Manan- Meri aashiqui (Episode 33)

Hola ppl…Hi im back….I couldnt update all these days as our family went to kasi to mix the asthis of meghna di in ganga…sorry ffr late
MALHOTRA MANSION:
(MEHENDI UPDATE)
Manik came out with boys..he is lukng dashng in blood red embroided kurta…with black indo-western pajama…nd his mesmerising smile enhacing his charm..he came towards nyonika nd chachi…he bent down to touch both their feet respectively…nd the ladies blessed him..he hugged them 2gthr nd stood straight..Suddenly,he felt his heart beat rising…a soft cold wind touched his face..he smiled nd turned instntly..nd yes…he had felt HER PRESENCE…nd there SHE IS….coming wth grls….looking ethereal in blood redd saree with beautiful golden border..her long hairs are open nd curled a little..a beautiful maang tika is placed on her forehead..her kajal filled eyes making her breath taking..her rosy red
lips making him crazy…she is shining more than a star..nd she is wearing beautiful star locket with Manan engraved on it..she is walking towards him…with a mesmerising smile on her face..his eyes are not even moving from her…not even for a sec…..He started walking towards her in a daze..nd she stood still in her path as he is approaching her making her heart beat rising…soon he is very near to her…he forwarded his hand to her and with eyes asked her to hold it..she instantly held his hand nd both strtd walking towards the living area..Cabir whistled loudly nd evry single prson there strtd clapping for the amazing couple..

