Manan- Meri aashiqui (Episode 35)

Hey ppl,the next part is here..Ignore typos..Criticsm accepted…Suggestions welcum…Luv u all…..T.C…BYE..Sorry if it is not upto the mark….PLS DO LET ME KNOW HOW IT IS…
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Nandini’s room:
The love doves sleeping peacefully in each other’s arms…holding each other tightly in their embrace…a beautiful content smile is playing on their faces..making them shine more than anything…Nandu opened her eyes softly nd looked to teh left side of her..she found THE LOVE OF HER LIFE….Manik….sleeping cuddling her…his one hand is placed on her belly..his face is dipped in the crook of her neck making her shiver as his warm breathfalling on her body…She smiled looking at his baby face….
NANDU(Self thought):the way he sleeps looks like a baby..who will say that this sweet sa baby was once my giant monster…”nd giggled..
She bent a little nd kissed his forehead..he smiled just when her lips touched his skin…She smiled more broadly nd then kissedd her cheeks…he held her tightly by her waist nd then lazily opened his eyes..
Manik:Gud mrng princess….”he smiled nd said while yawning
nandu:gud mrng my monster..”she said while pulling his cheeks…
he then sat down nd rested his head on bed rest nd hold her tightly nd she placed her hand nd hand on his heart…
Manik:so wat my princess is thinking while giggling..”he asked her as he is in deep sleep but still he is able to sense her chuckle…
nandu:i was thinking…you were a monster…but while you are sleeping na…u look like a baby..”she happily explained him nd he lovingly listened her talks..
nandu:manik …but 1 thng is common even today…”she said nd he instntly askd her wat…….she held him more tightly nd said..
nandu:then also u were mine….nd even now u r mine…”she said wth a grin…
He kissed her forehead nd said
manik:i will remain urs only…HAMESHA….”he said like taking a vow….she instntly lukd towards him…resting her chin on his heart nd said HAMESHA,…..”she repeated like taking a vow by herself…both smiling looking at on another
They both hugged each other tight nd start talking about their future plans….
Malhotra Mansion:
Its almost evening…whole day everyone is busy wth the preparations as it is Manan’s sangeet….
Manik is in the living area himself looking after all the preparations..cross checking each nd every thing…Cabir came towards him nd said
cabir:wow…so Mr.Malhotra is taking charge of his own marriage rituals..”he said wth a smile but totally mocking at him
Manik slapped his shoulder nd said”saale…where were u…frm mrng…ha…”he again slapped as cabir wasnt in the mansion the whle day…B4 cabir could answer anything they saw nandu coming frm the main gate..she is lukng tnsd….her face totally pale…she is sweating badly…Manbir are shocked to see her lyk that…they both ran to her….
Manik held her from shoulder when she is lukng back so she got scared by the sudden hold
manik:nandu..relax..its me…wat happened…y r u sweating…”he askd wth worry all over his face..her breath is even uneven..
nandu is still stressed…she lukd down nd strtd grabbing sum words…”woh…..mai….iiii…mean…..wooohh….”she is stammering..not able to talk
manik:accha…acha…relax…come baby..come inside..”he sensed sumthing is weird wth her.
he made her sit down on the sofa nd cabir went inside to get water..while manik is beside her..holding her hand…he is continuously soothing her wth his hand on back
manik:nandu…baby…wat happened..u r fine ryt?”he said in a soft nd low voice
nandu:hannnn…woooh…maiii….maaiii teekhhhh huuuu manik…”she is still stammeringnd this is enough fr manbir to analyse nothing is fyn wth her..
cabir gave water to manik nd manik made her to drink
cabir:baby doll….tu teekh hai na..”he asked
nandu gave a weak smile to him but held manik’s hand tightly nd frm this action both can sense that something is bothering her….but the need of the situation is …she has to be normal frst…
So he hold her hand more tigjtly wth both hands nd gave a smile nd cabir took her into a side hug…giving her an assurance …that both r there fr her…she lukd into manik’s eyes nd after sumtym,she strtd feeling better….cabir is silent knowing that they both r each other’s solace…nd evrythng will b prfct if they r 2gthr..
manik:when have u gone out shona?nd y didnt u tell me?”now he asked her but in a lovable tone as harsh voice nd shooting questions at her may make it worse
nandini:wo..actually….i went to grab my dress…aap preparations se busy ho…so i thought to go alone..am sorry manu..”she replied holding his hand nd lukng down…her voice is very low nd soft…
Manik side hugged her nd then kissed her forehead nd said
manik:its o.k.shona..but next tym..do lemme know…I’ll take u myself”he answered showeering utmost luv on her..SHE moved out of his grip nd look in his eyes while he gave a smile to her
nandu:aren’t u angry on me?that i went out wthout telling..”she asked him lukng in his eyes..HE smiled nd said
manik:nahi…how can i be angry on my sweetheart?”he xplaind wth a beautiful smile on his lips
nandu:do u luv me that much?”she again asked
manik:tumswee thoda kam…coz my sweetheart luvs me more….this luv…this happiness…is all given by U ONLY NANDINI..”he said dcupping her face nd lukd directly in her eyes..
manik:IF NANDINI IS THERE,THEN ONLY MANIK EXISTS…IF NANDINI IS NOT THERE,MANIK ALSO WONT B ALIVE….”
His words made her shiver…she hugged him tight nd he reciprocataed back…while cabir is having tears in his eyes seeing them
nandu after breaking the hug said”NANDINI’S LIFE IS ALWAYS LINKED WITH MANIK…MANIK SE HI NANDINI KA WAJOOD HAI…WITHOUT HIM NANDINI IS NOTHING..”she said holding tears in her eyesnd he wiped them off
manik:Y were u so scared nandu…”he asked her holding her to his heart
Now nandu again started getting into that mode nd said”manu…mai na….when i was coming i saw an accident on the road..that was a ghastly accident..”holding him tight
manik:nandu…its o.k.evrythng will b fyn..”he said rubbing her back to soothe the pain
She got to normal nd stood up nd said”I think i should take a nap…”composing herself
manik:han…come I’ll take u…”he said holding her hand nd strtd walking…But nandu stopped him nd said”its o.k. manu…I’ll go..u relaax..”wth this she went upstairs…while manik is watching her keenly..
Cabir came towards manik nd said putting his hand on his shoulder”HER heart is so pure..she cant even watch accidents..”he ssaid lukng upstairs where nandu is going…manik is also lukng in the same direction..
manik:She is lying…”he siad nd cabir instntly lukd towards him
cabir:how can u say that?”he said in confusion…
manik:i know her from in and out…she is hiding something…i can sense that…”he said lukng upstairs as nandu entered inside her room
cabir:but kya…wat is she hiding?aur y is she not sharing wth us?
manik:i dont know wat iss he hiding but something is there in her heart…that is creating fear inside her…”he said looking at cabir..
cabir:v shud talk to her”he advised
manik:no….v shudn’t nd dont worry…after marriage tmrw..i myself will talk to her..until tmrw’s marriage i dont want any drama…I’m there na…I will handle her..”he said wth a reassuring smile on his face…
NANDU’S ROOM:
Nandu locked her room…came infront of mirror…her eyes r teary..she is feeling guilty
self thought:am sorry manu…am really sorry…I lied to u..but i dont want u to get tensed…evrythng is fyn wth lot of difficulties…but tmrw…tmrw I myself will tell u evrythng…I promise u…Nandini promise..”she said lukng into the mirrir
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So ppl,wat is that nandini is hiding?nd by the tym she tells manik will it b too late?or will it lead any misunderstandings?….wait until next update…Voic eur opinions

