MANAN FF – OUR HEARTBEAT!! ( chapter -1) by tash SONGTALK

ok enough is enough…..3 updates already done..n the persons waits for ur response to come…to know…how m doing..bt enough to…u guys jst read..ok i doubt if u read it also or not..this is not for those who comment…bt those who do not….y r u all like this…matlab how much does it take to spend hardly 2 mins on typing how u feel about it n give…how much???….. if i can type 3000 words..then can’t u all jst type 3 words…can’t u????? now my final call..if this goes on,.this less response…i m gonna discontinue this ff…sorry to those who comment..i really dont have this much tym bt out of my this strict schedule i take out tym to write my story..n its not bocz of u..i love writing thats y i write..bt if my work isnt loved..then y should i waste my tym here….i will only write in wattpad n end….enough guys…

sorry to my commenters bt u can see…i cant help it..so less response..so i think i should not drag this ff…i will end it in more 2 – 3 updates… if i get good response then only i will complete my story otherwise i will give a breif story with no fun n end it…sorry again bt have to do it…

**************££************************************************************* nandu’s p.o.v

n then we all started walking on the beach to find my ‘ dramebaaz friends’!!
i think this whole night will be over in finding my friends only…how dumb n pathetic r they…matlab…left us n aab pata nahi kaha…kisko trouble kar rahe honge….godddddd help me…aaiyapa….plz find them….

n u know what…aaiyapa is my very good friend…see he fulfilled my wish instantly…

there they r….
bt what r they doing…..( correction)
what the f**k r they doing…

we went near them…..

what????????

cabir is digging the ground with his hands n shouting hand hand come out…..

two more men r finding something in the sand…
mukhti is instructing all of them….

i said- hey mukhti…what r u guys doing….

mukhti with lots of commanding attitude- ah…guys..u continue searching..we ll jst come..cabir come…

i m totally confused now…

n now they came towards us….

cabir was wearing a tshirt with shorts..he looked cute..

mukhti..wow..she looked as usual hot..a bikini on which she had worn a skirt…
hair open n gorgeous…

zayn-” can someone tell me what is going on..???”

suddenly my evil twins started laughing loud…

manik-” now what…??”

gigi-” yaaaa….plzzz do the honours to tell us that what are u guys up to?????”

cabir-” actually they have lost their hand somewhere??”

everyone made a weird face n they were still laughing…

i said-” see if ur f**king shit is finished..then tell us whole matter…how can they lose their hand?? idiots…!!”

mukhti-” they r idiots…see they r drunk…n we tricked them…n those idiots really got into our trick…they really think they lost their hands even though they r searching them with their own hands…😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂”

all looked at her with so much surprise…

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n all bursted out laughing hard…..

gig was rolling on the floor laughing…
who wouldn’t..those ppl were seriously in trouble..n they were veryyyyyy worried..searching their hands in the sand..wow…

sooo idiotic.. n this idiot plan can only be thought by no one else bt mukhti n cabir….

noooo wonder y they r called ” evil twins”” 😈😈

n yah…here goes…cabir to stop them…

cabir-” hey guys..look what i found…i found ur hands….come with me…”

hahaa…they really believed him..

cabir did some hand magical fake moves n then held his hand…

cabir-” see….here ur hand!!”

i can’t believe this…they are sooooo happy…they r thanking cabir n mukhti as if they have saved their lives….

these guys really….

manik said-” guys….over???…. now let’s spend some friends quality time…”

all agreed happily…

here we go…

a born fire was lit by my super talented manik n cabir n zayn…we girls were having some girl talk till then….

then suddenly cabir spoke…

ok so now we r gonna play something…..

all started to think….

cabir-” never have i ever…??”

all said in one go -” noooo”
cabir -” y?”

i said-” no cabir…we have played it a hundred times…n it’s boring now..”

then??

i said-” let’s play a new game…as in..we all love singing ok…so we haven’t practiced anything also…so we will play a game…song talk”

all at one time shouted at me-” what???” in excitement.

i explained them the rule that we will roll the bottle n on whom it stops..that person has to sing a song..n that song should be dedicated to a person for whom u r singing…like i sing..a song for gigi what i feel should be portrayed in the song..ok…!!

everyone nodded…we all had a glass of sangria in our hands… manik had the guitar in his hands….also sangria…

we all started the game….

the bottle rolled….

the bottle stopped on mukhti…

mukhti took the guitar from manik n said…

mukhti-” so guys this song is dedicated to….

n then she became numb….

she continued

it’s dedicated to my long lost love…my first n last love……”

she sang..-” lakh duniya kahe ‘tum nahi ho’
tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho
lakh duniya kahe ‘tum nahi ho’
tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho

meri har soch me, meri har baat me
mere ehsaas me, mere jazbaat me
tum hi tum ho
tum har kahin ho
ho o laakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho
ho o laakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho

tumne chhoda hai kab saath mera
thaame ho aaj bhi hath mera
koi manzil koi rehguzar ho
aaj bhi tum mere humsafar ho
jaaun chaahe jahaan tum wahin ho
ho o o lakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho
ho o o lakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho

she completed n we had tears in our eyes…she too was crying…

bechari mukhti…

she was a typical tom boy….kisi ko kabhi pyaar nahi kiya…par jab kiya..to betahasa kiya…itna ki uske liye ladke se puri ladki ban gai pagli…bt kismat…kismat ne usse dump kar diya…
vo ek car accident mein mara gaya…
mukhti broke from that time….she lost all hopes…
n from then…from last 5 years…she has not loved anyone..vo uska childhood love that….god snatched it from her…poor mukhti….bt she is way too stronger than us…she never broke from outside…she always believes that abhi..yes her childhood love abhimanyu singh is still alive..n always present in her heart….aweee..god bless her…

i quickly went n hugged her….

