manmarziyaan…new dimensions..chapter 11

Hiii all lovely people…hope u all enjoyed ur holi…m very much grateful to ur response n support…n let me know about this chapter…? ?..so enjoy the ride
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As Arjun opened the door he was too shocked to see radhika there..even he pinched himself to check if the sight was true or he dreamed himself..more to his shock she looked like a ghost with all her messy hair half tied n half scattered,didn’t blink her eyes even once… without making any noise she went into his room..arjun followed her like he’s enchanted…now when she was going to sit on couch she bumped into side arm chair which make Arjun startled…he noticed her thought if she was walking in sleep or she was drunk…he couldn’t figure out..coz radhika had neither of those bad habits…at the same time he was happy from inside…but he got a 10000volt shock when radhika grabbed his hand n pulling him toward bed…he was like if she had been cast a spell by black magician…or eat something wrong which had side effect like this…but he did what she wanted…she made Arjun sit on bed n placed her own head on his lap…said him to patted on her head & moving his fingers inside her hair as she had those habit…without these she couldn’t sleep…(( guys just remember i mentioned her new habit for sleeping in my starting chapters, but don’t remember exactly on which chapter))Arjun did as she said…she was into deep sleep after Some time…but here Arjun’s sleep was vanished…first time he saw her in sleeping,she was like an innocent child…first time in his life he felt contented by holding her…his soul soothed…he patted lovingly on her head n cheek n planted a feather kiss on her forehead…he told m sorry…i couldn’t resist…but had you always like this much sweet…he placed her head comfortably on his lap n putting a hand on her shoulder…with that he slept in that sitting position with full of satisfaction…he never felt so much happiness n contentment…

Morning cool breezes touched arjun’s face…he woke up after feeling a cooling sensation…he saw radhika was not there…he thought if that was a dream…but why he felt so calm n composed…he went for fresh up…here radhika banged her head here n there thinking what the hell was happened n how i got into his room n i slept on his lap….oh god its weird…the more she thought the more she felt embarrassed…but somehow she calmed down herself n again trying to remember with a full concentration…she thought I freshened up,Arjun came here n massaged cream n then she remembered before she was going to sleep she drank her fav drink given by Rajiv…she grab that bottle n smell that…it lightly smell liquor..she loudly screamed Rajiv idiot I won’t leave u…

Rajiv talked with saurav n said I can hear radhika’s screaming….
Saurav: What did u do this time???
Rajiv:some fun,I added little alcohol in her gingermint lemonade…i knew it would smell after hours…started laughing ?
Riya snatched phone from saurav n started scolding Rajiv…
Riya: R u mad ?…if anything happened to her…
Rajiv: Calm down..first of all nothing will happen to her…plus I v too much faith on Arjun…
Riya: Get ready for ur quota of beatings as mala aunty was angry at us….last time when we visited we didn’t go Rishikesh…so
Rajiv:( now excited) malamaa called…for her m ready for everything…come soon..i missed u all
Riya: We also missed u…
They ended their call…
Sam come to him asked lil bro is everything ready…Rajiv winked at her n thumbs up…he wished her best of luck sis n hugged her…Diya was happy seeing all this ..but Neil’s anger at peak….he went to them n asked Sam if u r free then can we go for lunch as per u wished yesterday…Sam said I don’t want lunch…but if u have time can u come with me somewhere else…neil nodded n they went away…Rajiv smiled n Sam turned n cheered him up…

It’s a very very cool weather at Lonavla..no sun…only cool breeze..with serene beauty…arjun came to cafe area saw radhika standing at open space looking outside scenic beauty…her hairs waving according to wind’s direction..she had eyes closed…n spread her hands outside to feel the breeze…he was all mesmerized seeing her plus the song breathless by Shayne Ward playing in cafeteria which made him go on mad with its lyrics…he came to her n stood just behind her with his own hands spreading like titanic position..radhika felt his hot breathe on her n turned back… he said u really looking beautiful n leave me breathless…he caressed her cheeks n cupped in his both hands…n went for kiss…suddenly he felt some extra coolness which ran from his head to neck…he came back into his scenes…n saw radhika n a waiter looked at him with perplexed…he checked some pieces of ice cubes on his head…he screamed what’s the hell is this…

Radhika: I also want to ask the same question…which kind of action r u showing here…
Arjun: Action??? Nothing like that
Radhika: U r waving ur hand in air…made ur lips into curls…are u in nut…had u in some kind of erotic dream??
Arjun:what?? Eros…r u mad.. ( in a deep thought..now what should I say…i saw her in my dream) I practiced for advertisement..how models would do their work…btw why didn’t u both call me instead of putting ice on me…
Waiter: Sir we called u nth time…but no response…so madam told me to put ice on u
Arjun: (Now angry ?) don’t u know the general principles of restaurant..if I complaint against u…u will be gone..
Radhika: Its not his fault n don’t vent out ur anger on him…talk with me..
She told waiter to go n ordered coffee n sandwiches for her n asked Arjun what would he like..he told same as madam…waiter thanked radhika n went…then radhika told Arjun I asked many people about the good locations here…so after breakfast we should move out to check it..get ready..Arjun just nodded sadly As he saw her behaved normal…he thought m sure it was a dream last night then….

