Manan;A business rivals new love story (Episode 51)


Nandini has gone through obortion.
Manik was standing besides her, when docter was aborting. The pain, the screams and her shouting made Manik feel hell infront of him.
Instead of tears blood is seen in his eyes, Nandini in pain bitted Manik’s hand it’s bleeding.

The best feeling of having child for their own is finished docter showed Manik undeveloped baby which came out from Nandini’s womb.
Totally filled with blood. Manik slipped back, became panic and about to faint nurse held him tight
“This is why I asked you to stay away Manik” docter said
“I want my child please wrap he/she?” Looked towards docter
“It’s boy Manik”
“Boy my son! I will give him to my dad please give me”
Docter wrapped boy neatly and gave to Manik.
Manik cried like hell taking that lifeless child in hand. Controlled himself “when will she wake up?”
“I gave sedation takes 4hrs”
“I will come”
Manik came out. By seeing Manik with total wrapped body nyionika screamed badly. Mrs murthy fainted.
“Mom! It’s boy! I will give to papa and come.” All got tears nyionika is crying hard
Nikhil took Manik to graveyard.

Manik himself ploughed the land with one hand. Hold the body with other hand and kept the body with full care.
Nikhil and Manik returned hospital.

After 6hrs Nandini woke up frist touched her stomach. She felt pain tears are flowing
Looked towards Manik. He is silent
“Our baby!” She asked him
“We lost him” Manik cried
No! Shouted Nandini. Her screams, shouting and her tears filled whole hospital.
Manik hugged her tight,both lost child pain is in both.

Sorry guys I know it’s totally bullshit and made me cry like hell but what to do? Iam helpless

Mostly in three episodes my ff will be completed so bear me.

Credit to: Sunitha.k

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  1. Mostly 3episodes what r u saying nooo plzzz

  2. completed means

    1. Story will complete

  3. Hi sunitha u will wrap up so soon…..

  4. kavipriya venkatraman

    Hey plz don’t end this yaar plz continue with manik and nandhini child…plz i love ur story very much

    1. I can’t sorry but I will complete Manik malhotra_its my love story

  5. what much painfull this episode is .
    what happening yar.
    clear it na.
    story become too sad and painfull.
    when they will come to original state?.
    when happy days come in their life?

  6. I m confused for which i should react? For the sad story of manan or for the ending of this beautiful ff? But if u r ending this ff then plz give us another one ff on manan. I know u have 1 mote named manik malhotra but somewhere i feel this two story is written by two different people. I mean this one is with full details n emotion but about the other one i feel that u write that in hurry always. Thats too nice bt seems like u give less attention that. Plz write another ff like this one. Plzz na….its a request

    1. I will concentrate on it

  7. Thanks for ta update…but its soo sad….since u r goin to end ur ff plz update it fast….

  8. i know its painful but please don’t end this ff
    i am very much obessed with ff please dont
    please continue more episodes

    1. Thank you for your love

  9. Thanks for the update…but its sad….since u r goin to end tis ff, plz update all the episodes fast…

  10. Hey r u going to end this plz don’t do it ……I mean to say ke plz don’t stop it its really awesome something unique n day by day interesting …..plz don’t stop writtting this ff

    1. I will write any other ff

  11. No…plz dnt end this……plzzzzzzz for god sake….its gng well…plzzzzzzzzz………

  12. nestle joseph

    i hate you

    1. I love you for reading

      1. nestle joseph

        sorry………i was hurt my eyes are filled with tears i cant control sorry.but i really love you


      SORRY…I was hurt my eyes are filled with tears i cant control sorry.but bottom of the line i love you..

      1. No prbs yaar I understand I too hate myself for writing such tragedy

  13. Sunitha plz add some more episode n show manan romance. Yhe actual kky was was end at a dead point. I dont want to remember saddy manan. I want to remember a happy story of manan. So plzzzz add some more episode n show our all time fav happy manan with their child. Plz plz

  14. Sunitha it’s life everyone needs to accepts ups and downs then only the beauty of the life can be seen you are doing a great job your ff is like a addiction to me

    1. Thanks for understandinh

  15. whyyy are u doing this? it was so cheerful when they were together. if u are ending this pls end it in a happy note….

  16. The epi is really emotional Sunitha di…and y r u ending this…dont end this…even if u want to end,pls do it on a happy note

  17. I had my eyes completely full of tears….see u r making ppl involving in ur story pls continue dnt complete the story..but u did splendid job in writing this ff….the way if narration is beautiful…. U r a fantabulous writer…..

  18. Sry but I want u to continue after the 3 episodes also….plz..??

    1. I will write other ff yar

  19. plzzz update soon the next episode….I am unhappy with ur news….don’t end the ff…

  20. Pleasr dont end it just look for something to add so tha you will keep on writing

  21. Plzz don’t end this
    I can’t stop reading this I
    Really love it
    Plzz do anything else
    To make story long but plzz
    Don’t do it

    1. Ha ha ha
      Shall make nyionika villan?

      1. Not a bad idea 😛 . Vamp nyolika or u can add druliya,soha,arayman or any other thing 😀 ….

      2. hey dnt do dat.nandini and neyonika ka relationship spoil math aur bati ka relation acha hey

  22. Dear plz Dont stop writting this ff u write another one. Also we read that even but plz Dont stop plz I just luv ur writings plz continue this one only plz

  23. Plz continue
    M really addicted to it plzz
    Do sumthn
    Future k bre m likho
    Ya fab5

  24. Ohh…it’s really so sad epi…I’m crying so bad. Mt shouldn’t happen with this sweet couple. …plzzzz don’t end ….its very heart wrenching. …but I loved the way you narrating everything. ….love you loads

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