Manmarziyaan- Rehnuma (Part 6)

Hello everyone……..i loved ur comments so much…thank u alll……….thanks for loving this story…….well to be honest i never expected this kind of response…….but now when im all ready to post d next one….im little bit afraid…..what if u guys dont like d current plot……as there will lots of twists & turns…….so i request u all….if u guys dont like this part…then do suggest me …where to i lack?… story? or way of expressing?….anything….just let me know……….& plz ignore all my typos & grammatical errors…..& myra….this time im writing a bit longer….for u…..

Enjoy d ride…….
arjun (over phone): muttered in a angry tone “what ????….rana i told u to stay with him every single minute …..then ?????….ok ill be there in 10 minutes….till then……keep an eye on him…& call d doctor…….remember one thing rana nothing should happen to him…..”…saying this arjun hung up d phone…..he peeped inside d room to check on radhika…..a drop of tear escaped his eyes….he moved towards d wall & banged his fists over d same……& cried loudly looking towards d god”s portrait in his room….….”plz….plzz…..dont make me do it….it hurts a lot…….plzz…..”……saying this he sat down with a thud….pulling his hairs……he again muttered to himself…”i know ill eventually die without her…but i have to do this……yessssssss….i have to do this”….saying this he quickly wiped off his tears….took his car keys….& went away………

on d other side radhika was turning in her sleep from left to right & vice versa…..suddenly she woke up with a jerk shouting “noooooooooooooooo”……she was sweating profusely……her body was shivering with fear…a lone drop of tear escaped from her eyes ….she muttered to herself…”no it was just a dream…..why am i thinking so much…..stupid me…”saying this she wiped her tears off…& leaned again on bed …suddenly something striked her & she whispered…..”arjun”…she started looking for him in d room ….then she checked in bathroom….on not finding him there also….she panicked a little……..she checked complete mansion…..but still there was no sign of him……she called him atleast 20-30 times….but still there was no response from him…….she started crying…..then she went to nandini…….seeing her in this condition nandini was shocked….she made her sit …..gave her a glass of water & asked…”beta….relax & now tell me why r u crying? “……radhika…..told her in between her sobs…”mom….arjun is nowhere to be found…i searched whole mansion…even i tried his no…but .he is not responding….”…..

now nandini too panicked a little…..but seeing radhika in this condition she calmed herself down & muttered….”don’t worry beta….there must have been some urgent work …arjun would have gone out regarding d same….ill talk to amaal….he must be knowing about it…… now don’t cry…..there is nothing to worry about….please relax……”…..this soothed radhika a little…she muttered…”mom i saw a bad dream…& when i woke up….i didn’t found arjun anywhere…so….i panicked……I’m sorry ….i disturbed….u too”…..now nandini gave a smile & whispered “there is nothing like this….now u go & take rest….he will come back soon….”……..raghika left without saying anything…….now nandini quikly dialled to amaal …after 3 rings he picked up d phone & said……he has no idea about arjuns whereabouts but will find out soon …he again called back after 10 minutes & said…”mam sir isn’t gone out for any official work….i hv crosschecked everything thrice…….but mam still we don’t know anything about his whereabouts….we r trying our best mam…”……..now nandini panicked he started pacing in d room then she grabbed her phone ,called rana & said….”arjun is nowhere to be found………find him soon……”…..saying this she sat on her bed & muttered to herself…..”arjun….where r u….?”

on her way back to room….radhika keeps on repeating” uff radhika u r such a fool……mom said na he will be back soon….yes he will be back soon…i know….he will be back soon…”….now he patted her head & whispered….”stupid me…..im thinking too much…..nothing will happen to him……off course…..he will be fine…”…..now she kept pacing in her room & muttered…”its been half an hour…still he didn’t called up….what if something bad happened with him….now a drop of tear rolled down her cheeks….”she quickly took her phone & dialled him again….still there was no response…now thought of calling her mother….but stopped looking at d watch & muttered its only 4…..”she will get worried too…”

