Manan : Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyaada by Crystal : Chapter 5


Manan : Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyaada by Crystal : Chapter 5

Link to Chapter 4 : Chapter 4

The comments in Chapter 4 have been answered.. thanks for your support keep supporting..i am going to continue this ff just for my fans who are actually reading……. But a request to all my silent readers…. Please comment just to boost up the writers 

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Recap : Nandini gets her list of test that she has to undergo.. She has to race against Dhruv and she has to cook for Manik and gang.. Balance tests she has passed

Let’s continue

Nandini then had excused herself as she had work and left from that place. So after Nandini left,

(Karan)“What a cute girl! So polite”

(Manik) “Come on, Karan. She is stubborn, arrogant and irritating. How can you even think she is cute? She is so shorter than Aliya a plain looking girl. Even Rishabh will be a very handsome fellow in a few years. I still can’t believe that they are siblings.”

(Madhyam) “Manik, you don’t have eyes. She is good looking and she is not very short. You don’t mind if I go after her, do you?”

(Manik) “I do mind. I don’t want my friend going out with a girl who is just twenty two, started working one and half years back and earns in six digits, whose parents had numerous affairs when they were married and now are married to different ppl? God knows what they do; how can I let a good friend date someone from a family like that?”

(Madhyam) “Hey, just because her parents are like that it doesn’t mean she is too, Manik.”

(Manik) “Also, she says she does her business from a hotel just because she moved from the countryside. Who will move to anywhere without any planned residence and has a brother to look after? I can just imagine her work. Bringing people to a hotel just to do work…..”

(Aliya slaps Manik) “(With anger) Tum sach mein Manik ho (mad), just because you don’t like someone, it doesn’t mean they are bad or immoral. It doesn’t give you the right to speak ill of them like that. That girl may really have talent. Not all go after money. You said that she was staying in hotel because she just moved and it is valid enough. She might have had some problems before moving. It hAppens. She is a freelancer with no office. If you care about this so much, give her a space for office here. She doesn’t look like how you speak of her. She is better than those girls who flatter you for your money and position. Don’t go talking about someone like that. Rishabh would have murdered you, had he listened to you right now. Not everyone is like your father.”

(Manik) “(With anger) My Dad Was Not Like That, Aliya.”

(Aliya) “See, it angers you. It is the same way for everyone. Don’t talk like you know everything about others.”

(Dhruv) “Aliya is right, Manik. You didn’t even give her a chance to prove herself before judging her.”

(Manik) “Alright, Dhruv. I know you guys are right but I just can’t accept it. I am sorry. You guys just enjoy. I have some work. Good night.” (Leaving the meeting room)

As soon as he turned to go to his room, he saw Nandini standing there. He was shocked as seeing Nandini’s reaction he understood that she heard everything.

(Manik) “Nandini!! What are you doing here?”

(Nandini) “Ah… ah… Rishabh said he gave back the keys to you yesterday, so I came to ask about that but forget it. (Tears welling up) Sorry.” (Leaving)

(Manik) “Nandini. I am sorry. Hey,Nandini! Listen to me! (To self) God! What did I do?” (Running behind her)

(Nandini’s POV once she reached the room) I knew exactly why Rishabh fought and why I am here and yet, to see my talent, my hard-work go in the drain like that……. it’s painful. I have heard many speak like this but never once I have cried till now. Why do I cry now? I should be used to this. I went up and locked myself in my room. Mr.Malhotra was banging on the door.

(Manik)“Nandini, open up the door. I am sorry I shouldn’t have spoken like that.!”

(Nandini) “It’s ok, Mr. Malhotra. I am used to it. Good night. (Choking) Good night.”

(Manik) “Please let me Apologise. Please”

(Nandini) “Good night Mr. Malhotra.” I could no longer stop my tears. I heard loud thuds on the door and wall. He is frustrated that I didn’t open the door; imagine how it would have been for me when you spoke like that. I cried myself to sleep that night.


{(Nandini)“Dadaji (crying) I fell down. It really hurts.”
(Dadaji) “Come on Nandu, whether the wound is big or small, painful or not, you shouldn’t cry.”

(Nandini) “But the aunties around say that only boys shouldn’t cry.”

(Dadaji) “Don’t listen to them. Jo, crying is a sign of weakness. Don’t cry. People will think you are trying to gain pity, creating a drama. Cry in silence, rain or in front of someone who you trust and can help you.”

(Nandini)“Ok. It means I can cry in front of Uncle Venkatesh, Rishabh and you, right?”

(Dadaji) “Nandu, promise never to cry in front of Rishabh. You are Rishabh’s big sister. If he sees you cry, then he will also start crying. So don’t in front of anyone other than me. Done?”

(Nandini) “Not even in front of Uncle Venkatesh?”
“Yes. Not even in front of Venkatesh or Shanoo.”

Nandini nodded my head. “Good girl. Now come on, stop crying. See the wound is all patched up, though I guess showing it to a doctor will be better since you ripped almost whole skin of your legs.”}

Nandini had slept thinking about here Dadaji.

Precap : Manik’s official meeting with Nandini

Guys in my FF there is going to be a lot of POV’s and flashback especially between Nandini and her Dadaji so please bear with me…. I am sorry if it confuses you

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  1. Nishita

    It’s not confusing at fact I’m lyking the track..keep going ?

    1. Crystal

      thank u Nishita 🙂 😀

  2. Good one keep posting I really enjoying it…

    1. Crystal

      thank u Priyal 🙂 😀

  3. Good one

    1. Crystal

      thank u Avighna 🙂 😀

  4. i am nt at all confused nice chappy

    1. Crystal

      thank u Aliya 🙂 😀

  5. Loving it seriously…. Keep it up

    1. Crystal

      thank u Isha 🙂 😀

  6. Superbbbbb precap look interesting update soon

    1. Crystal

      thank u Piya 🙂 😀

  7. Very small one dear….but nyc…really surprised to see matured Aliya….keep going

    1. Crystal

      thank u Aswini 🙂 😀

  8. It wasnt confusng at olll…keeep going….nyc track….t c

    1. Crystal

      Thank you Anjali ??

  9. Hey its very nice keep going…

    1. Crystal

      Thank you Manu ??

  10. Its intresting and please keep going

    1. Crystal

      Thank you riham ??

  11. Malika

    Ooooooh don’t forget me. I’m your fan. Must say fabulous. And I have wrote an analysis . Just read it.

    1. Crystal

      Thank you Malika??

  12. Awesome episode
    Cant wait for the next update
    Pls update soon

    1. Crystal

      Thank you Lara??

  13. nice story.please keep writing.

    1. Crystal

      Thank you Shimi ??

  14. Really nice epi…and of course nice story too…I liked your way of writing. .its very understanding and classy… keep going. .. 🙂

    1. Crystal

      Thank you Rahela ??

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