Manan- Meri aashiqui (Episode 34)

Hey ppl..Thnks fr ur support nd I’m still in dilemma whether to write a new ff or not coz I’m not sure whether all r interested to read it…….Ignore typos…Suggestions welcome…Criticsm accepted..Luv u all….Take care..bye…
coming to the story…

NANDINI’S ROOM:
Just when she took a step towards the door…her eyes popped out of horror…she is shocked..her chunri fell down frm her hand..nd there HE IS…MANIK MALHOTRA…..(I know…i know….u all will kill me….sorry…tamatar nd chappal accepted)..just when she is about to open the door…he pushed it from other side nd she got scared wth the sudden pull nd raghav instantly hid behind the curtains b4 manik can spot him..manik entered inside the room nd closed the door
nandu:manu….pagal ho gaya kya….u scared me…”she retorted when he reached her
manik:arey..i just came to check..light suddenly chali gayi..thought u’ll b afraid nd came to check on u…”he said in a genuine tone..picked up the chunri..”accha baba…i’m sorry..”wth this he hugged her nd both stayed lyk that fr sumtym
raghav(self thought):wow…nice….i would kill these 2 luv birds today nd wo b ek saath..hahahaha.”said wth an evil smirk nd strtd moving 2wrds them…while manan’s eyes are closed nd he is about to stab manik’s back ..then the door immediately opened..nd manan stand straight….raghav again hid behind the curtain nd this time it is ABHIMANYU..
Abhi entered inside the room nd took a sigh of relief after finding manan safe nd sound but still tension is evident on his face..which is not gone unnoticed by manan

manik:abhi …u o.k na?kya hua..”he asked lukng 2wrds him still holding nandu’s hand
abhi:abb…wo light is not there ryt…so i thought..where have u gone..bas isiliye..”he tried to cover up..but nandu found it fishy
nandu:bhai….are u sure?kya hua…”she asked lukng at him in confusion
abhi:han..han..baby doll…ab chalo…”he immediately took both of them wth him
raghav just came out when they left nd thought”freak….yeh y should this abhimanyu should also have come now only?hey deva…i missed the golden oppurtunity..i wud have killed them..”he is so frustrated…he turned around..nd their is again a knock on the door
voice:nd i could have killed u…..
raghav is shocked to find whose voice it is..
The person came 2wrds raghav nd gave a tight slap on his face while raghav is more shocked
voice:how dare u enter here..wthout letting me know..”the voice is so harsh
raghav:how dare u slap me..”even he is in anger now
voice:yeh kaho maine sirf thapad mara hai…agar if manik sees u ,he could have killed u..”the person shouted but making sure it doesnt reach outside
raghav:usse pehle i’ll kill them both..”he said angrily
voice:raghav…r u frgtng sumthing…..our goal is not to kill them…but make both of them crave fr each other…nd that will be our revenge..”
raghav:but…”he tried to say sumthng..but the person cut him in btween nd made him go out of the window

After sumtym,the person met raghav outside the mansion behind bushes..
raghav:i want to kill that nandini first..”he said wth his gritted teeth
voice:pagal mat bano…already security is too tight..aur u escaped out of jail..dont frgt..last tym…manik didnt kill u bcoz of nandini’s insistence….but this tym he will surely kill u..”the person explained him fuming in anger…
raghav:i dont care..agar if i should die..tab bhi…i will destroy them both..i lied that day…ki bcoz of manik’s father my father committd suicide.jhooth thi wo story…”he spilled the beans in anger filled in his eyes
voice:i know…woh jhooth..tha..but manik doesnt know…mayb…it is safe fr u to go underground fr sumtym now….just do as i say”the person adviced him
raghav:aur by that tym manik will marry nanadini…”he retorted back
voice:NAHI HOGI..I WONT LET THAT HAPPEN..”the person shouted
raghav:fine ..am gng..but if i feel..that u r not keeping up ur words..mai khud ke aake un dono ko maar dunga..”he said nd walked off
After that raghav left wearing a turban nd mustache

voice:YEH ..THIS SHADHI TO WILL HAPPEN RAGHAV….IT IS VERY IMPRTNT NOW…I HAVE TO KEEP U FAR FRM THEM….ATLEAST TILL MARRIAGE…USKE BAAD…WE WILL HAVE OUR REVENGE..”tHE person murmured nd went back to the mansion..
So yes,ppl Harshad is ryt..some1 who is very near to manik is trying to harm both of them
AUTHOR’S NOTE:

