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Manan: Shaadi With Devar Less Dost (Chapter 5 – Wish)

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I know I am early it’s bcoz to compensate for being late, have fun.

Precap: Manik to know about Nandini’s unique wish
(Present Same Day)
Manan with Aditi reached Malhotra  Mansion, a girl who was seated on couch saw Aditi n shouted

Girl: Adii
Adi: Navya Dii, aap
Both hugged each other n all sat when Manik said
Manik: Navya, tu—
Navya: haa Jiju, wo Nandini ne hume bulaya hai
Manik: ac—
Navya: acha Jiju, hum chalte hai
Manik: kah—
Navya: Nandini ke room mein
Manik: ohk

Aditi went to her room, while Navni were in Manan’s room, after chit-chatting for 1 hour, Navni n Aditi came down for dinner, all were seated at dining table when Raj said

Raj: Aditi beta, acche se shopping ki na, ya phir Manik ne kanjoosi toh nhi ki
Aditi: nhi Jiju ne aisa kuch nhi kiya
Raj: good, waise Nyonika khana acha bana hai aaj
Nyo: thank u ji
Raj: welcome ji
Manik: yeh aaj aap dono ko kya hgya hai??
Navya: Jiju, hume lagta hai, inhe romance karne ka mann kar raha hai
Raj: ais—
Navya: ab thank u bolne ki zrurat nhi hai uncle ji
All giggled hearing Navya n she made faces.

Navya left after having dinner, Manan went to drop Aditi, after dropping both were returning when Manik said

Manik: tumhari sacchi mein wish hai, kidnap hone ki??
Nandini: y, any doubt??
Manik: tha, ab thik hgya, ur unbelievable
Nandini: thank u
Manik: compliment nhi tha
Nandini: whatever

Both reached Malhotra Mansion, Nyoj were already asleep, Manan reached their room, changed into Pyjamas n slept.

Next Day, Manik woke up n found himself on bed but Nandini wasn’t there, he (thinks) shayad niche hogi

Manik freshen up, he was gng to take clothes when he saw a chit with the clothes, it read

Good Morning Hubby,
Well I know u thought that I am down but no, I am not down, I came for jogging so please have breakfast, no skipping
Yours Wifey

Manik smiled, changed his clothes n came downstairs. Nyoj n Manik had breakfast, Manaj bid bye to Nyo n left for office.

It was lunch time n Nyo called Manik n he recieved happily n said

Manik: Hi Mom! Wassup??
Nyo: Ma-Manik….w-wo….
Manik: say mom
Nyo: w-wo….Na-Nand—
Manik: kya hua use, is she fine, I am coming

He hung up n left office worried, he reached in 15mins n saw Nyo sitting worriedly while Navya was calming her, he went n asked

Manik: Mom, r u fine? Nandini kaha hai?
Nyo: w-wo….
Manik: bolo Mom, u r scaring me
Raj(entering inside): mai batata hu
Manik: Dad, say
Raj: Nandiniwentforjoggingndidn’treturntillnow
Manik: what?? I didn’t got anything
Navya: Jiju, hum batate hai, actually uncle anty aapse bhut darte hai
Manik: cut the crap n come at the point
Navya: wo Nandini subah jogging gyi thi, abhi thak nhi lauti
Manik: whattt??? Wo subah se gyb hai aur aap sabne me mujhe ab inform kiya
Nyo: mai bhut dargayi thi
Manik: God!! Mom!!
Raj: Manik, I think we should inform cops
Manik; no Dad, first we vil find in our way, if not then v vil take help from cops.
Raj: as u say

Manik immediately called Dhrubir n informed them to find Nandini, any how. He was worried,scared n hurt, he (thinks) y am I worried for her?? Manik, r u gone insane, she’s ur wife, n its ur responsibilty to take care of her. No its not juz responsibilty, it’s something else, what is it?? Any guesses :-

It was 4pm n now Manik was totally restless, he himself wanted to go but Nyoj stopped his as they know, whenever Manik is tensed, its dangerous for him to drive, so they all were waiting for Dhrubir, as they both entered, Manik ran to them asking did u find her to which the nodded in a no n Manik’s hope shattered. He juz said

Manik: where r u Nandini??

