Manmarziyaan- a new turn (Part 12)

Sorry guys I was not able to reply for your comments. Actually there are three reasons….. 1 I’m out of station… 2 no proper net connection and 3. I met with an accident and my vertebral has some problem. Pray god for me…. please… a puppy dog please……. I typed all these in half sleepy position…. So please bless me with your comments for my little effort……
Guys tell me if you want to see anu and abhi’s life before my story started…. Would that bring some interest in my story???? Please do tell me…….
And guys I don’t know if I have referred a name for neil’s dad…. Even if I have then I have completely forgotten….. So please accept the new name….. So now lets get into the chapter…..

Neil sat next to anu caressing her. Sam was just watching them. The bond they shared was the same she shared with Jai, yet different. They were the souls which were been forced to some unkind situations. Radhika still had no idea about anu being neil’s sister. Arjun thought of getting refreshment drink to everyone, so he went to kitchen. Neil hadn’t spoken to anyone after entering her house. He was losing his sister now and then from the day she came to Mumbai. He was just being a spectator in all these he felt. The things anu told him were right. He had never been by her in whatever situations she faced. But he knew everything she went through. Till the day anu arrived he felt he was always right. But at the sight of her, he yearned to speak to her. The reason for not being by her was his ego. Ego of being elder to her. If he had kept his ego aside and would have accepted his mistake, he could have done everything a brother can do for his sister. But she had always been the best. Neil was now feeling guilty. Maybe the day they were separated shouldn’t have come in their life. That tragic day. All mehra’s, malhotra’s and khanna’s…. were extremely close to one another. They were also working together. Anand and advaith were brothers and the former was elder. Advaith and arvind ( neils dad) were cousins and were of same age. These three finished their engineering and thought of doing something different…. Anand thought of continuing the same business but in a different path….. and samrat was also with them. He started an advertising company and he grew up with that….. As these four were really naughty and a head ache their parents started searching for brides to get them married. Anand accepted a girl at her first glimpse….her name was prathima…. She had two sisters’ poornima and prerna and they accepted to get married to advaith and arvind…. So finally they were married. Samrat was married to the girl he loved. And that’s piyali…. As they were hyper active in their life they were blessed with their kids a way fast…. First anand and prathima were blessed with a baby boy whom they named ARJUN ANAND MEHRA… next was arvind and prerna they were also blessed with a baby boy whom they named NEIL ARVIND MALHOTRA…. After idiots arrival samundar singh couldn’t hold on and arrived after a year…. Now was the turn of angel of MEHRA’S and here they welcomed their beloved daughter ANVITHA ADVAITH MEHRA…..

The story takes a leap of 9 years. Anu was wounded while participating in sports…. She was hurt quite badly and prathima was on her way to meet her. All the others were in hospital where anu was admitted….. Suddenly a truck slammed into prathima’s car and bbooommmmm……………..