….raghika kept on waiting & now clock stricked 5 …now she lost her patience & called her mother……as soon as mala saw radhika’s name flashing on her mobile…she quickly picked it up…& said”good morning beta….how r u? & why did u called at this hour…?”….radhika doesn’t replied for a minute or two….now mala whispered in a concerned tone “beta what happened?…”…now radhika started sobbing & muttered…”mom…arjun is nowhere to be found…he is not even picking up my phone…”……to which mala replied….”beta there must have been some urgent work……don’t worry…..u hv seen ur papa na …he too used too go out in night like this due to urgent work…that too without informing…so relax he will be back soon”….but still radhika kept on sobbing….hearing which mala panicked a little & asked….”radhika is there anything else bothering u…?” now radhika without wasting a second quickly muttered”mom its been since my marriage i haven’t saw that dream…..but today…..” now she stopped & again started crying ….to which mala replied….”today what radhika…?”
radhika: “mom …today again i saw that dream….but today d boy in my dream…saved my life &….”
mala: “& what radhika????”
radhika : “mom ….someone fired a bullet at me…..& he came in between & got shot…his face was not clear…i mean every thing was so blurry…i was crying looking at him as if i loved him…& before closing his eyes he muttered……..’my love is not that weak to die with me radhika….it will live forever….i love u radhika…..i have always loved u…..& will always love u….even death cannot separate my soul from u……don’t cry now…..im not taking away anything with me……i hv given everything of mine to u….be it love,soul,heart,life……everything…I’m only taking away our beautiful memories……i love u….i love u so much………………ur tears are making me weak …plz don’t cry…i love u …i love u so much……’…….mom saying this he closed his eyes………& i know it has got nothing to do with arjun….but when i woke up & didn’t found him anywhere……i thought …..” now radhika started crying badly….

mala: “beta…don’t cry………nothing will happen to arjun…..its ur love for him which is making u think all this….relax….”……….radhika’s eyes popped out hearing love…..her heart skipped a beat…..she quickly muttered in a defending tone………
radio: “what??? love?????” saying this she quickly wiped her tears & muttered again “no ,no mom…i don’t love him……i just don’t….mom u seriously r kidding…its been only 2 -3 days since we r married & u r saying all this crap….i don’t love him…”
now mala chuckled a little & said…”beta it doesnt need days to fall in love…..a moment alone is enough for falling in love…….”

radhika: “no mom…..im not in love ….that too with arjun……..no …i can never love him…..definitely not………now u take rest…..ill call u as soon as he comes back…bye…..love u……..but remember i don’t love him….” saying this in a single breath radhika cut d line
now mala chuckled & muttured to herself…”.radhika my princess u hv already fallen for arjun…..& i know he is d one u hv been waiting for all ur life…..he is ur dream boy…….but ur dreams are now scaring me…..god plz don’t ever make them apart from each other….”saying this she departed for d day……..

here radhika keeps on pacing in her room saying……no i don’t love him…..suddenly she stopped looking at his picture kept on d table …..she took it in her hand & keeping other hand over her hip ,she muttered to herself…”what r u looking at haan?….. one thing is for sure……..once u come back home……Mr. mehra …i’ll chop u in to small pieces & will fed them to dogs……u r so dead arjun…i won’t leave u for making my night this bad…
.”…. saying this she curled her lips a little & poked her tongue out….& started smiling reminiscing him…..she brushed her thoughts aside & whispered…..”radhika u r a complete nut case “ saying this she went to bathroom for getting freshen up

NEWYORK…..

A late night lavish party is going on in a mansion decorated like a billionaire’s palace… ….there r people from hollywood stars to d worlds best business men…….party was in a full swing…..everyone was enjoying to d full…..everything was perfect except one……host……yes d one who hosted this party was nowhere to be seen……a group of glamourous ladies were gossiping about d host….one of them…”isn’t he a little weird…i mean i know he is a billionaire…..but his attitude is like he doesn’t give a shit about anyone……..its been an hour since d party started & he is nowhere to be seen…”………….second one…”true……..but for a hot & s*xy man like him……..im ready to wait my whole life….i mean he is worth it….”……….3 one chuckled a little & said…”we all know…he will never come to u or any of us….even if we wait for him..our whole life…… i wonder if he ever been in love with someone…..if yes ……then who could be that girl…..”….4 one named Manha kapoor famous & one of d top model said with a cunning smile….” doent matter becoz today he will bend in front of my beauty just wait & watch….”saying this she smirked a little…..

somewhere on d road a man in a back suite…….handsome like a greek god….with well toned body…..angelic face….eyes deep black with so many emotions…wearing a watch worth 0.5 million dollars….but his heart is much more precious …yes his heart is made of diamond….hard to break ….pure & valuable…. but once broken..hard to mend………yes he is neil……..The NEIL MALHOTRA…….he is a billionaire ….who is now leaning over his LYKAN…(car shown in furious 7…worth $4.5 million….)…that too in d middle of d road……watching a window…….with lot many of emotions in his eyes……..his eyes as if waiting for some one……suddenly his eyes sparkled like a pearl seeing d reflection of a girl through d window……..face of girl is not visible as window is closed……but he could see her reflection as lights are on…now he could easily make out that girl is cooking something….a sweet but unknown dimple smile came over his face……then suddenly his eyes turned red when he saw her sitting down with a thud…he could make out …….that she is crying……..a lone drop of tear escaped his hard cheeks…..thinking about her…he banged his fist on d bonnet of d car in frustration…& muttered “enough..”…he quickly drove his LYKAN & went away…….he stopped in front of d same mansion …….he composed himself & walked in like a king……..as soon as he entered every single gaze went to him & stopped there itself…….

