manmarziyaan…new dimensions..chapter 16

Hello all…thanks a ton ? to all of my readers n thanks to appreciate my new ff…although I was not sure about that…anyway m glad people liked that new one…n also supporting this one

Chapter – 16
Ever since priya’s real identity was revealed to everyone the whole environment become a movie showing brother sister bonding deeply…there was a competition between Ardhika,nesam,n Rajiv…they even had a bet whom priya love most…mean time priya came to the living room after her nap…shocked seeing the mess they created…somebody tried cooking for her other one arranging her documents etc…they were doing it in their way in which they were comfortable…priya sweetly scolded them to disperse…saurav n Ankush came…both said u all have no time for us…saurav said I can’t expect this from my babies…radhika went to them. N stood in between hugging them sidely…Ankush told everyone go n busy with ur bro- sis game n both the male went away by winking taking rads with them….Rajiv mummering I can’t believe this…always saurav took me n rads with him…priya said u got me instead n he got Ankush…they smiled

All were dispersed now…saurav busy with his laptop…priya come from back n hugged him…he startled a little…priya made faces n said how unromantic u r…i should have denied u to marry u…saurav took her in his front…n said then whom u would marry?? Priya felt encouraged; some other one who is romantic not workaholic like u…

Saurav; but think about that person,if his bones broke after that…

Priya was happy; so u said that u fought for me..

Saurav; when I said that…i didn’t…but definitely u would not get any support if u planned to marry other…

Priya fumes; not so funny…i have my both brothers to support me…

Now saurav laughed a little loudly…said; oh really…which brother would help u…rajiv,himself broke that person’s bone if u want to marry other than me n Arjun now he will do whatever I say…

Priya was irritated now…; n why u think so..after all he is my brother…what did u do with him…

Saurav: Nothing, I just said him I will shift add branch PEARL to London…

Priya stood up annoyingly; so u bribed my both brother.now I can understand a little how u become a huge conglomerate owner.u never left choices for ur counterpart…

She irked n sit in living room…Arjun came there n placed his head on her lap…but he saw his di annoyed..

Arjun; di why r u in a bad mood…

Priya; nothing just random thinkings…how much u happy that radhika shifted to London…

Arjun; how much?? Don’t ask me di…m so so so much happy…thanks to saurav bhai…my respect n love for him reached at different level…

Priya looked at his excitement state…though she is irritated with saurav now…in heart she was so happy that Arjun respect saurav…she has another thought for which she was little scared…

Priya; Arjun I want to tell u something..

Arjun; tell me di…u don’t need any permission…

Priya; never get jealous of Rajiv…u both r same to me…and u know. He is younger than u…just think him as ur brother…

Arjun; di how could u think that…i knew…in fact I love him coz he was become ur peace n life when I was not there…n don’t worry…I’ll pamper him more than u…

Just at that time Rajiv reached there n asked what talking going on…n whom you want to pamper…priya said we just talked about u …arjun thanked him…

Arjun; see I v not my own family till yesterday but today I have my bro,sis n a great bro in law…

Priya said don’t take his name n go away from there…Arjun hugged Rajiv..n patted him slightly with so much care….they were talking happily with each other by putting each others hand on others shoulder…playing games…but they didn’t notice two pairs of burning eyes stare them…

Raneil stood there annoyed…
Neil; I never understand this guy…why he get so much affection when he is a nuisance himself…n this Arjun seeing him it looked like he got his long lost brother…i did many things for him…but he never reciprocated me like that…argh

Radhika; yes more than u did many things for him,u did many things to him…n I don’t know whom should I get envy…

After some time both in unison said n why the hell he hugged him instead of me…both looked at each other…neil said chasini r u just saying that Arjun should hug u…radhika was all embarrassed said u said that…neil was happy seeing the little change in radhika’s feelings…neil took radhika out for his photo shoot…

After sometime Sam came there…she asked Arjun if he knew whereabouts of raneil…he said no..n told her to search on roof or other rooms.

Sam; they’re not anywhere…i should go outside to search them…

Arjun; wait I will go also…if ur Neil will do anything stupid with her in excitement I won’t leave him this time…

Sam; my Neil…ur brother also…n btw ur radhika is not so innocent…she is advanced now…(( Sam said knowingly to instigate him))

Arjun; what?? My radhika is a baby…she barely like u…n don’t speak anything…

But before their banters continued further they spot raneil stood at shivpuri posing for a selfie with sunset…they were waking toward them become still seeing their position…they have their heads joined n made pouting faces…Arjun before heading to them see saral coming to them…Arjun’s blood boiled seeing him…same with Sam…

Saral; wow ..what miss samaira Khanna…today pair changed…m seeing ur Neil n radhu from sometimes…they were behaving like sweet newly married couple…

Sam; be in ur limit saral…if u blurt out anything against both of them I won’t spare u…

Saral; what I saw I told u…so this was ur city style…changing partner when ur need is over…i heard that u r going to marry Neil…but what I saw u r busy with ur x fiancée n he is with ur bff…just like before when u r getting married to Arjun…what a drama u speak about characters…radhu already lost it…don’t know with how many…..before he could complete his sentence a hard slap covered his face…samarj fuming in anger…Arjun was going to hit him Sam stopped him..

