manmarziyaan…new dimensions..chapter 10

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Ardhika proceed their journey…in between Arjun look at her but she look outside of window always…he thought to ask her the reason..

Arjun: Radhika,see if any bug crawl on my face..
Radhika:no,what happened??
Arjun: Then am I look like a joker or ugly..
Radhika (confused ?): What?? No nothing like that..u are as usual looking handsome..but why are u asking such stupid questions…
Arjun (on cloud9, hearing radz think him handsome): No I thought u always looking outside of window…that’s why…
Radhika looked him perplexed…n thought if Arjun changed or it’s another drama…he is joking
Arjun: K,I know ?. M handsome..but don’t stare at me like u r going to eat me…well I don’t have any complaints regarding that…with a huge smile ?
Radhika cut him off thinking he became shameless also…
Radhika: Nothing like that…if u blabber anything further I will get out from this car…

Arjun stop the car abruptly n move out..he went to other side n dragged radhika out from car..she thought if he will seriously get her out…but to her surprise he took her to a ice-cream shop there…he told her about the humidity n temperature of the day n asked her which flavour she liked..she answered blackcurrant n look outside to see the cool weather plus they were in ac…she thought if seriously some kind of bug crawling inside him…he came with two blackcurrant with waffles…Arjun mesmerized seeing her eating ice-cream…he didn’t even notice it melted n dropped on his dress..he was in his dreamland come to reality by a voice who literally shouting. Di Di…nonstop…radhika looked back n saw the family who gave her shelter last time when Arjun left her on roads alone…

Radhika was too much excited seeing them..arjun was also happy..but when their little son approached radhika his happiness altered by jealousy..
little boy : di u v changed so much..but u look beautiful like an actress..no no…like an angel..
radhika : ( with smilingly) u also become handsome chotu…
Radhika asked him about which flavour he liked…n to her sis also..she gave it to them…Arjun’s jealously creep more when the boy asked radhika about marriage..
Boy: Di if u r not married yet..wait for just 8 year..when I’ll become adult we will marry..n I promise I’ll do a job n keep u happy..with that he threw a dagger eye towards Arjun who also did the same…

Arjun thought kids now a days are impossible..n start to talk with radhika interfered by the small girl…
Girl said uncle the way u staring at di I thought u loved her so much…arjun put his hand on her mouth..n said her to stop…girl said m seeing a tough competition..though my brother is a better option…i saw u last time..how rude u r…

Mean time Arjun saw the boy demanded a kiss…before radhika giving him a kiss on his cheek Arjun picked him up said don’t you want a kiss from me…I’ll giv u..boy said m normal uncle…put me down…he said no…

Kid’s parent came..radhika n Arjun greeted them…radhika thanked them for last time…n the kids went away with them…before going the boy give a kiss on radhika ‘s hand…which make Arjun more jealous…poor guy..jealous with kidzzzzz…

They came into car..when radhika’s phone buzzed…she excitedly shouted Sourav..now u remember me…don’t u know how much I missed all of u..with her talking increased arjun’s jealously was at its peak….by the end of her talking Arjun’s car speed also at peak..coz he neither speak anything nor tolerate…radhika thought what happened to him…why he driving at such a speed..she asked but he didn’t answer…but to his bad luck the car stopped abruptly…he went out with a jerk to check what happened…he saw wires jammed n outside was full of dust..radhika came outside saw the dust remembered how Arjun pressed her to car last time n her kurti got dirty…she went near Arjun…n asked if everything is alright…if she can help..arjun said he can handle n told her to wait inside…when she came back she slipped n Arjun catches her…but due to the force he bumped with car n get dirts on his shirt..radhika said sorry n started wiping dirts from his shirt..he said k..lets go now..he told radhika to check start…he went to push from back…another thing creep into her mind…she started car n went away but slowly,, Arjun ran behind car…she saw him n thought served u ryt Mr arrogant..how much u tortured us last time..make all of us ran 5 km behind u…but she stopped seeing Arjun being tired..she didn’t know why but she’s concerned for him..when he entered car she said sorry…said him to tighten seatbelt..he did so..before he could think anything she drove car like F1 ? racing..he was shocked..he said her to stop..but she continued..stopped the car when she saw a baarat coming from front side..she said don’t show off ur driving skills to me…Arjun stared her…

Arjun suddenly placed his hand on his stomach as it was paining hard..radhika scared n put her hand n rubbed his stomach..