Sam took Neil end of city where a park is situated having an artificial lake ,restaurant,everything in it…sam told Neil idiot if u r ready for a scuba diving…Neil was puzzled with her behaviour but said yes…they changed their dress n went inside lake…underwater scenery were too beautiful when Sam took Neil toward a coral surface..he saw a heart ? shaped figure was made of coral n oyster…with combination of white colour outside n red inside…sam signed him if he liked it n hinted him to choose an oyster among those…he was shocked but choose one light red colour from inside…they took a selfie inside water with that heart shaped corals…when they came out Neil saw some people stood there with their music instruments…once they played Sam did a monoact which displayed all her emotions n love ❤ for him without saying anything…neil was full of tears in his eyes…actually he didn’t know Sam also loved him that much…sam came to him n took the oyster from him n sit with knees down in front of him…she opened the oyster

Sam: Idiot I know m no good for u…i never realized ur care for me…but u gave me everything without my saying…but one thing m sure within this two years I can’t leave without u…may b m selfish with this…but I can’t afford to loose u to anyone…u r my life…can u accompany me till the end of my life…i want to fight with you like this when our hairs changed into grey…can u give me ur love ❤ for life time…will u marry me to fill me n she opened the oyster containing a ring inside….
Neil stood spellbound without uttering a word…he was crying vigorously with happiness…didn’t know what to do…he went to Sam…made her stand up
Neil: Sammy,what was that?? R u trying to give me shock…if here is no people around now,then u could not even imagine what I’ll do…

Sam: Say directly my answer idiot..if yes or no…no circling
Neil: U still didn’t know my angel…what would b my answer…obviously yes my darling..but I couldn’t except this from….
Sam cut him off by placing a deep kiss on him…she said m bold enough to do things what u only imagine…she made him wear the ring…all the people were there cheer for them…

Then there was a little arrangement near lake side for them having food…two chairs n one table covered with red n white satin cloth placed there..one champagne with other Spanish dish were served..they enjoyed their moment with soft music..they did a slow dance when they heard a voice from speaker enjoy your timings with laughter…nesam saw Rajiv standing with some distance with a mike on hand…neil was angry ? by seeing him in this time…but Sam was very happy seeing him….she went toward him..

Sam: Thank u very much…i don’t know if u were not there if m able to speak or not…thanks for giving the courage in me
Rajiv: No thanks n sorry plz…u called me as brother…so why formalities
Sam: Still…yes if I had my brother alive today he would do anything for me like u did today
Neil: Sammy why did u say thanks to him…
Sam told him everything that everything was set up by him..how he gave her strength to proposal…neil was stunned but happy…when he returned they saw Rajiv left that place showing thumbs up to them….

Rajiv came outside n made a call to Dr Hennery whom he consulting regarding his health…n told him that he began to feel dizzy ? n weak in daytime…n sweating…Dr adviced him to find match asap for therapy…he said I told here in some hospital…they are trying..i will inform u once I ll get it…dr told him not to take stress n not to do any hard labour…he went away..

Neil heard him …but only few last sentence…he could not figure it out…but thought it’s necessary now to inform chasini…why I feel if that jerk tried to hide something…

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That’s all for today guys…let me know ? abt ur views…

Special request to everyone please try to listen song ” breathless ” by Shayne Ward…i love it for its lyrics n intonation n voice intensity…if u heard it before u can give ur views…k…i should stop now..

Credit to: Rosie

39 comments

  1. Ameena

    Directly commenting before even reading; first, thanks for the update. Second, I heard ‘Breathless’ It is so amazingggg. I just fell in love with the voice. And lyrics are so thought-provoking. I really love that song.

    • Amu…yipee you r first today…i can’t believe on my eyes ?….n that’s why I told u we mostly similar in nature…breathless is one of my fab songs…i loved it to the core…thanks darling dearest…luv u…tc?????

    • Amu yaar …thanks a ton ? to u….u replied thena on behalf of me….i didn’t checked that…luv u ? darling…hope u fine today’s….tc…stay healthy…n come soon….we will fight…missd u yaar so much n ur positive demanding spirits….? ? ? ? ?

  2. Gauri

    Arjun dreaming about kissing Radhika was hilarious …Sam proposing Neil amazing….sad for Rajiv…please make him fine soon…loved it…waiting for the next one 🙂

    • Thanks a bunch…i even don’t know what to reply u…but thanks a lot….Rajiv…hmmm…with due time he ll b……filled it..hehehe…kidding…we will see what will happen to him…luv u…tc????

  3. Sv

    Rosie u r a hero . I loved it. I really loved ardhika moment . And the ice scene lol . Sam and neil scene was beyond explanation. Neil should say it to radhika . Let rajiv be alright.

  4. Ameena

    Arjun is truly mad about Radhika. Day dreaming!!!?? ROFL…
    Sam’s proposal was gooood. Really good.
    It was Awesome as usual. Next one soon. Sorry for demanding but can’t help with it. Study well!! Take care and yes eat healthy. Be happy always!

