manik malhotra_its my love story (part-73)

“How are you Manik?” Nandini asked looking at him totally
“What changes did you find?”
“Nothing! To your surprise I check out you daily”
“What? How?”Manik is surprised
“You are here Manik, I never let you go from there”Nandini showed him her hand on heart
Manik’s mobile ran
“Hello!”
“Ok! Come to hospital I will talk” Manik hang up mobile.
“Manik what are you doing in hospital?”
“My uncle Sinha got bypass surgery twodays back”
“From twodays you are in hospital?”
“Yes, but today I heard your name in announcement I came here and found you”
“Actually last twodays are my weak ends”
“Ok! How are your parents? When did you shift to Delhi? Why?”
“Everyone are fine, eight month back we came to Delhi, it’s because of you I came”
“For me? Then why didn’t come to me?”
“You said to stay away still I come to you then?”
“Iam a fool, you know from one year Iam searching you at Pune and Mumbai, mangalore”
“I died daily, all day I may act to be happy but the nights they killed me, but by bit.” Nandini filled tears in her eyes
“Come we will go to mom” Manik took Nandini to nyionika
“Mom! Did you remember her?”
Nyionika looked her keenly, “yes! The same girl na for whom you fight with Trilok”
“Yes! Nandini murthy”
“Namastey mam” Nandini politely wished
“How are you?”
“Fine”
“Mom! I want to marry her” Manik don’t want to waste even a single min
“What?”
“Yes mom! We love each other from college, it’s me because of Khanna kept her away all these days, from one year Iam searching for her today in hospital I found her, Sinha uncle, srinu, cabir and all are searching for her. I found her.” Manik said with tears of happiness in eyes which are sparkling.
“For such smile, I can do anything Manik” nyionika eyes also filled with tears. She saw how Manik, suffered himself all these years, his anger, his pain, his hardwork made her suffer too now after a long long time he asked one thing which made her so happy. She hugged both.
“Nandini God bless you, you made Manik smile and gave me Somuch happiness.
Sapna Jahan Lyrics
Sapna jahan dastak na de
Chaukhat thi woh aankhein meri
Baaton se thi tadaad mein
Khamoshiyan zyaada meri
Jabse pade tere kadam
Chalne lagi duniya meri
Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khaali thi
Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai
Main bhatakta huaa sa ek baadal hoon
Jo tere aasmaan pe aake thehra hai
Tu rooh hai toh main kaaya banu
Taa-umr main tera saaya banu
Keh de toh ban jaaun bairaag main
Kehde toh main teri maaya banu
Tu saaz hai, main ragini
Tu raat hai, main chandni
Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khali thi
Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai
Main bhatakta huaa sa ek baadal hoon
Jo tere aasmaan pe aake thehra hai
Hum pe sitaaron ka ehsaan ho
Poora, adhoora har armaan ho
Ek dusre se jo baandhe humein
Baahon mein nanhi si ik jaan ho
Aabaad ho chota sa ghar
Lag na sake kisi ke nazar
Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khaali thi
Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai
Main bhatakta huaa sa ek badal hoon
Jo tere aasmaan pe aake thehra hai

Credit to: Sunitha.k

26 comments

  1. Awsm update ,Thanku
    I think its fast make it slow
    is This all happen in one day….
    Thy suffering fr year to 2ghethr ,happy fr MaNan
    sry if say anythng wrng
    Why this sng??
    The pic ur all updates r perfect

  2. Lisa

    Suni update is small. Most half is full with songs. Bt i liked to see manik as impatient after a long time. Now will be happy time with lots of romance i hope

    • Listen the song while reading you will feel the effect of it. Iam spending hours by listen those songs to make them correctly apt to the situation

  3. Lisa

    I want to see this ff to complete its 100 episode n even more. Dont finish it soon. If necessary bring more twist.bt continue

      • Lisa

        🙁 . What is this yaar?whenever ur ff reach to its peck 4 its popularity u stopped it. I done the same with rivals one. U can show may nandu s parents disapproval,or after marriage nandu s pregnancy complication track n a lotss of romance of manan to continue it. I know its totally ur story n wrote it before bt u could add more in it na. I will again miss this story if u finish it soo soon before 100 updates 🙁 . Pl continue as from the very first update i love it. U atleast can give a thought abt my ideas.n plz want fab five n other couples too at manan wed

  4. lara

    Finally finaly finallyyyyyyyyyyyy……….
    Manan met… Mg… Wow…. Superb yaar…..
    But don’t u think sunitha that day by day ur episode length is becoming less… Plzz.. Update a longer episode yaar.. With more manan scenes…
    Anyways… Update asap ddear… Eagerly waiting..luv u yaar…

      • Tanushree

        i told u na.. u r making us want fr more. suni just a thought instead of giving the whole song with lyrics i think u can just gv the first few lines. it would be easier than fr u.

      • Lisa

        Sorry for troubling u soo much bt its ur fault 🙂 . U write soo amazing that no one can resist

      • kavya

        U r absolutely right Lisa…….u r such a mind blowing writer ki we r not able too wait soo long for the update……..
        Soo plz plz update next part asap….

  5. Priya

    Suni yesterday night i post a long comment but due to server maintenance the comment isnt displayed…. superb suni u r an amazing and excellent writer …..am soo happy for manan and finally they met….the way u narrated the whole scenario is awesome, superb and we can feel their feelings …..beyond these posting these many ffs a day is soo delightful and hats off to u….and ur work….i can say that u r the best manager as well as writer….but dont risk ur health….whole day u r sparing time for this ff to make us happy…..am soo happy as well as sad bcoz u r putting so much of efforts for us…..and i have no words to praise u and ur work…just loved it and love u….may god bless u with all happiness around the world

  6. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww sunitha it’s just amazing story. …I’m very addicted to all your stories. …how beautifully you narrated it..I’m totally immersed into this story. …your every single word touches my heart n the each song is perfect to the scene…all songs r my favorite. …tq tq tq so much for sharing your amazing stories with us. ..keep it up. eeagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh

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