(O.k so ppl…guess who that person may b….is he/she actually helping raghav or pretending or think..think….name that person in ur comments…the nearest guess will be dedicated the next update to them nd if i write my next ff prologue will b dedicated to them)
END OF AUHOR’S NOTE

MALHOTRA MANSION:
After sumtym,manik nd nandu are sitting…nyo came frwrd,placed chunri on nandini’s head wth a smile…while manan are so happy ..nd fab-4 along wth navbhi r equally happy but still tension persisting on their faces as abhi told them about raghav being out of jail..they r tnsd but they took a vow that they wont let anythng happen to manan this tym..
Oblivious of all the negativity surrounding manan…they r busy in their own world..manik held nandu’s hands nd entwined their fingers….nd touched her head wth his head sideways…both r smiling continuously..
Their happiness is easily visisble in the contented smiles on their faces….Their LOVE…
After blessing the couple,all guests left nd now there is only fab-4…manan..navbhi..
manik is sitting on the floor.(Imagine…THE MANIK MALHOTRA …ON FLOOR…O.M.G……This itself shows how much nandini chngd him fe gud)….while nandini is on the couch giving massage to manik which he is enjoying keeping his head in her lap while evry1 is watching the duo wth utmost affection
cabir:i wont let raghav ruin their happiness..2 years baad yeh dono r very happy..i will kill him if he tried to harm them..”he said to navya while lukng at manan..who r sitting infront of them
navya held his arms,placed her head on his shoulder nd said”we all r there na..nothing will happen..”.She assured him..while cabir gave a kiss on her forehead nd held her hand
On the other hand,Abhi is very tensed…mukti is sitting beside him..on the other sofa which is placed infront of manan ,left to Cavya
Mukti held his hand nd said:”abhi…don worry..v wont let anythng happen..”she tried to ease sum of his worry..he just gave a weak smile to her..both of them strtd lukng at manan who are totally in their own world oblivious of their frnds gaze’s on them…manik is rubbing his nose in nandini’s lap..nd she is slapping hi every now nd then..but he being he..sumtym’s playing wth her payal aur sumtym’s just kissing on her thigh above the fabric making her blush…
Abhi:see them both mukti…kitne khush hai…i wonder ..y raghav wants to harm them…they r not 2gthr wth each other for 2 years..they were lifeless bodies in those 2 years..wasnt it enough…my babydoll…suffered so much nd manik ..he tho almost died…”he said sobbing into mukti’s shoulder
mukti:v cant even imagine wat these both went through…but that was enough…now v wont let raghav to come in between them…”she said wth a determined voice nd he quickly kissed her forehead..nd both of them hugged them sideways
On the other hand,
dhruv nd aliya are siiting on a sofa..holding hands to the rytside of cavya looking at manan
aliya:this tym…v will shine fr them…v wont let them fall apart..”she said while clutching his hand tightly
dhruv:hum unhe kuch nahi hone denge..”he lukd towards manan smiling face nd side
hugged aliya

