Manan os : Life Is Incomplete Without U

Manan (one shot ) : Life Is Incomplete Without U…

A handsome boy was working in his office.. He was engrossed with files.. Suddenly his phone rang…he checked the caller I’d…itz from his mom – Nyonika Malhotra…he received the call…

Nyonika : what is this manik?! Today is ur marriage & u r still working in office…come fast…
Manik : I’ll come..
Nyonika : I said now manik..
Manik : ok f9..I’m coming.. Now !!
Nyonika : good…
Manik hanged up the call..he called his manager & told him to keep the files…
He took his car keys & left for his house….

A girl was sitting in the chair..her frnds were dressing her up..they were teasing her taking manik’s name..
Navya : today manik will faint watching our nandini…
Alya : r8 navya.. He won’t b able to control his feelings..
Nandini’s chachi shanno murthy arrive there…
Nandini : chachi look na…they are teasing me…
Shanno : girls..stop teasing our nandu…
Alya : that’s not done’s ur marriage today..if we won’t tease u now then when ?!
Navya : after their first night…
Nandini blushed & her cheeks became red lyk a tomato…
Nandini : shut up guyzz..
Navya & alya were laughing…

Manik went to his home..
Nyonika : manik..I wonder it’s ur wedding or not…
Manik : don’t worry’s my wedding…
Nyonika : seriously?! U will go there lyk this??
Manik’s little sister mukti came there..
Mukti : mom..whatever bhai will wear he look handsome on that..
Manik gave a high 5 to mukti..
Nyonika : u both are go & get ready.. We have to reach there by 8pm…

Mukti took manik his room..his friends cabir & dhruv were waiting there…
Dhruv : where were u??
Manik : sorry guyz..there was an important work in office..
Cabir : yeah r8..if u would’ve done a bit late na I would’ve go there to marry nandini..
Manik : & I would’ve kill u…
Dhruv,cabir & mukti together : Ooooo…
Manik : shut up…

They made manik ready..he was also looking handsome & breath was manan’s arranged marriage…

Manik with his family & frndz went to nandini’s house..nandini’s chacha narendra murthy welcomed them..her chachi performed aarti & then fulfilled all rituals…

It was tym to bring the bride..aliya & navya with some of their other frnds brought nandini..mukti also joined them..manik was amazed to see Nandini…

Manik’s pov :
Wow !! She is looking lyk an angel…so beautiful & attractive.. I’m feeling lyk stealing her from here & kissing her right now..
End of pov

Cabir & dhruv noticed manik staring at nandini..
Cabir whispered to dhruv & manik : looks lyk Manik won’t b able to sleep tonight…
Manik : shut up…
Both laughed…

All the rituals became cmplt & nandini went with them in Malhotra Mansion…
Everyone welcomed her..after fulfilling some rituals nandini was sent to manik’s room..manik also came was their first night..nandini was nervous..Manik opened her veil…
Manik : nandini.. I know u r not comfortable.. & u won’t have to force urself…I’m not lyk the other peoples..u can take ur tym..for now can we b frnds???
Nandini was happy getting manik as her husband…
Nandini : ok..frnds…
Manik : gd..frnds should know about each tell me about urself..

Manan talked for whole night & then slept…
Many days passed by…manan were coming close.. Nandini was falling in love with manik’s frndly,caring behavior, his nature,honesty…manik was falling in love with nandini’s innocence, beauty,honesty,cuteness,nature…both were started falling for each other…

One day manik called nandini & asked her for a date..she blushed & said yes.. Manik planned that he will confess his love to nandini… Nandini got ready in a white floor touched gown..he curled her hair a bit & did a light make up..she was looking stunning.. Manik also got ready in a white shirt with white jeans & blazer..he set his hair perfectly with jell.. He was looking dangerously handsome.. He came to pick nandini at 7pm..nandini came down..manik was mesmerized watching her..he gave nandini flowers & then both went to venue..It was a privet place & quite far from the city..that’s why there was none other than manan.. Everything was nicely decorated with candles,flowers & white curtains,two tables with a chair & a couch..nandini was amazed watching the decoration..
Manik made her sit on the chair..they had their dinner…
After dinner they rested on the couch & talked for a while..manik gave her a gift box..she opened it..there was a beautiful pendent.. Manik made her wear it…
Manik : there is one more surprise for u..
Nandini : what is that??

