. …now only I could read this unique amazing awesoooooome update…..soooooooo sorry for being late againnn…thaaaanks a lotttttttttt for promoting my story….I love you soooooooo muchhhhhh honeyyy. ….muaaaaahhhhhh. …coming to episode. …neil n rajiv bro love is remarkable..poor rajiv so cute annoyed with neeel gaai….lol…..rads funny sleep posture…hilarious. ..ardhika long long long drive was terrific. …enjoyed it a lotttttttttt. ..rads jealousy uffff itna gussa….lol…engagement was great…rads left n arjun going to surprise her…precap is very exciting. ..keep it up my sweeeetheartttt…..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh

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