Finally found the link to submit my article!! I don’t know whether dis s fit for an intro or not but plz bear with me!!
Hi this is Jara.Well I have been a silent reader of all ur ffs and sorry for dat . all u guys r awesome… it’s dat I have net problem n whenever I try to post comment my net goes for a toss. From nw on I promise that I will try to comment in all ff’s.
Okok nw to dis ff,actually dis is my first story writing so plz do bear with me . Plz do comment and do not punish me by not commenting as it’s ur turn now!!
All characters as in original manmarzian and some new characters….
Saran Neil Malhotra (son of Nesam,19 yrs. old)
He is a young man doing his studies in business. He was the Neil who would accept the way things come and was good at empathizing others and was the Sam who he cared for his brother Aru(Aradhyan)and adamant to get the right things for him.
Aradhyan(son of aradhika,13 years old)
Aradhyan was more like his father . He will not talk much . But he was very good at academics .Like his father he had interest in business.
Saru and Aru ( as they are called fondly) are not blood related brothers. But no outsider would say or feel so. The bond between them was so strong as their parents, aradhika and Nesam lived together.
Both aradhika and Nesam loved both their sons as their own. They never showed any difference. It is like the children are gifted with two set of lovely parents.
Bird song is now owned and run by Nesam and aradhika . Samrat and piyali have retired and are taking care of their grand children.
One day ,
Everyone was tensed in bird song. Nesam and aradhika were walking to and fro in tension. Teji,Zubin,Krithika were thinking so that something some idea would crack in…
Please do tell me whether I should continue or not. Do post ur comments n feedbacks!!Thanks a lot and stay blessed guys!! And also plz suggest any name for ardhyan and saran bcoz I was thinking a lot and this is wat came to me!!