14 comments

  1. kavya.

    Pata h dii….apki story ka sabse special part h ye suspence…….

    Nd isliye ye story sb se unique nd mind blowing h……

    Thanks dii for such an special manan ff……
    I really don’t know ki aage kya hua…..
    But itna confirm h…..joo bhi hoga……woo bhut entertaining hoga……

    Keep going dii……

    All the very best for ur both ff…..
    Nd
    Stay happy……

    • kavya.

      Nd haa…..congrats for completing 35 episodes……

      Nd hope u don’t mind if I comments in Hindi….

      Love u loads…..

      • Praha

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        tq so much kavya…luv u also loads…ha nd I dont mind at all if u comment in hindi nd I think u would have noticed I write sentences in hindi in ff

  2. Jasi

    Its really superb yaar plz don’t kill us with so many suspense i can’t bear it yaar really i m so existed waiting for next update i think nandhu might seen that ragav and that unknown person from the family together may be that be the reason for her fear and plz don’t separate manan again yaar plz update next episode sooooon lots of love:*:*:*:*:*:*:*:*:*:*<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

  3. Mahi

    Nice epi. I hope manan won’t be separated. These suspense make ur ff sooooooooooooo interesting. I realy love ur ff a looooooooot. Update soon. : )

  4. Tashs

    Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god!………. What an episode… Let me tell u If u don’t know me u r one of the best manan Df writers……… Thanks sooooooo much for th ff n aapka jo dusra wala ff hai New one vo bhe mind blowing hai.. Thanks for the ff… Honestly speaking aaj jada Nahi bolungi kyunki aapke ff love define Karne ke liye mere pass words Nahi hai…. I have so much shortage of words… Lovely ff….

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