Manan- Meri aashiqui (Episode 44)

Hey ppl,sorry all..Its been really a long time back since I updated..sorry once again…I met wth an accident ..thoda sa major…nd so it took tym to recover…ignore typos..suggestions r welcum..criticsm accepted..luv u all…bye..
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recap:nandu nd manik go to their respective places pretending a fight after marriage(for details go nd read in pg-7 epi 43)

Malhotra mansion:
Its been 3 months since ayush is collecting proofs against raghav nd planning a lot to xpose him…nd it is a painful nd long seperation fr our lovebirds to b away frm each other..
Its evng..manik is sleeping on his bed unusually holding a pillow tightly in his embrace…just then he felt sumthng wet on his cheeks…he opened his eyes..nd found NANDINI..sitting beside him crying badly..her eyes are blood red as if she was crying since long hours..he instntly sat back
manik:nanni..tum yahan..nd y r u cryng?”he freaked out..she didnt answer but hugged him as tight as she can nd he is taken aback..In afnun only he spoke wth her nd both slept talkng to each other then wat happened suddenly to her nd how come she landed in his place nd y is she crying so badly..so many ques r running in his mind..

he is caressing her back to make her calm but nothng is pacifyng her..he is calling her name again nd again bt she isnt responding…soon he felt her grip loosening…so he broke the hug..she is in a semi conscious state
manik:nandu..wat happened to u?”he is getting panicked when she is unable to open her eyes properly..
nandini:i luv u manik…nd i will always luv u …dont take me wrong…dont b mad at me”she said holding his cheek lying lifelessly in his arms..he is stunned by her words…
manik:nandini..y r u talking such words?”his eyes r teary ..she gave him a weak smile
nandini:nandini always loves u mani..yaad rakhna…she will always be in u nd wth u…”wthn this statement she closed her eyes nd took her LAST BREATH..
Manik is shocked to hell..till afnun she is wth hm…talking wth hm…then wat happened in 4 hours..that she came to malhotra mansion ..cried badly in hs arms nd the most shocking part is..SHE TOOK LAST BREATH IN HIS EMBRACE..

maniik:nanni….dont..its not funny o.k…open ur eyes..princess..baby…pls..”he is continuosuly patting her cheeks but she lay lifeless in his arms..”u cant do this to me nanni…pls….”he cried badly taking her in a tight hug but she was DEAD..
manik:nandini……………”he shouted taking her in his arms wth raising his head nd closed eyes..
he opened his eyes..tears r brimming down frm them..he lukd downwards to her…but..THERE IS NO NANDINI….his eyes roamed all over the room..there is no trace of her
Now he realised its a NIGHTMARE…(HAHA…U WANNA KILL ME RYT…O.K NO PROBS…U CAN…BUT I MADE U TENSE ND CRY RIGHT …CHOLLY)
a biggest nightmare of his..at one point he felt it so real that he thought it was REAL…
manik:is it a dream?no it was a nightmare..”he calmed himself down ..he is sitting on his bed badly in sweat..he picked up his mobile nd wthout any second thought he dialed her number…its ringing but she didnt pick up..
manik:y is she not responding”his worries had no boundaries now..frst the nightmare nd now she is not picking the calls up..

HE moved out frm his bed..its only 5 min but she isnt receivng..but in these 5 min..he had dialed 200 tyms nearly wthout any break…his anxiety only increasing by every passing sec
manik:nandu..pick up na pls..”he is pleading while on phone but no answer
manik:pls bas…nandini safe ho”he prayed silently in his mind thinking only about her..
After 15 long min she answered his call
nandu:hello”but b4 she could utter anythng..he showered wth loads of ques on her
manik:where were u nd y the hell u werent liftng..nd how many tyms i said u to keep the mobile always wth u…where were u nd do u know frm how long i was tryng”he stopped abruptly when he found silence on other side nd again strtd panickng
manik:hello nandu…u there na..nanni…y r nt u speaking anythng”he called in a worried tone
nandu:agar aap kuch bolne de to kuch bolu na”(if u give me a chance only i can speak nah”she said in a slow soft voice..
her peaceful voice actually touched his panicked soul nd eased all the pain..he suffered in a 15 min..he xhale a deep breath wth his eyes shut..
She realised sumthing is bothering him..
nandini:manik wat happened”she asked in a very loving nd caring manner …hearing her caring tone..he took a sigh of relief and sat back on his bed..
manik:i wanna hug u…”his svoice depicting his helplessness..created inside him..how badly he wanted to see her..hug her..nd make himself believe..tht HIS NANDINI..is fine..prfctly okay..
nandini:manik…wats the matter..u r fyn ryt?”now its her tym to get worried..she nevr had ever heard his helpless voice..then wat happened to him now…
manik:hmmm”he has no words left or may be no power left..now her worries crossed all the limits..but then sumthng clicked in her mind..
nandu:baby”her voice is so loving ..so angelic that he just closed his eyes to listen to that melodious voice..
nandu continued”open ur laptop now…”she ordered him nd he knows wat she wants nd even he wants the same..both wanna see each other..
so he opened his laptop nd made a video call..nd just when her pic appeared in fornt of him..he felt the biggest relief..she is in her room wearing a dark grey sleeveless top nd black trousers..her hairs tied in a plait nd she is lukng lyk an angel frm heaven
dont know since how much tym he is admiring her beautiful face or must be..tryng to cnvince himself that HIS NANDU…is safe nd sound