Radhika: R u alright?? What happened suddenly..
Arjun: Don’t know..sudden cramp
Radhika ( with a concerns voice now): Have u skipped ur meals regularly???
Arjun: With work pressure I forgot it some time..itz k..it’ll b alright after some time..
Before he could say anything she rushed out toward backward direction where she saw a drug house before…she even forget they have car…arjun looked at her…after two min she came back with medicines n Arjun was hell shocked…it was more than half KM which generally take 5 min to cover…he was happy seeing her concern,her previous self..by this tym she was sweating hard,breathing hard…he made her sit..giv her water..but she put one medicine on his mouth n made him drink water..arjun saw her bruised legs..after all she ran all the way with heels..her hair is all messy now…she started made her hair into ponytail …Arjun stopped her..he wiped her sweat from her face n set her hair…said u look beautiful with open hair…radhika smiled ..arjun asked the reason she said once u said that there is no chance for me to look beautiful..n now u tell this..both looked at each other…smiled..arjun thought if he could change past …radhika thought if he is changed truly…

Who knows if their new journey will start from Lonavla itself…itz a new beginning..

Here nesam busy with preparing presentation with Rajiv n two employees from samudra chiraga n Diya..sam noticed how Diya approaching Neil intentionally on the name of work…now when she was sure about her feelings she cudn’t tolerate this…Neil was too busy with work he didn’t notice that…diya invited Neil for lunch n said they can discuss about project in lunch…he nodded..when he went out with Diya Sam stopped Neil n said u forgot ur promise..u said we will have lunch dinner together always …neil replied lunch with work..now its needed..we will have our dinner…he went away with Diya…sam felt worse…thought now I know how u felt when I went out with Arjun without looking back u…she had tears in her eyes…
Rajiv came there n said sister u love ❤ him…sam startled ..sam jus nodded
Rajiv: Then why don’t u tell him..

Sam: Its not easy how u think..
Rajiv: I don’t know why Indian girls are shy to confess their feelings…if u’ll look only then others will take him away…
Sam: M not shy…plus I don’t know what to do n what to say
Rajiv: Propose him…I’ll help u making arrangements
Sam: That’s a good idea…I’ll talk with chasini n let u know ….

They exchanged hifi with a laugh..neil saw all this ..getting more angry on Rajiv…

Rajiv came outside…he was going to make a call feelings dizzy n nauseous…he sweating hard..n about to fall down on ground..neil hold him..he sprinted some water on him…he got conscious …raj told him not to inform radhika else she will be worried for no reason…neil said yes but thought why he talked like begging..if something is there..Rajiv thought if Neil tell radhika then what will I do…tension creepd in his mind…

Ardhika reached at Lonavla..but before going to their room radhika dragged Arjun for eating…she gave him other medicine…Arjun enjoyed with her…they came back to collect keys..arjun thought if one room is Available like last time then it would b good…but receptionist gave them their respective room keys…arjun became sad..they went to their room…radhika went to fresh up…when she came back she heard her door knocked by someone…she opened the door n stunned to see Arjun there…he also stunned to see her…he entered n closed the door…radhika said r u out of ur mind..what’s this..why u…before she could speak anymore he placed his finger on her lip…he shivered but controlled he saw water droplets running down from her head to down..he asked for towel…radhika puzzled but gave him…

he made her sit on couch started drying her hair…after that when he tried to lift her she protest n said r u on nuts..what r u trying to do???Arjun laughed on her…said u r too fast on thinkin…but give rest to ur brain… m I look like a person who would take advantage on u?? U think me like that?? She said no but….without letting her speak anything he lifted her in his arms n placed her on the bed…n put her legs on his lap…he opened the cream n started applying on her bruised area…radhika had tears on her eyes seeing his concern…she thought he changed to an angel ?..after that he greeted radhika good night..n went closing the door…at midnight Arjun opened his door by hearing somebody’s knock…he was shocked to see radhika there…….?

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That’s all for today guys…happy ? holi to all of u ….

Credit to: Rosie

43 comments

  1. Hats off to you, fantastically written on Lonavla trip, I loved how Arjun gets jealous of the little boy and I loved how Radhika showed her concern for Arjun. 🙂

  2. Gauri

    this was so cute…the way he got jealous with kids too good..is rajiv sick …pls post soon …and yes happy holi 🙂

    • M always waiting for u…Rajiv…i hinted many time about his condition in previous ff s…happy holi..enjoy…thanks millions time..luv u…tc??

  3. LAVANYA

    really nice….very well narrated…happy to see radhika to her old self..please do make radhika normal..we know she has a turmoil in her heart..but cant bear that she is still not normal and the awesome four are missing their old times…sorry if you had other plans…but i have to say this is indeed a very different take of story..showing radhika strong….with her self-respect..gaining true friends at time of need and sam.arjun,neil trying to their best to get her back to her old self..very nice plot…please do continue..

    • Lavu thanks a ton ? yaar…yes radhika is strong…women rocks…n don’t tell sorry…it’s story between 7… I’ll give u hint..the biggest mystery for which I started ff is yet to reveal….thanks for considering it as a different plot…luv u ..tc? ?

