manmarziyaan…new dimensions…chapter 17

Hi all…so here we go…..

Chapter -17

Neil was not in a mood to leave Arjun for a second also…he had to discuss about project with him plus he wanted his brotherhood only for him…he smiled cunningly as he saw Rajiv was coming to them…sam was irritated with him for this weird behaviours of him…she already asked Neil for an outing only he n she…but he ignored…so she was angry ?…to Neil’s surprise Rajiv went to saurav and looked at him making his puppy face…saurav smiled a little and took him to his embrace…

Saurav: M sorry my little bro…i can’t give u time here being busy…

Rajiv: Its k my brother com father…i understand…but now m here for another thing…first promise me then only I’ll tell u…

Saurav: What’s up??k…i promise

Rajiv: I want u take priya di for a romantic date…and that should be a surprise to her…

Saurav’s eyes widen hearing his condition but he agreed coz he never said no to raj n radz…

Arjun was happy listening this…he thought di u were right…raj is a good boy and possessed each n every quality to become our little cute brother…priya came there n asked Arjun to come with her for some important talk…Neil was now sitting alone looking everyone busy with their respective siblings…radhika continued her banters with Ankush,Arjun went with priya,saurav pampered Rajiv n Sam was busy talking with manya on phone…for the first time he felt alone…he always yearned a sibling relationship n wanted to fight for,care for his sibling…but fate played some game with him…after getting Arjun he get a brother like figure but more than a bro they were buddies…

Priya took Arjun some quite place and asked him how much serious he was for radhika…Arjun just looked at her…

Priya: Arjun now time for being serious…if u loved her u should let her know straight…

Arjun: I aslo wanted the same…but m afraid if I’ll get a straight no…i can’t tolerate that…

Priya: How can u thought that u will get a denial…have u ever tried to read her eye…and most importantly yesterday incident gave me hope…

Arjun: Yesterday incident was just out of fear!! But di once I asked her about love but she had no idea about it…I don’t want to push her…

Priya: It looked like u both needed a push…can u tell me one thing how u came to know that u love her…

Arjun:when I saw her first I was impressed by her simplicity with brain, After Lonavla accident I thought I might have some feelings developed toward her but confirmed it when saral came into picture…

Priya:exactly like u confirmed, now I want u to follow the same old formulae to make her realize…i know she is stubborn …but if u make her jealous may b she will confess…

Arjun shocked: Di I know how u care for me…but I m not such kind of person who uses such tricks to get his lady love…moreover I want her to feel for me like I do…i have confidence on me …

By saying that Arjun went away…priya thought to herself I have to do something for u my brother…arjun was comparing priya with nandini…he thought How stupid I was…my sister want me to get my love asap…but nandini wanted to take my love away…thank god I got my di back coz of radhika…radhika gave me so much…no body can replace her position in my life…he gave a satisfied smile..Neil came to Sam with a sad face…though Sam was angry she asked the reason for his sadness…he told that he missed his siblings relationship…sam saw his eyes were full of tears…she hugged him n said idiot don’t worry…u have many peoples with u n I can’t see my charming prince in such a devdas mood…plz smile…he smiled fadely…

Priya gathered all and announced something which gave a hit to everyone…she said by the time her engagement will happen she wanted ardhika,nesam,Ankush -Rajiv to do some act on that day…she prepared the script by herself and gave them…a romantic story to ardhika,friendship com love story to nesam n a funny one to Ankush-Rajiv…they looked at each other but went for rehearsal…

Ardhika had a story about how a rich handsome arrogant guy lost his heart to a small town middle class girl…Arjun knew why priya gave that to him…n nesam had a story of how chuddy buddy get realized their love …Ankush-Rajiv had some funny moments with brotherhood…but every script was simple yet heart touching…they didn’t want to create problems in home so all decided to go to Shivpuri hall…they booked it for one-day…all went for rehearsal…Once inside hall,they parted with their respective partners to their allocated room divided by curtains…after their act they had to dance…ardhika had song sanam re in which they portrayed all things n Jane tu mera kya hai for nesam…Rajiv Ankush had mixed funny songs

