Manmarziyaan .. love ..revenge. destiny.. saga (chapter 1)

MANMARZIYAAN.. LOVE REVENGE DESTINY SAGA
Hello guys… Myself Ritu ..a silent reader of almost all manmarziyaan ff.. they r jst amazing..i m a die hard fan of nesam nd aradhika… This is my first ff.. Though I m nt a gud writer bt yet I tried to write about manmarziyaan..Its a short story .. .. I have made some changes in this ff from the original saga… hope u all lyk it… plz do let me know how was it… plz forgive me for my mistakes… nd plz suggest me if u lyk… ur suggestions r always welcomed.. So, now no more talks.. enjoy d ff..

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chapter- 1

In a dark room having only moonlight, a man in his late twenty is sitting having a frame in his hand….on the top of frame written BEST FRNDS…. it has photograph of two person… one is of the person who is holding it… He is Arjun Mehra …. adopted son of Mr. Abhinav and Nandini Mehra…. he lost his parents at the age of six… since then, he is living with them…. The other person in the photograph is Jai Mehra… only son of Mr and Mrs. Mehra… he is missing since six months..
Nandini came into the room and sat beside him and said:- Arjun beta for how long u r going to punish urself for what happened to Jai… U r not at fault for what happened.. Its our destiny.. u don`t need to punish urself for all dat… come with me nd eat something.. u r becoming weak day by day.
Arjun:-I know Mom u never ever diffentiated between me and Jai.. we were both ur sons… and i know for u I will be never at fault… but i can`t forget that I was nt able to help my brother and becoz of that he is not with us…
Nandini caresses his hair :- I know Arjun .. even we his parents have not trusted him .. how can we even think that our son can do such a cheap thing.. we should have stand by his side that time.. but truth can`t change now..
Arjun- I will change the truth.. I will get justice for my brother.. the girl becoz of whom my brother is not with us and is away from his family, i will took her away from her family.. I will make her life a living hell.. now she will know who Arjun Mehra is..
Nandini frowned- No Arjun we don`t want revenge.. I already lost my Jai.. now I can`t lose u.. u r our life.. and promise me that u will not do any such things..
Arjun- no mom not today,… I can`t make a promise which I can`t keep.. i jst want justice
for my brother.. nd I will get that at any cost.. Srry mom but I can`t help it.. now that girl Radhika Khanna must pay for her deeds..
Ajun left the room with anger and hatred.. Nandini decide to talk to Abhinav regarding Arjun.

Nxt morning a girl of mid twenty is shown coming to the Bird Song.. a ad agency run by Samrat Khanna and Piyali Khanna having partnership of Melhotra`s and Mehra`s… She is Radhika Khanna .. elder daughter of the Khannas..
She went to Samrat`s cabin and frowned- Dad I told u that u must give a job to Ankush Mishra.. they are in the need of money..and I wan`t to help them… and afterall what`s the use of such a big name comapny if we cant help the needy.
Samrat- Radhu I m fed up with ur social service.. I run a ad agency not a NGO to help everyone.. bcoz of u there r already more than 20 poor employ to whom I have offered job .. what more do u want..
A girl from outside the cabin shouted- atleast 100 or even more than that.. she and her social service.. can`t help them..
Samrat banged his head on desk..and Radhika shouted Sam.. yes the girl is Sam younger daughter of Samrat and Piyali… 2 yrs younger than Radhika…. yet she never called Radhika di… she nd radhika shared a friendly relation rather than sisters.. they both love each other a lot nd support each other unconditionally..
Radhika again looked atSamrat nd asked- So,yes or no for the job?
Samrat screamed -don`t look with ur tigress eye like that.. ok i m giving the job only after checking his merits..nd don`t think I m afraid of u…
Piyali entering the cabin- Yes u r..
she nd Sam laughed at Samrat..Radhika thanked samrat and went out .She was the copywriter of Bird song nd Sam was creative assistant director.
As soon as Radhika was moving to her cabin…she collide with a Arjun..
Arjun burned with anger seeing her- Are u blind.. can`t u move properly..
Arjun was the CEO of bird song
Radhika- I m srry .. was in a hurry..
Arjun nd Radhika was not on good terms.. but little does Radhika knew that Arjun hated her to the core..
Radhika went to her cabin after apologising..
Arjun`s POV- now I will make ur life hell Radhika.. jst wait and watch…
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thats it for today guys.. I know it is short .. will try to post long from nxt chapters.. plz do comment how was it…and will introduce neil in the next chap….

Credit to: RITU

45 comments

  1. aastha

    Hi Ritu……………my bestie’s name is also Ritu……………anyway loved it………..so what is Arjun’s sad past ??????? Y does he want revenge on Rads ???????? ……..plzzzz update the next part soooooooooooon………………………

    • Ritu

      glad dat u lyk it dr..u will know all ur answers in the coming chapters…will post soon for sure..

  2. riti. darling its really. nice ??? hope. rads not in fault✌? loved it ? pls. do cont? waiting for. next ff?love u?

  3. lavanya

    loved it to the core…awesome…Flawless…very new and fresh story…different and intriguing plot…please do continue..could you please tell whom you are paring…because am afraid if it’s arjun and Sam..because in original story arjun came to take revenge on sam..but fell in love with rads….
    must say…I have become a fan of yours already…please try to give long updates

    • Ritu

      thnx dr.. don’t be afraid…i will pair aradhika nd nesam only…nd I m on cloud nine after reading ur comment..never expected to get so much support from u all.. thnx once again

  4. Feby

    Wow…gud one…keep going…well…one of our mmz writers name is also ritu..lol…many of thm dont knw tat..and its a gud start..keep going…waiting for the next one…

  5. Roma

    Wowwww ritu it’s really superbbbb n interesting. …plz continue dear, all the best. ….love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

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