(In a small hut in jungle)
Nandini was tied to chair, she was smiling like a fool bcoz her wish was completed, she saw the boss of kidnappers was sleeping/snoring n that was irritating her, her mouth was also sealed with tape, she tried to move the chair, which made a sound n the boss woke up, he asked

Boss: aye ladki, chalakhi karne ki kosish mat kar
Nandini couldn’t say anything, she eyed the tape n Boss remove the tap n she said
Nandini: shukr hai khol diya, warna meri jaan chali jati
Boss: sirf itna bolne ke liye, tumne awaaz ki
Nandini: nhi nhi, mai yeh soch rahi this, ki tumlog sachme kidnappers ho
Boss: kyu, koi shak hai??
Nandini: haa, hai
Boss: kya hai wo??
Nandini: mera matlab hai, mujhe kidnap toh karliya lekin meri family se kuch nahi mang rahe ho aur nahi mujhe kuch kar rahe ho
Boss: kya?? Tum pagal ho kya, log kidnap hone par darte hai, aur tum chahti ho ki mai tumhari family se kuch mango
Nandini: haa, mai chahti hoo, film mein toh aise hi hota hai na
Boss: film film hoti hai, yeh asli zindagi hai
Nandini: acha, koi nai, ab tum call karo
Boss: hey bhagwaan, yeh kaisi ladki se paala pada hai
Nandini: mere phone se call karo
Boss: karta hoo

(Malhotra Mansion)
Manik was hell-worried now, he said

Manik: Dad, call the cops
Raj: thi—
Navya: ruk jayiye
Cabir: ab kya hua yaar?
Navya: hum aapse baat nhi kar rahe, wo hum ye kehna chahte hai ki
Manik: ki
Navya: hume pata hai Nandu kaha hai
All were shocked n she said

(Flashback)
Navni entered Manan’s room, Nandini went to cupboard n took out an envelope n handed it to Navya with some money also, Navya asked

Navya: yeh kisliye??
Nandini: tum yaha se jaane ke baad, Chandu Bhai ke paas jaogi
Navya: Chandu Bhaiii, yeh to wahi hai na, jo kidnapping karte hai
Nandini: right, toh mai chahti ho, ki tum jaakar unhe yeh envelope aur paise dedo
Navya: wo toh hum kardenge par agar unhone kuch pucha toh??
Nandini: tumhe darr nhi lagraha??
Navya: hume?? Bilkul nhi, humari toh bachpan se khwaish thi ki hum, gundo se mile
Nandini: acha hai, aur haa woh bas yahi puchenge ki kaha se karna hai, aur tum kehna xyz bus-stop se, thik hai??
Navya: samaj gaye, lekin kidnap ho kon raha hai?
Nandini: woh tumhe kal khud pata chal jaayega, tum bas kal subah ghar aajana
Navya: k
Nandini: All the Best
(Flashback Over)

Manik was now hell angry n shouted

Manik: tum aur wo tumhari dost, dono pagal ho, woh madam ne kehdiya aur ye madam ne maan liya, waah

Juz then Manik’s cell rang n he received the call n said

Manik: what the hell Nandini, is it some kind of joke??
Boss: oye, tu jo koi bhi hai, teri biwi mere kabse mein hai
Manik: chup kar saale aur use phone de
Boss: kya kaha, tu jaanta hai, tu kisse baat kar raha hai
Manik: haa janta hu, ab meri biwi ko fone de

(In the hut)
Boss: yelo, apne pati se baat karo
Nandini: mujhe nhi karni, bas tum paiso ki demand karo
Boss: oye, teri biwi tujhse baat nhi karna chahti
Manik: I dont care, maine kaha use fone de matlab de
Boss: baat karle yaar
Nandini: nhi karni
Boss: usse nhi karni
Manik: sun, use dede fone warna tujhe aisa marunga ki 6 mahine tak chal nhi paayega
Boss (thinks) hey bhagwaan, kis chakkar mein phasa diya mujhe
Boss: dekh Bhai, mai jaaraha hu, aake apni biwi ko lele
Boss cancelled the call before Manik could reply n Nandini for the first time was scared as Boss with his men, left her alone in the hut.

