manmarziyaan…new dimensions..chapter 9

Helllloooo…..all beautiful peoples there…first wish u a happy holi…may ur life will fill with all colours n happiness…stay cool…n take care of your health in this summer ? drink plenty of water……lets njoy our ride…do let me know how is this chappy…as they are important to me…here we go

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Before teji could make his exit Neil caught him n asked about his n radhika’s bonding…teji told everything about radz struggle n her effort..her new friendship…all had tears in their eye…sam thanked teji for staying with radz when nobody was there…they all promise to themselves that from now on they will make radhika happy…

Next day morning Arjun n Neil worked out in park…Neil saw a girl approaching him continuously…he went away but the girl followed him…he reached near Arjun n abt to tell him the incident… he saw that girl near him…without thinking ? much he pecked on Arjun’s cheek n hang over on his neck by saying I love u ? my darling…my sweetheart…arjun was too shocked he became statue for some moment…in the mean time the girl left him thinking of him otherwise….Arjun came into senses n beat Neil out of blue…they ran here n there stopped hearing roar of laughter…Rajiv n Sam stood there…radhika n saurav at some distance..everyone in the park laughed…an old couple come to them n said seriously u both r looking lyk a heavenly pair n laughed…Arjun felt embarrassed n moreover to it he was irked that radhika witnessed that…he thought I should make Neil in control..whenever he get chance he kissed me instead of sam((imagine guys Neil kiss to Arjun at airport))…

At office everyone is busy in work for promotion…Rajiv instructed everybody how to do everything step by step…on pantry area radhika busy hovering over her lappy ,try to find a good caption…she looked tired..raj saw her n went to her..

Raj: Hello honey what r u searching so desperately…do u need any refreshment drink…
Radz: Yes,my favourite..u know that home made ginger mint lemonade…
Raj: Yeah, I left it in car..bring it for u…
He went…nesam reached…they waved radhika hiii…she aslo did the same…neil offered radhika coffee..sam offered sandwiches by saying chasini I don’t know any other cooking but I made it specially for u…with excitement she pushed some pieces into radz mouth n waiting for her reply eagerly…radz thumbs up to her…she was so happy ..hugged her…this was the first tym she felt the same warmth in her after 2 years…neil made faces…
Neil: Chasini this is not fair…m all jealous now…?

Radz: Why??? What happened to u???
Neil: U ate her food n gave her a hug…what about me??? U even didn’t taste my coffee…
Neil made a puppy face on which radz n sam laughed hard…sam said idiot i loved her more that’s why i got reward…radhika said k I’ll do that…but before he could hug radz raj came there n stand in between..raj said I don’t believe u buddy…if she’ll become like u…then who will be responsible…Neil knows he mocked him for morning incident..he angrily glare at him n said none of ur business n nothing will happen to her…rad calmed down both of them…

Arjun came there…he smiled seeing radhika happy with everyone…he greeted her n said nice to see u here again n stretched his hand forward for a shake…after some second rads shook her hand with Arjun…arjun felt some electrifying energy waved in him…he couldn’t decided if he was so happy with her simple touch…what would be the feel when he get her wholly…he was overwhelmed with joy that he lost himself…same with radhika but she couldn’t figure out what is the feeling when he was near her…but she was in her senses…

Saurav came there to make some important announcement…Arjun was still in his dream come to reality by Neil’s pinch…radhika was enjoying her refreshing drink when saurav announced his decision…due to shock radhika spitted everything on Arjun because he was in front of her…she was hell shocked but Arjun’s face brightened like 1000volt bulb despite radhika spitted on him…he was too happy ? that saurav gave him the chance to select location for add shooting with radhika only…it would b a 2-3 day trip…he lovingly stare radhika n said thanks to saurav…n excuses himself going toward washroom…nesam understand Arjun’s happiness…they smiled looking at each other…saurav announced that nesam would work with Rajiv which made Neil jumping…he thought why god??? With this punk..plz exchange the offer…he went away with a jerk…

