Manmarziyaan- a new turn (Promo)

Guys I’m receiving very less comments. Please do tell me if you are not liking the concept. I’ll stop writing. Please do comment. Good or bad accepted.
Here is a small promo for upcoming episodes…..

Anu walks upto neil and holds his collar in her left hand and slaps him with her right. Radhika stands there shocked…
Anu(to neil): if you don’t like sam then don’t speak to her. What do you think of yourselves? Dare you again speak to her like you have done. Again you have repeated the same mistake. You claim to love her is it? Where is love when there is no trust? Because of you my dad is in coma from 13 years. I don’t know where arjun is. And again because of you something happens to her then you will be seen as a lifeless body. I don’t know what have you spoke to her that it evoked her to commit suicide.
She falls on her knees: Please neil spare her don’t take her away from me. please……
She turns up to move but again turns to him: if you still feel you love her then you can visit her if and only if you would not talk nonsense to her. Ward no. 24. City hospital.

Please let me know your reviews….
Signing off
Jnana

27 comments

  1. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Please don’t stop writing, I really want to read this story to the end. I am eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

  2. Starz

    |Registered Member

    hi jnana its awesome…i loved it…waiting for next update…love u and take care …have a nice day..

  3. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Why will u stop writing?? It’s a awesome story n u wanna leave it in half way.. I want d next episode.. aise kya kaha1 Neil ne.. I too will slap him.. chalo.. now update d nxt part like a good girl..

    • Jnana

      |Author

      K I won’t leave it half way….. Neil be aisa kich kaha jiski wajhe se WO anu she tappad kaya… Aap bhi ek Marlo…. Will update soon… Bit still what I expected is some more encouragement…… And thank you….

  4. subha

    hi jnana……it’s really awesome & different story…….eagerly waiting next episode …….please contiune….don’t stop it………interesting promo……….love uuuuuu

  5. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    hey Jnana..dear I m loving ur story..different and interesting.. 🙂 so plz do continue..promo was awesome..now waiting to know why Anu scolded Neil..post soon and dare u stop writing I will punch 👊 u hard… 😉 jst kidding dear..I really like ur story..so plz continue and post soon.. Love u..tc 🙂

    • Jnana

      |Author

      Hi….ritu…thank you…. And no punches please… It would pain hard…. You may need to wait for few more days for me to update….just joking…. I’ll continue and will post soon

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