radhika stood in middle Arjun first started his dance spinning around her…she was too impressed seeing him that she didn’t notice Arjun took her to him…he placed her hands around his neck…n put his hands on her waist…n told her to place her foot on him…n started moving with beat…
with the line ” tere karib Jo hone laga hun toh tute saari bharam re,sanam re” (( when i came near to u all of my illusions / hallucinations broken,oh my love))
Arjun placed his forehead on radhika’s n deeply looked into her eyes…an intense eye lock was there…after they both matched their footwork …
at the end of song line” tere sanga hi bitaani hai mujhko mere saare janama re,sanam re” (( i want to spend all my births with u n u only,oh my love))
Arjun twisted her now he back hugged her placing his chin on her neck n finally he knees down n placed radhika on one of his upper thigh n hold her waist by one hand… caressing her cheek with other hand with their foreheads joint n eyes closed…radhika was so immersed with his act that she couldn’t figure out if this was a act or not…moreover she felt like he poured his heart out …she was so deeply into Arjun’s thought…same with Arjun n he thought I have my ways to make u realize how much I love u…

He took her out of the hall went forward a small temple nearby…radhika was so much into him that he followed him without moving her gaze on him…he took her inside temple n moved close to her…he placed her one hand on his chest n said don’t u feel it…only u r here,no-one can ever replaced ur position from my heart…I loved u n only love u till my last breath…i want to walk together with u till end of each n every birth,I want we share our strength,happiness,sorrow with each other,day by day only my love n respect increased toward u…they didn’t know when Arjun said all this they took 7 pheres around the sacred fire which was there to worship the deity…it was almost at its last stage so they didn’t notice this…radhika was stunned listening all that…their eyes were full of tears…their trance was broken by sudden shouting of Neil…neil said enough of drama my bro…com m hungry…arjun abruptly parted radhika’s hand from his chest n went away with Neil…his script fell down which he didn’t notice…radhika didn’t know why it was hurt her when Neil told that it was drama…she picked up his script n started reading that…she was shocked seeing last page coz the temple drama was not there…happy tears oozed out from her eyes although she was not fully sure about her feelings…but she was happy…she came out n looked arjun’s back till he was out of her sight n smiled…they didn’t notice two pairs of eyes seeing them from distance…one with full anger n irritation and another with both happiness n little bit of sorrow….

By that time Arjun Nesam returned they couldn’t find radhika…Ankush n Rajiv had no idea about it…sam was so tensed remembering saral…she ran into backside of temple,kinda bushy area there after few metres…Arjun n Neil behind her…after some distance they saw saral with three people tried to scare radhika…radhika was stood there silently just looking at him calmly…the more calm radhika the more saral become furious…Arjun n nesam anger at its peak…neil said I won’t leave that scoundrel today,Sam took some stick from there…but they both were shocked seeing Arjun’s silence although he was angry…Arjun told them to wait for some seconds…nesam was like this guy was gone mad…he said what I witnessed u didn’t see it,so calm down ur nerves n stay here…before completion of his sentence one guy fell down in front of them…radhika punched saral face so hard that blood oozed out…she kicked down other two by her legs…she held saral’s collar n told don’t ever dare to touch me n scare me and gave him another punch n said that was for my friends whom u badmouthed yesterday…she pushed him so hard that he fell on the ground n then give him most awaited kick to his manhood…he was fainted,others ran away afraidly…nesam was stood there stunned by opening their mouths…Arjun felt proud of his girl….she came n closed their mouth n winked at Arjun n smiled…now Arjun mouth hung opened…she placed her hand on Arjun n they came back home by holding each other’s hand…

Nesam asked her questions after questions she gave them answers…Neil said to Sam u should learn everything from chasini…if that fighting would continue for another 5 min definitely before saral I would faint…when they reached home they saw saral’s parents were begging in front of saurav…he said if u begged more I will give ur son a hung up order instead of life time prison…they said he didn’t do such horrible mistake to get such huge punishment n there was no evidence…he said this is India n evidences can b arranged…now they are in panic…radhika run to saurav…he said r u ok n hugged her affectionately…mala told radhika to stop saurav..n he calmed down by radhika’s interference…he threatened if I’ ll see him again near radz or if u torture ridhima then I’ll make sure ur whole family to b executed…

The next day they came back Mumbai…when priya n all tried to get back hotel Arjun stopped them n said di come with me to ur home…he took everyone with him…they took rest that day…in afternoon radhika went to buy some stuffs alone as Rajiv wanted to meet prerana n others were in deep slumber…radhika went to supermarket ,when she was at counter for payment somebody touched her shoulder…she turned back saw the doctor who treated Rajiv…

doctor: miss if everything fine with that guy…by this time m sure u did the transplantation…

Radhika was confused : Transplant,but u gave the report that he had normal stress n tired..