she said she is f9 after some time…

we again rolled the bottle n now it stopped on gigi…

she sang love you like a love song…. composed by her only..she rocked it…n that was dedicated to zayn but obvious..;p

again bottle rolled n then stopped on cabir

uff..dramebaaz…he sang…

pyaar hai yaa saza..for all couples…kill him god…such a idiot…

n then the bottle turned…
it stopped on me….

woh…i started to think what to sing for manik bt cabir interrupted my thoughts..

cabir-” nandu…we know u will sing some romantic song for manik..so there is a twist for u…”
i was so angry

i said-” y only me??”

cabir-” plzzz na….so u have to sing the song in which u have to sing about manik’s gr8ness n ur jodi…”

i was ok with that..bcoz it was more or like same with what i thought…

i took the guitar…

i closed my eyes….

end kf nandu’s pov…

manik’s pov..

she closed her eyes…so mesmerising…

she sang..

na kuch poocha, na kuch manga

she opened her eyes n looked at me…

tune dil se diya jo diya

she had lil tears in her eyes n a small smile..that showed that she was thanking me…

na kuch bola, na kuch tola

muskura ke diya jo diya

i smiled back at her…
she walked towards me…

i stood up..
tu hi dhoop, tu hi chau

tu hi apna paraya

she held my hand n saw deep into my eyes..

aur kuch na janu, bas itna hi janu

she kissed my forehead..n sang…

(tujh mein rab dikhta hai, yaara mein kya karun) – 2
sajde sar jhukta hai, yaara mein kya karun

tujh mein rab dikhta hai, yaara mein kya karun
rab ne.. bana di jodii…..

i hugged her..she hugged me back…

wow…such a beautiful song it was….i still can hear it in my ears…all were clapping..bt nandu unaware of that was inside me..inside my arms into a different world….

she is so innocent…like a lilly flower clean…

even though she is bold from outside bt soft n shy from inside…

i love her..insanely…she is made for me..n i for her… i wonder…what will happen if she goes away from me…

god,.dont ever snatch her from me…plzzzz…

bt this is something new…like this trip to rio has made me get so many new thing to see in nandu..she has become more bold from before…
wow….my chain of thoughts were broken by cabir’s voice of whistling…

he is so mad…bt he is way too superb friend…

end of manik’s pov…
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hope u liked it….today i m not gonna even beg for comments…

coz its worth less..

if u liked it then do comment or else i will end this in coming updates..tq

#spreadlove

15 comments

  1. kavya

    TASH dear…..
    Love this update yar……
    ND not just today’s update….infact this story is too good nd interesting……

    plz plz plz naraj mat hoo yar….janti hoo Maine kaam naraj hone wale hi kiye h….but frds h naa hum too plz….this time plz forgive me….next time aisa nhi hoga…..
    Har update par chota yaa bdha comment jarure hoga….

    ND one special thanks….for this song selection…..
    Sare mere favorite song h…..infact tum yahi hoo…..song padh kar dil khush hoo gya…..

    Thank u yar for this new story…..ur hard work…..plz plz plz continue this story….

    LOVE U LOADS….

  2. piya

    Pls dear don’t be upset and we won’t force you to continue as your point is highly justified pls don’t be upset dear.
    Update is mindblowinggg awesome loved your writing soooo much you just rocked in your every part take care stay happy love you loads

  3. Anjali

    Woww! Its was way gud…..evil twins r really mad…..song talk was jst fantastic….manan yaar love them….i cud feel those lines …really grt song selction….waitng eagrly realllly….nd yaa now plzzzz dont lv dis ff i mean dis is smthng reallly different….ur efforts can b seen worthng….u r corrct in ur side bttt jst 1 thing dear….4 those who arent commntng will u let us feel d conseqences…..plzz dont do that….bt aftr oll cmpltly ur wish…i wont force….othrs i reqest plzz cmmnt yaar….fuel up our writrs who show so much of efforts……upto u tash..t c .

  4. Nishita

    |Registered Member

    Hey tash..don’t b disheartened.. I can feel ur prblms..but don’t b sad..u r doing a great job..& it’s an awesome story..hope at least now everyone will cmnt..& about this ff..it’s completely ur dcsn what’ll u do..but still try to continue it..& today’s epi was superb as always.. Best of luck 🙂 👍

  5. Poornima

    Keep it up…Ur story is very nice..I just started reading your story today, it is awesome. Don’t stop, allow your imagination to flow..You are a brilliant writer. 🙂

  6. Sindhu_Varma

    |Registered Member

    Coming to the point
    Don’t beg for comments! Never means never, and if they don’t want to comment it is their problem not urs nd I don’t think if u ask them they will do it they won’t! I can give u an example see my story can u find comments above 20 ? No Na still do I beg ? No right so u also do it
    But still u want to end it here in TU then fine I will follow ur story on wattpad.. begging for something is not good, it makes us come down..
    this part was good
    Nd sorry for being rude
    Love
    Sindhu 😘

  7. Mahi13

    |Registered Member

    Di U R DOING A GREAT JOB. Trust me. If u wanna discontinue over here then ok I’m really no one to stop u. Di if some ppl r not commenting then its bcoz they don’t know how to appreciate sumone’s talent. But that doesn’t mean that u’ll stop???? Does it???? U r talented n u know that right. U’ve proved it. Don’t feel down n i agree with Sindhu di. She’s right.

    Today’s part was REALLY SUPERB. I appreciate ur choice of songs. U described everything really well. Good job👍👍👍💛💛💛

    Di I’m sorry for this late comment. My exams r going on. Moreover that my parents took away my iPod. So I’m bit irregular at tu. Sorry.😅

    Take care😘😘😘😘

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