manmarziyaan…new dimensions..chapter 14

Hii all ….thanks for ur response n thanks to silent readers also for amazing support…this chapter will b full of brother n sister story…so plz bear me with that…as it is necessary to disclose about their bonding…


Riya cried fiercely with holding radhika..radhika couldn’t understand a bit about her crying…moreover she wanted to ask her about photos of nandini n Arjun…but that was not a proper decided to kept mum..riya requested radhika not to tell others about her condition…radhika nodded n somehow she pacified her n made her sleep..she organized her scattered accessories n kept in bag..she thought if there is any link between Riya di n Arjun..but Arjun didn’t knew her…she’s confused by thinking about them..she opened the door hearing someone banged the door..all come in rushed..saurav asked if Riya is fine..radz told him di was just tired n felt I let her sleep..all sighed in relief..but Arjun in his thought don’t know but why feel concerned for her..she hit me in morning plus this is my first time I saw her but still I feel we are connected..why?? Radhika shook Arjun as he was lost in his thoughts..she signalled him to go out of room..she closed the door lightly n said Arjun to meet her alone on roof after sometime…he could not believe on his ears that radhika want to meet him alone that to in night…still b4 he left he looked back the closed room n sighed deeply…

Radhika went to saurav n Rajiv..saw nesam also there..neil demanded his extra treat for marriage..sila Devi nodded n said u r also like my son…but u should treat us first…omg u r the one guy whom his lady love gave proposal…sam shy a little..neil was all flush…rajiv teased him sayin sila maa he is more after arjun rather than b careful…all were so happy they chit chat loudly among themselves..radhika think not to disturb she went to Arjun..

Arjun stood at a corner of the roof..radhika went to him n stood silently..Arjun saw her disturbed..he wanted to ask the reason.
Radhika: I want to know something..can u give me a true answer..

Arjun: U think that I will lie u??

Radhika : No,that’s not what I meant..anyway have u known Riya di before..did u see her anywhere..

Arjun: No,but one thing I should tell u..may b I never seen her before but I feel some connection between feels like she is very close to me..

Radhika got more disturbed now..she thought to ask Riya next day..Arjun held her shoulder in one hand n caressed her face in other..said if anything bothered u so much u can share with me..she smiled n said thank u…

Everybody were in their deep sleep except Riya she reminisced her past..
*********FB STARTED **********

Arjun ‘s mother passed away after gave birth him..priya was 4 years at that time..but their father started cursing him for being reason for his mother’s death..he cursed him as a satan child n never took care of him..he drowned himself in was priya who was very happy having a little brother..she behaved more mature than her age..she took care of lil Arjun..arjun also never looked at anybody except her sister..he was reserved n violent from his childhood only coz of his father’s cold ness..but he loved his sister more than anything..he was in fight always with others at school who bullied his sister..eight years went happily with the bond of bro- day they heard their father was dead due to liver damage..coz too much consumption of alcohol..whatever it was they were happy with their they had nothing as their father mortgaged everything..some people decided to leave them at orphanage….

Arjun was 8 n priya was 12.. They started adjusting with that least they were happy that they lived together..orphanage peoples were very happy with them..especially Rana..Arjun was a brilliant child n priya had her unique way to design everything..some other children are jealous by seeing their bond m calibre..always priya gave Arjun her first design products..though it is a bracelet with beads,bags,pendent etc…one day Arjun was in fight with other guy who was much elder than him coz that guy always irritate priya…he beat him black n blue n warned him not to look at his sister otherwise he would snatch his eyes ..that guy was too much afraid he ran away..that incident was witnessed by nandini..

An evil smirk displayed on nandini’s face..she said perfect with satisfaction..she wanted to adopt Arjun but a received a straight denial from him..she applied her new trick..she started to mix with priya n arjun..gave them their needed accessories..played with them..showered her love on them..nandini managed to convinced priya that it was only for Arjun’s good ..he would get a good environment for pursuing his career as he was a bright student..he would stay in luxury..finally she agreed n send Arjun with nandini..on the day of leaving both cried a lot by hugging each other..

Arjun: I hate u u decided to let me go..u knew how much I love u..I can’t live without u..u r everything to me..

Priya: Chotu,I also didn’t wanted to let go..but its for all of ur good..I wanted to see u as a big renowned man..

Arjun: Di I could become successful by staying here with u..u r my everything..

Priya: I knew it my lil dear..may b m very small to say this but u r like my son,my happiness my everything..go n make ur di proud..

Arjun left with a heavy heart..priya adviced him not to disrespect nandini..regard him as ur mother..they waved bye to each other..priya was more sad ..she didn’t know why but she felt like she saw her brother last time..