    • Amu….amu…..yipeee…yay….m on cloud9 seeing u again…n don’t b sorry…in fact m happy ? that you demanded…m happy as always…i came here to reply after study only…I’ll miss ur ff for some days…anyway thanks for sneak peek sometime…llllllluuuuuvvvvvvv uuuuuu. a. Llloooottttt….tc dear ????

    • Thank u ? very much brin….I’ll make Arjun to dance on my tune…lol…bechara…what he would he do…glad u people like Sam’s proposal…luv u…tc??

  5. Shree

    Whaaaat was that?! Lol he’s so crazy!! Ice cubes ??.. I love that song… Gosh, that was so perfect.. Too good… Nesam sequence.. Wow!! Too good… Rajiv’s health… Please no… I want him.. So sweet he is..

    And yes!! Party!! Come to Bangalore.. I’ll treat you..

    Post soon.. Please.. Love you ??

    • Thank u ? very much my lil energy booster…regarding song…i loved that song very much…heart touching…Rajiv…we will see what happen to him…

      Bangalore…though m not staying now there but m visited frequently…most of my frnds n relatives settled there…so when I ‘ll go I will have my treat from u…

      Llluuuuvvvv uuuu ssssoooo mmmmuucchh….tc???? njoy party

    • Thank u ? very much shuvo…glad u liked those parts…m really a lil low abt nesam proposal…it came out lil bit different…luv u…tc????

    • Very nice to see u again…thank u very much…glad u liked it…n thanks for ur encouragement from my starting ff…luv u…tc? ?

  6. Thena

    Heyyyyyyy rosie dear, u r here. i asked about ur story in my page, and Ameena told me tat u r writing tis, so i just came here running. she’d given me ur links. i will read n again come back to u dear. but i wil b slow. really excited fr urs. love u lot 😀 🙂

    • Omg…i can’t believe on my eyes…needed a pinch to feel if it’s real…i should check sun from where he rised today….n not to forget about my kundli..zodiac sign…m m speechless now…

      My favourite awesome writer is here….i could not believe in my luck…sorry but after sometime u’ll get to know how horrible m in writing…still I continue it…hehehe…getting a comment from u…making my whole month awesome…m walking 2 ft above from ground now…everybody thought m gone mad…

      Don’t leave ur uniqueness dear…actually don’t know why…but I wanted to b informal with u..still I wanted to respect u…ur writing,the elegance n the purity in it making u too perfect…i read once u topped in university…was silent that time…but seeing u …this was something u deserved…

      About me …I didn’t see ur post…i left u a message in ur page…m really extremely sorry for not reply though my sweetheart Amu did that…k ….if u’ll read mine plz tell me hows it…how my lil brain irritated u….thank u ? so much…..enough of my blabbering with over excitement….

      I aslo lllluuuuvvvvv uuuuuu a lllllooooottttt….tc..stay healthy ??? ? ?

      • Thena

        Hey rosie dear, wats this!!!!!!! pls dear, v r friendssssssssss. u r, oh my!!!!!!!! u r one lovely girl. be informal wid me dear. i dunno wat to say to u. all i can say is ‘dear, i love u n u r my friend’. 🙂 u said about writing books in my page. yaar rosie, yeah i hv lots of ideas. i mean, i love writing n i lov mmz. wen both combined, i cudnt help but cum here. tats it, nothing professional or having any such idea any before. though me greedy to do tat by getting such lovely cmmnts like urs here 🙂 n dont say it horrible, urs. it will b surely good, i know. i will read it fr sure n let u know about it fr sure. love u again, rosie sweet 🙂 n one more, ur profile pattern resembles rose just as ur name 🙂 🙂 🙂

      • Seriously today is my luckiest day…i got many replies from u….n ur story…….now I sealed my mouth…but as a person I think u must b a lovable wonderful person….because u v so much enthusiasm to interact with others…that is the thing I admire most…i usually have had a chat connection with shree,Amu n suha here…sometime gauri…n today u …I liked when people replied to ur msg…i want to confess something to u…m sure u will be happy after listening that…itz only related to u….but next time surely I’ll reveal…coz I don’t wanna to b teased ….luv u ? so much dear…tc…b healthy..? ? ? ? ? ?

  7. Ameena

    Love you! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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    “Happy Easter!”

  8. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. ..rosie wow,wow,wow….ardhika scene in bedroom so cute…she slept in his lap n he caress her heir..awwww…so sweeeeeet….arjun daydreaming of rads n waving hands in air n kissing….lol…n ice on head…hehehe…so lovelyyyyyy n hilaaaaaaarious. …nesam so cool yaar…Sam proposed neil very beautifully. ..I just loved it to the core. ..n rajiv he mixed alcohol in rads drink….wow…very adorable guy but what is his health problems….finding match of what?…kidney?….sad for him, plz cure him soon…keep it up honeyyy…eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . Breathless. …loved it…

    • Roma…my dear…i missed u so much ? at the time of posting…plz come back on time…u r always an amazing support…if anyone can get supports like u…they will write anything good for u…u r such an wonderful person…glad to meet u…luv u so much…tc?? ? ?

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