  4. Sv

    Awesome yaar i really loved it . Again jealosy again rocked here and rads racing skill was super l. Its pay back time . Really waiting for sam’s proposal . Hope raj is fine and i really loved arjun and radhika’s concern towards each other. I really moved by that . I love u soo much take care stay blessed .

    • Sv dear thank you very much ?…jealously rocked here…sam’ll propose…wait…rajiv conditions we ll see what happen to him …but I hinted many times about him…ardhika..they are like this only…luv u…tc…be happy???

  5. Feby

    Wow…superb…love u loads…gonna miss ur ffs.for some days…going to native..for good friday and easter…and for all u guyz…happy holi and happy eastr in advance…tis time iam gonna miss my holi as iam here away frm friends… but still i have my wonderful memories..but tis year my celebration wiĺ b wid my cousins..kind of excited…well…happy holi once again..

    • Ooye….my lil Jan….also we will miss u….but enjoyment time darling…have fun with your cousins…happy holi n Easter to u also…luv …tc…i hope u ll b back soon with loads of happiness…???

  6. Shree

    Rosie!! That was ssooooooo ccccuuuuttteee!! Hahahahaha.. Eight years you wait, we’ll marry!! Lol … The kiss.. Arjun’s jealousy.. The girl saying tough competition… Lol ??

    Car scene… Cramp.. Oops.. Her concern… Hotel thing was too good… Sam jealous.. Rajiv helping!! His health.. Noooo.. I like him.. Don’t do this…

    Post soon.. Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • Ooh…choti packet energy…luv u ? so much…ur narration is very good…about Rajiv..i also like him…but what to do…happy holi…njoy…luv u tc???

  7. Vivi

    Ohhh…..it was really amazing…is rajiv suffering from cancer or tumor….radhu took hr sweet revenge on arjun…i loved it wen the small boy asked radhu to wait 4 him 4 8yrs..so dat they can marry…and…arjun fuming in jealousy….and felt really bad 4 sam..hope she express hr feelings soon….update soon!!luv ya

  8. No darling it’s not tumor or cancer…we will see…yes radhika rocks as I wanted to see her as strong ?…don’t worry…sam will propose soon….luv u…tc???

  9. Ameena

    Rosieeeeeeee!!! It’s too perfect. Just got time to go back in time and reminiscing those mmz moments. Why did Radhika come?! A million dollar question? God, Arjun is even jealous of kids? I hope Sam proposes Neil soon. And really excited for next update. Don’t forget to study. Study hard and make your parents proud. Love you! ❤

    • Amu…..happy holi first…n I’ll definitely make my parents proud…thanks for ur concern my dear….actually m lil fickle…but I study whenever I got tym…l missssssdddd u so mmmmmuuuuccccchhhhh…..n plz post ur ff because every night before m going to sleep I thought who may b that guy….u know in this ff mostly 10-15 epi left…may b more…coz m not going to write about marriage n all…

      But I want to know how much u lov action drama thriller story….m thinking after this if possible then I’ll write that…secret…don’t tell anyone….hehehe

      Lllllooooooovvvvvvveeeeeee uuuuuu ssssooooo mmmmuuuuuccccchhhhhh????

      N plz come back after ur all work done….god bless u my dear….have a blast….specially I wish ur life to become colourful…n full with only happiness….

      Miss manha n suha badly….

      • Ameena

        Hello!! Happy Holi!!
        I can’t post mine till June (or maybe after my thousand trials, I’ll try to post before June) Sad ik. But I don’t have time at all. Wonder how I got time to reply you? ?

        These days…the only ffs I’m reading is yours gauris Sathyas thenas and that’s all. I want to read every ff…and especially new ones. I wish I wish I wish I could read them all.

        And oh, Secret? ?? I know it I know it…and no one else does?. Hahahaha?? don’t worry I won’t say anyone. Only between us?

      • Amu…really u r something….i loved u for ur frank nature mostly…i felt u must b somehow alike me…n not before June any of ur ff…why??? Me ? ? ? sad….k.just stay healthy n do ur work…tc..
        Luv u 10000 times n missed u more than that…? ? ? ? ???

  10. Roma

    O my rosie, rosie, rosie a lotttttttttt of kissssesss for you on your cheeks, muaaaaahhhhhh, that’s how I feel like….arjun that much changed..his funny convo with rads…then ice cream…n he jealous of kids….hahaha…..then rads concern for him for irregular meals…omg….she ran to get med for him…awwww….so so so cute n lovely. …nesam very cute too….n last scene of ardhika mind blowing. …arjun’s care for rads….ufffff….so sweeeeeet. ….now what is rads doing at his door….can’t wait for the next episode. ….plzzzz post soooooooonnnn…lots of hugs n kisses, muaaaaahhhhhh…take care sweetie. ..

    • Thank u ? very much Roma….m waiting for u my dear…already posted my ff…but dear why don’t u read on the date of post…don’t mind…actually I missed u on the time of post..glad u liked it very much…luv u…tc????

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