Soon they both reached the middle of living area nd nyo made them sit 2gthr..she sat down to his ryt nd manik’s eyes r glued to nandu..while she is blushing feeling his gaze on her making her cheeks crimson red
nyo:i think we shud strt the mehendi ceremony..”she said to chachi
cabir:ab…not so soon..functions wthout music are so pheeka…”he said making a face
navya:i secnd him”she came nd patted his shoulder
cabir:kya baat hai…aaj madhubala is in mood..”he said lukng at her..to which she blushed nd manan smiled
mukti:so wat r v waiting for?”she said wth enthusiasm
ayush:well…i wanna say sumthng…
so evry1 lukd at ayush nd he cntinued”i’m new here..till now i just heard of bhayya nd bhabhi’s luvstory nd aaj i want bhayya to xpress …wat he feel fr her”he said grinning at manan..while our manan started lukng at each other with a smile nd full of luv
cabir:i agree…so manik..mera sher…come on..”he said wth great enthusiasm..
Manik bent down a little towards nandu nd said”can i?”‘..the way he aasked permission..she goes all aww….she wth a smile blinked her eyes..nd evry1 strtd clapping when manik stood up….all others are sitting luk grls on left nd boys right…while nandu sitting in frnt of him…lights are dim…nd a white spot light first falls on him nd his chrming face lits up..nd next moment her place is brightened by a spot light….nandu saw him nd felt lyk a diamond shining to its fullest…he winked at her nd shse strtd blushing…He strtd singing
HUM TERA BIN AB REH NAHI SAKTE…
TERE BINA KYA WAJOOD MERA….(2)
(He sang wth utmost luv nd passion in his eyes…she is lukng at him wth equal intensity..he strtd walking towards her..nd both heartbeats are rising..)
TUJHSE JUDA GAR HO JAAYENGE
TOH KHUD SE HI HO JAAYENGE KHUDA…
(he pointed a finger to her…making a face lyk he will die..if she wont be there wth him…then she rushes to him saying not to utter such words..but he just smiled at her…nd soon he is standing in front of her..)
KYUNKI TUM HI HO
AB TUM HI HO
ZINDAGI AB TUM HI HO
CHAIN BHI,MERA DARD BHI
MERI AASHIQUI AB TUM HI HO..
(He bent down a little..forwarded his hand to her….put another on his back(lyk twirling her)..she instntly placed her hand in his nd both do dance wth galore love in their eyes)
TERA MERA RISHTA HAI KAISE
IK PAL DOOR GAWARA NAHI
TERE LIYE HAR ROZ HI JEETE
TUJHKO DIYA MERA WAKT SABHI
KOI LAMHA MERA NA HO TERE BINA
HAR SAANS PE NAAM TERA…
(They both stop in mid nd manik came closer to her..nd wiped tears frm her eyes wch r flowing unknowingly frm her eyes..)
KYUNKI TUM HI HO
AB TUM HI HO
ZINDAGI AB TUM HI HO
CHAIN BHI,MERA DARD BHI
MERI AASHIQUI AB TUM HI HO..
(She smiled in between the tears..ppl say it is actually a best combinations when there r tears in ur eyes nd smile on ur face…nd yes..it is proved here..she is shining wth those tears in her eyes…as those were of joy..she instntly placed her head on his heart..nd he hugged her tight in his arms..)
TUM HI HO..TUM HI HO..
TERE LIYE HI JIYA MAIN
KHUD KO JO YUN DE DIYA HAI
TERI WAFA NE MUJHKO SAMBHALA
SAARE GHAMON KO DIL SE NIKALA
TERE SAATH MERA HAI NASEEB JUDA
TUJHE PAAKE ADHOORA NAA RAHA…
HM……..
(He broke the hug nd bent down while holding her hand..he sat down on his one knee…nd he hold her hand in one of his hands…nd he opened his other hand fully..nd bowed his head down…after placing his hand on his heart..she is in tears..but bent down nd cupped his face….he lukd upwards..)
KYUNKI TUM HI HO
AB TUM HI HO
ZINDAGI AB TUM HI HO
CHAIN BHI,MERA DARD BHI
MERI AASHIQUI AB TUM HI HO..
(he sang lukng into those eyes of her..nd he himself is in tears..she instantly kissed his forehead..nd hugged him tight..he reciprocated back wth equal fervour)
After completing the song,she wiped his tears nd he wiped hers..nd they both smiled..they both stood up..nd evry1 strtd clapping loudly..while manan smiled broadly..Ayush came towards them
ayush:i have never seen such true luv in my entire life..the luv…the bond …u share is incredible..i wish u both stay like this forever..”he said wth a genuine smile nd hugged manik tightly..along wth navni,fab-4 nd abhi….nd except manan all hooted loudly
cabir:our love doves rock….”he came btween manan nd hugged both 2gthr
dhruv:guys..ek group hug banta hai…”he said and all of them including nyo nd chachi hugged
After sumtym,..all are sitting..while nandu is sitting nd designer is applying mehendi on her hand..nd our majnu?……else where just sitting beside her..lukng in her palm..nd instructing designer to put best design fr HIS GIRL…but all pushed him along wth boys as his name has to b hidden nd he shud find it only on their marriage nyt..
Just then Ayush phone rang..he went inside to attend it
Ayush:hello….WHAT…NO….i’ll b there…..yes..yes…u just handle then media..the news shudnt b leaked….han am cmng ryt away..”he said nd hung the call..he is lukng very tensed..
He came towards manan nd said
ayush:um..bhayya….”while manan looked at him..their smile instntly chnged to a tnsd expression
manik stood up nd placed his hand on ayush’s shoulder”kya hua….is evrythng alrryt?”he askd worriedly
ayush gave a smile”‘ha bhai…actually…i have to go…i have an urgent case…im sorry to leave lyk this in middle and go…but it’s really imprtnt..”‘
manik:its k….ayu…i undrstnd…tu ja…wrk is must…but u seem too tnsd…koi aur baat nahi hai na?”he askd in a questioning nd tnsd tone
ayush:arey nahi..u know nah…C.B.I nd all..toh bas…tnsion will always b on our face…dnt wry…i’ll b back..”nd hugged manik
ayush after breakng the hug ..lukd at nandu nd said”‘bye BHABHI …with a grin”‘…while she too smiled broadly nd he left
nandu:manu….koi tnsion nahi hai nah..”she askd
manik:arey nahi baba…u rrelax…show me ur mehendi hands..”..she wthdrawd her hands frm him who is about to see….but manik is manik ..how can he leave …he sleathily lukd nd commented bahut beautiful
manik:do u need anything?”he askd lovingly
nandu:ha…i want water..am very thirsty”‘she said in a babyish tone…he so wanted to kiss her…but cant bcoz of the surroundings..so he thought to play
manik:wese nandu…am also THIRSTY….”he said cmng close to her..but being a naive soul..she didnt undrstnd his double meaning
nandu:toh…y r u sitting…go nd drink water na”‘she said in a caring voice
manik:well…i dont need water to quench my thirst…u very well know…i need u..”‘he said cmng dangerously close to her
nandu’s eyes popped out listening to his shameless talk…”‘manik behave…”she said glaring at him
manik came near her ears nd said”wese…now i can do ANYTHING..nd u cant stop me …as ur hands r fully covered wth mehendi..so wat say?”he winked at her nd she strtd blushing…while he smiled broadly
manik:acha…u sit…i’ll get water fr u..”‘saying so,he went nd brought water in no time nd made her drink wth his hands
manik:aur kuch princess….”he asked her lovingly..nd she nodded in a NO like a cute kid..nd he smiled
OUTSIDE MALHOTRA MANSION:
Ayush is outside the mansion talking to the guards”‘dont send anyone inside wthout a card…no matter how big the personality is…dont send them wthout checking..”nd then moved to a corner nd made a call
ayush:i need to increase the security of malhotra mansion..send the special protection force here…asap..”he hung the call…but still worried…”i need to b careful…i shud infrm abhi…but frst i need to reach head quarters..
with this..after SPF reached there..he left
INSIDE MANSION:
Its almost 2 hours after ayush left..nyo came 2wards nandu..when manik is busy making her eat with his own hands…although she is protesting…that she can eat as the mehandi has been dried off..but our maniik being manik didnt let her eat
nyo:nandu…where is ur chunri beti…v need it
nandu:mom…wo room mei hai…I’ll get it know.”‘wth this she stood up..but manik held her hand
manik:u sit here…I’ll fetch it fr u..”but this tym nandu said no to him nd b4 he can argue …she went inside
manik:this girl…never listens to my word..”‘he complained lukng at nyonika
nyo:dont complain to me…tumhari biwi hai..tum jaano..”‘wth this she gave a grin making him angry nd left
Abhi along wth fab-4 nd navya r stnding in a corner..all rtalking…just then phone rang nd it is ayush…so abhi went aside to pick it up
abhi:ha ayu…
ayush:abhi..listen to me carefully..”he is sounding very tensed
abhi:kya hua ayu..”‘now abhi is also worried
ayu:raghav ran away frm jail..”‘his voice shivered abhi to the core..
abhi:WHAT…”he said in shock
ayu:han…i increased the security of mansion..pls tilll the tym i come there…all of u dont leave manik nd nandu”he adviced him..after that he hung up the call…he is horrified..his eyes strt moving in the hall..he spot manik talking to fab-4 nd navya wth a cntnt smile but nandu isnt around
abhi:freak….where is she?”he said worriedly
NANDU’S ROOM:
By now she came inside her room nd opened the cupboard to bring out the chunri,just when she closed the cupboard after grabbing it…light went off….evrythng is dark…she really got scared to hell
nandu:wat happened to the lyt?”she is lukng around…she is in the middle of the room nd frm behind..there comes a shadow…black shadoww…jus then a small lyt fall on that shadow nd it revealed..RAGHAV standing behind her with an evil smirk he is approaching nandu with a knife in his hand…nd she is oblivious of his presence..she thought of moving out of the room…
Just when she took a step towards the door…her eyes popped out in horror…she is shocked..her chunri fell down frm her hand…nd screen froze on her shocked face

