Manan-A love story that was meant to be – Episode 4

Hello every1..As I have promised ,I am back with another update…Thank u so much for the comments pani_mananfan (can I know ur name,if u don’t mind?),Aastha and Sonu Karki .

Coming to the update…

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” * DINNING TABLE* :

Everyone were waiting for him, than he came in sometime….. in his casual attire blue jeans n white t-shirt.…

Muk- u take so much time to freshen up….

Man- oh… m on time.. see its exact 2:00 pm lunch time…

Muk – bro its not meeting ha that u r talking about timing….

Cab- ho gaya dono ka or u guys wanna to debate on this topic… kaka u start serving food m damn hungry..…

Muk- wese bhayya did u got any call from usa from my frnd?

Man – no teri frnd ka phone to nai aaya tha but yea ek pagal ladki ka call zaroor aaya tha..(he made an annoyed face)

Muk- relax… y so angry ha?

Man- wait… u called ur frnd from ma phone right? how many times did u called her? (question mark on his face)

Muk- yaad nai….. may be more than 10 times.. q

Man – shit! that means she was saying truth n unknowingly i scolded her… ”

“Man- wo actually(than he narrated the whole convo of their’s )

Muk,Cab and Nyo were laughing their hearts out…

n Manik was hell embarrased by that….

Man- stop laughing plz…(he made a face) but is she mad? dont she understand that when i disconnected the call,I might b busy then y she kept calling like an idiot….

Muk – its not her fault, actually its my fault….

Man- how it can be ur fault..…

Muk- arrre… use laga hoga k m angry so she was calling again n again… u know na my temper…whenever m angry i disconnects calls….

Man- hmmm… but still stay away she’s mad…(teasingly)

Nyo- wese….whats her name.?

Muk- Nandini naam hai uska…. u know wat ma she’s just super s*xy n hot…. college me to she was queen of hearts and…(interrupted by cabir)

cab – woah…itni tarif kafi hai.. kab mila rahi h..(he said with a dreamy face n winked her)

muk – ahem ahem….lemme warn u………….sochna b mat.. she’s not like ur other gfs….

man- ha sochna bhi mat.…

everyone were shocked to hear this sentence from him…….

man – oh………wait lemme complete it…….. sochna b mat cause wo pagal hai n tujhe bhi pagal kar degi…….

muk – hey dnt say like that she’s not at all like that…

cab- yea bro there’s some misunderstanding….. isliye aap ese react kar rahe ho..

man – waah mere bhai..!! abhi to sirf ladki ka naam hi suna hai n abhi se hi u started defending her…

muk – arre…whats this….kaha se kaha pohach gaye aap log….. wait firse phone karte hai hum n speaker on karti hu…. phone do aapka..”

man- q? tera phone kya show piece hai kya… call from ur phone….(annoyed)

muk- no, but i dnt know whats weird problem is there in my mob, cause of some roaming issues outgoing n incoming dono band hai.…

man- no..i wont give n us jhalli se baat karne k liye bilkul b nai… again she’ll start fighting…

cab – de do na phone… atleast i can hear her sweet voice( flirty tone)

mean while she snatches phone from manik’’s hand… and called her…she forgot that it must be night time in USA

man- oye..!! whats this yaar…

muk – she’s really sweet bhayya n dont say anything about her….

nandu was in deep sleep n was disturbed with the buzz of call, n she woke up with the jerk by seeing that same no. and was all set to burst on him again…..”

nandu – what the hell? y did u called me again u moron, pehle to khud keh rahe the k dont u dare to call me again .. ab bolo….speak up man…(hell angry)

Muk,cab nd nyo were shocked except manik as he already had this sweet convo wid her before some time.…

muk was more shocked as she never saw nandu like this.…

muk- oh hello…. i havent called u n wese thodi der pehle mujhe koi manners sikha raha tha that we should atleast give the other person chance to say hello when we receive call…. ab kaha gaye manners…huh….

muk n all were enjoying that convo so muk dint said anything……

nan – manners b samne wale ko dekh k nikalte hai….. n now y did u called me pehle maza nai aaya jhaghda kar ke?

