Manan : The Journey Of Love (Episode – 3) last chapter

Thank u all guys for u awesome cmnts,love & support.. Here is the last part of my story…

Recap : manan’s frndship..they had some gd tym..but nandini became angry again when manik said stars r fake…

Continue….

Nandini went inside angrily..Manik also got up & followed her..

Manik : nandini…listen…
Nandini : I don’t want to talk…
Manik : arey..but 1min na…
Nandini : f9…say…
Manik : woh…I…

Manik was interrupted by cabir….
Cabir : u guys r here?! What r doing here ?! Come..let’s go inside…
Manik : yeah…u go..we will come later…
Cabir : ohk..
Nandini : no cabir..I’ll come with u..
Manik : but..
Nandini : let’s go Cabir…

Saying that nandini went to the party pulling cabir with her…Manik gave an frustrated look then also went to the party…
Mukti saw manik & pulled him for dancing with them..but his mood was off..so they offered him drinks but he rejected & sat on the couch…

Mukti : what happened to this manik suddenly?!
Aliya : don’t know..
Cabir : fought with nandini.. Again…
Aliya : what ?!! Not again..
Mukti : but I know how to lighten his mood…
Cabir : how ???
Mukti gave him an evil smirk & cabir got her plan & smirked back..(no wonder that’s why they called evil twins..)

Manik sitting on the couch & checking msgs on his mbl when cabir & mukti sat beside him..
Mukti : all ok manik?? Why r u sitting here lyk this?!!
Manik : nothing..just tired…

Manik looked at nandini who was talking with aliya,dhruv & navya smilingly… Mukti & Cabir followed his gaze & understood he was looking at nandini..

Cabir brought a drink for manik & gave it to him..
Manik : I said na I won’t drink ?!
Cabir : arey..it’s just cold drink..have it..u will feel better…
Mukti : yes manik..have na..cold drink hi to hai..
Manik : ok f9…

Cabir & mukti shared a mischievous look….
Flashback :

Cabir took cold drinks in a glass & mixed a pill on it…
Cabir : now my dear manik..how long u will stay boring lyk this ?! Let’s enjoy dude !!!
Flashback ends…

Manik was about to drink it when his mbl rang…
Manik : excuse me guys..it’s imprtnt..
Mukti : arey but..drink..
Manik : I’ll have it after attending the call.. Just a mint…

Manik left from there..Mukti & Cabir shared an annoyed look…

Nandini, Aliya,Dhruv & Navya came to them…
Navya : what r u guys doing here ?!
Dhruv : & where is buddy ??
Cabir : he has gone to take an imprtnt call..& we were just tired so…
Aliya : what?? U guys were tired ?! Seriously?? Tell the truth..did u do something with manik??
Mukti : no aliya..what’ll we do ?! He’ll come back…
Dhruv : hope so…
Cabir : guys..sit na…

They also sat on the couch with them.. Suddenly nandini started to cough…
Navya : nandini..r u ok???
Nandini : yeah..just…
She started to cough again…
Navya : let me bring some cold drink for u…
Dhruv : arey..u don’t need to go..look..here is already a cold drink..
Navya : yeah..I didn’t notice it..thnx dhruv…

Navya was about to take the glass when cabir took it…
Navya : cabir..what r u doing??
Cabir : nandini can’t have it…
Aliya : but why?!
Cabir : it’s Manik’s drink…
Navya : is Manik’s name is written on it?! Manik can have another…

Navya forcefully took the glass from cabir & made it drink to nandini…
Cabir & mukti palmed their face…

Nandini’s cough stopped but now she was feeling dizzy…
Navya : nandini.. R u ok na??
Nandini : yeah..fine…
Aliya : this party is getting boring..let’s have some dance…
Nandini stood up excitedly…

Nandini : why not ?! Let’s Daanncccee !!!
Nandini went to the dance floor excitedly & played the music…
Nandini : guys..come fast…

Aliya,Dhruv & Navya looked at her with amusement while cabir & mukti tapped their forehead…

