manmarziyaan…new dimensions…chapter 18

CHAPTER 18

Hiii guys….sorry for the late late update….but u all know when exams approach nothing can be done….so now exams over….oooh what a relief….keep reading

Susi sorry my dear…m working on dark action…m still thinking how will I make all characters justified entry…u know its little difficult when politics involved…but I promise next one will be dark ff…especially dedicate to u..

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Radhika shook Neil hard to came in to senses…she begged him to find Rajiv as soon as possible…prerana also wanted to see her little son early…Neil asked radhika what happened??? Why so hurry?? As he thought Rajiv might be at Arjun’s place…radhika just dragged him n said we’ll find him in different directions n she promised to tell him everything later…she didn’t want to give sudden shock to Neil n prerana,,they just found out Rajiv’s truth…it will be very hard for them to digest another truth that he was suffered from chronic leukaemia…Neil went with his bike n radhika by her car…

Neil had happy tears in his eyes in the process of finding his brother…his very own sibling…that thought gave him a kind of solace which he never felt…he reminisced the moments spent with Rajiv…he was smiling on thinkin about his antics…he thought to himself how foolish I m?? How I didn’t recognize u,after all u r a Malahotra?? I was always irked with u,jealous with u because u r exactly same natured like me,,my little price charming…at that time I thought u got whole attention from all that diverted from me…but u deserved that…both mixed emotions running in between Neil…he smiled with tears…he thought let me find u once again I’ll never let u go…he thought so that dad was right at that time…we mistook him…he felt sorry towards his father…his inner conscience hit him hard,if that day they would believe his father n wait for somedays then they are all together now…but the thing that didn’t get into him was why Rajiv changed his name…he remembered his father always told them ” he gave first word of his name ‘ne’ to Neil as he was his favourite son n last word raj was given to Rajiv..” But his name was rajveer before as Neil personally picked that name…but right now only one thing he wanted to get his lil brother for the eternity…but what revert he would get as Rajiv now hates him hard…

Radhika was on verge of loose her patience as she cudn’t find Rajiv…addition to it she tried Arjun ,his phone was off…saurav n priya out of network as they were on their date…she wanted someone who stood with her now…seeing teji’s call on her phone she relaxed…teji reached at her after getting her msg…radhika told him everything…they went to find out Rajiv out side of city…

Prerana was too impatient with her overwhelmed heart…she constantly called Neil for knowing whereabouts of Rajiv…Neil could understand her situation after all she’s getting back her son after so long whom they thought dead…neil calmed down prerana n assured her he would take him back to home as soon he found him…

Rajiv reached at the sight where Neil took Arjun after samarj marriage broken night…he sat down by lake side…his eyes were red as he cried a lot n now burning with anger…he punched ground so hard that his knuckles bruised…he shouted very loudly with frustration …radhika n teji reached at him by that time…they both held him back from doing further more devastation to himself…they tried to pacify him…he broke down by hugging radz…after some moments radhika asked him why he hide about his disease…he was shocked that how radz knew…he tried to explain something but due to over stress got fainted …radhika n teji took him to hospital…radhika messaged everyone to come to hospital…teji called Dr Hennery who treated Rajiv at Norway n told him to come India asap…

Arjun after his nap checked his mobile…coz by that time radhika should reach at home from super market…he immediately switched on his mobile to get shock…he was afraid if anything happened to radhika coz he got bulk of calls n messages from her…he stromed out to hospital after getting her msg without noticing his costume…he called repeatedly to her got answered by teji…teji told him to come hospital,he would explain …Neil reached at hospital…teji told him to be calm n explained everything to him…Neil was crying sitting on the floor…radhika came n pacified him..told him to wait till Rajiv got his sense back…Neil told doctor that ” I am his brother,we are linked genetically so i can give blood cells n that will be match for sure”… Just start ur stem cell therapy asap n get him cured…teji informed about Dr Hennery as he was a famous doctor for transplantation…

Prerana was heading for hospital after getting news stopped at gate by Sam…she told Sam everything…sam consoled her n they went…here Rajiv got his sense back…Neil rushed towards his cabin followed by teji n radhika…seeing Neil Rajiv’s expressions changed…it was something radhika never witnessed before even teji could not imagine how a cheerful happy go lucky Rajiv became so furious…he stood up n signed Neil to stop where he stood…Neil tried to say something to him…

Neil: Raju,my little prince …m sorry my bro,I couldn’t recognize you…plz forgive me…i am so so happy to see u …

Rajiv cut him off in middle: First of all neither I’m ur brother nor m ur prince…even though I don’t want to see u now but we are still professionals…

Neil: Please don’t say like that…u don’t even know how much I craved for ur affection n love…how much I missed u

Rajiv: Plz…just stop ur rubbish n get out of here else I’ll go…I’ll quit from this project n go back to Oslo…u r nothing to me…

Neil: Please forgive me…i realize we were wrong…but once call me just bhai…
With that Neil went forward to hug Rajiv…but he stopped him…

Rajiv: Radhika please take him out from here before I’ll do something…don’t taste my patience plz…