Manik : come..
Manik made her stand under the open sky..he brought a jar & opened it…many fireflies came from it & spread on the open sky..
Nandini : it’s so beautiful manik..
Manik : not more than u…
Nandini blushed.. Manik kneeled down in front of her…
Manik : I love you Nandini.. Truely.. Madly…crazily…I love you…
Nandini was very happy..
She gave her hand on his hand saying I love you too manik..
Manik got up & hugged her…
Manik : may I have the honour to dance with u??
Nandini moved her head positively…
Manik played the music…sawaali si raat from film barfi played..
(Note : if u can do plug it on earphone.. It’s my fvrt song ever..)
Manan danced romantically according to the song..after finishing the song nandini was about to go but manik held her hand & kissed her hand..shivered ran through her spine..Manik came more close to her..her heartbeat increased.. Manik hugged her from back & kissed her neck..Nandini closed her eyes feeling the proximity..

Manik made her face him..then slowly went towards her lips..both were feeling each other’s breath..manik kissed her on was a nrml kiss 1st & then it turned to a passionate one..manik’s hands were roaming on nandini’s body shamelessly… They broke the kiss & manik picked her in his arms..he made her lie on the couch & then they celebrate their love…

They passed the whole night was a beautiful night for them..they returned home at morning.. Then they slept together..

Days were passing beautifully.. One day manik’s clg frnd veebha came to his house.. She used to love manik but manik always treated her lyk a frnd..she didn’t know about manan’s marriage as she was in USA.. She became very furious knowing that but didn’t show it..she decided to take revenge from Nandini & threw her away from this house as well as manik’s lyf..she called her cousin harshad for coming there..though harshad was her cousin,he treated her as his real little sister..he can do anything for her…veebha told harshad everything & harshad agreed to help her…
Manik went to London for a week..nxt day he was coming to nandini planned surprise for him..she went to the mall for buying gift..harshad made her senseless & took her to his house..he made nandini lie on bed & he himself lie down with her..veebha clicked the pictures & couriered them to Malhotra mansion..

Nandini got her sense nxt day morning.. She wondered what is she doing here…she got up from the bed & searched the whole one was there…then she left for Malhotra mansion..she reached there…
All were standing in the hall..

Nandini : what happened?? Why r u standing here lyk that?!
Nyonika slaped her & showed her the photos..nandini was shocked to see them..nandini tried to made manik understand.. But manik didn’t listen a word..Nyonika told her to leave from this house..having no option she left the house & went to murthy mansion..she told them everything.. Everyone supported nandini as they trusted her…they were also angry on manik & his family for not giving her a chnc to speak…
Nandini & manik both were shattered…

Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshni
Kuch Kum Gili Hai Baarishein
Kuch Kum Lehrathi Hai Hawa
Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Kwahishein
Tham Sa Gaya Hai
Yeh Waqt Aaisi
Tere Liya Hi Tehra Ho Jaise

(Manik was in his room..lights were off..there were darkness all over the room…he threw all the staff of the room & cried loudly saying – “why did u do that nandini ?!! ” …nandini was lying lifelessly on the floor remembering their moments..)

Kyun Meri Saans Bhi
Kuch Bhiki Si Hai
Dooriyon Se Huyie
Nazdiki Si Hai (2)
Jaane Kya, Yeh Baath Hai
Har Subha, Aab Raat Hai….

(Manik fell on the floor crying..he screamed calling nandini…nandini had a photoframe in her hand..she was looking at it & tears fell from her eyes…)

Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshni
Kuch Kum Gili Hai Baarishein
Kuch Kum Lehrathi Hai Hawa
Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Kwahishein
Tham Sa Gaya Hai
Yeh Waqt Aaise
Tere Liya Hi Tehra Ho Jaise

(Manik remembered their 1st date,kiss,all swt moments… He palmed his face & cried a lot…nandini threw the photoframe from her hand & cried loudly..)

(Note : I didn’t write the full’s kuch kaam from film dostana..if possible do plug it on earphone for better feelings…It’s an awesome song..I must say..)

Days passed lyk this..manan became quiet..they both stopped talking, eating,smiling… Happiness were lost from their life..nandini’s family decided to talk with manik’s family…but nandini stopped them…

Nandini : no one will go there chachu..
Chacha : but why?! We can’t see u lyk this dear..we will go & talk to manik..
Nandini : I also tried to make him understand.. But he didn’t listen a word .now no one will go to him..he didn’t trust me na…I will never go to him…
Chacha : but….
Nandini : itz my final decision…

Nandini left from there crying.. She locked herself in the room & cried a lot…navya & alya also came to visit her..but she didn’t talk with them also…

Cabir & dhruv immediately came to meet manik after listening this..

