Manan- Meri aashiqui (Episode 5)

Hey I’m back……Do u want me to change my writing style or narration ? …I feel bad coz starting 2 episodes I got awesome response but now I’m not getting it.So,please any suggestions and mistakes let me know…Don’t worry I will not stop this coz I have atleast some 4 enthu readers who will be waiting for this lyk Lisa and mishti who comments on every chapter.Thank u guys u always make my day…Sorry others whose names I haven’t mentined but thanks for ur support too…
STORY:

Manik:”I knew it… I knew it Nandu..u r alive…U r here only..”he ran until he reached his car which was parked nearly 5 km away from there…he sat in it and drove away…
CABIR’S HOUSE:
Navya:”Relax Cabir..Manik is too stressed..The incident which happened b4 2 years ..it is very difficult for all of us to accept it..plz..”and she tries to pacify an upset Cabir..Just then door bell rang and Navya went to open the door and she saw Manik standing there..The only word she can utter was “MANIK…”Cabir heard her.saw Manik and let him come in..Manik just ran towards Cabir…hugged him tight and said”She is there..she is there..”and smiled..now Cavya were confused..
Cabir:”Manik relax…What r u trying to tell.Say it clearly..plz..”
Manik broke the hug and said” Cabir…Nandini…she is here only…I…I saw her Cabir…”.Now it comes as a shock for Cabir..he knew Manik always imagined Nandini..but he never came running towards them and claim something lyk this..

Cabir:”WHAT…”..he said in disbelief…
Manik:”I knw bro..u must be thinking it’s my imagination..but no ..I I have seen her..she was sitting in a Mercedes and headed towards Shimla..through the route beside Pune highway…Cabir…We have to go to Shimla..Y is she running away from us?Mainly from me…Something..Something is there..hidden..Iam telling you..There is some loop hole..” he said everything in a go..cabir tried making him to listen…but he was busy in blabbering..
Then Cabir said..”Dude hangon..” but Manik cut him in between and said”no cabir..Come..We have to go now itself..”with this he tried to move out with Cabir but Cabir stopped him and shouted…”enough Manik….plz…bas kar..SHE IS NO MORE..SHE DIED RIGHT IN FRONT OF US..AND ON TOP OF THAT SHE DIED IN YOUR ARMS ONLY..EVEN HER LAST WORD WAS YOUR NAME ONLY..”
Cabir never wanted to b harsh with Manik..but he left no other option…Manikeyes became teary..remembering the whole mishap..he is shocked..hurt..and left without telling anything while Cabir collapsed on the floor…
Once MANIK left from Cabir’s house..he was in deep shock about wat cabir said about nandu’s death…in pain..he never wanted to accept the fact that she died in his arms..and he was unable to do anything..but now he has to face it…walking on lonely dark streets lifelessly…only walking in daze…not understanding how to react….whether to cry over cabir’s words or to be happy that he saw nandu today…eyes were dark red,moist..tears continuously rolling down..suddenly heavy rain started as if god is also crying with the innocent soul…he is on the verge of shattering,,,drenched…collapsed right on the floor..started screaming..he was on his knees…opened his arms…looked upwards and screamed..”aaa…aaa….aa…aa”..crying like hell….
B.G.M:

Tu jo he Mai hu….
He stood up and felt nandu beside him…went to touch her but she disappeared….he grabbed a stone on road and threw it in frustration…walked all the way..drenched and reached home…all guards were shocked to see him in such deteriorated state…hair messy…looking down and walking lifelessly…as soon as he entered the living room..a lady came running towards him..”Manik…beta…Wat have u done to urself…kya hai ee haalath?..Come inside..”she made him sit on the couch and aked servants to bring water and towel..made him drink it…and started drying his hair..and after a lot of silence he said..”Mom…I saw her..”he managed to say this…the lady stopped right there wat she was doing..and made him look into her eyes..
Nyonika:”have u seen nandu manik?”

Manik:”HA…haan..”..he stammered…
Nyonika:”Manik…u…u saw her…? R u sure..?”,then MANIK looked at her and said..”Mom..She is there..plz…believe me…she is there..u know na….she can’t…she can never leave me alone and go….mom..plz..plz…believe me….”he started his crying again,sat down on floor,pushed his head onto her lap..and holded her tight..she put her cheeks on his head…a tear escaped from her eye..but she lifted her head up and ruffled his hair and said..”I believe u Maanik..I believe u..”,immediately he looked at her,took her hand in his and said”Sirf u r only believing it..everyone feels ki… ki…” he choked…then Nyonika said..”manik..plz…b strong…”she caressed his cheeks,wiped away the tears..held his face and said”u need to prove to them…she is here…just find her..and bring her back..bring my daughter back..then everyone will believe u…”..then he wiped his tears and said..”HA mom…I will her back..i promise..” and moved up into his room…
Nyonika:”he will never accept .that nandu is no more…I lost my son…I lost him..”she cried…then servants who r also having tears came and asked her..”Ma’m may I serve dinner?”..She said “When my son is empty stomachhow can I eat…I am not hungry…please you all eat” and she left..Servants discussed how after nandini..the soul of this house also left…
MANIK’S ROOM:
Manik entered the room…it was all dark..opened the closet..and took out nandini’s and his picture..in which he is hugging her and his chin was placed on her shoulder while both his hands are encircled around her waist..her one hand was on his cheek..and other was holding his hand which was on her waist..both smiling widely..(sorry I suck at this kind of descriptions)..held it tight..walked towards his bed..sat and said”Nandu ..u always wanted me to keep this pic on our bedroom wall ryt…plz…come back…whatever u say I’ll do ..plz.. and he goes into flashback where nandu tells him showing this picture….