Nandini was irked at first seeing the bond between bro- sis..she wanted to make all his attention towards her so that she can easily get her first she didn’t prevent them talking..later she instructed orphanage not to give Arjun’s call to priya n should cooked up some story…so that Arjun thought his sister started to avoid nandini’s luck samrat also refused her to she broke down n more than she showed Arjun how much she broke..but she cared for there was no news from priya Arjun started to inclined towards nandini’s fake affection..but he was not aware that nandini was going to break their bond …

Here priya was too restless by not getting any call,any news from Arjun..orphanage people told her her brother forget her by living in luxury..she yelled at Rana..rana calmed her down..he promised her he ll let her see Arjun..rana had a soft corner for both priya n Arjun..but at that time a foreign couple visited orphanage for their donations..they had no children..they stayed for sometime n they liked priya a lot..they wanted to adopt her..she denied coz she wanted to stay near with his brother..moreover she didn’t knew that nandini put venoms in Arjun’s mind against priya..nandini showed Arjun that priya was happy with foreign couple..n forgot u..that’s why she didn’t take ur calls..arjun witnessed half truth..he was hurt by thinking his sister forget him..days passed..arjun became more furious by the fire putting by nandini against priya

Finally the day come…priya was very happy that she would meet Arjun her chotu…she kept her new made accessories to gift him..she went with rana but got a 1000 volt shock when Arjun refused to talk with her…she tried to pacified him,gave him the things she made..he threw all the things n yelled u r so selfish I didn’t know..u wanted to push me away cos of ur benefits..i was a hurdle for u..l knew ur plan very well..don’t show ur face to me again…i hate u..hate u ..he held nandini tightly n said u told me regard her as mother but now I told u she is everything to me ..just go away from my life..priya frozen..tears didn’t stop..she could not think of what to do..or what not..she saw the disgust on Arjun’s eye for her..she couldn’t tolerate the wrong allegation from his brother’s mouth..she could barely stand..rana collected her accessories n took her with him..may b he is too much loyal toward nandini but he never thought less of priya..he also sad for that was the day of Raksha bandhan..

At that night priya made her morning the Madison couple came n adopted her legally..they were very happy..they flew to Norway..she was being sad for many day she met 4 years Rajiv who wanted to talk with her n play with her..she could find a new brother in face of Rajiv n got a friend in 14 years saurav …they all linked from childhood n she pampered Rajiv today more than anything…(( guys I thought I disclosed every one ‘s past except Rajiv ,wait his will b very big..n very at last his time will come))

After some years when Arjun was 23 visited orphanage but never entered ..he thought why di?? Why u betrayed me?? If u told me stay away from ur way I would do that…but why u sent me away from you…lone drop of tear escaped from his eye..he did frequently that..Rana sent arjun’s photos to priya frequently…she even tried to meet Arjun at London..but at the mean time nandini stopped her..
but after knowing nandini’s truth..Arjun came to orphanage to find about his di’s whereabouts..but nothing was there…as priya conditioned at that time that no evidence regarding her adoption should not be Madison were too rich they destroyed everything as per her wish..and Arjun had no idea that Rana could know about his di…

But today they thought…they hate each other which was truly not…now in this time Arjun need his someone very close very own of his to get his love…priya in the fear that if Arjun will know she’s priya he might b hate her it’s best for her to b Riya Madison…at least she could b friend with him..she was happy that she got her brother in her engagement…

*********FB ENDED ***********

Riya didn’t know when she slept…radhika tried to woke her up ..she said 15 min more…radhika teased her if she’ll send saurav to wake up her…she smiled n said not funny..u don’t how unromantic he is..moreover if u ll call him rather than getting a romantic wakeup I will get a bucket of water..she heard Rajiv screaming di m angry on u that’s why I called u di..not can u blame my brother com father…riya made faces n said which side u will b …he smiled cunningly n said I’ll b always my sweetheart radhika ‘s side…all were laughing hearing his statement..radhika said brilliant raj..all came down for breakfast after fresh up…riya could not find Arjun..she thought if he knew about me…she asked radhika about Arjun’s room n went..she saw Arjun tried to put pain relief balm on backside of his neck but due to pain he stopped..she walked slowly near to him n started applying balm on his neck by herself…arjun felt something strange..its a very known touch to him with full of affection..he turned to see Riya was there with a smiling face…he was confused n shocked both at same time…

That’s all for today guys..for now u all being able to guess that m a bit dramatic…so bear with me that

Credit to: Rosie


  1. Gauri

    Rosie dear awesome update….like Riya’s love for Arjun…now nothing about Rajiv…please post soon πŸ™‚

    • Thank u very much ? abha…i saw ur reply…actually I read some personal incident regarding Leo Tolstoy which showed his generosity..immediately u stuck in my mind..i thought u both are that question came…sorry for replying here…love ❀ u…tc??

      • Gauri

        Rosie…for politics you really need a tricky brain…but people who can write hats off to them…planning and writing a conspiracy is a big thing…are you planning to write??

