manmarziyaan…new dimensions..chapter 13

Hello guys…thanks for all of ur great support…let me know about this chappy as it’s ur response which inspired me…so here is the next…

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As ardhika came back to Mumbai after their location hunting…radhika sent snap shoots to saurav for finalization…he immediately called back…radhika giggled seeing his interest…Arjun stare at her seeing her laughing n talking with saurav…still he is envious by thinking that she looked more happy with saurav…he could hear that radhika wished saurav with so much enthusiasm n told him to come back soon…after end of her talking he asked her what’s she talking about which made her so ? happy ?…she answered him it’s confidential n walked away seeing Sam…

Sam n radhika went to her office room…sam hugged radhika excitedly n said chasini u don’t know how much happy I m…it’s all because of u..u returned to my life so as happiness…u r my lucky charm…she told about her proposal..radhika congratulate her n hugged her..she said so finally its party time but before that we all should go to Rishikesh otherwise my maa will kill all of us…sam sighed…sam said I don’t know how will I face aunty uncle after such incident…radhika pacified her…they were happy that all r going to enjoy at Rishikesh like before…riya’s msg poped up in radz mobile…she was all happy replied her…sam said radhika about her relationship with Riya…radhika knew what she wanted to know..she said Riya di is not just a friend for me…she is like elder sister n motherly figure to me…n more of that I want u all become friends n enjoy our lives together…

Arjun was pacing in his room here n there…in between he sat down on seat…but could not concentrate by thinking about radhika n her new bonds…neil entered over excitedly n covered Arjun’s eye…as usual Arjun guessed n said what made u so happy…Neil said about Sam’s proposal n hugged Arjun tightly…suddenly Arjun remembered Neil’s kisses on his cheek before n he put his both palms on his both cheeks…Neil’s chuckled seeing him…but he wanted to tease him more…so he put his both hands above Arjun’s palm…he told Arjun dude m not interested for ur cheeks now…m thinking other things..made a pouted face…Arjun pushed him hard n ran out from there…Neil brusted out in laughter…he thought this is only one way I can win from u…

Arjun sighed in relief outside in pantry area…he saw radhika n Sam chatted happily n joined them…neil came there n asked radhika to come with him as he had some urgent talk with her…Arjun frowned n gave a don’t try to mess with her look…Neil said don’t u believe me Arjun…Arjun said no, I’ll definitely not leave u if u do anything with her…radhika n Sam puzzled with their conversation…before they could proceed further Neil took radhika away…

They both went to some silent place…radhika asked Neil what’s urgent he wanted to talk with her…neil said he felt something fishy in Rajiv’s behaviour n explained everything to her…radhika shocked n asked if he went to doctor or not…Neil said he was not here since yesterday…so better chasini u took him to doc…he came back alone as radhika went to Rajiv…Arjun n Sam waited for them… Arjun asked about radhika’s whereabouts Neil answered him patience my Romeo…she’s my best friend n I loved her a lot…she has gone..let all of us ready for office now….

Radhika met Rajiv n asked him to get ready…he got up from his sleep n asked is everything fine…radz stared him but didn’t say anything…when she took him to hospital he was afraid if Neil told anything…he said m fainted due to stress n weakness…so what’s necessary to go to doc…she said we’ll see that n told if he would not agree with her she will say everything to saurav…as Rajiv knew saurav well he agreed …but he was searching his way to trick her…finally when doc said reports will available after some hours he find his way…he said radhika to go to room n back after reports come…but she was adamant that she would ready to wait for hours…now he was tensed…but when he saw doc leaving by giving responsibility to his assistant he was at ease…he bribed the assistant as he found him as a greedy person n made a fake report…he tricked radhika by showing fake report n said I was right n thanks god in mind…

Next day as saurav n Riya n sila Devi arrived all left for Rishikesh except Riya as she had her fashion programs…they all were highly welcomed by radhika’s family…still Arjun Sam Neil felt awkward for their previous incident but dadaji n family made them feel ease…dadaji n Rajiv chit chat in their funny way…saurav talked with Ankush…sam was busy with mala n radhika with sila Devi…arjun n Neil staring others…at night when mala served food to others Rajiv said mala maa ur hand has magic in it…everything u prepared has its own essence…can u give me ur hand…Dilip n mala stared him…neil thought this punk has gone mad…radhika cleared the confusion regarding his statement that he wanted maa’s handmade food…everyone laughed at him…all went for sleep…