man – oh plz tumse baat karne ka koi shoq nai hai mujhe… kitna jhaghadti ho….(irritated)

nan- to kya pyaar bhari baat karni hai tumhe(irritated) firstly u disturbed my mood n now u r spoiling my night..

man- pyaar aur wo b tumse… in ur dreams..

then finally mukti spoke in between sensing the situation may get worse now..…

muk – hello mah hottie pie… mujse b baat karle ab..

nan was dumbstruck by hearing her voice..

muk – hello… hey say something i know u r mad at me….. she didnt said anything n was registering the situation as wat happened.

man – lagta hai behosh ho gayi(teasingly) by listening man’s voice she came in her sense..

nan- kaminiiiii, u idiot, u.. arrggghhh…. finally m hearing from u…. i was waiting for ur call like mad, m missing u badly (with that her voice was chocked)

” muk – hey.. baby… u promised me that u wont shed tears…

nan- huh… m not crying…. i dont cry u know na…

muk- yea..yea,, i know u very well…. actually india aate hi phone dead tha… than kuch roaming issues the…

.nan – oh…ok.ok… wese who was that idiot jisse me itni der se jhel rahi thi… i mean he’s mad ha.. kitna chilata hai….

man- how dare u call me mad ha.. tum pagal ho… u should me in mental asylum…

muk- woah! relax guys…. n she turn off the speaker n goes to her room

muk- tu to ek dum angry woman ban gayi yaar…. n yea wo mere bhaiya hai my big brother…. n wo pagal nai h(chuckling)

nan- what! he’s ur bro… ummm…m so sorry… but he was too much ha.…

muk – hahaha….its ok… well i was actually enjoying the new side of urs… chalo kuch to fayda hua mere sath rehne ka…(giggled)

nan- lol…yea… u r my mentor… so enjoying with family?”

muk- yea.. m having a gala time wid my family… kuch karna yaar… india aane ki try karna….

nan – hmmmm…. lets see yaar.. but u na dad scolded me badly on that day and i dnt even know the reason behind this.…

muk- than find out the reason, u can take help of chachi… she loves u and understands u.. m sure she knows everything.…

nan- yea… u r right… i should ask her only…

muk- oh.. wese m sorry to call u at this time.. i completely forgot about USA time….(puppy face)

nan – shut up yaar.. dnt say sorry for this.. u have no idea how happy i am, now finally i can have sound sleep… so from tomo

” MISSION INDIA”

muk – Yea..good luck… i’ll give u my new no. soon…

nan- yea as soon as u can… n dnt call from this no. ever now(giggled)

muk – haha..i wont…chalo now u sleep good night…

nan- good night to me.. good noon to u…

muk comes to dinning table

man- oh my god… how sweet she was(sarcastically)

Muk-bhayya.. plz ha… it was ur fault too… u only provoked her..

. cab- she was not only sweet but spicy too….perfect combo…. (dreamy face)

muk- yea..she’s sugary spicy… muk hi fied with cab..

man – she’s only bitter…

and the debate on nandini went on and on…

man – wait… y d hell we r arguing for her.. she’s good for nothing…

muk- u only started first..

by saying this muk nd cab winked and hi 5d again.…

nyo interrupted to avoid further argument………

.nyo- ye sari baate chodo n show us the gifts.. m excited to see the gifts….”

muk- oh yes ma… chalo come in my room all of u….

cab- bro kya hame iske gifts dekhne ka risk lena chaiye… (giggled)

this time man n cab hi fied..

.muk-huh…ab to sirf gifts dikhaoungi..but dungi nai aap dono ko..

.nyo- ab chalo sab room me… They went to her room..

