manmarziyaan…new dimensions..chapter 15

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Don’t panic…coz my mental situation is something like that now…i don’t know if u call this as a update or tournament…let’s see who else like this game…

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Priya massaged Arjun’s neck affectionly…he turned back n looked at her…she just excused herself by saying that she hit him so that massage is a compensation…when she tried to walk away Arjun asked her if I knew u…u feel so familiar to me…don’t know why?? May b I can’t remember u…but had we met before…priya stunned but she composed herself n said if we met?? Btw which kind of familiarity u seen in me…without wasting a sec Arjun blurt out I felt like my elder sister..then he realized what he said…he said I mean nandini…n walked past her…priya was happy that he remembered her…may b Arjun didn’t know but radz told everything about nandini to them…but they both didn’t notice radhika overheard them…

At the time of lunch preparation priya told she will make lunch…three pairs of eyes saw her with disbelief …Rajiv said have u gone mad or u r possessed by some ghost here…she replied I already cooked so many times for u…mala said its ok…I’ll teach her what she wanted to cook…neil said aunty plzzz make Sam learn preparation of some dishes…she is too horrible in cooking even mom n me bound to put fake smiles on her cooking…sam stared him n said idiot even u r not less…if we told u to clean up one place u make another five in mess…so it’s better for us if we learn cooking together…everyone laughed…mala said k..lets go now…radhika couldn’t understand weird behaviour of priya…

In dining table there were many dishes…nesam literally fighting between themselves who made more dishes n whose is tasty ?…priya served with enthusiasm…Arjun was shocked when she served kheera n chena poda( my local sweet dish which I like) on his plate…coz those two dishes Arjun loved in childhood n only priya knew about it…radhika said di he didn’t like sweet dishes…but nesam told his habit changed now n he liked sweet with chasini also…radhika gave a glare to them…arjun chuckled seeing all this…he ate n found a familiar taste in dish…he stopped looking at priya smiled to him…nesam impatiently asked about taste of their dishes…rajiv said if Neil prepared some food I can say its taste without eating it n made a poker face which lead Neil to fume…but in all this game two persons were most confused…ardhika…

Radhika tried to watch TV as others were in outing…but she was lost in her thoughts…Arjun somehow escaped from there n came to radhika…he sat down beside her…coughed a little…but no effect …so he shook her so hard that she bumped into him…somehow Arjun managed to hold her…but her hair n bracelet stucked with his shirt button and watch in this way that they have their foreheads touched…she tried to unknot everything as soon but stopped when she saw Arjun’s intense gaze on her n they had a lil eye lock session…she couldn’t bear that much proximity n intensity so she closed her eyes…Arjun caressed her face on other hand n about to said something tv sound goes up high as radhika’s other hand placed on remote…both came into their senses n Arjun help radz to unknot hairs n bracelet…both sat silent…

this time radz broke silence…she asked him how z he here…he tried to find answer to say her but cudn’t guess anything…radz looking him anxiously…he saw la liga premier league in tv…he told for Ronaldo n real Madrid he is here n sighed…till now radhika was silent but after hearing la liga she jumped out n sat on the front sofa of Arjun…he said what happened,u sat beside me,if any problem…she started laughing like child n said so we r rivals…Arjun could not make head n tail out of her talk…she continued I like Barcelona n loveeee Lionel messy…Arjun was like what u seen him that I don’t possess…they started their argument session n again come to that forehead joint position…but situation was different now…they stared each other eye deeply by raising their hands…

Neil n others entered n shocked to see their position…before they said anything ardhika asked which team u support…they all r confused…radhika told its a el classico match..so decide soon…ardhika closed their eye count till 5… When they opened their eyes Arjun saw everybody were sat beside radhika…he stared nesam…they said anything for chasini now…Arjun made faces…to everyone’s shock priya went to Arjun’s side followed by Rajiv…priya said this is unfair one against many…Rajiv said I was after diiii…but it’s a biggest shock to rads,saurav n Rajiv that priya is a hard core niemar jr n Barcelona fan…it made radhika more suspicious…whatever it might b finally Barcelona won…radhika jumped out n started dancing madly ,Rajiv n nesam joined them…they played 2014 fifa song loudly n all started dancing madly now…priya saw Arjun stare radhika lovingly…she was happy…so she pushed radz to Arjun…they looked at each other but soon they do a duet performance with full masti…priya noticed how Arjun lost more n more with radhika…she thought I have to do something for them…