Saurav asked radhika for an outing…when they left Arjun saw them n followed them…they went near Ganges river bank side garden…Arjun saw they both were talking very happily…n end of the talk radhika hugged saurav which make him jealous…but later what he saw he got more shock…he saw saurav sat down on his knees n propose radhika n rads laughed…radhika said what r u doing saurav…how unromantic…just say some lovely words when u propose someone…do it properly n she tried to teach him…saurav tried many times n finally he successfully proposed radhika with a ring n she accepted it happily…saurav said he’ll announced this tomorrow n a grand party will b there…they came back…Arjun was hell shocked seeing the scenes…he didn’t know what to do…it felt like the ground below his feet was slipped…his eyes filled with tear…he sat down there only…

In the morning when radhika woke up she saw everyone was busy in searching Arjun…they all finally dispersed n went outside to found him…radhika went to the previous night spot n found Arjun sat down on ground below a concrete chair…she went toward him by calling his name but due to slippery area she fell down n sprained her ankle…Arjun came forward n tried to hold her…though he was in pain he could not see her pain…so he tried to lift her up but radhika protest…that hurt him more…but he didn’t listen n lifted her up…riya witnessed that from a distance as she reached just now…she thought if somebody tried to force on radhika…(( guys remember Riya never saw anyone from birdsong except prerana,,at the time of reconciliation she was absent)).. So she moved to the back side of Arjun n gave a karate kick on his neck from backside n started screaming by holding radhika…arjun bowed down his head with pain n shouted angrily…but he can’t able to look up…by the time radhika cleared misunderstandings everybody reached there…saurav scolded Riya for her rowdy nature n said her to ask forgiveness from Arjun…by hearing his name she was stunned n asked rads is this the same Arjun whom u talked about…she said sorry to him without looking his face n went away with radhika..Saurav n others took Arjun to doc…put a bandage on his neck for relaxation…doc said everything will be alright by the evening…

At night saurav took everyone to five star hotel of Rishikesh…mala asked beta why u brought all of us here…n where is radhika n Riya…saurav told them one surprise party for all…lets go in..by hearing surprise Arjun’s face became pale…neil noticed that n asked him the reason but he avoided..all were stunned seeing the decoration inside its totally royal type…only family members invited with some business personas….radhika n Riya also came…saurav took mike n started his talking…Arjun stared at radhika with teary eyes…saurav announced today is a big day for me…i want to settle down in my life…i wanted to call the most beautiful person of my life here…radhika Mishra…arjun turned to walked outside…saurav continued because of this lovely lady I got my courage to propose my lady love…how much I loved her like ocean,never ending sky…((he gave his small romantic note what rads taught him)) Riya will u become my life partner n complete me!!! Riya had tears in her eyes…tear of happiness n Arjun stopped at entrance area with happiness also…Riya ran to the stage n hugged saurav tightly…Rajiv also went…riya told may I know how the almighty unromantic person got idea to propose with romantic words…saurav told radz tortured me for 4 hour to make this proposal romantic…all were happily hugged n the audience clapped hard…they exchanged their rings n took blessings of eleders…

Saurav said I planned this before but I wanted to celebrate this with my family…so I decided to come here..he introduced everybody with Riya..radz introduced Neil n Sam to Riya…they congratulate her …but when radz introduced Arjun Riya stunned seeing him…radhika told di u kick his neck in morning…he forwarded his hand for a shake …but riya’s eye were full of tears…n she ran away..radhika followed her cos she noticed her change of facial expressions when Riya saw Arjun…arjun also shocked but he stood there…riya came into home n opened up her bag n took out a little kiddish bag..opened it up n threw all the accessories inside it on the bed n cried hard…radhika went inside n saw her crying…she went near to her n she shocked seeing some children photos,childhood fashionista accessories with Arjun ‘s grown up photos n nandini’s photos are lying on bed…she couldn’t understand anything but tried to console her…may b nobody knew but Riya herself knew she was Priya Mehera,elder sister of Arjun mehra before she was adopted to become Riya Madison…what should she do when she knew her own brother hate her so much…but fate make them face to face…..