Nobody saw radz fumed in anger….she glare at saurav …he understood n started running…she was after him….raj said to saurav u can’t take my position…she always ran after me n why after u now…finally she cathed them n beat them without thinking about surrounding…god grace nobody was there…saurav let her to beat them n said why r u angry?? Itz all for work now…u know how much capable of Arjun to things appropriately n u r too gud in giving captions…if u both will do the things then it would b huge hit for our product..don’t u want that…n u know m a cut throat business man…i can do anything for business…somehow he convinced her…they sighed in relief by thinking that their plan will b going to work…

Here in washroom…Arjun cleaned his shirt happily mummering some songs…looking through the mirror giving poses…teji entered n saw Arjun in that state…he thought if Arjun gone mad…he was doing abnormal activities …he went to nesam n told them everything…they came to wash room witness Arjun doing crazy things…neil went to him n said man u need to calmed down now…otherwise office staff will think u ll gone mad n u will b out of project n chasini will also b out of hand…he stopped hearing radz name…n said I decided the place where we ll go for sight seeing…it is Lonavla….all in unison asked what???Arjun said don’t shout my eardrums are about to broke out coz of ur yell…k…i choosed that place coz I want to reminiscing all the beautiful incident what happened before…i want her to remember that…Sam said what??? U were after me at that time..when u got beautiful moments…m confused ?..neil said I’ll tell u…now lets go guys before a chaos is created about us being in washroom ??

After work Arjun went to his home…he straightly went to his bedroom n opened cupboard…lovingly caresses the previous belongings of radhika a bracelet,dupatta,anklets n his shirt with stain…he spoke to himself when u ll come to this house I’ll show u all these…how I yearned for u…how I missed u…he already made a side of cupboard filled up with girl’s dresses…but it’s time to get ready for tomorrow he thought…he walked in front of mirror for choosing dress…he looked right left every angle of him which colour suits him better…finally he selected few dress with other belonging…he was like going for a vacation with his loved ones…firstly he didn’t take his dinner with excitement so as cudn’t sleep either…so he made a call to Neil n tell him about his planning excitedly…Neil with half asleep mode said Arjun why u behaved like a teenager who is going out for first date…i thought u r a seduction Greek god…n moreover it’s a business trip…not to forget that…m afraid coz of u if we loose this project then what will happen…arjun cut the phone n went into his dream world again…

Here Rajiv prepared radhika’s bags putting necessary things like medicine,dry food,her favourite drink n dresses( like radz give Sam be4 Lonavla trip)…radhika in a shocked state said raj m going for location hunting not for enjoying…n what’s this?why u packed my bag like m going for a week…saurav said if u needed anything…that’s why…btw don’t worry…u’ll not have to carry that..radhika said I already missed Riya di ..n ..now m going to miss u both…riya went to Paris for her work n saurav has to go Sweden for other business…both said to her Arjun will not eat u…moreover we r worried for him…how will he manage u as u r very tough n irritating sometime…radhika made faces…she said I don’t want to fight with u now..i need to reserve my energy for tomorrow…

Next day morning….Arjun with neil reached at office much before time..Neil cursed Arjun for breaking his sleep…sam was present….radhika came with saurav n Rajiv…she hugged all before leaving…all wished them to tc…but they worried reversely…nesam thought if chasini will be alright with Arjun’s excitement n raj saurav worried for Arjun if he has to bear coldness from radhika…..

After they went some far…Arjun felt something new in this journey…he stared her frequently…but she was silent…he didn’t liked it…he reminiscences last time she was a chatterbox with never ending stories…he thought to himself he should do something…so he played music ?….which were completely devotional songs…radhika startled look at him with confusions…she thought when did this pineapple become a devotee…more than her Arjun was shocked to hear that…he thought it was romantic song…he remembered last time prerana told him to collect devotional songs…he checked it in his car n forget to give her….with a jerk he stopped the music…he saw radz looking outside…