Aliya,Dhruv & Navya joined the dance floor & also dragged cabir & Mukti with them…then started to dance…Nandini was dancing madly..all found it fishy but then removed the thought thinking they r overreacting…Mukti & Cabir decided to keep eyes on her…navya & aliya made cabir & mukti drunk more..so they also forgot about nandini after sometime.. After dancing for a while nandini stopped dancing & left from there…

Manik’s POV :

When I was sitting on the couch mukti & cabir forced me to drink something.. I found it fishy though I didn’t react…thank God my phone rang in the r8 tym & I was able to leave from there…

I was standing just a little away from there & talking in my phone when I noticed nandini to go & start the music again..she was calling everyone for dancing & she herself started dancing madly…well, I didn’t know she is a party lover girl…I thought she doesn’t lyk much chaos..

My pool of thoughts were broke when I heard my client’s voice who was calling me repeatedly saying : Mr. Malhotra.. R u listening??
I told him to hold for a mint & then I went to the tarrace & started to dscs business issues with him..Though my father handles the business but sometimes I also help him in his work…

I finished the dscsn & hanged up the phone..I was going back to the party when I heard a sound of laughing… I followed the sound & reached other side of the tarrace…
After reaching there what I saw made me shocked…
End of POV

Nandini was standing at the edge of the terrace & was trying to walk there..she was continuously laughing…

Manik : nandini.. What r u doing ?? U will fall down..
Nandini : nooo…I won’t come…
She started to laughing again…
Manik understood that she is not in her sense…
Manik : nandini..how many drinks did u take??
Nandini : hawww !! What r u saying manik ?! Don’t u know nandini murthy doesn’t drunk ?!!!
Manik : yeah..I can see that..anyways..nandini..look..come down..it’s not safe…
Nandini : why should I listen to u ?!
Manik : bcz u r my frnd na !! Won’t u listen to ur frnd??
Nandini : no..I won’t.. U r bad…u told my stars fake..so I’m angry with u & I won’t listen to u..
Manik tried to come near her but nandini stopped him..
Nandini : stop there.. If u will try to come near me..I’ll jump from here…
Manik shouted angrily : nandini !!!!
Nandini : look..I was talking about it only.. Tum na..only shout karna jante ho..bad manik…
Manik calmed down himself…
Manik : accha..I’m sorry…I won’t shout now..nandini is a gd girl na..so come here..plz…
Nandini : 1st say sorry properly..then say stars r not fake…
Manik : what?!!!
Nandini : fine..I won’t come…
Manik : accha…f9..

Manik held his ear making a face & said : sorry !! Ur stars r true & I’m wrong… Now plzzz come here !!
Nandini : Good boy manik !! I’m coming…

Nandini was about to come but slipped accidentally.. Manik shouted saying : nandini !!!!!

Nandini was about to fall but manik caught her hand…he pulled her up immediately & hugged her tightly..nandini was also scared..so she also hugged him back tightly…
After sometime manik left her…

Manik : what were u doing ?!! Do u have any idea what might have happened ?!!

Nandini held her ears making a pout & said : sorry manik !! I won’t do it again…
She said it so cutely that manik was just awwee on her…
Manik removed her hands from her ear & said its ok…then nandini hugger him happily. Manik also hugged her back smilingly…
Manik : nandini…
Nandini : hmmm…
Manik : let’s go downstair..everyone must b looking for us…
Nandini : I don’t want to go..let’s stay here…
Manik : nandini…
Nandini : manik plzzzz !!!!
Manik : ok..f9…
Nandini : yaaayyyy !!