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That’s all for today guys…so plz let me know how is it…its quite shocking I know…
But remember I told u there is inter connection between new characters at the time of starting of my ff…

Credit to: Rosie

51 comments

  1. Gauri

    Rosie where were you I was waiting for your update….amazing episode…why is Rajiv hiding his illness…please make him fine…nice twist Riya is Priya Mehra….amazing update…next one soon…loads of love 🙂 and smile like a rose 🙂

  2. aastha

    hop im the 1st to comment…….wen ll rads b soft 2 arjun?????i din like te part where she spoke 2 hm in a cold tone………well u shocked me……i tot 4 a split sec tat saurav proposed rads…….bt towards te ed i gt releived oly 2 recieve another shock………..keep gng…..n update asap…………..

    • Thank u very much aastha dear…radhika is soft now…just she didn’t let know Arjun the truth as it was a secret that time…glad u liked it…lov u…tc??

  3. Chinmayi

    Yippee….i m very happy for arjun…his line is clear as he hd thought saurav as an hurdle..and he got his sister…this bond will make all the 7 of them more close to each other…radz arjun ko aur math rulavo…and rosie thanks a ton for updating….seriously i m mad at all u ff writers…u ppl make us addict to ur stories…and ll dissapear for loong time(not particularly u dear….this is for all ff writers who make us wait……)
    although i know u guys are busy with ur lives and need ur own time,i cant resist myself from refreshing the page….uffo i hve my internals in the coming week..
    Plss bear my madness!!!

    • Thank u very much ? Chinmayi…i knew the feeling when ff stop at middle…sorry to make u wait dear…m very busy now…so late update…glad u liked the update…best of luck ? for ur internal…study hard…luv u..tc??

  4. Shree

    Ummmm…. This was one banging episode… I was literally lmaoing in the first half… Angry with rajiv in the middle and the other half was cute!! The proposal… Omg!! Arjun jealous… Riya wow!! She is Priya Mehra?! Omg!! Now what?!

    Omg!! Lost soon… Pleeeaaassseee

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • Thank u ? so much my choti…lil energy booster…u liked it…that is enough for me…gud luck sweetie for ur lab..surely u will rock like before…yes I’ll try to update soon…lov u…tc????

  5. feby

    MY GOD………… wat a thrilling ending…u make us all go mad thinking of next part….hahahaaaa…….awsome…… love u loads….

    • Thanks a ton feby…my dear sweet little darling…glad u liked it…lol m very happy hearing that I make u mad with my story…anyway howz ur crash course going?? Hope all Fyn….lov u…tc???

      • feby

        didnt u c my reply in last chappy??? i replied it today…u will get ur questions answer…????

    • Sorry my lil jaan….i saw it now…ur parents are right…usually u took challenges n win at last…so why so worry…u know my funda…think if u r not able to do then nobody can also able to do this…don’t feel low…just do ur part diligently…u’ll get ur results…not to concentrate what happened around…that is not important…n don’t forget the story of turtle n the rabbit story…finally slow n steady wins the race..so keep calm n go on…my wishes is always with u….love u…tc???

      • feby

        tis time the challenge i am facing is not so easy to tackle di…and the pressure on me is very big…..but still…now i have hope… i know someone and some ppl whom i dont know fully but close to my heart is there to support me evn if i fall…tats the grt thng needed for a broken person u know…i seem to b strong from outside to all my friends and especially to my relatives bcoz of which they think many thngs…but iam very delicate….very rarely i opn up…and u r one of the person to whom i opned….i dont know y…. but still……tq for ur support…..

    • I knew my darling…u r small now ….i told u once u r so tender…but one thing never forget u have ur parents always as support…n this is just beginning my dear…u have ur long life…so this time try to b strong from inner…l know u v the calibre to tackle everything…but some push needed…hope If I could hug u console u…may almighty do that work…n seriously don’t take tensions n don’t think so hard…sometime thinking less n lightly make u feel better…n for ur age no need to think hard…just do ur duty…god bless my lil sis

      N m also a reserve kind of person in real life…i opened up to few ppl here…n u considered me as close that is so sweet of u…lov u…tc???

