Manmarzian again – after 22 years: – Epi – 1

First of all thanks for the support u guys gave . Never thought I could receive so much comments on my ff. You guys made my day. One thing to Sammy , yaar I tried thinking a lot but this brain of mine s not getting another name so plz do adjust with the name saran.OK now with the epi

Episode 1:
In Bird song:
Everyone was tensed in bird song. Nesam and aradhika were walking to and fro in tension. Teji,Zubin,Krithika were thinking so that something some idea would crack in…
Arjun in his mid 40’s was slightly scratching his hair and was thinking. Yea it’s our arjun he is the same handsome gentleman with some white hairs in his head. He wanted to dye his hair even his kids asked him to….but….radhika was not giving the permission..Yes permission the reason she would give is that I am tired of shooing girls who keep an eye on u arjun ,let it be,let them think u r getting old. Arjun like a small kid smiled at his possessive wife accepted it. All the four were graciously ageing as I would say building a good relationship with others .
Now to the story , all were thinking…

Few mins ago,
All were assembled in the meeting room. It was Maybelline New York presentation as usual it was presented by radhika. The clients were happy about the idea but they wanted a new tagline for their product as it was their 25th year in that product sales.

All were in utter shock . All of them were thinking so that something could come . But to their dismay nothing turned up. Neil was thinking and suddenly something caught his mind . He kept on starring and thinking…nope it was not the tagline he was mesmerized by Sam she was the same he saw 22 years back she was biting her nails out of tension. Sam noticed this and she walked towards him in hell anger. Poor Neil didn’t even know what was going to happen. She came near him and slapped to bring him back to senses..and she held him by his collar and started, Idiot we are here for a tagline and u are just impossible. Everybody in the room looked at them Sam realized what she was doing, she felt a little embarrassed and left the place. All this was watched by an young guy outside the room he smiled to himself and said yea, this is the right time. He smiled wickedly and went.

All the four reached home, but they were so tensed. It has never happened in bird song that radika’s tag line backfired. They had to bring the tag line before the next days morning.
Radhika was damn tensed it’s Maybelline their regular client and a important deal and she couldn’t crack it. Arjun saw his wife so tensed he hugged her from behind and whispered in her ears,” radhu,everything will be alright don’t worry” radhika at first nodded her head and then gave a deadly glare at him and asked radhu??? U called me radhu?? How dare u?? She was continually hitting him. He laughed and said sorry radika thought to give u a break. He caressed her face and told Take rest radhika we will surely crack this. Goodnight saying this he pecked on her forehead. Arjun was still that naughty so said sleep radhu sleep well and ran out of the room to escape from the danger that awaited him. Radhika saw him running and smiled at her ungrown husband.
At home, hours were ticking and all four, (yea all four how could she sleep it was their major one..)were thinking. At that time aru came to the room he saw his mumma and Papa so tensed. So he went to samu mumma room as he called Sam . Aru was pampered by all but most and more pampering he got was from his samu mumma. He went her and asked “ mumma can I have an ice cream today u promised me right” she was not in the mood to take him so she asked her son saran to take him. Both the brothers went to a ice cream café in Saran’s bike and had a gala time. They were returning and Saran’s bike skid and both fell. A girl who was passing by stopped her scooty and helped saran in lifting himself up. She asked saran “ are u OK??” saran could barely hear her words he was just looking at her rather staring at her. The girl shook her hands in front of his face to bring him to senses. He came back to senses and said “ it’s OK if we name our child like dat” . the girl now was giving him a deadly look. Aru who was watching this hit his head hardly and shook him Bhai,Bhai …saran saw his brothers impossible look and came to senses saran thanked the young girl and started of his bike thinking of the dream where he had his children, and smiled at his own imaginaton and drove off with the little scratches he got. After they went
they young lady made a thumbs up to somebody and said our plan worked.

I guess I am not boring u guys …Please do comment,is this enough for an epi. Any suggestions,feedback plz do let me know .


  1. Jessie

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    Nice start Jara.. haha Arjun behaving like kid.. And why d lady showed thumbs up..saran n Neil lol.. waiting 4 nxt one .. TC dear

  2. Sweetie

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    Nice one dear..Arjun being all naughty..Hehe..Neil ki tho band baj gayi..😂So the girl and someone are conspiring against the cute family??Waiting for the next..Stay blessed and keep smiling.. 🙂

  3. Myra

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    It was nice jara…i am guessing, somebody plans to take revenge from ardhika and nesam using their kids…right??….stay blessed always 🙂

  4. Sammy

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    It was nice jara …I think may be girl will be used as a bait to cause more troubles ..but someone ..really to give them problem 🙂 🙂

    • Jara


      Well I have been trying from yesterday to say u happy birthday but now it is !! Happy bday Sammy dear hope u had a blast and wonderful day!! Thanks for ur support!!

  5. rossy

    Nice one..girl was just a pawn…what will happen?? N plzzz show some young moments of ardhika n nesam

  6. Ritu

    Awesome jara..aradhika’s scenes were nice..waiting to see who will give the tagline and about the one who is keeping an eye on them…post soon..take care

  7. Rahul

    Its intresting …and i m quite enjoying it….. overall episode was nice…good start jara….stay blessed

  8. Dev

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    Oye jara wat radus tagline backfired…..impossible…bt nc bros…waiting eagrly 4 d nxt

  9. S.v

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    Aww that was a cute episode jara I seriously enjoyed the sam who slapped neil never changed and arjun with his cutely teasing radhika calling radhu. Lovely and what is that gorl upto ?? Next lart soo jara . Lovely episode.

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