They were too immersed with their fun n all, they didn’t notice their elders returned n stood there…they all shocked to see the mess…dilip stopped the music n scolded Ankush being irresponsible…mala said ever since choti got approval from her father she became a careless n to addition saurav n Riya made her sit on their head…sila said saurav u r the eldest of all…how could u become a nuisance n created a chaos between neighbours…all stood silently with bowing down their heads…finally dadaji said what happened at last,who won?? N he started dancing by sitting position…made funny movements…elders now cudn’t control themselves…actually they were very happy seeing their children enjoying their fullest…but they put a act…n now they also joined n the masti went on….

Next day morning radhika was in her deep slumber …feel somebody tried to drag her…without her wish she opened her eye lil bit…but what she saw she sat down immediately with opened mouth…she said dii u r in saree…u looked gorgeous,stunning even I can’t explain…seriously di what’s gotta into u…i couldn’t understand…(( guys u know how Arjun is handsome so u can guess how beautiful his sister is,…plus she never wore a saree b4 it was her first time)).. More to her shock priya called her to temple…radhika banged her head to bed by getting shock after shock…she thought whatever it’s di I will find out once we r at temple…they came out…saurav got mesmerized seeing her…he stood like statue…rajiv in shock placed his head on Neil’s shoulder n one hand on his chest said buddy pinch me to get me into reality…neil irked with his behaviour n pinched him hard…he screamed n cursed Neil…sam gave compliment…now its Arjun’s turn to seeing his love in previous avatar…radhika wore her kurti n leggings….they all left for temple in two cars…

In the entrance of temple gate radhika stopped n said di I forgot to bring the things for worship…n that silver moon which maa wanted to give lord Shiva…she was worried…Arjun told her not to worry n asked where she placed everything…he would go n brought all things…she told him …he went…( from now we will get a simultaneous picture)…priya with radhika n Rajiv went to one side temple n saurav with nesam to other side…coz nesam n radhika told them about the places as they had been here before…Arjun reached n went to radhika’s room…by mistakely he got priya’s bag n opened it…here radhika took priya in front of a small temple n asked di tell me the truth…if u knew Arjun before…i saw ur weird behaviours after u met him…she placed her hand on Rajiv’s head n gave promise of him…she told u considered him as gem of ur life…so plz tell me dii…Rajiv was confused but seeing radhika’s serious face he stopped…at home Arjun opened priya’s bag n got curious seeing the kiddish bag…he opened by thinking what radhika might b hide in it…he took out all accessories n got stunned…

he saw his childhood photo with priya n other orphanage students…then his grown up photos n the accessories which he threw away in childhood at nandini’s place…he was numb…he went to another bag n opened to get the silver moon…tears filled in his eyes…he said so u r here di…n I couldn’t recognize u…again I did another mistake…how…i felt u but…but why u didn’t said anything about u…why u hide ur identity….he got a diary from priya’s bag…he read out all n cursed himself…so it was my mistake u didn’t said the truth to me…but this is enough…i won’t let u go again…i will make sure u stayed beside me like childhood…he stood up with determination n went to temple…here priya explained everything to radhika n Rajiv…they were in shocked state…but its time to console her…they hugged her…saurav n nesam heard everything from distance…they stunned…saurav came there n told Riya no priya why did u hide such a big thing from us…we shared everything…it hurts me…if u told me earlier then u will b with ur brother by this time…but don’t u have faith on us…priya hugged saurav n said how could I tell u when my own brother hate me so much…she cried…sam was angry that how many lives nandini destroyed…she said I’ll find her n give her share of torture…priya said its not like that…may b our bond was not that strong..so…before she could say anything more all heard Arjun called di n came here running…arjun hugged priya n continuously called di n told sorry for his deeds…priya happily hugged him back…it was the day she waited for life long…finally everything will going to be fine in their life..now no one can dare to enter between bro sis…but still there is a double troubles…coz for priya both Arjun n Rajiv r same…even Rajiv is more younger than all…he is same age of radhika…n important is priya find piece in Rajiv when she needed…

