MANAN FOREVER (FF) – (episode 1)

Hey guys…. thanks for your wonderful response….
episode:2
location:juhu

Cabir reaches juhu… he spots nandini with some difficulty..
he runs towards a shattered and weeping nandini
Cabir:Nandini kya hua… where is Manik… why are you crying…
Nandini: Cabir… wo… wo… Manik…. hum sath dhe… achanak I don’t knw what happened he is missing cabir… I’m really afraid… he was behaving really wierd….and when I tried to call him it’s unreachable… I don’t knw what to do and where to search… Cabir do something…(nandini hasn’t stopped crying… her eyes were red after crying for all this time…)
Cabir:Nandini…. control yourself… Manik must have gone home or something… or maybe he went after some urgent call or something.. u knw na how he is… he must have gone in a hurry…
Nan: No… agar aisa ho tho he would have told me… maine kaha dha na… he was behaving wierd… he asked me to go home on my own and was angry at me for no reason…. he calmed down after I asked him to drop me home after some more time… but then again he told me about Dhruv not calling him and he tried his no…. it was as if he didn’t knw that Dhruv has left after leavening a letter n all… when I told him about that he lashed out at me.. but then again sat behind me.. after some time jab maine dheka… wo nahi dhaa… maine poora beach mein search kiya…he was totally not in his senses… I am getting all bad thoughts..
Cabir: Yeah I get u …But now… u relax… I’ll call kaka and see whether he has reached home….(cabir dials kaka s no. ).

kaka: hello Cabir beta… bolo…
Cabir: Kaka Manik gar aaya hai kya???
kaka: nahi…. wo tho subah nandini me sath gaye the… thum usko call karke dhekoo..
Cabir: Aaa. okk kaka… agar wo aaya tho mujhe inform karlo…
(he cuts the call and soon dials maniks dads no.)
maniks dad: Hello…. who is this..
Cabir: hi uncle… this is cabir speaking… manik ka dhosth…
Maniks dad: Haan Cabir beta… bolo… thum kaise ho…

Cabir : Uncle… im fine…. Has Manik come to pune…
Maniks dad: Ummm no… wo 2weeks pehle aaya tha… to get his certificate s n all… kya huaa…wo ghar mein nahi hai???(he sounded tensed)
Cabir: haan… uncle… um.. shaayad wo ghar mein hoga… I just called u simply… take care uncle..
Maniks dad:ohh… cabirr… u scared me… anyways .. bye.. keep in touch…
Cabor:sure uncle..

Nan:cabir ab hum kya karoo…
Cabir:wait a minute… we’ll inform alya mukti and aryaman.. we’ll search for him together… he must be somewhere nearby only…
(cabir does a conference call with multi alya and aryaman)
(Cabir and nandini walks towards the car )

Cabir:Hello ppl there is an emergency Manik is missing…
Mukti:What…. missing matlab…. we saw him even today morning ryt… achaanak what happened…
Alya:He was with nandini ryt…
Aryaman: Ppl…whatever it is we have to go search for h im now itself… he wouldn’t have gone that far…
Cabir:Exactly…. I’ll meet u guys in front of Ramada… come soon… I’ll explain everything later…
Nandini:Cabir… let’s go to the police station and file a complaint…
Cabir: We can’t file a missing case within 24 hrs of disappearance…. unless there has been some sought of violence…
Nan:sab log kab aayega…

Cabir.:Nandini don’t take tension…we’ll find him..
Nan: How can I relax cabir…how…. dr had asked me to never leave his side because if he takes too much tension.. it’s dangerous for his health…
Cabir: Areyy… thum tension math lo…. kuch nahi hoga manik ko…. hum use kuch nahi hone doongi.. Ab you come with me I’ll drop u home…”
Nan:Noo…. I’m coming with you guys…
Cabir:Noo way… look at you… u are not in a condition to come with us…. we’ll have to carry you along with us… moreover if u get unwell Manik will definitely kill me…so pls nandu.. don’t create any trouble..
Nan: lekin cabir…

Cabir: It’s finalized… u are going home…. I’ll ask ranbir also to come with us so that we can split up and search for him…
(giving up after realizing that there is no way that she win an argument with cabir)
Nan:Okk. I’ll go home… but u call me every 10 min…. deal???
Cabir:Ok baba… agreed…
(Nandini agreed to go home but she had something in her mind….. even cabir knew tht nandini is not a person who gives up in an argument tht easily…)

Precap:
Nandini is crying helplessly with manik on her lap
Nan: Maaaniiikkk…. udoooo….. udoo maanik…. tumhe kya hua….
Manik is unconscious his face is bleeding.. it looks like he has met with an accident…

keep commenting guys…. good or bad… I’llaccept them… I don’t knw how my story is going…lli need your valuable suggestions and opinions so that I can decide whether to stop writing, improvise or continue…… pls feel free to criticize…. I don’t want you guys to flatter me… I want genuine opinions…:).

Credit to: Ritika

13 comments

  1. Jasi

    Nice epi how could manik can behave rude to nandhu and what happened for him how he met with an accident plz update next part soon

  2. Vrutika

    Hey eager to what happens next.. Superb.. Yaar manik met an accident ..oh noon
    Keep going..
    Keep smiling..

  3. Muskan

    Hey it’s me again muskan this FF is amazing I am loving it sorry for the late comment. Like I said his is amazing already I want to know more and want to read more please please please update frequently m

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