PPl sorry fr making u all wait this much…now i swear daily updates. FRM NOW….ND PLS DO COMMENT…AFTER LONG TIME A FULL SONG IS GIVEN IN THIS FF…SO ATLEAST FOR THAT..PRETTY PLS…..pls bear wth typos….suggestions welcum…pls do comment…criticsm accepted…nd i wanna ask u all onething r u ok wth my style of writing? or u r welcum to tell any chnges nd suggestions…pls do comment so that i’ll now…nd another thing di actually has written half plot of another manan story…if u all r ok wth me posting another story…can i update it….its a unique story…I’ll check wth people’s opinion nd will decide on strting it…Luv u all…bye…Take care

Credit to: Prahathika Krishnan

13 comments

  1. Anandi

    RIP megha di. 🙁
    And yeah your style of writing is really good…it’s clear smooth..without much typos n dragging…pls update regularly..and I would love to read another ff…pls start that as well…good job dear..keep going..all the best..

  2. mishti

    finaaaaaallllllyyyy…came back with a bang…honestly I just got lost in it sooooooooooo romantic and what a shock……..can’t wait 4 the next epi…..????????????????????????????????????????????

  3. Hitakshee

    I was eagerly waiting for it…plz update it daily….y write the episodes very..nice n they r very interesting to read..??

  4. knight_angel

    Plw dont be formal ..Ur writing is awesome. And ya the song was full pf feelings and emotions that both feel for each other. And ya ty for the update.

  5. priya

    good job prahathika…………… meghna will be happy for u wherever she is………………..

  6. Kyy

    Superb and a fantastic update……????????☺☺☺????
    Waiting for your next update………..

  7. Tash

    Back with a bang……… wohooooo… this is the first time i am commenting on ur ff. Bt i have read it from the biginning n i was litrally craving everyday for ur ff…. its soooooooooooooooo good… today’s episode was jst awesome… romance,surprice, suspence, sadness, happyness…. all in one… how do u write sooooooo good… aaisa he aache aache updates dete raho hame.. thanku sooioooooooo much…

    Sad to hear about meghna di…
    RIP meghna di…..

    N love u loadssss.. thanks fr this ff….

    I love all the episodes of this ff…. n u r litrally back with a BANG!!!!!

    THANKU THANKU THANKUUU…..

    #LOVEMANANHAMESHA

    #KYYROCKS

  8. Pallavi

    Awesome!!!!! God! how I was waiting for your ff…..
    The episode was very good. A cliff hanger?
    Plss post ASAP can’t wait anymore

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