Both sat on the swing & nandini kept her head on Manik’s shoulder… Manik looked at her…Nandini was watching her stars..manik smiled at her cuteness & admired her…

Manik : nandini..why did u felt bad when I said stars r fake??
Nandini : woh…it’s na…it’s a tooooppp secret !!!!
Then she kept a finger on her lip & whispered : Ssshhhhh….don’t tell anyone…
Manik laughed a bit..
Manik : so what is ur tooopppp secret ????
Nandini : when I was 6na…I lost my parents in a car accident…I always used to cry remembering them..one day chachi came to me & said…

Flashback –
Chachi : nandu..why r u crying??
Nandini : chachi..I’m missing amma appa…
Chachi : accha?? Come with me…
Chachi took little nandu to the balcony…
Chachi : look there…ur parents has become a star..they r not far away from u beta..God has called them for some imprtnt work..u can talk to them through stars…
Nandini : will they reply??
Chachi : no..but they’ll shine for u & will remove all the darkness & prblms of ur lyf..in fact all the stars..they only shines for us..
Nandini : sacchi ???
Chachi : mucchi..
Chachi wiped her tears & hugged her..nandini also hugged her back smilingly..
End of POV

Nandini became numb remembering all that..Manik understood her pain & felt sorry for his behavior….

Manik made her face him & cupped her face..he wiped her tears & kissed her forehead…
Manik : I’m sorry..
Nandini : it’s ok…

Nandini again kept her head on his shoulder & manik caressed her hair..nandini was looking at the stars & manik was lost in her….after sometime nandini closed her eyes & went into deep slumber…
Manik took her into his arms & left from there..he came to his room & made her sleep on the bed..then he covered her with a blanket & left downstair…all were sleeping here & there as a result of being drunk…

Manik gave an unbelievable look & went to his room…nandini was sleeping with a cute pout lyk a baby..manik admired her..then went to the couch & slept there…

Morning : bright sunshine dstrbd nandini’s peaceful slumber…she woke up & looked at the whole room..then she remembered last night…
Nandini’s POV :

I opened my eyes & found myself in a dfrnt surroundings..it was not my room..moreover my head is paining so much that it might get blast…I tried to remember last night..then I got it..it’s Manik’s house & I’m sleeping in his room..but how?? I tried to remember hard..then I got some flashbacks of last night’s incident… How I went to tarrace & manik saved me from falling.. Then we hugged & I told him about my childhood.. he kissed my forehead & I slept in his arms…

A small smile crept on my face when I remembered all those moments..manik is not that bad..in fact he is not bad at all..he cares for me…my cheeks became red & warm thinking all these…OMG !! I’m blushing !!! But why?! He’s just a frnd & we met just a day before…my pulls of thoughts broke when manik entered in the room with the lime juice..

Manik : Gd morning !!!
Nandini : Gd morning…
Manik : u must b having headache.. Drink this lime juice..u’ll feel better…

I took the juice from his hand & drank it…
Nandini : thank u…
Manik : mention not…
Nandini : where r the others??
Manik : they’ve woke up just some moments ago..now having freshened up..
Nandini : oh..oky…
Manik : u also freshened up..then come for breakfast…
Nandini : ok…

Manik left from there…

He is really sweet..circumstances were so wrong that we misunderstood each other..but now I know why his frnds loves him so much…
End of POV

Nandini got up from bed & went to washroom… Then they had breakfast together…then they left for their respective homes…

They started to spent tyk together everyday.. Mostly manan.. From that day they started to spent most of their tyms with each other…at night they used to talk for some hours & then slept while talking..with tyms they came so close that they started to fall for each other within a very short tym…they started to love each other…truely..crazily…& madly…that’s why it’s said – if it’s true love..tym,age, dfrncs doesn’t matter at all…

Manik decided to confess his feelings a day before frndship day…

Finally that day came… Manik set a venue just the way nandini likes…red & black combination..

He sent a red dress at her house & told her to b ready wearing it…

Nandini became surprised as she felt manik is going to take her in a date..

Nandini wore the dress..she left her hair open & straight…then she applied a little make up with red lippy..she looking both hot & beautiful in that attire…

She came outside of the house & found Manik’s driver waiting for her with Manik’s car…driver opened the door for nandini & nandini got into it..

There was a bouquet of red roses in the seat with a card…
Nandini smiled looking at it & took the flowers..then she opened the card…

“Beautiful roses for a beautiful lady..”