Cabir : I can’t blv this manik..I just can’t…
Dhruv : yeah..I agree..nandini is a nice girl..she can never do this…
Cabir : show me that photographs..
Manik gave them the photographs..
Cabir : I have seen the boy somewhere… OMG !! It’s veebha’s brother..harshad…
Manik : how does it matter?!
Cabir : come with me…

Cabir took manik to veebha’s house..veebha & harshad were talking…

Veebha : our plan is working perfectly harshad..thank u sooo much..u r the best brother of the world…
Harshad : anything for my dear sister..
Veebha : manik will never come to know about this..poor manik will b only mine…

Manik heard everything from the door..he went towards harshad & started beating him.. He told harshad to say the truth…harshad first didn’t open his mouth..but manik beat him very badly.. Then he finally said all the truth to manik – how they brought nandini in the home & clicked photos….manik took a stamp & he was about to hit harshad with that but cabir & dhruv stopped her..he felt ashamed thinking how he doubted nandini & didn’t even listen a word…he wanted to meet nandini immediately.. But before leaving he went to veebha…
He slapped her…
Manik : what kind of a woman r u?? What made u think that I will love such a girl lyk u ?!! U should b ashamed on yourself veebha..I hate u..don’t u dare to come in front of me ever…don’t….

He left from the house with cabir & dhruv..veebha cried a lot saying manik..don’t go..I love u…I did these for u…

Manik,dhruv & cabir went to nandini’s house..but there was no one in the house..watchman recognized manik & came to him..

Watchman : sir..u.??
Manik : yeah..where is everyone??
Watchman : they’ve gone for airport.. Woh..nandini ma’am is going to London forever..that’s why..they’ve left some time ago…
Manik was numb listening that..
Cabir : manik..let’s go..we’ve to go fast…
Trio left for airport.. They reached airport after about an hour..
Manik got down from the car immediately & went inside the airport… He searched for nandini but there was no clue about her…
Manik went to announcement room & announced nandini’s name..

Manik : nandini !!!

Nandini was about to go for check in..she listened manik’s voice & stopped there…

Manik : I’m sorry nandini.. I know I’ve made a big mistake.. Plzz forgive me..plzz come back…

Listening those words nandini couldn’t stand there..she went to the announcement section…

Nandini : manik…
Manik turned backwards…
Manik : nandini….
Manik felt numb & guilty watching her face..her face was pale.. Eyes were swollen.. There was no glow on her face…
Manik came near her..he kneeled down in front of her & held his ear..

Manik : plzz forgive me nandini.. I know my mistake is unforgivable.. But plzz give me a chance..u r the shine & only happiness of my lyf..without u..I’m nothing.. I prmiz I’ll never repeat my mistake..I’ll always trust u..plzz don’t go away..I can’t live without life is incomplete without u….

Tears fell from nandini’s eyes…nandini made him stand & remove his hands from his ear..

Nandini : prmiz me that u’ll never ever repeat it..
Manik : never…prmiz…
Nandini : tell the full line manik..what if u forget that?!!
Manik : ok..I’ll never ever doubt u & always trust u more than myself..I won’t repeat my mistakes..prmiz nandini..
Nandini smiled & hugged him immediately..manik also apologized to her family..everyone forgive him..they came out from the airport..
Nyonika & mukti also came there as cabir informed them..they also apologized to nandini & her family.

Manik whispered in nandini’s ear..
Manik : I love u nandini..
Nandini : I love u too manik..
Both held each other’s hand & collides their head….

Such misunderstandings always happens in every kind of relation.. But we should trust our loved ones & give them a chnc to clarify…& when we realize our mistakes we all should try to rectify it before it’s too late..& when our loved ones realise their mistakes & repent for it from heart we should forgive them & give them a chnc to rectify their mistakes..