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What’s that… I also didn’t know…but no rotten tomatoes n eggs for Barcelona n messy…el classico war is a entertainment for me…so bear with this madness from me…n I used priya’s original name coz the secret is over …

Credit to: Rosie

78 comments

  1. feby

    awwwwww…..it was so cutie emotional one…..loved it to the core…… wat an amazing story…

      • feby

        no..i intentionally didnt comment for two days…i felt tat someone was hurt bcoz of my comment bcoz of which she stopped writing her heart out….. i felt bad…tats y…nothing much…and u…. dont get weak…u r strong enough for doing anythng….u r bo strong and u give courage to others…u shld not lose … and yes…my studies r going…i have my jee mains exam on 10th….so plz do pray for me….

      • What??? How can a sweetheart like u hurt someone with ur comments?? I cant understand..n thanks my little darling for ur courageous words…n I can understand ur jee pressure…study well…don’t take stress….when you feel like low…come here …n I was crazy coz of my xam so the devastation…but m Fyn now…loads of love ❤..tc?

      • feby

        thank u guyz…..for some days i may not come here…coz of exam and my cousins marraige….iam literally mad now…..y r evry1 marrying also??? oh gosh… my sisters marraige is also coming fast….wat a hectis schedules….i want to b free!!!!! but no way out!!!! uf….

      • feby

        u r calling me baby…..whn all family members come together to discuss abt marriage na…and they c my red tamatar angry face as i will b sad thinking of one more separation and our cousin gang….they start pulling my legs telling they will start my marraige preparations….u know how embarassing it is….tat is the time i really feel iam a girl…i really blush…..i know till the shaadi gets over they will pull my legs like hell….but u know wat…i enjoy it secretly….hahahaa

    • Hahaha….even I forgot my tensions by ur talking…u r so cute…if u r my sis I always pinch ur cheeks…so permanent blush would be there…cutie ?

  2. Rg

    Rosie it’s gud.. I really liked this. By d way whn is ardhika going to get to gather? I can’t wait… Nice update…. plz post soon.

    • Thanks a ton ? rg for ur support…ardhika are together but as Arjun decided to take things slowly…so some time needed for intense romance between them.. plus many more things revolving now

    • Ooohooo…u always make my day by saying it should be portrayed…though m not such good…but still love ❤ u a lot…tc?

  3. Arjun n priya boding niceeeee 🙂 🙂 🙂 now priya ll do anything for her small bro baby 🙂 🙂 🙂 ofcourse arjun handsome means his sis should b gorgeous 😀 oh please update next ff ASAP 🙂 😉 love u 🙂 🙂 take care 🙂

  4. Bhabya

    It’s nice n Rosie u r from Odisha right? Bcoz I m from Odisha n I liked chena poda very much. The update was superb. Update ASAP.

    • Ooohoo…i can’t believe my eyes…surely darling mu aji bahut bahut khusi…bhabinathili Ki mu au Jane odia Ku paibi…chena poda Ra Kamal…from next time plz odiya re comment kariba…lots of love ❤…tc…see u again

  5. Shree

    Yey!! You put in football!! My craze for it is… I donno maybe unbeatable… I can’t go between Barcelona and Madrid… I love both of them as everyone knows cause of Messi and Ronald…. But I always go for Barcelona… I just go… Just like that… Love you for this!!! Muuaaahh ????

    Now coming to the episode… Lovely one… One crazy thing only!! Priya giving everyone shock.. Radhika suspicious.. Finally they found out!! Arjun found out!! Everything’s fine between them!! Yey!! Can we dance now?! I’m on my way to college.. In bus, so no dance.. I’m listening to let’s nacho… Lol.. I’m like super combo.. Super song and super update!! I love you… Love you love you love you!! And the game was one crazy thing!! Loveeeedddd iiitttt(like Vizie from dragon tales.. I love her).. Post soon baby!!

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • Really my choti darling…i didn’t know what I wrote with my frustration…that to la liga…but it went well I guess…n yes b ready…i already prepared legal papers to adopt u…lol…m laughing ? like hell now…love ❤ u a lot…tc?

      • Shree

        I’m always ready!! I’m serious here and you’re laughing?! So mean!! I’m so happy now!!