Nandini caressed the flowers..after about an hour nandini reached at the venue…
Nandini came out from the car & looked at the place.. It was beautifully decorated with red & black curtains, Red candles, red roses & golden stars..there was a red carpet which leads her to the venue…nandini went there but found no one…there was two chairs with a table & a couch…

Nandini loved the set up a lot & was getting impatient to see manik…

Nandini : Manik..where r u ???

Suddenly she heard Manik’s voice..

Manik : looking for me???

Nandini looked around but couldn’t see manik…

Manik : Then do one thing..stop searching here & there…search in ur heart…bcz I’m only there..that’s the place I live in..

Nandini blushed listening that…

Manik : did I say something wrong??
Nandini nodded in no while blushing…

Manik : still..u can look behind…
Nandini turned & saw manik sitting on his kneels..he was wearing a red T-shirt with black jeans & black blazer…

Nandini became surprised as well as shocked watching that..She was staring at manik with a shocked face..She thought manik is taking her for a date but she didn’t thought manik will propose her..

Manik : nandini..I’m not ghost..why r u staring at me lyk that ?!!

Nandini came back to her sense…

Nandini : woh..I…
Manik : accha leave it..

Manik offered her his hand & signalled her to give her hand…
Nandini gave her hand into Manik’s hand…

Manik : nandini..I know our start was not gd..in fact it was really bad but funny also.. Water fight..punch..I wonder if anyone else would’ve punched me what would I do..honestly..from the very 1st day I started to admire u..nandini..u r the best thing that ever happened to me..u changed me..for good..now I can’t imagine my lyf without u…I love U Nandini…

Nandini’s POV :

As soon as he said that I heard a loud sound of sky shot cracker & looked at the sky….

“I LOVE U” was written in the sky..they were looking lyk stars..I was completely amazed watching it…I also felt emotional & tears of happiness came into my eyes…no one had done so much for me…I was just out of words…
End of POV

Manik saw her tears & wiped them…
Nandini looked at him…

Kaise bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh raha
Rahe naa faasle ye jo hai apne darmiyaan..

(Nandini : I love u too manik..I love u a lot…
Manik cupped her face & kissed her forehead…)

Tere qareeb main ho sakoon
De de tu apni razaa…..

(Manik held her hand & put a ring on her finger…)

Paas bithaaun ye zulf sanwaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main..
Hai dil ki ye khwaahish
Ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe…

(Manik kissed her hand & Nandini admired him..manik removed her hair from her face & tucked them behind her ear..then he caressed her face…

Ho..ho..ho…

(Manik slowly went to her lips & slammed his lips on her…)

Both were kissing each other..manik held her by her waist pulling her more close..Nandini’s hands were travelling in his hair pulling him close…it was not passionate but it was expressing their love to each other..it was conveying their feelings to each other…

Being breathless both left each other unwillingly… Manik took her in his arms & made her lay on the couch…then he again slammed his lips on her…nandini also responded back with equal passion.. It was a deep passionate kiss..after sometime manik broke the kiss..then he kissed her whole neck & nape..nandini was moaning his name lyk a prayer..she was pulling him more closure by pulling his head…manik sucked her neck & gave a love bite on her neck.. Nandini hissed in pain..then manik licked the place to soothe her pain…then he again kissed her lips…

After the kiss manik lied down beside her…nandini kept her head on his chest & hugged him tightly.. Manik also hugged her back & kissed her forehead…

Manik : nandini..u must b hungry..let’s have dinner??
Nandini : ok…

Both got up & went to the table..manik made her sit on a chair..
Then he served dinner & made her eat with his hand…nandini also feeded him with her hand…

After finishing their dinner both spent some tym together…

Nandini : manik..we should go now..after 12 it’s frndship day..fab5 must v waiting for u..
Manik : they aren’t waiting for me..they r waiting for us…

Nandini smiled listening that…
Nandini : so let’s go??
Manik : ok…

Both got up..Manik was about to leave when nandini held his hand..manik turned to her…
Manik : what happened?? Let’s go..

Nandini came near him & kissed his cheeks…he smiled & said : let’s go..
Both held each other’s hand & left from there…

They reached cabir’s house where everyone was waiting for them..