Arjun,Sam,prerana entered hospital at that time…Arjun could not understand a bit what was happening…seeing them Neil rushed toward them…neil requested Arjun ” plz Arjun make raju understand how much I loved him,he respected u like brother ,he will listen u ,m sure”…he was begging…teji came n explained Arjun everything…prerana was trembling with mixed emotions…they again try to persuade Rajiv…but radhika knew how much stubborn Rajiv was in this matter particularly…once she faced that…Arjun tried but got dejected …when prerana tried to talk something it was the end of Rajiv’s patience…he brusted out like a volcano…

Rajiv shouted loudly “I hate u Malahotras from my heart…now I cursed the day when I met you …only because of you I never got my father’s love n care even if he was with me…he always remembered his elder son n wife n forget about me….finally he lost his life only coz of u…i will never forgive u”…

It was the another shock for Neil n prerana that neraj was dead…prerana lost her balance but Sam held her…Arjun consoled Neil…but the stress was too much for Rajiv..he fainted again…radhika called doctor…she told everybody that even almighty can’t change Rajiv’s decision…this time only saurav can do something…because for Rajiv saurav was everything n he would never said no to him….

Precap: The past…saurav’s interference…reconciliation between brothers
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Sorry guys with hurry n less connection from mind I wrote it…if it’ll suit the theme or not….m lil bit less satisfied with this….plz let me know ur views…

Credit to: Rosie

38 comments

  1. Oh dear after so many days u r here 😀 yipeeeeeeeeeee 😀 😀 now only gonna read ur ff 😀 ll read n come darling 😛

  2. aastha

    Finally you updated………how did your exams go di ????? I loved this chappy eventhough it was weepy coz nw Rajiv will be all ri8…….as Niel gave him his blood cells………y does he hate malhotras ???????? I was on the verge of crying when he shouted at Niel and Prerna like that………………..the precap is what I liked the most………..plzz unite the brothers sooooooooon and reveal the past also………………love u………TC……….muah….

  3. Gauri

    Finally so nice to see your update….missed you like helll…..this was emotional ride really good now…please cure rajiv fast…and make them a happy family….and update the dark story as well….I am dying to read that 🙂 love you

    • Thanks a ton dear….i also misssseeeddddd u a lot…next one will b dark…although it lack in something I could not figure out

  4. Bhabya

    di bahut awesome …. Jaldi update kara… nahele mu pagala hai ji bi…. It’s really wonderful

  5. Dev

    Hey rosie……aftr a long time….hope ur xams went well…..n a vry mindblowing affectionate epi……u rocked again buddy

  6. I was a silent reader but ur versatility in two ffs made me comment today.? please update dark action flick soon..loads of love ?

  7. Shree

    Mamma!! Glad to see you back!! I know about you.. You would have done your exams well.. No no.. You did.. You’ll get good results, don’t worry.. My sixth sense says it ??

    Lovely update!! Oh no!! I can’t see my Rajiv like this… So aggressive.. So angry.. No please… Felt sad for Neil and Prerna.. Neraj is dead?! Uh oh… Waiting for Saurav and Priya… Please sort out things soon… Make them happy… Nice precap.. Waiting for it.. Post soon.. Post dark actions too.. Soon

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • Ayeee….my biggie daughter….u came to give comment…thanks a ton…loads of love…k I have to think about their past n reunion…dark action will b next…??

  8. subha

    thanx,thanx……….awesome episode..eagerly waiting prerana-raj-neil sentimence scene, please update soon..tc

  9. Gianna

    I was waiting for this for so long glad u updated and loved every part. Feeling sad for Rajiv precap looks good waiting for the next

  10. Hey Rosie darling…no problem I loved ur both ff…pls take ur own time dear…this chapter amazing…very emotional one ….I loved it…waiting for next one…love u loads..tc..muaaahhhh…

  11. feby

    iam really angry now…its third time iam writing comment….and it was not getting posted …. wat the hell…rosie di..pehle maine acha wala happy comment kiya tha…TU waale r irritating me like hell…iam sry for the harshness….well..tis chappy was awesome di…and iam soooooooooo much happy for ur comeback..u know i was jumping with joy strday….. sry tat our convo was interrupted strday coz someone came to repair my wifi modem….and u know…aftr u came again i got my energy back…aaaaahhh…u were the first one to inspire me in a way by which no one evr did…..iam waiting for the othr ff di…tat one is more interesting for me…well…tis chappy was a bit moody…but the recap compensated for that….u know smthng??? iam sooooooooooo happy today….i was drawing like hell…my painting and drawings….how i missed thm for 1 year….and th ewhole day i was drawing and drawing and drawing..still my hands r not paining…..and to take a break frm it whn i c here comment was not posted and i got angry…..well…love u diiiiiiiii…… muahhhh….

    • Clam down my lil darling…feby baby which kind of drawing u r making…on canvas or paper….whatever follow what ur heart told u…feeling like u r happy…m irritated now…my google+ is not working don’t know which kind of violation I made…argh…u know my dabba windows phone made me mad…now I need to calm down…missed u sooo much…we will talk other time…how is ur classes going on…??

  12. Rg

    Missed ur update. Glad to c it today. When is ardhika going to come together? Pls make them come together soon.tc.

  13. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww Rosie it’s really superbbbb episode. ..just loved it very very muchhhh. ..neil’s emotions for his Lil bro n prerna, rads n teji all were very helpful. ..rajiv burst out….omg…he’s so angryyyyyy. …the whole situation is very heart wrenching…precap sounds interesting…keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh. …take care sweetheart 🙂 😉 🙂

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