“*GIFTS SESSION*:

( cant describe in detail):

muk -these are ur gifts ma…

Nyo opens all one by one( the gifts were… designer saree, matching jewellery with saree… one box clutch … perfume of dolce n gabbana’s… one hand bag….)

nyo – its marvelous beta.. i loved it.. thanku so much… but this saree u got from NY? how?

muk – its design is designed (model and embriodery) by nandini… her designer is indian so it was easy for me to gift u…..

cab- she has a royal choice… its so beautiful… hai na bro?

man- hmmm…thik thak h..isse acchhi to meri choice h…
(Mind Voice) :its really beautiful i must say)

cab- wat about my gift…

muk- have some patience bhai….
she gives him his all gifts(pair of clothes, skates,lots and lots of chocolates,new drum set, perfume to woo his gfs)

cabir- wow…. m in love with this gifts… thanks choti…

muk – kaha tha na u will love it… ab bhayya aapki bari… chalo lets start the guessing game

muk – for this gift u dnt have to guess…its a three piece suit… already nazar aa rha h transparent bag me se… so hows it?

man- i hope its ur choice only.. not hers.. (he made a face before saying further)

muk – how mean… dnt start again… (she makes a sad pout)

man – its really a royal piece… i just loved itt…. another gift??

muk- ye raha dusra gift…

man- a tiny box…ummmm…(he shakes it) itne chote me kya hai…. ummm a watch?

muk – bang on…its a watch open it now…

man – wow… its super s*xy… my fav brand…..
he wears in his hand n shows them..

cab- i loved it..

muk – dekha kaha tha na u will love it… actually this was in couple one for men n other one for women…. so fir humne dono kharidi… so the another watch is with my frnd.…

Man- sab kuch share karna h use mere sath…(annoy)

muk- oh..esa kya share kiya aapke sath usne…

man – you… tujhe share karna pad raha hai with ur so called frnd… kya pata kal meri life bhi share karni padi to…(than he realized wat he said) leave that where’s my next gift…. ummm…thoda heavy hai… kya ho sakta hai.. boxing gloves?

muk – how u came to know this?(sad pout) ya… ab aap apna gussa isse pehan k nikalna punching bag pe… i hope u all loved this gifts?

Man,cab nd nyo said together – koi shaq?

dadi n papa k gifts wo aayenge tab unhe dungi…

*USA-NY*:

*BREAKFAST TABLE*:

” Nandu’s parents were having breakfast and chachi was serving them…

n.m(nandu’s mom) – where is nandu? y she didnt came yet?

chachi – kal usne dinner bhi thik se nai khaya… mukti ko bohat miss kar rahi hai n ab college bhi khatam ho gaya h so she’s feeling very lonely…

n.m – lemme see her… i know she must b feeling lonely as she have nothing to do now….

n.d(nandu’s dad) – tum rehne do… lemme see her… wese b i have to say her sorry for behaving so rude to her on that day… bina baat k datt diya use….(sad)

*SANYU’S ROOM*:

She was sleeping… as due to call she slept late….

n.d – nandu… wake up beta… (caressing her hair)

n – thodi der aur sone do plijjj…mujhe bohat ninni aa rahi h chachi..

n.d -chachi(chuckles) its me beta.. not chachi…

n- she got up with a jerk… cause everyday chachii wakes her up… dad? aap yaha?(rubbing her eyes)

n.d – ha…chachi told me that u didnt had your dinner properly.. n today u didnt came for breakfast so we were worried…so i came to see u… so missing ur frnd?

nan – umm..yea.. missing her…*sigh*

n.d – so kab tak use miss karke bhuki rahogi? u need to move on beta..divert ur mind now…

nan – yea..dad u r right… but esa kya karu.. m done with my graduation too… i wanna do job but yaha to har koi janta hai k me aapki beti hu aur ese hi mujhe job de denge… n than u know na how they will treat me( she said like 5 year old kid complaining)

n.d – i know they will treat u like a boss… than y dont u join our business work their as a fresher…

n – c’mon dad..u gotta kidding me right? no way dad… i dont wanna join u.. no one will treat me like a new comer, no one will scold me for my mistake, no one will ask me to do work…. i dont want to feel special dad i actually want to earn this on my hard work my talent my dedication towards my work…

n.d – you made me proud today by saying this… i can see myself in u now… i also started my life by thinking this.. n today u know where ur dad stands in this world..

nan- dad i have thought something.. but m afraid of ur answer..