Cabir : look..finally our love birds has come…
Nandini blushed listening that…

Navya : cabir..don’t tease them na..
Cabir : ok..I won’t…
Mukti : zoru ka gulam..
Everyone laughed at that…

Dhruv : bdw congratulations..
Manik : thnx buddy…
Aliya : hey guyz..look only 8seconds left…
Mukti : 8…
Cabir : 7..
Navya : 6..
Aliya : 5..
Dhruv : 4..
Manik : 3..
Nandini : 2..
All together : Oneeee…happy friendship day !!!!

They all had a group hug together..during the hug manik held nandini’s hand..nandini smiled at him & manik smiled back..both shared an cute eyelock….

So this story ends here..hope u all lykd it..do share ur feedbacks through ur lovely cmnts..& silent readers also plzz cmnt today as it’s the last epi…& thank u all my readers & commenters for their support & love..u guys makes my day…thank u..

#b_safe_n_stay_happy_&_spread_love πŸ™‚

#Nishita

25 comments

  1. piya

    You are exceptional dear whenever i read your ff I am just get out of words you just rocked dear these 3 shots are amazzingggg superbbbb I am always wonder how you got sooo wonderful ideas from mrng I am just waiting for this part and update is marvellous dear come back soon till then take care love you loads

    • Nishita

      |Author

      Awwweee..thank u soooo much piya..I’m glad to know that u u lyks my writings so much !! I’ll surely try to come back soon..u also take care & love u too dear ☺

  2. Neha

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      • Neha

        Ha Di now don’t be senty and one kind request from your sister it may be burden for you but can you please write a short story on true love MATLAB sachaa Walla love

  3. Lara

    Awwwwwwww……..
    Such a cute ending
    Loved it
    Manan scenes were awesome
    Thanku for such a wonderful episode
    Will miss ur ffs
    Take care
    All the best

  4. Anjali

    Oooooo mmmmmmm gggggggg!!!!! I reallly dnt remmbr how many tyms hav i uttrd this word during readind d story…..it was sooo cutttteeeeee cutte nd cuuuttteeeeee……how nd how do u manage do let us feel those feelngs……nd seems as if oll r happng in front of our eyes……..ahhhhh…cant jst say how much i lovd it…manik in red nd black…killling man …….it was really tough 4 me to read that part nd wont b able 2 watch it…….i wud say lovdd it crazily…madly
    Lotts of love dear
    …will misss u yaar..nd olll d vry bst 4 ur xams……..love u…..

    • Nishita

      |Author

      U know anjali?? Now I have to say..ohhhh myyyyy gooodddd…thank u sooooo much for lyking my stories dear..will miss u too..& love u a lot too dear 😘 πŸ™‚

  5. Aaliya

    πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜Œ Nishita darling as always and forever will be awesome love passionate Thank you so much very much

  6. Mahi13

    |Registered Member

    This love story was choooooooo sweet n cute. Loved it. U’ve again rocked it Nishi di. Hats of to u……. Will miss u a loooooot. All the best for ur exams. I also have exams in this month. Pray for me. Take care Nishi di. πŸ˜‰

    • Nishita

      |Author

      Thank u sooooo much mahi..I’ll miss u too dear..& I’ll obviously pray 4 ur..best of luck for ur xms..I’m sure u will do well..take care too πŸ™‚

  7. Vrutika

    Aww soo cute love story…sorry for late comments…… fabulous… fantastic… amazing…..I just love manan ….. commendable three shots..
    Keep smilingπŸ˜ƒ….
    Stay healthy…

  8. riham

    Awwww manan were so cute but……you are ending it so soon not fairπŸ˜”πŸ˜Œplease nishita be back with a bang😊😊

  9. Naaz21

    |Registered Member

    These three shots weren’t just shots, they remind me of kyy, their friendship, care n love for each other, miss Manan but ur story touched my ❀️!!! Loved it!!! I can’t xpress myself, uff!!!😘😍❀️️

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