Sam; u will never change saral…n don’t dare to speak filthy about chasini n my future hubby…even u don’t know me well…n yes after all what u did how could u think to show ur face…n u thought I would believe u…I’ll cut u down if I see u again…remember no words regarding chasini..that would b the last day for u…
They left…

Saral was fuming in anger…he said u did wrong samaira…ur wrong deed results will face ur precious chasini…radhu u r mine n mine only…he thought something evil..n smirk..
(( but in my pov it will give a backfire results to him…cos he is not aware that which radhu he will face))

Raneil were busy in their shooting…they r laughing n enjoying their moments fullest…samarj go to them n Arjun hugged radhika tightly n so as Sam hugged Neil…raneil shocked seeing that…they asked wha happened…as they explained everything…radhika first made her fist n said I should teach him a lesson n moved forward…but others stop her…

All four were enjoying their time…they go to park n first played water by splashing it…n they played with all kiddo game which were used for kid to play n gave a fine for that…finally they entered the artificial ghost house…neil n rads didn’t agree to enter into it…but Arjun dragged them…inside it creates all kinds of horror music Neil was trembling…when a skeleton just popped out of nowhere infront of him he hugged radz tightly n said save me…somebody save me…started chanting hanuman chalisa…radhika also hugged him tightly…arjun forcibly separate them n took rads in his embrace…this time she hugged him tightly which give him solace…even such a time Neil didn’t leave Arjun…(( guys just imagine our Romeo wanted to hug his girl badly..but Neil was not ready to leave him,even after Sam tried ,what will be his situation)).. He wanted to bang his head…even after come out of that area…they r not ready to leave him…they came home in that position only…

When they entered home mala shocked n embarrassed seeing him…Rajiv laughed rolling on ground…but by that time Neil winked radz n she showed thumbs up to him…now they can only hug Arjun…priya come there n asked them to get ready to go back Mumbai day after tomorrow…sila said we have to prepare for wedding n work is also imp…they went for dinner…

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Precap: Arjun grab radz hand n took 7 pheras around sacred fire

Credit to: Rosie

38 comments

  1. Gauri

    Awesome…too good Rosie..I liked Sam’s response to Saral….one request please make Rajiv fine dear…he is cute 🙂 loads of love

    • Thxxx abha darling dearest ? one thing for sure if Rajiv gone means u n shree will not leave me..lol…bingo for ur double ton..n not to forget ice cream ?…

  2. Sv

    Wow rosie im rolling on the floor for the behaviour of rads and neil . Lol suler comedy. Loved it. Saral argh he never changes. Make radhika to blow his face . I dont wanna see his face anymore . Priya with 2 brothers wow i love it. I wanna hug u for this update dear u made my day. And what was that for the precap oh god now im gone with that update soon before i go mad

    • Lol…u laughed…u will knew now how crazy I m….n the more near time of my xam u’ll get more crazy things…i love u my lovely….so no thanks n sorry…? ?

  3. Jerly

    What does that precap meant????? I didn’t understand clearly………… did radhika and arjun confessed their love 4 each other ….????? But any ways I’m happy with the precap since I wanted this to happennn………………………. 🙂 🙂 🙂 😀 😀 😉 😉 And on todays episode , I just loved it……… <3 <3

  4. mishti

    omg…..I’m rolling on my bed…..what was that….seriously do can u plzzzzzz share the secret of 4m where ur otpatang thoughts come 4m….still can’t control my laughter…..?????????????????????

  5. Bhabya

    Oh di bahut badhiya. Mate aeita bahut pasand asila. This is one of my fav ff. It’s is just mind blowing.

    • Seriously mu chahe tame sincere comment dia…at least mu janiparibi kouthi bhul hauchi…mu Jane some time bahut crazy stupid stuff sabu mo ideas ru baharuchi…so…kouthi bore lagile janeiba…k?

  6. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. … ..loved reneil jealous part n their convo…saral that jerk will get good lesson from our action freak modern rads now….omg rosieeeeeeee that raneil hugging arjun scene was very awesoooooome, hilaaaaaaarious…still laughing badly….you nailed it my honeyyy. ..precap very exciting n shocking. …ardhika wedding how come? arjun’s dream?…very curious to know. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

    • Roma darling even u cant know how happy I am…m dancing now…seriously seeing u on the day of my posting is such a treat n one thing I always want a sincere comment…thanks dear…lots of love ❤ tc?

  7. aastha

    that saral received what he deserved…………I just loved every part di.. y did arjun forcefully do the marriage????…wat s coz f sme dirty trick of that nasty saral……any way u rocked….love u…muah…….I want to say mre bt im stopping as my UPS may turn off any minute……

    • Thnxx aasthu dear….u will see next chapter…marriage??one thing sure in my ff nobody can force on girls…hehehe tc?

  8. subha

    awesome rosie…… precap interesting …………ardhika marriage……wow eagerly waiting next one….tc

  9. Shree

    Looovvveeeddddd iiittttt!! What did you just do?! Omg!! Too good!! Saral the idiot!! Argh!! Lol him.. Burn him.. Do something… Raneil jealous.. Lol… Scary house!! Lol.. I’m still laughing holding my tummy!! PRECAP!! What was that?! Am I dreaming?! Pinch me someone!! Pick me!!

    Post soon… Please.. Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Lol…my chuin(( in our language we call small child on this name)) …u r really a sweetheart..btw where is ur update…u don’t need any pinch…if that come out as dream sequence….oops what m speaking…m always there to pick u…chill??

  10. Rg

    Oh dear whr is d proposal??? And has radz realised her love for arjun? Plz update soon. I can’t wait for ardhikas chemistry.

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