        I’ll be posting mine most probably by tomorrow.. You too post soon

        Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

  6. Sathya

    super episode Rosie?. so all the secrets r revealed except rajiv’s one. pls soon tell that also yar…. ???

  7. Gauri

    Rosie dear awesome update…finally Priya and Arjun together…now make Rajive fine and get Arjun Radhika together…waiting for the next…loads of love 🙂

  8. rosie its superb dear…match part is fab…haha
    ..how they turn into figher in it….n ending part is really emotional one…great going dear…love u dear

  9. aastha

    its superb !!!!!! finally arjun got 2 know that priya is hs sis……..happy 4 that.nw reveal rajivs past n sooon cure hm f hs disease……n then wen r u gonna unite ardhika????????
    can u tel me wat u r doing?????????? studying or working???????

  10. Sv

    Rosie first jow r u ok now happy coz I wanna see u always smile
    2. This was super awesome. I love d it . U made my day. Soo much fun lovely at last bro and sis are together. Love u soo much dear. Take care

    • Thanks dear ? sv for ur concern…actually I became a sandwich between work n study…that’s why gone mad…love ❤ u…tc?

    • When will u update plus I want something new from u…

      Can u write a short lovable 2-3 shot ff on ardhika…another…just feel like read ur another short yet cute one on the base of college n masti…juat a request…love ❤ u…tc

      • Sv

        Oh my god . Never thought of that k my rosie’s wish is my command sure I’ll do it but one request can I do that after may coz exams are fast approaching. After that I’ll write many ff dear. Pakka promise.

      • Yes…sure darling…i know exams tensions well …infact I have my exams from April 25 to may…gud luck to both of us…we will rock…? ? ? ? ? ??

  11. subha

    amazing rosie …….this episode awesome …..last part super.please update soon …….eagerly waiting next one………

  12. maandey

    awwww……its damn cute like you……muaaahhhhhh…..o my interview today…may be i got a call for telephonic one any time….haaaa……damn nervous……..bare my blabbering,……i need to do bungee jumpinggg

    • Hey calm down…just chill…best of luck ? today for ur interview…m sure u will rick sis…thanks a ton ? for commenting at such a time…talk to you later after ur interview

    • maandey

      mmmmm…i need to chill…it is not scheduled…but my sources tell me that i got a call anytime….hawww….first time on telephone…anyway…..i updated mine ff……enjoy that and tell me

  13. Wow….nice..u nailed it again with an amazing update…keep it going..pls update next chapter soon as if possible dear..

  14. mishti

    make the bond of arjun priya and rajiv so strong that even radhika will feel jelouse of them….it would be so much fun to see radhika and neil(already pissed off 4m raj as he gets extra attention )will also be pampered by arjun…..?? just a suggestion. ……

    • Yes I will make Arjun pamper Rajiv so much that Neil will make another drama with arjun….thanks for ur suggestions dear…arjun priya n Rajiv will always have a great bro sis bond…raj is younger than everyone except radhika …so u can imagine how much he will b pampered …n rads jealously…came later…lov ya…tc??

  15. honeybee

    Omg! Rosie darling you are superb as always. No words. Just speechless. It was such a heart-warming chapter. Update soon.

    I missed u too. I’m busy as hell but I can’t any chapter of yours. Love! ❤

    • Hmm…let me guess honey….mujhko pehchan lo me Hun kaun…me hun don,don….
      ?? m very happy seeing u in morning…m just waiting for June month so after that u will be regular here…missed u too…n thanks a lot ?….luv u ? a lot…tc…b happy…stay healthy ??

  16. Roma

    Rosie, rosie, rosieeeeeeee. …wowwww awesome, lovely, marvellous episode. ….Finally arjun n priya r together. …bro-sis bond so strong after all odds it tied back again more strongly. …ardhika cute fight for match was really awesomeeeeee n dadaji lovelyyyyyy dude….now what is rajiv’s disease?….and when radhika will realize her feelings for arjun???….keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

    • Thanks a ton ? Roma…love u darling…radhika will realize later…Rajiv’s secret is going to unveil within few episodes…ur comments always put a big smile on me…m on seven heaven…btw m planned for write a new ff…so post it taday…kindly see that n give ur precious views…its named as mmz…DARK:an action flick ….plzzzzzzzz see it now

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