Doctor: What?? I mentioned that he needs a stem cell therapy for him…as this is primitive stage he’ll b cured…just a matched bone marrow needed…

Radhika panicked: Plz tell me what happened to him??

Doctor: Chronic leukaemia…mild stage

Radhika was shocked to core…she had tears in her eyes…she remembered each n everything why raj tried to stay away from them at night,the time he fainted,the heavy sweating sometime without any reason…she came out of mall without any belongings…she was trembling…

Rajiv went to prerna n put his hands on her…she smiled n said so u all r back…he said yes as I missed u so came here…prerana didn’t know the reason but she felt happy with Rajiv…prerana was cleaning messes n wiped dusts from photos…Rajiv helped him…at last a big photo frame was there with full of dust …young stage of prerana with her husband n children…Rajiv wiped that photo n get shocked…he asked about the person in photo…prerana said my husband n children…he stood up like some fire entered him…n rushed out from there…radhika just entered Neil’s home after 1 min Rajiv’s left n hurriedly asked about Rajiv…prerana told his weird behaviour n said that he went out…radhika looked the photo n said Neeraj Malhotra but aunty what’s ur connection with him??prerana was shocked cos she never told anyone his husband’s name…she told he is my hubby n asked how did radz know him??? She said he is father of Rajiv…prerana shocked to the core…neil who listened everything became a statue at doorstep…so he has his little brother alive whom they thought dead…past danced in front of his eyes…..

Precap: Rajiv’s past n his hatred towards Neil n prerna

I think it’s a long chapter…so enjoy n give ur valuable comments…do let me know how is it!!!!!!m sorry for not giving nesam dance details…some other time..

Credit to: rosie

73 comments

  1. Gauri

    Rosie awesome…loved Arjun Radhika moments…Radhika punching Saral…Rajiv pls cure him soon…now Neil will work hard to gain his brother’s love….fantastic…loads of love πŸ™‚ post the next one soon :)…and the dark story too πŸ˜€

    • Thnxx abha darling ?…about dark…i v some confusion now plus as it’s basically revenge n action saga I want the base of revenge should b justified…so it ll b lil late…lots of love ❀ tc?

  2. aastha

    di it was mind blowing…………i liked ardhika scenes very much…….but sad that niel told arjun to stop the drama but happy that rads realized it is not also his love for hr………poor niel he felt left alone as he had no siblings……………glad that finally rads came to know abt rajiv’s disease………….finally you allowed us a glance at rajiv’s past……….the precap leaves me tensed…………..plzz update sooon……….happy that rajiv is prerna’s son and niel’s lil bro…………….but y did neeraj leave prerna and niel?????????? that oaf neeraj must ve put poison in rajiv’s mind wich mi8 b y he hates his mom n bro…………..plzz update soooon reveal all of his past and please unite him with his mom and bro…………………

  3. Sv

    Oh my god now arjun got his sis back but what is with raj and neil and omg im feeling sad for raj leukhemia, god no pls save him before he.would go to the next stage. Rosie u rocked. Ardhika’s scene was super awesome. Neil perfect timing argh . I wish they got married so that i would be jumping now but not a problem as it is just the rehersal of their true love. Saral he he he got smashed by radhika . U made my day dear. Love u and update the next part fast.

    • Now my twin dear u know how much action freak I m….smack saral face…such a piece to my heart…tc? lov u

      Try to update before sat

  4. Awesome episode, when will Radhika fall in love with Arjun and why does Rajiv hate his mother and brother? When will you post your next chapter, eagerly waiting. πŸ™‚

    • Radhika already fallen…but will realize lil later…but ur smart mind knew before that raj is bro of Neil…wow…thanks a lot dear ?

  5. Dev

    Osie buddy wat an awesome connection u hav made btwn all soo good n lovely n ardikas scene n nesam xpreasion wen radz fought was tooo fab love u buddy upload d nxt soon…..

  6. Sathya

    My dear lovely sissy… its a fantastic episode. So rajiv needs a transplantation of bone marrow…. thats not a joota chappal concept… ???its good dear… and yeah ardhika scenes r mind blowing. Now neil will go behind rajiv.. its so cute.. ???? keep it up dear…

  7. happy

    hi frd…..today episode amazing……i liked temple scenes….i loved arjun’s each line….pls give neil’s happiness….i dont want him to cry…..update fast…waiting….

    • Thnxx very much happy ?…m happy seeing u…i saw u when mmz continued…but was silent at that time…it gives a huge confidence when I got a comment from old member…tc?