So it was the moral of this story..hope u guyz lyk share ur feedbacks as it’s my first os..I’m kinda nervous..suggestions & criticisms r also welcome..I’ll wait 4 ur feedbacks.. Till then –

#b_safe_n_stay_happy_&_spread_love 🙂


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  1. Di it’s just owsum and mindblowing I said no you write well see this is the proof.and about 1st time everything in life happens 1st time even love of manan

    1. Nishita

      Thank u sooo much neha.?.& as it was ur idea of os…so credits also goes to u 🙂

      1. Sorry to talk to you soo rudely and about credit taking its not you or me it’s us because you wrote it your mind and creativeness only my suggestions that’s all and han OS was really great

      2. Nishita

        Itz ok neha… Thank u 🙂

  2. It’s just awesome dear…..
    U r just an amazing writer….
    Keep writing….

    1. Nishita

      Thank u sooo much kavya..honestly I didn’t think anyone lyk it..thank u ??

  3. Sorry my foot you write soon well and say sorry the OS is not good?

  4. O my god …seriously u killd it nd me toooo…. jst speechless….evry lovable postiv credit to u was awaome osom…suprbly fantasticaly fantastic o s …i wud say d bst o s……loovvv u yaaar…u r an awesome writr….lots nd lottttttss of love….congrats 4 dis o s

    1. Nishita

      Thanks a lootttt anjali… I’m glad that u lyk it so much…I’m really happy.. U r also a sweetheart. Lots of love to u too..???

  5. Soooooooooooooooo existing one short dear you writes really good thanks Neha because of you we got such as awesome OS BY Nishita the Great writer of Manan FanFiction once again thank you Neha thank you very very very very much and the credit of this iOS OS goes to Nishita the writer and the creative mind behind this and Neha the suggester of this wonderful OS buy Nishita our champion writer I know that other write well but Nishita you are the best anyhow and Neha your suggestions are the best best of luck for your episodes and the upcoming OS and thank you one more time for this wonderful OS and episodes Nishita and also Neha for giving the idea to write this OS Nishita

    1. Priya di thanks

    2. Nishita

      OMG priya !! So big cmnts & so many praises..I am glad that u think my ff is best…thank u so’s an honour for me…but I would lyk to say everyone is doing great on their own stories…thnx lottt priya….loottsss of love ???

    3. Thanks priyadi and the credit goes to nishita di

  6. Very nyo one short dear….u r a very creative writer…..good going

    1. Nishita

      Thank u so much tashu dear.. 🙂

  7. Thanks Priya di and the real credit Goes To Nishita di as she took the trouble to write this OS

  8. I posted this as I thought you will write like this only

    1. Nishita

      Nice guess priya ?

  9. Yes I was about to say the same and thanks di for your appreciation to me and nishita di

  10. Yes I was about to say the same and thanks di for apritiating to me and nishita di

  11. Ya it absolutely right Priya di

  12. Han ma Aida hi Lina wali this di thanks the OS was clear boundary

    1. Nishita

      Thnx neha 🙂

  13. Sooooo amazing and heart touching story amazing mindblowing is thankyouuu so much for giving us such mindblowing story I even don’t have words to appreciate I think you have magic in your hands whatever you write it just become wonderful keep writing dear

    1. Nishita

      Aww…it’s also bcz of the love u guyz showered on me..thank u so much..I’m really happy that u lyk it piya.. 🙂

  14. Wwwoooowwww
    Its amazing,mind blowinggggggg❣❣❣❣
    Have no words to say dear…….

    1. Nishita

      Thank u sooooo much kyy..I’m happy that u lyk it ???

  15. nishita……….. its awesome….no words………….superb………..
    thanks for this………..
    keep smiling

    1. Nishita

      Thank u sooo much vrutika.. U also keep smiling dear ?

  16. Mahi13

    I’ve no words to say. Tha os is really heart touching. Loved it a lot. U r not amazing. Actually u r more than amazing ?. Loved ur os a loooooot.???

    1. Nishita

      OMG !! Thank u sooo much mahi..I’m really happy to know u loved it ??

  17. ???????NISHITA ??????

    1. Thanks for this claps

    2. Nishita

      Thank u sooo much Vicky 🙂

  18. Wonderful episode

  19. Woww nishi Darling its amazing dear … How could u write such a beautiful story line ….. Nice superb…

    1. Nishita

      Thank u sooo much manu..I’m really happy to know that u lyk it..?

  20. Hey…I have written a new OS on manan…its name is MANAN- ASHQ NA HO…it’s already published there..u can check it if u want to…I m sure u ll like it???

    1. Nishita

      Yeah..I checked that & also commented..I love that a looottttttttttt ??

  21. IshaJain3006

    it was Amazing! 🙂

    1. Nishita

      Thank u ishajain 🙂

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