    • Thanks dear…n one more question…what do u think about a plot regarding politics n conspiracy…m again in nuts..don’t mind me…

    • It would b simple yet lil dirty n tricky a bit…yes u r right…conspiracy is a big thing…u have to apply brain…don’t know…but sometimes I’ll get crazy thinking about indian administration n world politics…m again in nuts…don’t mind …love ❀ u…?

    • Glad to see u here again rg…thanks a ton ? dear…i missed u a lot…u gave so much support n inspiration in starting time of my ff…love

  2. Sathya

    FABULOUS ROSIE DEAR…its awesome episode. Great attempt yar. I love the sister brother bonding. I love the way you revealed the past between them. Only Raj’s is pending. Reveal that also soon yar. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • Thank u very much sis…love u a lot…glad u liked it…Rajiv’s past will reveal soon..but don’t threw juta chapal on me…lol… ?

  3. Sv

    Rosie that was awesome . I loved it . Finally it was because of misunderstanding. Fwwww i was scared and yippiee i’m happy for riya and arjun . Make them together soon and that should be a great event. PLs my dear pls…..

    Rosie i love you my darling . I love you soo soo much…..take care bear hugs and kisses.

    • Oooh…my twin tiny cutipieee..thanks a lot dear…I’ll try to make it grand..but m a bit dramatic u know…they will get together as its high time…loads of love ❀…tc?? n update ur also

  4. Oh dear πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ it’d reaallllllyyyyyy supppppeeeerrrrbbbbbb πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ missed u all these days πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ finally all r connected with each other πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ poor arjun so sad of him πŸ™ after all u ff is really beautiful πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ loved it πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ <3 love u too πŸ™‚ take care πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ waiting for next update πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • Thanks a ton ? dear…u r really like ur name…i mean sugar…sweetness overload…i like ur smile marks everywhere..m here only…lots of

  5. Shree

    Ayeee!! That was an update!! Seriously?! How can someone stoop so low?! Argh… The past was revealed beautifully.. I hope Arjun finds out soon.. And about rajiv.. Please soon.. I love that guy to the core.. Don’t chuck him out please… I loved it to the core!!

    Post soon sweetheart

    Love you loads… Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • Ooh my choti darling…love u a lot…btw hows ur lab…i was pestering with u like anything…lol…don’t mind it…

      U loved Rajiv…i also loved him…don’t worry ?..his time will come..n m sure u will give me two three punches for him…lol…kiddin..luv

      • Shree

        Babe!! Lab was today and it was good… 18/25.. Lol… Lost it in Viva… It’s k… Next one I’ll do well..

        Yeah yeah I will if you do something idiotic with my Rajiv… Not two… Till I get calm I’ll keep punching you.. Lol.. I was just kidding.. I’ll never do that… Your my sweet big sister-online mom..

        Post soon.. Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

      • Its k…better luck next time…but I expected a 23 /24 from u…be ready for next…now m banging my head like anything…even I shared that pain in sv new bond page …expecting some support from u…love ❀ u lot…lol m online sis com mom…even I got a child here…hahaha…feeling gud…so what about me adopting u…how z my idea??? Lol…rolf??

      • Shree

        No problem.. I’m ready.. Love the idea!! When are you getting HT papers done?! ??.. Lol..

        I’ll do well next time… Pakka.. Promise… I’m there for you .. Always..

        Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  6. I loved it today it explain there bonding and how they got separated. I have a feeling that Rajiv is connected to Prena and Neil. Anyway the story was awesome this should have been on the orginal DYM. πŸ™‚

    • Thanks a ton ? brin…i loved u darling…u gave me a constant confidence from starting…why I feel u become very smart…ohk I’ll reveal about Rajiv soon…glad u considered it for portraying…omg lots of love ❀

  7. aastha

    superb superb superb!!!!!! finally u revealed riyas past..that nandini…how many lifes did she destroy??????????….selfish cunning….omg im running short f wrds to describe hr………taks 4 the update .love u……

  8. subha

    wow awesome…………..amazing episode.. i love it…please update soon eagerly waiting next part…

  9. Roma

    Wowwww Rosieeeee, it’s out of the world. …tremendously awesoooooome n outstanding. ….the flash back was really very interesting n the tricks played by nandini were awful which broke the beautiful bond of bro-sis pure love…but no matter how much your enemy try to harm you, destiny never batray n gives you what you really deserve….now again it brought these bro-sis face to face n soon all the misunderstandings will be cleared….I love this story veryyyyyyy muchhhhhh…very interesting, optimistic, encouraging, motivating, lovely n unique…..keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

    • Eagerly waiting for ur views…don’t know but always I just get much more appreciation from u than I deserve…that took me cloud9…m seriously horrible at romance n a bit u can find my ff mixed with drama n pure bonding…no – ve characters only time n situation were not right…anyway its a huge complement…thanks a ton ? dear…lots of love ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ tc? come soon to the main page…wating

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..