      • happy

        sry dr…..for not commenting before…..i am huge fan of ur ff…..bt want to be silent dr……bt u guys make me crazy…….i dont want to silent hereafter……sry sry sry dr……thanks for remembering me…….i am so so happy now……give another one soon……

      • Are yaar not to be sorry…u came that’s enough…u must knew by this time m little crazy…so my ff become crazier…k…thnxx dear ?

  8. Supriya

    Rosie srsly m in love vith ur ff….don’t know how to express it….but srsly it z just out of the world………plz plz plz plz update soon waiting for ur update……..love u tc

  9. Radhika rocks πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ saral.got good lesson πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ so finally Neil got one lil bro dats soooooooo nice πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ loved it πŸ™‚

  10. subha

    awesome episode yaar….all member’s are connected……arjun radhika temple scene super…. eagerly waiting next one update soon tc

  11. Shree

    Aye mamma!! I will surely punck you if you do something to my Rajiv…. I’ve fallen inove with him…. Lol …. ??…. Please get him recovered!! I loved the drama sequence.. Arjun wanted to show how much he loves her.. Choo cute!! Neil’s loneliness…. Atlast a glimpse of Rajiv’s past… Why does he hate them?! And his dad?! Why did he leave them and take Rajiv along?! Post soon..

    Love you loads… Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • Aye my biguu daughter, m thinking I should make an alliance with Rajiv for u….lol….what say….how is my idea??n b patience dear

      What I said…post ur ff regularly…lots of love ❀ tc

      • Shree

        Ayeee mamma!! What was that?! Omg!! Am I dreaming?! Such a good idea!! Yey!! Love you mamma!! ??… Me blushing ??… K I’ll be patient.. I’m typing maa…. Wait till Thursday… I think I can finish by then… ??

        Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

      • feby

        i liked the idea…. thn we will get a very cute and loving jeeja ji!!! hahahaaaa…..i will support u rosie di…

      • Shree

        Lol di feby ponne… You seem to be more excited than me ??… I’ll let you when you’re getting your jija ji… ??

        Love you ??

      • feby

        ya…..more excited!!!!!hahahaaa….and u blushing shree di..???? aahaa… wats going on huh??? hahahaaaaa….
        and rosie di…iam waiting for my real jiju to turn up…thn comic neil will b very paavam…i feel bad for him….i wish i get someone like neil…hahhaaa…oops..i said tat….

  12. This is really amazing….ardhika moments superb… I loved it..post next one soon ..ur new story too..love u tc…

    • Susi dear….just u came n made me smile…thnxx dear…I’ll update the other one …jus some time needed…u know how revenge n conspiracy things are…?

  13. feby

    WAT????? MY GOD!!!! rajiv..niel’s brother….i want thm together now….!!! i will b the happiest person thn….but i dont want rajiv to b angry on neil…not fair…. and i thought tat was ardhikas marraige..but…wat an awesome update!!!! hats off to u!!

    • Yeah my darling m waiting for u…..missed u so much….m not Bengali…m odia…neighbour of wb….so hows ur engagement function n hows ur exam???how r u baby?? Loads of love ❀ n tc?

      • feby

        wow…nice to hear tat u waited for me!!! engagement was awesome…enjoyed a lot… and as per our plans we frightened our new jiju also!!!hahahaaaa….but later assured him….exam too went ok..i will clear mains..but still dont know…and iam fine…but having cold and sneezing like anythng…and i felt similarities to bengali whn u were talking to her…nice to hear it….the only thng i can say is tat watever indian languages u ppl talk i will understand being a defence product…lol…i love learning languages and the situations in which i grew up was such that i had all types of ppl and cultures around me….i miss that a lot now!!!! well…. how r u???? love u too……….

      • M Fyn…so u r from defence…my another ff is somehow related to security n defense…hope u like it…but u didn’t see the character sketches…it was dark: An action flick…take care urself…summer n sneezes…i know…how much irritating…lots of love ❀

      • feby

        ya i saw it and i wanted to tell tell something reagrding tat….but u know…these things cant b said publicly…so i kept quiet….good one…u took a gr8 initiative also!! and now my father retired from his service….

  14. Roma

    Wowwww rosieeee….the episode was awesoooooome, marvellous n beautiful. ..ardhika romantic moments, dance n marriage (I wish its not drama) was very heart touching n lovely. …shocking, neil has a Lil bro n that is also rajiv, wowwww mind blowing twist. ….but why he hates them…n he has cancer… πŸ™ ….but now he will find a match for his therapy…wowwww loved it very much. ..keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚

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