nandu:y my hubby is upset?”she said holding her chin in her hand
manik smiled after listening to the hubby word nd said”bcoz ur hubby is missing his wifey”he said int he same tone…
she smiled broadly after witnessing his smiling face wch gave peace too her heart nd soul
nandu:manik…did anythng happen”she asked as she knows well that sumthng is definitely wrong with him ..
manik is only lukng into her angelic face trying to calm the storm inside in him …her peaceful face is giving him solace but that NIGHTMARE ..is hunting him badly again nd again..
nandini:mannn…”b4 she could say anythng more..she heard his melodious voice..
Mein Yahaan Tu Wahan, Zindagi Hai Kahaan…
Tu Hi Tu Hai Sanam Dekhta Hun Jahan.
Neind Aati Nahi, Yaad Jaati Nahi…
Bin Tere Ab Jeeya Jaye Na!
Mein Yahaan Tu Wahan Zindagi Hai Kahaan
(he strtd singing..in his melodious voice carrying pain but immense luv in his voice …he is singing staring at her nd she just gave a weak smile to him…)
nandini:”manik!im here only nd i will always be wth u”she said to give him some peace of mind but her last line brought him back to that worst nightmare..
manik:pls… dont speak lyk that”he hold the laptop tightly nd said lukng at her in her eyes..
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Waqt Jaise Teher Gaya Hai Yahi, Har Taraf Ek Ajab Udasi Hai.
Bekarari Ka Aaesa Aalam Hai, Jism Tanhaa Hai, Ruh Pyaasi Hai.
(he said the lines..caressing the screen of his laptop nd she closed her eyes as she felt his hands on her face nd he lukd at her lovingly ..)

Teri surat ab ek pal kyu nazar se hat ti nahi
Raat din toh kat jate hai, umra tanhaa kat ti nahi
(Chaha ke bhi na kuch keh saku tujhse main) (repeat 2 times)
Dard kaise karu main bayaan
Main yahaan, tu wahan, zindagi hai kahaan
(he strt singing..closing his eyes nd only her face ..flashes in front of him..she opened her eyes nd found his eyes closed ..he is actually recalling that nightmare..but he cant tell her that but she knows he isnt fyn)

Jab kahin bhi aahat hui, yuh laga ke tu aagayaa
Khushboo ke jhoke ki tarah meri saanse mehka gaya
(Ek woh daur tha, hum sada paas the) (repeat 2 times)
Ab to hai faasle darmiyaan
Main yahaan tu wahaan, zindagi hai kahaan
(she strt singing nd he opened his eeys just after listening her voice..both of them recalled how they again met in shimla after 2 nd half years…how evrythng strtd getting fyn in their lives..they r there fr one another…but soon an evil eye fell on them to make them apart frm each other …frm their ppure relation wthout their consent..he heard her weeps nd she ended the song)
manik:nandu..nahi princess…im there ryt..ur manik…v will agin b 2gthr nd this tym…its FOREVER…ITS MANIK’S PROMISE..”just when she heard last line she chuckled btween her tears..

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i know it is crap nd i didnt match upto ur xpectations but this is all i could manage to think nd write here in the hospi….sorry…pls pls pls do comment nd voice ur opinions asa im taking lots of effort writing this…sorry if anyone feel bad…silent readers do comment……nd thanks a lot my lovely readers for staying so patient nd stcking around to my ff….luv u all….bahut jyada hogaya na….chuck..bye

Credit to: Prahathika krishnan(Praha)

6 comments

  1. Tash

    This update in the bignning gave a a mini heart attack…. Uffff….
    I was lyk oh my god! What ???
    To thank god it was his nightmare…n stop calling it a crap…
    Otherwise katti 😟😤😤😜

  2. Mahi13

    |Registered Member

    Di ek to u r in hospital but still u r giving updates n again u say its a crap. Very very unfair X-( X-(
    The update wasn’t a crap. So don’t call it a crap n plzzzzzzzzzzz take care of urself plz. Love u :-*

  3. priya

    I thought it must be a nightmare otherwise how could praha separate manan and make us cry……….. praha sindhu and tash r right don’t call it crap………… take care ……………..

  4. kavya

    Awwww dii……APKA MUJHE MARNE KA PLAN H…..

    seriously dii…..aise shocking update dooge naa…..tb too pakka mujhe heart attack pakka h…….aj too mere luck acha tha….bach gyi…..

    Okk okk……
    Joke apart…..

    Update as usual apki trah mind blowing tha…..

    Eagerly waiting for next part…..

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