Manan-Is it destined to be? (Episode-8)

Hello ppl,Im back ..I had an awesome journey nd here is an update fr my lovely readers..ignore typos..criticsm accepted..suggestions r welcum..luv u all.t.c.bye
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An illuminating dawn fell upon that morning as all lay at rest lost in dreams unaware of reality.Unaware of life as they dreamt away in a bliss holding onto the precious moment they owned wthn their grasps.

MANIK P.O.V(I seriously luv to write his P.O.V):
Opening his eyes slowly,Manik lukd around his surroundingd a heavy felling weighing on him as he inhaled deeply pressing his hand to his temple when a strong smell of vanilla nd roses hit his nose as he slowly turned around his body stiffening.
He couldnt comprehend what he is seeing as he stared gobsmacked lyk a fool at the peaceful beauty snuggled on his chest holding his right arm.
Dark bronze nd black hair fell in loose waves across her face as the sunlight shned on her face makingbher look angelic as she slowly moved,her hair falling away from her face that hid her identity as he stiffend further seeing her in his bed snuggled nxt to his arm.
Sitting up abruptly,he didnt know wat to do but his train of thoughts stopped as she moved uncomfortably her eyes fluttering open lukng at her surroundings as he stared at her ..the illuminating sunrays swimming through her enchanting eyes as she smiled softly making his heart skip a beat.
And for the first time ever he finally saw her very clearly nd his heart clenched knowing such a ray of sunshine cant stay in his dark lyf forever.
He knew the more she stayed the fainter her light will get nd so getting up abruptly he turned around facing his back 2wrds her.But no matter how much he tried he cudnt frget the angelic luk on her face as she opened her eyes-God she is so………….
“Manik”

NANDINI P.O.V:
Opening my eyes I felt a strong light gazing upon the room making me move slowly when all of a sudden the bed creeked nd a soft sigh escapped frm sum1 making me stiffen.
And just lyk that evrythng came crashing down as I slowly sat up lukng at the broad back of Manik as he placed his face in his hands”Manik?”‘I whisperd worriedly as he stiffend b4 slowly turning around nd lukng me wth a luk I have never witnessed b4.Suddenly all of a sudden I felt self conscious as he stared at me wth a dark look but this isnt dark look to intimidate me but thuis seemed like a look ..the same luk wth which we see a butterscotch icecream(my fav is butterscotch that’s y..hehe) b4 u eat it as it is all u wanted to-I stopped my train of thoughts as he stood up abruptly walking 2wrds the washroom as I sighed feeling stupid fr thinking otherwise.
Slowly getting up frm the bed I felt sumthing odd about him nd then I REALISED KI that I am in a crop top nd shorts which r barely covering my midthigh nd this is the frst tym Manik is seeing me lyk that..Dont get me wrong but strday Sanjana called me in a such a haste that I didnt had tym to change nd as we have dfrnt rooms Manik had never noticed me lyk this b4…nd then I even didnt tie my hair nd it luks lyk a birdnest -nd which grl would want her husband seeing her lyk that…

After sum 15 minutes:
Quickly luking around the room I tried moving o the door as I walked 2wrds it wondering how can i b so careless when suddenly I felt myself bumping into sumthing hard as MANIK groaned lukng at me”I’m so sorry i didnt mean to-“I strtd lukng up at him as I felt my mouth agape as I stared at the sight infront of me.
there is manik standing in nothing but a towel wrapped around him as his hair dripped with beads of water as he stared at me making me gulp at the dark luk he threw my way”Nandini…”he whispered as my headshot forward nd my eye widening at wat he said.
Manik has just called me nandini nd not nandani.
“Dont give me that luk kid”he muttered darkly walking 2wrds me as I felt myself taking a step backward all of a sudden”What luk ?”I whispered confused biting my bottom lip as he groaned glaring at me”Like u dont like wat u see nd u werent chedcking me out”‘he muttered darkly as I gasped in astonishment when all of a sudden I felt his soft lips against mine..
Oh God!!Iam screwed….
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I could manage only this bcoz of jetlag..nxt epi longwala pakka prmise..if it is crappy frgive me….do voice ur opinions nd views..nd manan frst kiss*dum dum dum…….*-
luv u all..
Prahathika Krishnan

19 comments

  1. Arpita

    So glad you updated! Have been constantly checking for ur update! Awesome one, as always! Anxiously waiting for the next one!!! ❤

  2. Kyy

    Superb and a fantastic update dear❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
    Waiting for your next update
    MANAN scenes were awesome….

  3. Tash

    Praha… First of all tq for reading n commenting on my ff… N trust me in front of ur ff it nothing… But still u lyked it… Coming to today’s episode it was fab… Trust me fab,fab… N at last what happened… Manik kissed Nandu.. Wohooooo..
    Plzz update.. Soon
    Love u tc

    • Tash

      Praha again cheating.. I ll again be dreaming about ur ff…
      Mmm. Love u sissy.. Update soon…

  4. Mahi

    What to say……….
    I’m searching for words to say about the update. U NEVER FAIL TO GIVE US A BIIIIIIIG SHOCK. How do u do it????? In ur ff we can naver guess what’ll happen next. I think it’s a big quality of a talented writer the ability of shocking ppl. That makes u 1 of my most favourite writers. Frankly speaking I wasnt expecting manan kiss so soon. again 2night I won’t be able to sleep :'( 😛 what to do my mind’ll only think about ur ff
    😛 Update as soon as possible di. Now look my mind is so much
    occupied with ur ff that I forgot to ask how r u di? The update was marvellous like always. Tc 😀 n yeah I talked a lot 2day so sorry for annoying u with my useless bak bak 😛 😀 😉

  5. kavya.

    Awww…..kya bolo….kya bolo….kya bolo….main dii apko…..

    Nd last part too total hi unexpected tha……
    kyuki mujhe lga tha….bcoz manik ko fever h too woo thodi or care karegi….manik ki feeling nandu ke liye or jada strong hoo jaaiygi….
    But yaha too suddenly scene hi change hoo gya…..

    But still….ye bhut entertaining h….
    Seriously dii…..apko too book writer hona chahiye…..
    Apki imagination or writing skill sb mind blowing h….

    Or update too bta hi diya….meri expectations se bhar hi tha….

    Love u dii….
    Keep going….

  6. priya

    superb praha……..haven’t expected a kiss between manan this much soon in this ff…………. manik slowly started falling for nandu ah………. that’s soo good………aliya’s secret is not yet revealed……. soo good praha…….u reached US now….. when will u return india…….take rest and settle all the things and then think about next update…………love u praha……….. keep updating……….

  7. pooh

    Hey…I am a silent reader…I am commenting first time…..Plz give us next update soon….this wait is keeling me…Plz post next update soon

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