manmarziyaan…new dimensions..chapter 4

Hiii…m back again…plz do read it n let me know how it as ur comments are most precious for me…..thanks very much for supporting me….

Saurav n Rajiv saw radhika being restless..saurav signal something to Rajiv..
Raj started to crack jokes…
Raj:rad..sweetie tell me what do u call a lazy crayfish??? A slobster…rad surprised with his talking…but he continued
Raj: What’s green n smelly???
The incredible hulk’s farts…
Rads smiled a little….
Raj then told did u guys know what I did in my school days that make my math teacher faint????
Both in. Unison asked what????
Raj told I tried to divide something by zero..
All three were brust into laughter…
Then radz told raj is this u called ur great sense of humour…
Raj replied don’t insult calling my ideas as humour…this was my sense of pagalmar….
Again they laughed hard….n…hugged each other…
Saurav tell radz not to be sad..it was all they promised to make each other happy n support each other when needed….a happy tear drop escaped from radz eye as she saw the care n concerns in their eye..

Radhika’s phone rang…it was a vedio call…she received…a beautiful angelic but annoyed face shown…
Radz: Riya di…riya di how r u? What a surprise? No news from u since few days? R u all right???
Riya: K…now u stop my sweetheart…how can I answer all of ur questions if u not stop..m not a chatterbox like u n raj…
Raj made faces…
Riya: M angry with you all..u all visited alps n u were here in Paris but didn’t let me know…looks like u r not my buddies anymore…
Radz: Di…calm down…we r just in France for some hours not a day also n u were busy also…radz tried to convince Riya with her sweet talkings…..
Riya: K…my darling but don’t call me di…how many times I told u…m I looked like that much old
Radz: K Riya……….di
Riya: U ll never change….
Then she talked with saurav n raj…

Literally there’s no name for these 4 people’s relationship..they are not bf-gf,no bro-sis,no friends…..their relationship is above on that which is a hearty connection with so much care,affection,love,understanding…..actually they all were broken souls who bonded with each other so well…that’s why they called themselves soul mates..

Mumbai
Teji reminiscences his last trip with radhika…when radz visited her home….

……………….FB STARTS………………..

Teji n radz seen to sit in a garden.
Teji: Rads will u never comeback India permanently???
Radz: Yes,l’ll if only my job allows..
Teji: U know it’s not job…it’s u…if u want then saurav ll not deny…
Radz: Leave it teji,we r here for fun
Teji: U didn’t forget past?? Did u
Radz: Life isn’t something u stuck with ur past…n I moved on….
Teji: Then why don’t I feel that u r the same radhika before two years who was lively…bubbly….

Radhika smiled on his statement…n said if ur past taught u something then u should learn it…teji wanted to brought about Arjun ,Neil,Sam…but couldn’t dare…

………………..fb ends………….

Teji remembered they had done some photos session…he msged radhika to sent their last trip photos n went to sleep…

Next day…bird song

Everybody was busy for upcoming deal..in piyali’s cabin Arjun,Neil,Sam n piyali were discussed about project.
Piyali: I got a news yesterday that they wanted to do presentation in two phases as they want everything shd b perfect..
Arjun: Don’t worry piyali…we did our best..m sure it will impress them..
Piyali: Thanks Arjun …but just remember that our future will depend on so much on this deal..
Sam: Mom why u think so much….we will get it…

Piyali went to see other proceedings….

Neil: If chasini was here we would not be in so much tensions..
Sam: Yes…she gave us the captions ..she’s too gud in presenting
Arjun: Hmmm…..she accepted challenges,give answers back with interest ( he was reminiscing Maybelline project).. Plus she has her own quality to make everyone goes down on their knees…n…

Neil cut him off…
Neil: Arey yaar…don’t u start now plz…i understand ur feelings…i know if there will be any essay or debate competition on chasini,u will get the first position…