(Author’s note:
U may think this as bullshit or crap to show all this cavya,muknhi nd dhrulya feelings…but i personally wanna show their friendly bond nd how much they care fr each other…kyy isnt just about luv…it is also about enormous amount of friendship ryt?…sorry if it is crappy fr u)
After sumtym,all are feeling sleepy bcoz of tiredness of the function as well as the tension..but u know na our manan nevr get tired..that too in each other’s arms…NO WAY….
manik:u need some help?”he saw her face..she is getting irritated with the attire now..
nandini:ya…this saree na…its irritating me a lot..”she said lukng at the saree…he is still sitting on the floor putting his hands in her lap…manik stood up,sat beside her nd said”so…u want me to get rid of the saree ah..”wth a smirk..nd this tym she undrstood the hidden meaning of his talks
nandini:Mr.Malhotra….dnt get too xcited…i will myself go nd chnge..”she said wth a smile nd stood up but b4 she cud take a step frwrd he picked her up in his arms
nandini:manu…wat r u dng….sab hai yahan….atleast kuch tho sharam karo…”she said glaring at him
but b4 manik cud say anything…cabir is giggling nd lukng at them said”nandu…behna….wth whom u r talking about sharam…use sharam ka sa word bhi pata nahi…”‘he said wth an evil smirk
navya:sharam mein sha will b there not sa…u wont spell it is a saram…”she corrected him while all burst into laughter
cabir:here comes….our 40’s ki madhubala…”‘she glared at him..while he also strtd laughing..
manik who is still holding nandu said:ö.k guys…enough…she is not so thin…i’ll leave inside now…”he said making a face as if he is cararying a mountain…nandini slapped on his shoulder nd said
nandini:u mean am fat….fine…i didnt ask u to lift me up…put me down now….”she protested in his arms
manik:arey princess….i was just joking…acha chalo…bye toh bolo sabko…”he explained wth a naught smirk..
They both bid gudnyt to all others nd went to nandu’s room
cabir:we cant leave them alone..”he said worriedly
navya:woh…they r not alone cabir…their LOVE BOND…is wth them..Until when they r 2gthr na…no one can harm them…”she xplained putting her hand on his shoulder

NANDINI’S ROOM:
manik made hr stand on the floor nd closed the door…she came 2wrds the miiror nd strtd removing her bangles while he strtd walking towrds her..
she is removing her bangles when he came,held her wrist
manik:ï love to remove it…”he said wth a smile nd she also smiled back…he strtd removing her jewellery one by one…nd said”u luk so beautiful in red…”while removing her earings nd kissed her ears
nandini:nd u look handsome….my prince….”she said wth a smile..as he removed her mang tika nd he smiled back in return…he bent down nd strtd removing the folds of her saree..just when his hands touched her stomach…she placed her hand on his nd said”i can do that manik..”she said as his mere touch created havoc inside her
manik:but i wud luv to do it…”he said nd removed her hand from his….kissed her belly…she bit her lower lip nd closwed the eyes..
He stood up…cupped her face nd touched her lips wth his…just when their lips came in contact..there goes a shiver down in their bodies creating havoc inside them..he is sucking,biting her lips…she is caressing his hairs..he is busy in exploring her mouth nd his hands are on her shoulder nd in a swift moment he removed her saree nd wthout breaking the kiss….picked her up in his arms..nd made her lay on the bed…
He now broke the kiss..but strtd kissing her neck sideways…he knows she is tired already so he just pecked her forehead once again nd then lay beside her nd tuk her into his embrace..she lukd at him
Then he said”i know…wat u must b thinking…i so want u now…but ryt now..u need rest…so sleep lyk a gud grl”‘she smiled at his answr,snuggled closer into his arms..nd both drifted to sleep

Credit to: Prahathika Krishnan

24 comments

  1. Kyy

    Superrrrrrrrrr

    Amazingggggggggg

    Awesomeness

    And fantastic???????

    Update……………..

    MANAN scenes were awesome I loved it to the core………..
    Waiting eagerly for the next update………..

  2. Kaainaat

    Nyonika is the jerk I will be waiting for another superb episode and thnxx for this

  3. piya

    I think might be manik’s mom Is the other person helping ragav it’s just a guess and update is amazing keep going

  4. kavya.

    I think nyonika is helping this raghav………

    But…..update is as usual incredible………

    No words for express my happiness……
    Love u loads yar…..

  5. mishti

    sooooooooooo cuuuuttttteeee????????????????so emotional…. no words to describe that….???????