some showing there jealousy,some love,some lust….& what not…….he ignored all this & went to d centre & said ….welcome everyone…….saying this he gave them all a dimpled smile…& continued……i will not apologise for being late but will surely make up to that …saying this he winked & again muttered…….”so please hold ur breaths ladies & gentlemen….presenting my friend & worlds no .1 dancer riya chakraborty……..please give a big round of applause for riya ……listning her name there was a chaos in d hall someone said…”oh my god ….riya chakraborty…the famous dancer,,,,,,..wow…….just wow…..but i hv heard she never performs for any personal party & all…”….another one said…….”oh comeon……don’t u know neil……he can do anything he want ….” suddenly light went off & there was this complete dark until…..light is focused on a lean figure at d centre of d hall……..as d music started girl started moving her belly like a delicate flower……& as d music turned slow she turned around with shining scarf covering half of her face…specifically lips & nose…many hearts in d hall skipped a beat seeing her..she started dancing on maiyya maiyya from guru……she danced like a stroking light……she was not any less than…a walking desire…. while dancing her gaze was fixed only on neil….many a times during her performance she danced & swirled around him…to which he simply smiled…….

after d song ended everyone praised her…she simply bowed down & went away……..after few minutes……manha kapoor wearing a s*xy knee length dress came to neil & started getting cosy with him….he tried to control her but she didn’t budge….she took him to corner & whispered sensuously…”try me once….u will forget everyone else….i’ll make u love me like anything….i love u babby”…now neil smirked little & said….”i would have surely loved u like anything….if my heart would have been with me….”…..she doesn’t understood anything & again asked…..”what do u mean…?where is ur heart…..”….he chuckled & said patting over his left chest…..”its not here……….but with someone else….somewhere safe…”…..now she said confidently…”no one could love u more than me…”to which neil replied….”oh darling i know that….u know what…..loving me will get u nothing of my property execpt me…even after knowing this u loved me……true love!!!!…”…..now he laughed inside seeing her expression…& continued…”yes darling…..u know what …I’m on d verge of being bankrupt…..& u see there Mr. roshan …in a month or two…he will be overtaking my business….”….hearing this she moved back a little ….gave a look at roshan & again muttered…..”i think u r right ….some love stories are meant to be left half way….” saying this she moved towards roshan & neil started laughing madly…..

within 10 minutes riya came down dressed in a s*xy gown….many guys present there went towards her……but she came straight towards neil…..& asked with lot of hope in her eyes…”how was it?” neil smiled & said….”seeing u perform they almost forgot to breath “..pointing towards a group of famous ,billionaire …& off course hot guys…….her face sullen a little …she again asked…”what about u….?”…seeing her like this …neil understood & said….”u know na i loved it…..”….she smiled sadly & asked…..”as much as u used to love hers?”….hearing this neil stood numb for a second or two & replied keeping hand over her head…”stay blessed”……as soon as he turned around to leave….she hold her hand & asked all teary eyed…”will u ever be able to love me for a single moment…?….if yes then i’ll wait for that moment my whole life…even after that…”….hearing this neil turned around…& whispered “manha….please don’t do this…..u deserve someone better…someone who would love u……not a freak like me ” saying this he kissed her forehead …& .left from there…manha stood there numb for a minute or two…..touched her forehead where he kissed & muttered to herself…….” i know u can’t……i just know…..but my heart doesn’t listen to me….what can i do????? i know u belong to her…..but neil…..how can i move on with someone else……..?…i can’t love anyone else…”….saying this she left d party…………

a group of people came towards neil & complemented him for d party…..one of them asked……”we all know how busy u r…..but atleast have a drink with us….”….neil muttered next……”sorry Mr. dwayne….i only drink with my girlfriend…what about water?” saying this he chuckled a little……..others also joined him….after sometime he grabbed a bottle of scotch & left d party in d middle….he entered an empty room with a bottle of scotch…….the room was full of pictures of a girl….including her pictures with neil….with radhika & with both of them……they all were painted by neil…..neil moved towards a painting in which she was poking her tongue out….with ice-cream smeared all over her nose……..he brushed her finger over her face & muttered….” kash tab mere seene mein ye dil na hota……….agar muhobbat tujhse na hoti to tujhse bichadne ka gum na hota…..”…tears started flowing down his cheeks …he again muttered ….”i don’t know why ….but with every single breath of mine……my love for u keeps on increasing ….i know u don’t love me..i know u can’t trust me…..i know….but it hurts …..

