Manan- Meri aashiqui (Episode 36)

The next update is here..Ignore typos…Criticsm accepted…Suggestions r welcum…Luv u all.T.C.Bye..
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Next minute,Nandu started remembering the flashback incidents….
(FLASBACK AN HOUR B4):
andini is in the shop….checking her dress of evng talking to the shopkeeper..
Just then she heard a sound …a sound which is very familiar to her…a sound which causes her to shiver …
“Twinkle twinkle little star…how I wonder at u r?”she ehard this poem….somebody is singing it…it is the same voice she used to hear in the asylum…
She is terrified..she strtd looking all around but didnt find anyone..sh e is scared..she left her dress and ran out from there…boutique manager called her name but she ran out wthout listening nd came 2wrds the car…nd within a sec she sat inside nd driver took her back to the mansion…
She was horrified till now..she is breathng heavily..she ran inside the mansion lyk a maniac nd when reached home she was actually looking back but when manik held her ,she was startled as she is already scared to hell..
(Flashback done)
nandini:I want to tell u manik….but not now..warna evrythng will b messed up ..nd i cant see u in tension..”she said to herself nd sat down on the bed and soom drifteed to sleep
LiVING AREA:
Its time for function..Manik is already present there wearing a royal blue embroided kurta with black pajama looking as dashing as always nd nandini arrived…she is wearing a beautiful red frock…with golden embroidery on it…her hairs are left curled at the down…she is looking breathtaking…she is coming downstairs gave an impression like some angel is descending from heaven….
manik:i know nandu…sumthing is bothering u..but i wont let any evil eye fall on u”he thought to himself lukng at her..
She is coming down with all the girls..
nandu:i know manu…u have sensed my inner turmoil but i wont let any evil eye fall on our pure luv…”she thought to herself looking at him..HE strtd walking towards him..she came downwards….light is dim..music strtd palying in the background…both r lukng in each other’s eyes

Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan
(he sang lukng deep into her eyes making a gesture with hands to luk upwards nd strts circling around her)

Jo Dhup Nikli Chaya Ban Jaaunga
Jo Ho Tu Akeli Saaya Ban Jaaunga
Jo Uljhan Mein Ho Mann Main Behlaaunga
(he stood beside her and with hands made a shed on her hand lyk protecting her…she smiled nd then he came infront of her nd raised her chin wth his index finger nd then slightly pinched her nose …she smiled broadly nd he smiled more)
Tum Aa Gaye Ho Toh Jeena Aaya Hain
Khushiya Ka Tumne Yeh Jaal Bichaya Hain
Khoya Hain Khudko Yah Sab Kutch Paaya Hain
(she strtd singing while cupping his face in both her hands…she placed her hand on his heart nd sang lukng deep into his eyes)
Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan
(he sang while wiping off her tears which fell down frm her cheeks nd gestured her to smile nd she smiled)
Ho Gam Ke Badal Mujhpe Tham Jaane De
Bechainiyo Ko Mujhse Takrane De
Dukhti Ho Koi Baat Mujhpe Aane De
(he sang coming close to her nd wth eyes asked her to give all her pains to him ,to share wth him..he placed her hand on his heart nd his eyes are pleading to her…she knows that he already sensed her restlessness nd unknowingly tears strtd flowing out of her eyes)
Dil Sochta Tha Ke Koi Apna Ho
Koi Raaz Na Ho Jo Uss Se Rakhna Ho
Aankhein Na Kholu Main Shayad Sapna Ho
(she sang while standing in a corner…a bit far from him closing her eyes nd wished if he being wth her there is a dream then never let that dream to end… nd never let her eyes open…)
Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan
(he sang coming close to her ,hugged her from behind,dropped a kiss on her shoulder…se insatntly turned around,hugged him tight in her arms…that hug is needed..she want to make sure that he is there nd it’s not a dream..her MANIK is wth her..he reciprocated back wth same emotions nd intensity…)
And evry1 applauded for the duo..but they r lost in their world nd not wanting to break the hug…yes…these two r each other’s solace nd salvation..evrythng fr each other..nothing wthout one another…that’s the PURITY of their relation..they define LOVE…
MANAN defines LOVE
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whatever came to my mind I wrote ,if crappy forgive me..do voice ur opinions..luv u all

16 comments

  1. piya

    Amazing Di don’t be silly your creative skills are amazing ,you are doing a great job and again thanku so much for amazing updates.now no words are left to appreciate your writing skills,take care love you loads

  2. Mahi

    It’s too good. Manan surely is a remarkable example of love. As I said before u truly make Manan more magical. When I read this ff I never feel like I’m reading it I feel like I’m watching it. U describe it so well just like Meghna di. All seems to be real. U r too good. Keep going n take care.:-)

    • Praha

      |Author

      tq mahi nd ya ofcourse fr me manan nd my sister nd brother in law are true xamples of luv…Tq fr u feeling lyk watching it while reading its ur luv towards manan whch makes u feel so..luv u too

  3. Tash

    Omg.. n what a story… jst cant write anything in the comment box coz i do not have words to describe what u wrote… n the song which u chose was soooooooo much suiting the situation… what a story line.. while i was reading i instantly put the song n i was reading it while listening the song n the emotions was sooooooooo good.. at the end i had tears forming in my eyes.. jst sooooooo good
    I know i m always late to comment so u never read my comment so hopefull this tym u read it… love ur story. Both the ffs of ur r soooo good. U r n amazing writer…

    • Tash

      Sorry for writing that u don’t read my comments.. Actually when I wrote this comment I didn’t see that u have already read my comments n so thought that u haven’t.. But after writing the comment I saw the privious episodes n then saw that u have read all n commented on my comment also… Sorry for writing that line “I know I am always late to comment so u never read my comment”.. I

      • Praha

        |Author

        tq for ur compliment nd I commented on each nd every comment of urs..nd tq fr praising my song selection…luv u

    • Praha

      |Author

      if u have time ,do look it out from previous chapters fr better understanding.hope u’ll lyk it nd ya ur ghost series is gud nd hope u’ll post it quickly..waiting fr it

  4. Sindhu_Varma

    |Registered Member

    Superb awesome marvellous anything else left ? I love u but not more than Megha di ? Chalo update the next part fast I am waiting ?

    • Praha

      |Author

      tq sindhu nd ya Im after my sis only..She is just the best nd irreplacable…k next update I’lll give by evng

  5. kavya.

    Awwww…….kya bolo me…..sb ne sb too bol hi diya h…..
    U r such an amazing writer yar…..
    Main apki bhut badhi wali fan ban gyi hoo……
    Seriously……apke liye perfect words nhi milte h kitni bar Bolne ke liye……

    Thank u for everything……

    Keep going…..
    Keep entertaining……

    • Praha

      |Author

      awwww …kavya..tq fr all ur lovely compliments dear….utna perfect nahi hai mei ….but seriously tq..luv u ..T.C

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