n.d – go on…dnt worry say..

nan – dad i wanna go somewhere. where nobody knows that m ur daughter… n treat me like a ordinary girl… i want to make my own identity…

n.d – u mean to say abroad?

nan – hmmmm… will u allow me to cherish my dream?

n.m – u know that we cant live without u…..

nan and n.d saw n.m standing at the door…she was listening their convo since long…

n.m – i agree we were so busy in making this empire vast… but that doesnt mean k we dnt love u…i know we r not good parents but we r not bad also… (she had pain in her voice n eyes)

nan – hey mom come here… dnt cry… i know u guys love me its just that u have a different way of showing it….

n.d – ur mom is right we failed at being good parents,,,plz forgive us..

nan – plz..plz..dnt say that…m sorry..i wont go anywhere…i will not leave u guys… i love u mom n dad….

n.d – no…i didnt mean that… i want u to do something for urself… go n make ur own identity…

nan- but dad..

n.m – he’s right… we will not stop u. we r wid u… go n achieve ur goal…but where u want to go?

nan- i dont know that.. i have to do lots of research now… will tell u tonight,,…

n.d – if u want any help just tell me i’ll do it for u..

nan – no..dad i want to do everything on my own..

n.m &n.d – That’s like our daughter…

their shared lovely hug… chachii was watching them n was recalling the past moments of nandu’s dad n arjun…. she said to herself now its time i should tell the truth to nandu about arjunand india….

nandu’s parents left… nandu was alone in hr room searching companies n countries…. chachii knocked the door

nan- arre..come na.. y r u knocking…

cha- wat r u doing? i know that u r going abroad for job.. i heard the whole convo.. i always told u that they love u…

nan – ha.. u were right… bas ab yahi soch rahi hu kaha apply karu.. mene ek short list bana di h..
(chachi interrupted)

cha – INDIA..

nan- wat? india? q? n suddenly..

cha – ha india me… mumbai me company dekho…

nan- but esa q.. dad ko janti h na aap…tell me the reason y u want me to go their..

cha – u always wanted to know about relatives…ur dad’s connection wid india.. today i will tell u the whole truth….

(chachii narrated the whole story, both nandu n chachi had tears in their eyes)

(guys will tell this story in future like flashback till than let it be a suspense)

nan – ab sab kuch me theek karungi….jo kaam adhura reh gaya tha use ab me pura karungi… kya aap jante h wo ab kaha rehte h?

cha – ha.. wo mumbai me rehte hai.. unka address to mil jayega aasani se… tumhe bas tumhare parents ko manna hai…

nan- wo itni aasani se nai maanege.. but manana padega…

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So,ya done for today…Pls let me know how is the update through your comments coz that is wat which motivated me to write through my busy schedule…luv u all..

P.S.Ignore Typos….Criticsm accepted..Suggestions are welcum

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  1. Praha

    I indirectly introduced a character in this update..So,My dear readers the one who finds it correct will get the next update dedicated to them…Search for the new character…It can be introduced by me any where…Dont think its a typo…Its not…Its a suspense

  2. Pani_mananfan

    My name is Aastha. The one u have mentioned by Aastha is me only

    1. Praha

      okay..cool…Nd wat u think abt the new indirect character?whom do u think it is?Read the ff once again nd do comment

  3. Pani_mananfan

    Awesome update. Actually i left after reading half part that’s y didn’t comment before. And about new entry i have confusion between two SANYU and ARJUN. But Arjun u introduced directly so i think SANYU

    1. Praha

      bang on….

      1. Pani_mananfan

        Am I correct or I am correct

      2. Praha

        Aastha…the answer is correct…so u r correct…

      3. Praha

        and the next update is dedicated to u aastha…just completed writing…will post in the morning…luv u …

    1. Praha

      tq risu.. ..means a lot

  4. Neehaa

    This was fantastic like always

    1. Praha

      tq so much neehaa

    1. Praha

      tq so much anu

  5. Awesome ,fab yaar update fast

    1. Praha

      tq but for next update u have to wait until tmrw

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