After some silence he started singing by himself a romantic no. Kahona pyar hai title track by himself…radhika was shocked to the core thought if this guy gone mad or he wanted to kill me by giving shock…she stared him…he felt encouraged n sang loudly…radhika couldn’t control her laughter…she laughed maniacally putting her hand on Arjun ‘s shoulder…Arjun stopped by seeing her laughter…he looked at her hand on him..he thought if he would loose himself any moment…but her laugh didn’t stop yet..finally she controlled herself n removed her hand from Arjun’s shoulder but he grabbed her hand before she took off…radhika looked at him while he softly rubbed her palm…he asked her the reason for her laughing ?…she told don’t act Mr Arjun Mehera…as uf u don’t know…i thought I m the besoora samrat when it come to singing but u took my crown away…n moreover to it as a unromantic tough person u sang a romantic no…that made me laugh…Arjun made faces..thought once u ll become mine I’ll show u how unromantic or romantic I am… Just wait n watch…they started their journey again with silence…but Arjun didn’t know what radz was planning to repaid him for the last time torture…..??

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M sorry guys I cud not make it whole Lonavla track as it will continue for sometime…it was just a start..brin ur request granted.. N my lil suha dear…where r u…u were not seen any of the comment section….i think u r busy…hope back soon

Precap:- more Lonavla fun n Sam thought to propose Neil…Rajiv unconscious

Credit to: Rosie

46 comments

  1. Gauri

    Wow Rosie…I loved the way you touched the old scenes …and again connecting them with the new story…awesome Rosie…please post the next one soon.Lots of love 🙂

    • It’s a huge complement…plus that is from u….m dancing now…thanks to you trillion times…luv u…tc..n update soon DOP…??

  2. Sv

    Super yaar rosie. I cant control my laugh. I loved when neil kissed arjun and ardhika in the car scene was awesome. I loved it yaar. I love u too. Surely i can sense that our thought are likely. Love u rosie . Take care.

    • Getting a comment from a writer is a very good complement…thanks sv for liking it…yeah I felt our thoughts connected..luv u…tc?? n update urs too

  3. suvi

    Vow u really nailed it.damn good.guess what I was sitting n library n reading dis update.reading ur update I could not control my daughter.bt somehow I controlled n thank God hadn’t I did dat den people here wud have teased me as u had said about arjun being teased. LOL

    • Awee….cho chweeeettt….if u r doing that action mean…m succeed for this tym…thank you ? very much sweetheart….luv u…tc? ?

  4. Feby

    Nice one…and feeling to laugh all time after reading first part…haha…neil and arjun…was awesome
    And ya…tq for ur good wishes…exam was good…and i really felt some closeness wid u..dont know y..and i took ur words positively indeed…no doubts in tat..but still iam worried.. ukmow na.
    Evryone feels.it.. to get a good admolission …

    • Thanks dear feby for liking it…laugh out from your heart…itz a gud medicine…trust me…

      N now exam over n u did well sweetie…so don’t worry ?…just chill…everything will b fine…n u thought me as close…its very sweet of u…i think u r a innocent soul…don’t loose that charm…

      About future it’s accomplishments of present…not to worry about that…luv u…tc??

  5. lavanya

    really…cool…it’s very interesting plot….please do continue…..fingers crossed….want to know how will love blossom between these two again….

    • Lavu….thanks for liking it…it’s good to see u here again…i thought u were angry on me…but I mentioned everyone name…if u see it in lappy then may b u can see…i also don’t know how love ❤ will blossom…hehe…luv u…tc

  6. Shree

    Rosie!! I’m literally Loling here!! What was that?! Location hunt with him?! I can imagine… Romantic number by an unromantic person!! So true!! ??

    Precap… Uh oh… His health taking a toll… Sam to propose Neil!! I’m waiting… Post soon dear

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • My choti energy packet…lots of love ❤..m waiting for u….thank for liking it…n not to forget ur party…now u start ur update…tc of ur foot…no jumping…

      Luv u….tc??

  7. Rosie superb yar….like rads i too surprised by arjun’s singing…hahaha…still can’t stop laughing…. n what?? rads going to take revenge of torture… m jst super excited… pls update soon

    • Omg…dipika…happy to see u here again…getting comment from an old member is always cherry on top…thank u very much ?…will try to update soon…luv u ..tc??