  6. Riya is Priya Mehra what awesome twist. I hope Rajiv is not sick. Rosie your doing a wonderful writing, keep it up. 🙂

    • I don’t know why…but whenever I replied u…it ddn’t get post once…i v to post 3 4 times…tu seriously….

      Thanks a ton brin…waiting for ur comments always…glad u liked the twist dear…about Rajiv his story will unfold in future…lov u …tc???

  7. Breathless… Thank u for the amazing update…it was awesome..last part very emotional..pls upload next one dear….

  8. Vivi

    I’m shocked…wot riya is Priya Mehra..arjun’s elder sis. And y he hate hr..!!!
    Enjoyed it alot…it was vry sad seeing arjun cry…but glad d misundrstndng is cleared….update nxt part sooon!!love you

  9. Sv

    Oohhhh mmmyyyyy ggggoooooooodddddddd rosie what a twist. Man u rocked today and the major twist was riya is priya omg. Pulse were raising when I was reading. I was lraying that saurav should not propose rads but never thlight of this twist . God now im feeling dizzy.

    Rosie love u so much. Bear hugs and kisses .

    • Oohoo….waiting for u dear…thank u very much for liking it…u know I just started this ff on basis of priya mehera…coz in original mmz they didn’t show her coz of sp pressure…so I cooked up this story….don’t feel dizzy dear…haha…love u….tc???

    • Its k dear…i understand…i was also busy..so gave a late update…at least u came n comment..thanks for that…lots of love..tc??

    • Thank u very much Nina…sorry for disappointing u…but the trip was for only two days…so I could not guess more…I’ll b careful from next time…anyway I planned to end my ff within 20-23 chapters…so…tc??

  10. Ameena

    You forgot me ?!?!?!?

    I missed u a lot. oh it’s so amazing. I’m still in complete shock. Riya is Priya Mehra?!. Hmmm..this sounds good. It gives me positive vibes for up-coming chapters. I loved it. Can’t wait for next one. Love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Amu…i didn’t forget u…u forgot me…m angry with u….katti….aur baat nahi karungi tujhse….m crying…..

      U didn’t reply from past few days…i thought u were busy…u always tell me to update soon n not seen anywhere…hope u r doing fine…just prayed the almighty to give u all the happiness n courage though u r too courageous to face each stage of ur life…

      I missed u like hell…even u cant imagine….lov u my jaan…tc????

      I missed many peoples specially u,manha n suha…u peeped up in between…that is a relief…but other two just vanished…don’t know where…

    • aastha

      hey ammu…..where are u???????????? im sad that i din see u…..i ve started a new story “enemies frm childhood”….do read it and give your valuble comment……….

  11. Sathya

    My dear lovely sister..You gave a wonderful episode dear 🙂 it is so nice..you know what it has lot of suspenses…Saurav & Radhka’s relations becomes clear cut now to all of us and Radhika’s perception towards Arjun..thought she is angry she cannot spend her life to anyother person without Arjun..and she conveyed it clearly to everyone…HATS OFF TO YOU baby…it is supero super episode 🙂 🙂 🙂

    Sorry for commenting late …pls pls

    • Yoyo…sis…u came that’s enough…late I don’t mind…m very much happy with ur comments…actually u conveyed properly what I thought…love ❤ u..tc?

  12. Roma

    Awesome, marvellously written. …omg rosieeeeeeee you brilliantly nailed it my dear!!!!!!!! 🙂 …rads n saurav very lovely friendship bond…I was frowned during their convo n got very sad for arjun….but delighted with saurav’s proposal for riya…loved this surprise…..big wide smile on my face…you made my day sweeeeeetheart. …I know rads developing some feelings for arjun but when will she realize it for sure….arjun is already sure for rads 😉 ….. stupid rajiv, why is he hiding his health problems from his friends???……omg you shocked me…riya is actually Priya mehra, arjun’s elder sister…wowwww awesome…very interesting n exciting track…love u love u love u soooooooo muchhhhhh for this amazing story. ….very unique n refreshing. ….keep it up honeyyy. . Eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh

    • Thanks a ton Roma…u even can’t imagine how much I waited for u…actually u told me my story reflection by which m able to know how much I wrote if that was correct or not..u always made my days….love ❤ u…tc..❤ plz plz plz plz plz plz plz be soon…n come to the main plot very soontc??

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