  6. Ashi

    You are right kyy is a show of friendship….love is after that…which make love more strong.
    Personally i love each pair in kyy madly especially manan and cavya

  7. sayali

    I also think manik’s mom is behind everything… waiting for next episode… plz update ASAP…

  8. Sindhu

    Awesome wala update u r just like Megha di ? But coming to the other villain u will say as the story goes on Coz I am a lazy bum nd my brain won’t let me use it ? Take care

  9. Tanushree

    may be its nyonika.. the update was superb. n dnt think ur being foolish in showing other couples feelings. their emotions are also important for manan. this what friendship is for. pls portray their emotions side by side

  10. Anandi

    No…it’s not nyonika…I think Cabir is behind this..but he must be protecting manan from Raghav by making him blv that he doesn’t want manan together..yes yes…it is Cabirs masterplan..

    :p

  11. Mahi

    The update was SUPERB…………………..
    AMAZING………………………………………….
    MINDBLOWING………………………………..
    OUTSTANDING ………………………………..
    FANTASTIC ………………………………………
    GREAT………………………………………………
    U r doing really well. I hardly find any difference between the writing style of purna di, megh di nd ur’s . I can’t find any words well enough to say how amazing was the manan scene. Manan have their own magic nd u’ve made it more magical. I’m also excited about ur new ff. update soon. Take care of urself.

  12. Tash

    I don’t have any guesses to who that villain is n honestly speaking I really don’t wanna think also coz I don’t want nyonika to be evil as I like her… She was in big boss n she was really good thats y…. Hopefully it’s not nyonika… Any ways coming to the update… It was sooooooooooo good n romantic.. Equally emotional to see that they suffered 2 years n finally r back together but still someone is at the back of them…. Sadness, love,care… All in one.. It was just sooooooo good update.. N we all will support u.. Plz write a new ff too…

  13. Praha

    |Registered Member

    Hi,ppl…This is my new ff about our own Manan….
    Prologue:
    IT WAS A MISTAKE….YOU’RE A MISTAKE”…he yelled putting more pressure on to my wrists ….His voice echoing throughout the large room as he gripped my wrists Immediately a gasp of pain escape my lips…nd my tears welled up…
    .”Manik pls stop….” I whispered… softly
    His dark green eyes staring at mine…..Anger lacing through them..
    No one had ever dared raising their voice against the President of THE WARRIORS…,let alone answer him back,as he slowly leaned in,his face inches away from mine…
    I dont want u…I didnt want u..”he yelled glaring at me…as I gasped tears forming in my eyes…nd I tried my best not allowing them to fall
    It should not be such a shock hearing those words but y did it hurt so much?

    “Manik i swear i didnt please…”I started when suddenly he roared punching the nearest
    thing possible which so happened to be a wall which I am standing against
    “Leave NANDINI….Now…”

    …………………….
    Nandini Murthy is the kindest soul you’ll come across…her happy spirit always made every one smile and her dazzling grin melted everyone’s heart.She is pure in every way nd saw the happiness in the tiniest things..
    But happiness can only be lasted so long when her father NandKishore Murthy suddenly announces her marriage to none other than Dhruv Malhotra,the biggest player to walk on the face of the earth…
    Swallowing her pride,she agrees to this arranged marriage just to have Dhruv refuse last minute nd elope wth his childhood sweetheart..
    With hundreds of ppl at the reception,Nandini is asked to marry a man she had never even dreamed of..
    A cold heartless man that sucked the life out of evryone…
    A man that made her tremble wth fear…
    A monster of a man..
    The most hated yet respected criminal
    Manik Malhotra….
    ………………………………
    He was addicted….She was his drug…
    He WAS darkness…..She was his light..
    He was a killer…She was his prey…
    ……………………………………..
    Done wth the prologue..Other characters will be later introduced in the story…during its proceedings…Nd do let me know whether it is gud nd if u want to let me continue….pls do lemme know…ignore typos…Criticsm accepted….Suggestions welcum..Luv u all..Bye
    ……….For all my dear readers I have posted the prologue here itself…LATER i ll post it normally also….ppl who have seen this comment do tell me how the prologue is nd whether u want me to continue or not……
    Prahathika Krishnan

  14. Mahi

    Wow!!!!! The prologue is just amazing. The plot is totally a different One. Can’t wait to read the first episode. Plz update soon plz.

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