Neil jerked from his thoughts when anu wriggled in his arms…… she tried opening her eyes and was successful…… her eyes showed the pain she went through along with happiness for having her brother by her….. She nudged into him more to feel his presence and again dosed off…. Sam was asleep keeping her hands on her beloved friend…. These two were the only girls who could change him to the level they wished to, he thought…..
Arjun entered kitchen and searched for milk and as it was unavailable he thought to get that from a shop… and radhika offered company…. Both started after informing sam…. They got out of the house and radhika wanted to speak to arjun very badly so she gathered herself and started: sir…. Arjun kept quiet…. Radhika: sir I want to speak to you…. Still he remained silent… again radhika: sir…. She shook him…. Arjun: oh! Ma’am you were speaking to me???? Radhika: ma’am….. sir whats wrong with you? Arjun: you called me sir even after I told you not to… so I just returned the favor…. Radhika: sir….. arjun: yes, ma’am….. Radhika: I really want to speak something important… so sir please… arjun: please ma’am continue….. Radhika: huh, fine…. How did you feel after seeing me here? Arjun: I felt good ma’am… radhika: good??? Arjun: yes ma’am…. I really felt good to see you in the dairy parlor…. So how are you?? how is your husband? Radhika: what the hell!!!!!!!! Arjun: what ma’am?? Radhika: ( bit louder) arjun mehra…… what the hell are you speaking????? Arjun jumped and danced: really….. I’m not dreaming right!! Did I hear arjun mehra for this mouth of yours???? God!!!! Unbelievable….. pinch me once…. Radhika took his finger into her mouth and bit him hard….. arjun: aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh…. Lady are you mad????? Oh my god my beautiful and handsome hand became red…… aaaaaaaa he started crying like a baby rubbing his eyes…… radhika held his collar: now that you are clear about me calling you arjun mehra answer my question…. How did you feel when you saw me here???? She had a layer of tears covering her eyes….. Arjun thought this would be the best time for him to get his wife….life….. He circled his arms around her and hugged her tight nuzzling on her neck….. Radhika stood shocked but this time she should speak to him about this…. She wriggled in his strong grip…. But soon surrendered… she too held him tight…. They stood hugging each other like there is no tomorrow in the middle of the road…. Nature blessed them with rain….. People ran helter-skelter leaving the birds alone on the road…. Radhika broke the hug and looked into his eyes….. She saw the same love which was seen months back and only for her…. She shouldn’t have left him was the only thing that played in her mind…. Arjun smiled at her…… radhika: sir….. Arjun: ma’am….. Radhika: ar…arj….arju….arjun…. arjun: is my name that difficult to pronounce????? You can call me by other names also…. You know… like….. honey….. hubby…. Darling…. Radhika blushed….. It was new for her to hear all these from her husband…. She punched on his tummy… radhika: please answer…. Arjun: what do you feel about how I felt? Radhika: no idea…. Arjun drew her closer: really……???? Radhika: really…… tell na… what you felt???? Arjun again hugged her: I felt heaven next to me…… I felt that I was the only lucky person on this earth to get to see you back….. I felt like I was walking on the heads of people who were stunned to see you….. I felt I was the only human on the earth and the others were pokemons….. I felt I was…….. Radhika laughed out closing his mouth with her palms….. He kissed it…. And she took it back feeling shy…. Arjun: don’t blush too much….. You are becoming red than the red paint in my store….. Radhika opened her mouth for his comparison…. She pushed him…. And he ran…. She chased……….. Even today they didn’t speak their heart out…. But still they understood each other………. It takes time for sand to get settled below after being mixed in water……… likewise…… relation need time to get settled after bearing the pain of being broken……..
But some relations have a good start but maybe god doesn’t want them to exist as they are…………. Abhi was waiting for the report………… he received it…….. He sat with a thud after reading it…….. he cried………… and cried…………….. And cried……………… he was disturbed by neils call on his phone………. He received and replied with a trembling voice………… neil was in excitement for being with his sister and didn’t notice the tension in abhi’s voice…. He informed about anu gaining consciousness……. Abhi told that he would be arriving in minutes and left the hospital………. Ardhika had already arrived…….. nesam were teasing them seeing their attire…… abhi straightly went to anu without disturbing their buddy time……….. There what he saw was unbelievable……… his wife……… his life………. Was sitting on the bed with her legs attached to her chest……… and her head dropped in between…….. The room was messed………. She was shivering and maybe crying……….. Others didn’t get to know because her room was sound proof. He slowly went near her…… he touched her……. She jerked and went away………. And later hugged him after getting confirmed about him being her Abhi…………… he held her tight……….. Both were crying…… Abhi consoled her after much difficulty…….. He thought of asking what’s wrong once she was fine……. Her injected sedatives to her without her knowledge and went to his gang……… now they were sitting around having coffee…… he went to them and arjun offered coffee as he had known about him arriving……..Abhi took the cup and had a sip…… he now wanted anu’s safety only…….. He finally made up himself and started: guys, I got this bracelet and this chain when we got anu…… he showed them those……. Sam felt the bracelet familiar and radhika felt the chain familiar but were not sure……. Abhi: I don’t know who owns this, but the day I get them I will surely break their bones……. I can’t see anu like this….. She is suffering a lot……. And one more thing we need to go to delhi within two days and inform everyone about her health as soon as possible….. She should be operated within 10 days if not we will lose her for sure…… neil you ask mom to pack her bags and the project also should be completed meanwhile……. So ask the team to get ready……. Sam: you told we still have time for her operation…… abhi: the person who kidnapped her has injected strong rapid carcinogen (cancer causing virus) into her blood…….. its getting multiplied faster and this will definitely multiply within 10 days……… everything must be fast now please guys get started first help me in packing and later finish yours as soon as possible…… I won’t be able to handle everything alone so please stay for today……. Saying this he left…… the others were dumb founded……….. They didn’t want to cry but still cried……… radhika wasn’t attached to her like the others……….. Still her eyes were wet…….. She finally asked about her and arjun gave the info which he was aware of………

Delhi SHARMAS
Sadhana was again cooking for the donkeys………… they had so much in 15 days that they brought provisions thrice already……. That lady sudha was next to a mentally ill person with her question and her offspring proved that they were her children by following her…….. sadhana and rajiv had enough of them……. They were laughing remensing an incident of hers when abhi called…. He just informed them about their arrival and asked them to inform his in laws to get back the next day…… he held the call even before they could say something…… they were now tensed and rajiv phoned advaith…………

Spain
Advaith was in his study when he heard a loud scream from the next room……… he rushed….. Even poornima came running…… they saw anand who had gained his consciousness and was shivering…….. anand: adu…. Something is wrong…… I’m getting negative vibes……. Do something….. please….. he said with tears flowing down his eyes……. That’s when advaith received rajiv’s call. He asked him to get back to india as soon as possible and even told about abhi’s distress voice……. Immediately he called his personal pilot and they flew to India in their flight……..