Sam laughed…arjun sighed…
Sam: But how many people are coming…
Arjun: Not sure but 5 people may b…
Neil: I heard one of their joint ceo is a girl…if she will come I will definitely try my charms on her
Sam looked envious…irritated a little n said: Idiot that’s why u r excited ..
Neil: Of course..who will not…u kow how foreign girls looked…so perfect…he was like dreaming ( of course to make Sam jealous)
Then he turned towards Arjun n said to him..arjun if she’ll go after u ,u should not accept her, tell her to chase me…
Arjun: No need to say…m not even interested in girls matter…u can keep all her by urself….now come to the work
Neil again try to say something but pushed towards his seat by Sam…..she was burned with jealously…arjun noticed that n smiled…

Meanwhile they don’t know who’s coming,what will happen…after all each n every relationship will be tested…if Arjun would know that who’s coming he’ll never say Neil to keep her by urself…?? lol

NORWAY,SINGHANIA MANSION

It sounded like sudden numb blast for radhika,she cud not hear anything.sila Devi shook her to come back into sense..

Radhika: I can’t go to India now
Rajiv: Why??? Be professional..this is for business
Rads: I know u can handle it alone…n I v works here to do..
Raj: Don’t make excuses…i know how important works r here
Rads: Why don’t u understand….whatever happens I’ll not go…n that’s final…don’t push me..
Raj tried to say something…saurav signs him no..raj stood up to leave for his home..saurav came to wave him bye…
saurav: More than radz m confused with ur weird behaviour…why don’t u stayed with us…especially in night…what u tried to hide from us…
Raj was shocked…he knew how intelligent saurav is?? He controlled himself.n said don’t think about me..just tell her to go with me…u know how much she is capable
Saurav: It’s k…leave it to me…I’ll convince her…but as for now u go by urself
Raj: What…me alone…to India…never
Saurav: Don’t b childish..u should be present there tomorrow on time…just choose best 20 presentations…we will b there day after tomorrow n this is an order..
Raj: This is not fair….every time you n Riya took her side..what abt me..he showed his puppy actions…
Saurav: Same goes for u….u also took her side only when time comes…now just go n inform me after u reach…

Raj went…saurav went to radhika…at that time sila Devi talked with radhika…she said my child why u don’t want to go….if hold onto your past today…
Radz: No silamaa,it’s not like that
Saurav: Then what is it…u said u moved on…but u stuck with ur past…then why pretence…
Radhika stayed silent
Saurav: Don’t u have dare to face them or have u lack of ur confidence…u told me once that don’t move back…face ur problems…now what r u doing….
Sila: He is ryt beta….if u want to get real happiness then It will start from now…
Saurav: Moreover I will take u there for business purpose not for matchmaking…so think cooly n answer me tomorrow…
Sila: Yes beta…now com it’s ur sleeping time…
Rads had a new habit until n unless somebody patted her head n waving fingers in her hair she couldn’t sleep…after she slept saurav n sila left….

By this time she generally slept…but today she can’t…she went near the window n opened windows…cool breeze touched her….she was. Reminiscing something

……………..FB STARTS………………

Last summer she went to arctic circle for a official party threw by saurav on a cruise..generally she avoided parties but as she loved ocean she went..she looked stunning with her little white dazzling dress…looking like a cute angel…to talk with her two persons started fighting between them…meanwhile ginger ale drink spilled on her dress mistakenly…she went to rest room for washing…when she came back she was shocked what she had seen…she thought how could this possible…Arjun mehra was here…her thoughts went here n there…she thought if saurav invited him…but he didn’t know him…she started run from there…but to her luck Arjun saw her..he ran after her…in a turning point if it was not for radz bodyguard covered her she would be caught…after the bodyguard went Arjun saw a girl standing there with same colour dress….he said sorry…n thought if this was his another illusion about her…radz saw him leaving…she saw he looked pale n lost…he was not in a vengeance mood..he was calm n quite…she thought what made him change…he was sad….if he married Sam…but….why he is sad…

………………..FB ENDS………………..

Radz thought to herself why I feel for Arjun..most importantly what I feel for him i don’t know…saurav was ryt I was stuck with my past…whenever anybody cares for me,help me I thought about Arjun,when Rajiv n others tried to make me happy by cracking jokes I missed Neil n Riya di make me remember Sam….