Nandini was now seated alone tied to the chair, it’s been 1 hour, since she is alone, n upar se it was raining. Juz then Nandini saw a shadow approaching n she got scared, the shadow came till the door n she shut her eyes tightly, a lil later she slowly opened her one eye n sighed as the shadow was gone, she turned her face to the side n was gng to shout but the person covered her mouth. The person came in light n Nandini’s face lit-up as it was her hubby. Manik didn’t say anything n untied her hands, he was in a rain-coat, all wet.

She tried to talk to him, but he wasn’t ready to listen to her, he went in the jungle n after 15mins, returned with some dried woods. It was very cold in the hut, he tried to fire the woods but couldn’t. Nandini came forward n helped him, he didn’t say anything.

Manik’s “chuppi” was eating Nandini n she wanted to hear his voice n atlast she said

Nandini: Manik, mujhe danto, maro par aise chup mat raho, please
Manik didn’t say anything, Nandini again said
Nandini: Manik, kuch toh bolo
Manik couldn’t stop himself n shouted
Manik: kya bolo haa, kya bolo, how could you do this, pata hai Mom-Dad kitne pareshaan the, apni wish ke saamne u didn’t see anything, agar tumhe kuch hojata toh, hamara kya hota haa, mera kya hota, mujhe neeche kon girata, mere kapde kon nikalta, mere liye breakfast kon banata, mujhe call karke lunch ke liye kon bulata haa, say something ab chup kyu ho tum?
Nandini: mere aane se pehle bhi toh u were living na, toh abhi bhi jee sakte the, aur mai tumhe sirf isi kaamo ke liye imp ho?

Manik didn’t say anything n Nandini knew what she had to do, she hugged Manik tightly n he too hugged her tightly, as if not leting her go.

The first hug it was, which made them shiver, which made them feel peace in each others arms, the place where they can live peacefully n die peacefully, which place they can sleep peacefully. Well both felt the same but at the same time, they didn’t know, what was the reason, y both felt like this.

Both broke the hug n sat beside each other near the fire, Nandini’s head was on Manik’s shoulder n he smiled at her…. Both drifted to sleep….

Note:-
So how was it guys, liked it?? I know chotu update tha, but jo bhi tha, mere haatho se likha hua tha, true opinions dena, k….

Lots Of Love ❤️❤️❤️

16 Comments
  1. Sooooobamazinggggg full of emotions ,masti amazinggg mindblowinggggg loved kidnappers vala part sooi much
    Manan hug sooo awesome dear

    1. Naaz21

      Thanks 🙂

  2. Wowww it’s nice superbb

    1. Naaz21

      Thanks 🙂

    1. Naaz21

      Thanks 🙂

  3. It was good but l was only understanding English .

    1. Naaz21

      Thanks, vil try to give in english

  4. anushka shetty

    Omg nandu ka wish………n manik ka care………amazing…… Waiting eagerly for ur next update…

    1. Naaz21

      Thanks 🙂

  5. Tanushree

    nice…. pls update soon

    1. Naaz21

      Thanks 🙂

  6. It’s nice but pls write it English

    1. Naaz21

      Vil try to 😉

  7. Awwwwwwww it was soooo cuteeee….. Lovely completely….. Lovd itt… Nandu seriously such a unique wish…. Osom.. T c nd waiting.

    1. Naaz21

      Thanks 🙂

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