it hurts like hell….”….saying this he opened d bottle & said….”its been 2 years sam….still i kept my promise….yess even now i drink only with u”….now he shouted on top of his voice…spreading his hands apart….”this idiot will always get drunk only with his saminder singh………& no one else.”….now he started drinking….& gulped half bottle down & muttered…” i love u sam…i love u so much…..i loved u from d very first moment i saw u…i loved u every single second since then….i loved u when u kissed my cheeks…i loved u when u kicked my bum…i loved u when u fought for me…i loved u when u fought with me……i loved u when u danced for me….i loved u when u danced with me….i loved u when u used to call me idiot……i loved u for sharing scotch only with me ….i loved u when u used to call me every hour for talking all shitty crap….i loved u when u used to get angry…..i loved u when u cried…i loved u everytime u smiled…i even loved u when u left me….…….i loved u then…..i love u now…..& will love u ever after……”……but…….i will never forgive u saminder singh……..i will never forgive u….u not only broke our friendship…u broke my heart..u broke me……u broke me sam…..u broke me…i will never forgive u……….he took out his wallet….& took out d picture of rdhika from it….he caressed it like a baby & muttered….”why i can’t be like u…..why can’t i forgive her like u…why …I’m sorry chashni, i know i promised u ….i will never break down…but…….its killing me inside….her love is breaking me down every second in to pieces….ur rasgulla can’t take it anymore chashni…..i need u…..i

need my best friend…my chashni… my doll……plz save me radhika……save me before i die of this pain”….he hugged her picture tightly ……& whispered….” i miss u both…..u both r my life……one is my breath other is my heart beat…..i miss u both…”saying this he weept & slowly slept there itself……

PRECAP- Reason behind radhika’s hatred & Sam’s entry

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46 comments

  1. KK

    it was awesome. Specially Neil’s part…he rocked it…still bit of confuse about the 1st part of Precap…but we will wait…it was very nice update after all…thanks

    • Meen

      |Author

      thank u so much kk….thanks a lot for commenting…..i will post d next part soon…thnks for waiting…i hope i wont let u down

  2. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Meeen… suspense!! This is so interestin!! Arjun left somewhere..n Radz dream.. god.. scary.! Too scary.. Nesam had a break up.. eager 4 Raneil part.. whom was Arjun worried for.. ?? Neil behaves like arrogant one!! Too good.!! He rocked.. still loves sam.. why Rana dint say 2 nandhini.?? Eager 4 nxt chappy.. it’s awesome girl.. TC N loads of love

    • Meen

      |Author

      hey jessie…im happy to know that u loved d suspense & d twist…& regarding arjun & rana….they definitely are up to something…..that u will know soon…till then keep reading & commenting…luv u

  3. neetz

    Meeeeeeen u made teary eyed….awwww neil is so sad…now m greeeeedy and i wannna know more….post sooooooon…im loving the story moreeeee….post soooooooon 🙂

  4. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding episode, I wonder what Sam did, that broke Neil’s heart, you nail it well done, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

    • Meen

      |Author

      thank u brin…..ur comments means a lot to me……well d reason behind neil’s heart break is what i hv left for u to read & find out….sooo sorry….but love ur curiosity…..loads of love dear…& thanks for commenting on every single episode of mine…..

  5. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    Awesome one meen… I like this suspense…. Where Arjun left… And what he telling about?? Neil’s wow that was superb… And his emotions, u wrote that part very nicely…. And the precap… Radhika’s hatred, it is confusing. Is there any reason for her hatred to Arjun. I thought it is becoz she couldn’t met her dream guy…. Please post next… I am eagerly waiting for that

    • Meen

      |Author

      hey jewel…..your comments r precious to me just as ur name ‘jewel…”…..well yes there surely is a reason behind radhika’s hatred….though not a big one….thanks for waiting….i will update soon

  6. Aadia

    Meenu…I just commented on prev. Epi and now the next!you nailed it meenu..i liked your style of narration very much..too curious to read next part because you left so many suspenses here..