She made her mind..next day morning she went to saurav n told him she is ready to go…saurav was happy listening this.

Now she needs to go..needs to face everything..she was not alone….she knew saurav,raj,Riya will not let her feel sorrow…..moreover she needs to figure out unnamed feelings towards Arjun…..

Now the time for new beginning guys….i gave two flashbacks….with the time I will. Give all details what was happened within two years….that’s all for today…do let me know ur views as it is important for me

Credit to: rosie

25 comments

  1. Rg

    Hi Rosie I loved d way ur story is shaping up. Am glad u choz to start after d slap. Am glad u showed a past with arjun. Radhika slowly yet unwillingly realizes tat she has feelings for arjun… Radhika now has her heart broken… And like one and all she wants to avoid tat which hurts her…. Though she wasn’t like tat before…. Hey
    from where and y did she pick her new habbit before she sleeps??? I loved ur story Rosie… Plz continue… Am unable to bear d wait of them meeting. Plz make them meet soon… Tc

    • M on seven heven getting a reply first from u…n yes rads new started after slap incident…to make her sleep peacefully her friends did that…abt rads Arjun meet…they will…but b4 that past should revealed…otherwise it will b illogical imo….oooh what m blabbering…if I go on I’ll reveal everything…thank u Ramya for ur analysis…tc dr

    • Thanks dear…u comment on my ff from day 1 …..glad u liked this angle…actually m bit dramatic…do commenting…tc …luv u??

    • Thanks dear…u comment on my ff from day 1 …..glad u liked this angle…actually m bit dramatic…do commenting…tc …luv u??

    • Thanks dear for considering it epic…m on cloud9 now…always comments from writer are bonus…btw when will u update ur story…luv u??

  2. Gauri

    Wow Rosie…your story is progressing really well..let’s see how will Arjun face this New Radhika…keep it going love you 🙂

  3. Sathya

    FANTASTIC Rosie :). Sorry for not commenting on the previous posts. I do read those. You are too good in your way of writing the FF. Even i feel nervous about their meeting. Keep it up. Good going 🙂

    • Thank u dear sathya…no need to tell sorry…don’t b nervous…even m scared now…if I can’t come to all of ur expectation…u all writer r here…i respect u all…?? tc dr

  4. suha

    Its fab dear …♥♥♥
    I am dying of anxeity wat will happen arjun will meet radz .. n how will arjun react seeing her closeness with saurabh n rajiv … pls update sooon
    Loads of love ♥♥♥ n a bear hug

    • Oh my dear…m waiting for u as I saw u from my first ff…thanks for supporting…yes what ll happen …i also don’t know…now m nervous coz of all ur expectation…tc…luv u….bear hug dr??

    • Suha dear ….i don’t know how to thanks u….as u gave me so much luv n appreciation for my ff….no worries dear…i also have my exams…but surely will update for u…n let me know abt ur opinion…tc..bear hug…m very happy now

  5. Roma

    Awesome episode rosie, sorry for being late…I’m just a little slow reader….I guess…. 😉 this was fantastic update ..I’m mesmerized with your writing skills my dear friend…rads thinking of arjun n feeling restless…still remember neil n sam in face of raj n riya di…I’m glad she decided to go India…now arjun will regret of saying neil to keep the new foreign CEO for himself…lol…it’s really superbbbb story n going really very well. ..I’m so addicted to it already. ..keep it up honeyyy. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. .

    • Omg Roma….what an explanation…a big hug for u dear…n don’t b sorry..every one has their personal lives…so much loads of luv for u….
      Tc n b happy ?

  6. Roma

    Also wanted to mention, I just loooooooooooooooooovvvvveeeeeeeeddd every dp you’re keeping with each episode. …love you my dear for your creativity. …

    • Glad u liked new characters n my pics….lol…m on seven heven…waiting for u next..m posted already…n that’s not my creativity internet ka jadoo…hehehe…m very happy when u comment ?? ? ? ☺

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