So finally finished…… how was this……… my back is aching very badly……… guys please drop your reviews…… I’m waiting……. Its my energy drink…….. And please forgive me for not replying to your comments….. I would try this time………

19 comments

  1. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Awesome episode, who injected a virus to Anu, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

    Oh my you were in an accident, what happen, are you okay, get better soon, I’ll pray for you, stay blessed. 🙂

    • Jnana

      |Author

      hi dear….. you will have to wait to see who is that…… and about me i’m not at all fine and I’m dropping the story here…. my sister jnana would continue from here actually i used her name as my pen name…. bless her with your comments…… show the same love for her….thank you for your support so long

  2. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Oh.. Jnana…u wrote when u r unwell…. tats bad.!! Seriously.. though I was waiting like anything . But updates at d cost of ur rest.. ! No.. ! Now u have 2 post oly after u get well..Strict order frm ur reader..
    Now ur energy drink…. the chappy was a multi emotional ride.. Yes.. I love d story of Anu n Abhi.. n FB of Neil n every1 n boom u stopped it.. Good.! U kept d suspense..am waiting.. I will be guessing 2..
    Ardhika..! I was giggling n laughing.. sir n ma’am.. haha Awwwie.. chweetie lover boy..! Kill d morons.! Why so cruel of injecting virus.. this is worse than a death.. y such a revenge..! I want Anu back…she oly shld kill d fellow who is responsible with her bros..God..the girl suffered a lot.. yet..n ..donkeys finished groceries..Seems they were on hunger strike b4 launching der…Rajiv.. save ur wealth.. else everything will vanish inside kadai itself.. will Abhi operate her.. will this virus affect tumour in positive way.. some miracle.!! What happened n why she messed d room..??? Will Neil get into action? I won’t expect a individual reply. So take rest.. come healthy..plzz.. Love ur story like anything.. u know tat.. so my energy drink will do its work..😉😉 TC of urself.. along with prayers I will threaten d God dear.. no worries..!! U stay strong.. ! Eat well…loads of love n prayers..!

    • Jnana

      |Author

      Hi jessie….. dear you really care about me so much… thank you….. seems god didnt listen to your prayers….. i have been asked to take bed rest for three years and i’m not able to take my guitar classes too….. okay…. i’m dropping this here and my sister would continue further……glad to know you liked ardhika scenes it was my sisters idea….. anu will be back with her bro….about her tumour you will have to wait…. my sister has a nice story line and she will continue with hers….. thank you so much for your support dear…. please bless my sisso with your comments too….. yes her real name is jnana…. i used that as my pen name…. and I’m spurthi

  3. Lakshmi05

    |Registered Member

    Jnana …Jessie is right, really it’s not good to write in this position. U’ll get punishment for this 😕after recovering fully. So take good care of urself. Update is superb ..with ardhika cute moments. Who r that cruel people hurting anu…they r really heartless people to inject that virus. Hope she’ll be fine. You will be fine soon dear. Take rest n take care n get well soon. Luv u…tc….

    • Jnana

      |Author

      thank you dear for your support and my sisso will write now on…. so bless her too with your comments…. i’m happy you liked ardhika moments…..and anu lets see if she will be fine…..

    • Jnana

      |Author

      thank you dear for your support and my sisso will write now on…. so bless her too with your comments…. i’m happy you liked ardhika moments…..and anu lets see if she will be fine…..

  4. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Jnana dear,firstly how are you??Take care of your health dear..Same order from me too as you got from Jessie.. 🙂
    I was laughing and crying at the same time in this chapter..The way you described the children arrival and Ardhika’s cute nok-jhok–Sir and Ma’am..Wow!!So lovely.. 😀
    Now the serious things,I’m really stressed for Anu yaar,she is such a doll and she is suffering so much..Please make her well soon.. 🙂
    About the question u asked in the starting,you know my answer already don’t you? 😉 I want you to write Anu-Abhi’s story.. 🙂
    Love you loads and take a good care of your health and update only when you feel good.. 😀

    • Jnana

      |Author

      hi dear….. i’m not so fine dear….. so my sister would continue with this and bless her with your comments too…. well i dont know about the story line….. she has a different one….. and i will ask her to start with abhi and anu’s story….. ardhika…. it wqs her idea i implemented…. glad you liked it…. thank you for the support and hope you support her with same friendliness…..

  5. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Awesome epi Jnana…u nailed it..bt how are u dear????do take care of urself we will wait for ur updates..get well soon..and m always up for Anu’s nd Abhi’s love story..loads of love 🙂

    • Jnana

      |Author

      Thx dear…. I’m not so well now…. My sister is continuing the story now on….. Plz bless her with your comments…..

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