      Update urs story too…

  8. Hahaha….in my story…lead woman rocks…actually this is effect of my work on women empowerment…plus I never wanna make my lead to cry buckets of water like Indian serials…I want women to b always strong,bold and many steps ahead men…don’t know when will my dream come true???India n its politicians…argh…impossible…

    I should stop here …don’t know why m blabbering much…thanks everyone for supporting..

    • First of all Amu where were u???now l will hit u if leave again…always giving attacks…but glad…dancing..jumping that u r back…n missed ur never ending spirits…thanks a ton ? dear for coming back…n my exam postponed for some days…yipee…m glad…waiting for ur review on both chapters n please see my appraisal note…luv u ? ? ?…wanna hug u

      • Ameena

        Oh oh oh, hit me?!? If you really mean this question then my answer is I was in hell. Literally in hell. Well , ugh whatever. I should thank you for coming in my life. Exam postponed ?! Yayyyy!! ?? Study more. I saw that appraisal note. You just spoke my heart out. And I love that. ?

  9. Ameena

    Tere bin main yun kaise jiya
    Kaise jiya tere bin
    Tere bin main yun kaise jiya
    Kaise jiya tere bin

    Lekar yaadien teri raatein meri kati
    Lekar yaadien teri raatein meri kati
    Mujhse baaten teri karti hai chandni
    Tanha hai tujh bin raaten meri
    Din mere din ke jaise nahi
    Tanha badan tanha hai ruh nam meri aankhen rahe
    Aaja mere ab rubaru
    Jeena nahi bin tere

    Tere bin main yun kaise jiya
    Kaise jiya tere bin
    Tere bin main yun kaise jiya
    Kaise jiya tere bin

    Kab se aankhen meri raah mein tere bichhi
    Kab se aankhen meri raah mein tere bichhi
    Bhule se hi kabhi tu mil jaaye kahin
    Bhule na mujhse baaten teri
    Bheegi hai har pal aankhen meri
    Kyun saans loon kyun main jiyu
    Jeena bura sa lage
    Kyun ho gaya tu bewafaaa mujhko bata de wajah

    My LOVE For You!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3

    • Yipee what was that…m not dreaming…pinch me…u always had ur way to shocked me…wow so much emotions n love in one song…m speechless…if I’ll say anything it will b not enough for ur affection…u just simply awesome awesome sweetheart…never wanna loose…see m like…now I want to meet u…m so exited….should control myself now….looooooovvvvvvvvveeeeeeee uuuuuuuuu. sssooooooo mmmuuuucccchhhh???? tc

      • Ameena

        As far as pinching is required, I pinched you hard enough??….
        Yes yes girl control your self pls…?
        Love you too?❤

  10. Amu…i know sometime situation make things worse…but I have faith on u…u r positive soul…very much lively…u can handle any situation…so just b healthy…god bless u my dear…we r always with u…..n thank that I aslo found u…luv u…tc???

  11. Roma

    Omg rosieeeeeeee, what n excited episode my dear….can’t believe neil did it again….neil kissed arjun on cheek again n everybody there…lol….I’m at my work N trying to stop my laughing and it’s too hard for me…n then saurav sending ardhika for location hunt…wowwww rads spit drink on arjun….no wayyyy….another laugh…no then arjun all excited N calling neil like teenager going on first date…my goodness…so cute n funnyyyy. …then finally ardhika started for lonavla, n he started cd with devotional song…hahaha…tears in my eyes with big laughter….n on top of that arjun himself started singing romantic no…..this the limit…my stomach pain ing with laugh….rolf…now can’t control at all…my co-workers watching me going crazyyyyy. ….but this is awesoooooome story…I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and this story. ….don’t have words to praise your awesoooooome talent. ….it’s really superbbbb n dynamite episode. ..I’m looking forward to read more of this trip exciting scenes. …just wanna hug you soooooooo tight….muaaaaahhhhhh….love you soooooooo muchhhhhh. …take care sweetheart

    • Thanks very much Roma…m always waiting for you dear…ur analysis is more superb than my story…if I would get chance to hug u then it would b my pleasure ?….luv u…darling for thinking me talented which m really not…but anyway thank u very much…luv u…tc? ?????

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