    • Meen

      |Author

      awwww……ur words said it all baby….now im feeling so good…..thank u aadia…thank u for commenting on every single update of mine……looooooooove u….take care

  7. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    This is too good with twists and turns…..I find everyone’s behavior quiet odd……Rads doesn’t love Arjun…but still worries for him so much that makes me think she loves him……….Neil…well he rocked the stage…………Meen chechi can you translate what Neil told in hindiI??????? Is Arjun Rads’s dream boy??????????? Do update soooooooon…………bye………

    • Meen

      |Author

      hey cutie pie…good to see u again….u know what…..its been only 4-5 episodes that we hv known each other….but ur comments make me feel as if we know each other for years…..thanks for being there & commenting on every single episode of mine

      • aastha

        Oh its all my pleasure……it was ur name that made this connection deep……ur name simply attracted me as my sis too have the same name…….soI consider u as my sis itself….and one more similarity btwn u n my sis is, u both r f the same age…..u were born in 1995 right????

  8. S.v

    |Registered Member

    Radhika was worried what is mattering my chashni girl ?? Where is arjun yaar missed him and his leg pulling today. Neil is a big man yet hss a sad past was happu which was broken why did sam left him and what is chashni to do with nesam she is their childhood friend but did not soeak to him or did he come to his chashni’s wedding. I did not see him. God so many questions in my head meen pls next part soon and save me from head breaking. Lovely update a different shades of the story now dont get scared it is super awesome. Love u tons dear.

    • Meen

      |Author

      hehehe…..c ur comment just mede me smile……a big wala thanks for this……….& please dont break ur head thinking this much…..i cant afford to lose u or ur lovely updates……loooooooooove u ….will post next soon

  9. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww meen…marvellous job. ..it’s superbbbbb episode. …loved it to the coreeeee….rads worried for arjun….ahhh….neil’s part was very heart wrenching n emotional….loved the narration…keep it up honey…..love you loads…muaaaahhh 🙂

    • Meen

      |Author

      hiii there roma…….thank u for such a lovely comment……& thanks again for commenting on every single episode of mine………& a request……plz let me know….if there is this single thing not up to d mark in this ff….or anything i lack in….

  10. nitu

    omg meen wat a twist in the storuy hw are sam and radhika related to neil
    and where did arjun go omg lot of suspense in ua story
    but it is really very gud
    radhika is falling for arjun yeppe
    i jst hope there wont be any sepration in ardhikas relation ship
    there is a lot of suspense dear
    post nxt episode asap nah plzzzzzzzzzzzz

    • Meen

      |Author

      hiiii nitu….happy to c ur comment……they motivate me to give something bettr than this one next time……….thanks a lot……loads of loooooove…take care

  11. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    OMG Meen …this was fabulous …loved to the core…it kept me engrossed 🙂 waiting for next post soon 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u

    • Meen

      |Author

      thanks gauri……means alot…im glad u liked it….its a pleasure to have ur comment….i mean u r such good writer…still u r so down to earth……thanks for commenting on my every single episode…..thanks a lot…..loooooove u

  12. Myra

    |Registered Member

    meen, sorry for the late comment dear….was a bit busy the entire day long……..you killed it girl! clever…huh? you didn’t answer my question though, where did Arjun go?
    loved neil’s entry….just unite raneil quickly….thanks for the longer update!

    • Meen

      |Author

      aaah….there u came….u know what …..u r my lucky charm…….& i looooooooove u ………thank u…..thank u sooooooo much…..stay blessed myra….& keep posting….i love ur ff

  13. Gracy

    Meen..this was good, the new stwist is interesting and captivating, keep going with it… Great work once again and thank you for your quick update..much love

  14. R

    Damn…great ….
    Suspense twists nd turns every moment…..
    Truely indulging into me thinking what will happen next??…great …the way u create so much excitement…keep on doing the same…loved it…u nailed it…😃😃😃

    • Meen

      |Author

      thanks rossy….& believe me i wont let arjun die …let alone this ff not even in my dreams………..hehehe…..will upload soon …..loads of love

  15. Meen

    |Author

    Agr tujhe emotional kr diya….mtlb sch m kuch baat thi……thank u ….thank u… Thank u . .for such a wonderful comment akash

  16. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Wow Meen…it was too adorable…m still having Goosebumps reading d scenes….what is in Rads dream…plz don’t make Arjun dead… Nd NeSam…a lot of suspense nd m really loving it….keep going dear…m all curious for nxt…loads of love 🙂

  17. Meen

    |Author

    thank u so much dear…….well radz dreams do have a connection with arjun……but believe me i wont let him die………..loads of love ritu…….keep reading …….

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