FLASHBACK:
”Manik…v l keep this pic on our wall plz..”but manik is busy in his own work and world,nuzzling his nose in her hair and just “hmmmed”…this annoyed her more..she pushed him back and he fell straight on the bed…on top of him was nandini…where she said..”Manik r u even listening…what I’m saying..”and looked at him in anger…He said”ofcourse baby…jaan I’m listening to u..”looking into her eeyes…tucking her hair back…busy in romancing with her…
Nandini:”Seriously mani…tho tell me what am I telling u..”she rubbed her chin and asked him making her eyes big and with an evil smile…Then Manik said”wo…wo…wo..u r scaring me baby..”he tried to act as if he is scared..

She garbbed him by his collar..came very close to him …while manik was stunned by her reaction..She said..”Mr.Malhotraa..” in a husky voice..which made him loose his senses and spellbound..she came near him …bit his earlobe…said “ u r dead today..” and ran away from there…grabbed a pillow and started beating him with that…after sometime he pulled her…she fell on him…she was on top of him…protesting him…but all in vain…Then Manik said..”when u r around me,I can see nothing xcept u..all I want is to b with u …in ur arms…”to which she blushed hard….Then he came and said…”when u blush lyk this na…I even love u more..”he kissed her forehead..and was about to claim her lips…when she pushed him and said…don’t try to act smart with me…this is ur punishment..u can’t touch or kiss me for 2 days…He made a puppy face and stood in shock…”nandini…yaar…you can’t do this to me…plz…”.She replied..”Sorry Mr.malhotra…u called for this….i can’t help…”and next time u start behaving against my words nah.. you will never able to listen to my voice and you will be craving for it..”

So,dome with the update…Hope u enjoyed it…

Credit to: Adhithyan

20 comments

  1. Sanu

    I m silent reader…..I never comment but I follow ur update daily…..ur ff is awesome….bring back nandini soon….

  2. mishti

    omg so touchy…..was that really neyonika…..like seriously…..wish ke ky2 real track mae bhi Yeh dhikneko milta. …..anyways u no right I have no words to describe ur writing………ur just amazing…..seriously …….I think u should think about writing any book or any sort of that things in the future …….I swear u will nail it…….just like u did in this ff…….plzzzzzzzzzz update the next part sooooooooon…..can’t wait any longer

  3. Chelsea

    Even im a silent reader… but ua ff is amazing… maaybe u can update more .. i wait like a crazy person

  4. Lisa

    Thanks dear 4 mentioning my name. N u r just awsome,dont change ur writing style. Its very nice. I have 1ques..is nandini manik s girlfrnd or wife at ur ff ? N when will they meet? Waiting 4 that part 😀

  5. kavya

    Don’t change ur writing style…….
    Ur concept is just amazing yar…..
    Keep going……
    Love manan always……

  6. Megh

    Thnk u all silent readers for taking time and commenting.U made my day.Now I can’t update 2 or 3 as I’m in hospital..but later I promise I will

    • priya

      wat happened………. y r u in hospital……….sab teek tho hai na……………may god bless u with good health and happiness…………….

      • Megh

        Ya as I already said I met with an accident,underwent a surgery for spine and that’s the reason y I was unable to update last week. My hand is paining 2 days back so these two days updates r given by adhithyan…now that its a bit better ..it will be typed by me 2 day

  7. priya

    omg!! am really unaware of this incident…….. sorry to ask again…. get well soon………. have some healthy food ……..take fruit juices and liquids like coconut water which will give u strength to recover ………. and don’t take stress on ur hand to make us happy…… we will be more happy when u r really happy and healthy………… take care of ur health ………. wer r u from ? wat r u studying or doing? sorry recently I started reading ur ffs…….I haven’t read the starting ones……… so that’s y am asking again………. no need to ans in hurry ……….. i will be happy if u reply lately………..take care…….

    • Megh

      Oh priya thanks for ur concern dear….I’m bored in the hospital.. So not knowing wat to do..I’m writing..but my hand gsve mr a prob..that:s it.I’m from andhra but settled in tamilnadu from long time.I:m working as a software engineer in google..ya I’ ll take care..once again thanks a lot for ur concern.U can go through the starting ones in page 6 or 7 to understand clearly…

  8. Tanushree

    UR HEALTH IS MORE IMPORTANT THAN WRITING THIS FF. PLS TAKE REST AND GET WELL SOON. WE CAN AND WILL WAIT.

  9. Roma

    Awesome Wowwww, superb episode, manik’s condition is so miserable. …can’t see him like this broken n shattered… the fb was really cuteeeee. ..enjoyed it a lotttttttttt….keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

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