Manan-Is it destined to be? (Episode-7)

Hola,ppl..I know Im late sorry…prsnl prblms ke vaje se….Luv u all.T.c…Ignore typos….Suggestions r welcum…Criticsm accepted….nd ppl dont assume things …I never mentioned Dhruv eloped wth alya nd this is a dark ff ppl…So,thoda tym lagta hai fr manik to fall fr nandu…………..
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An eerie silence fell upon the room as I stared skeptical at Manik’s burning form laying on the bed as beads of sweats formed on his forehead.

I didnt know wat to say to him as he lay there.For the frst tym ever I stated speechless not knowing what to say to him.
“Please…Come back-please”he whispered hoarsely his eyes closed tightly as he slowly shook his head muttering sumthing under his breath.

I stared helpless at him as the door suddenly opened and in came Sanjana with a damp cloth in her hands and a water bottle in her left hand.

“Nandini here……Quick please this on his forehead and remove those blankets of him”she spoke in a hushed tone as I nodded getting up from bed and removing the heavy blankets off him nd tossing it to the side as he shivers from the impact his eyes slowly opening.

off him nd tossing it to the side as he shivers from the impact his eyes slowly opening.

“Place this on his head frm time to time and rinse it frm the washbasin there”she spoke pointing to it next to the closet as I nodded”I have to retire to my room Mrs.Malhotra.I’ll see u in the mrng”she spoke softly as I nodded walking 2wrds Manik’s side nd placing the damp cloth on his forehead as I heard the door closing behind me.

Taking a seat next to his laying form I finally got the tym to truly luk around his room nd I must say I was just awed by the simplicity yet intimidating luk of it.

As soon as u come into the room u’ll find urself lukng at the lalrge bed to ur right against the wall nd beside the bed is a small black couch… lukng straight frm the bed u’ll find urself gazing at a large door locked which is filled wth I dont know wat…But as far as Sanjana said that is the room in which Manik lyk’s to spend his time mostly in…Beside that door to the extra room there is a large window which is covered in black blinds nd next to the window on the left is a large walk in closet with two small thin doors attached to it nd next is the washroom.

On the right is a large black nd re wardrobe attached to the wall nd has magnificent mirroes showing the viewer the entire room view frm the bed 2wrds the main door.

I must admit Iam absolutely in luv wth this room.It is simple yet unique nd beautiful-kind of his behaviour if I have to be honest.
Iam suddenly interrupted out of my thoughts as Manik’s face turned 2wrds me ..his dark eyes staring at me but sumhow this tym it didnt hold a cold dark look.This tym it hels a vulnerable luk.A luk a young child gives to his mother when he is scared.
“My head hurts”he whispered softly as I nodded biting my lip from the sudden attention.I must say I was not used to this attending nd medicating but I slowly shuffled next to him placing my fingers on his forehead as I slowly strtd massaging them against his skin nd making my hand upwards 2wrds his soft silky hair..

“Why r u doing all this princess”he whispered softly as if in a dream state as I swallowed luking down the tingles formed in my stomach due to his adressing me as princess..Chucking all those I said”Because its the right thing to do”I spoke quietly as he closed his eyes…a low chuckle vibrating off him..

“After all I have done”he spoke shuffling 2wrds me as I stiffened while my hands still playing in his hair..”After all you have done”I whispered finally as he shuffled nd I could feel my eyes drooping nd sleep taking over me nd he whispered”i like you Nandu..u r a very gud person in my dark lyf…like a light in a dark tunnel-“nd with that i felt darkness embracing nd taking over me as I slowly leaned my head against the headboard of bed as manik’s head lay rest in my lap…While I could faintly heear his voice”Im not fit for u princess…mai layak nahi hu..I hate u”
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socho ppl Is manik gonna fall for nandu or gonna make her life hell even now….Do voice ur opinions..luv u
-Prahahika krishnan

29 comments

  1. hina

    omg its u praha finally..yippee..u knw wat i googled nearly 21 tymz js to c wthr ur ff is posted or no karke..finally its suspensed ff but a very short one tody…hope u get tym to post a long one n regularly..luv u..

    • Praha

      |Author

      sorry hina…yeh kya hey na thoda sa personal prblms ki vaje se i couldnt update nd even tmrw i doubt my update coz I’ll be in my flight back to U.S..nd thnks fr ur luv of googling it over 21 tyms….ha I’ll post a long one next…pakka..luv u too

  2. Mahi

    The update is nice. Nandu taking care of Manik that’s really sweet of her. I missed u n ur ff alot. How r u di?? Update soon n take care 😀

    • Praha

      |Author

      thnk u…missed u all too..im fyn mahi…my family isnt fyn..that’s the prob….ya I’ll update soon..u too t.c..luv u too

  3. Nee

    U gave update aftr so long tym n dat too short one…so eagerly waiting fr ur ff bt update is awesome

  4. kavya.

    I think manik make her life hell even more….
    Bcoz he is the MANIK MALHOTRA……
    and main point is…..how can manik fall for a girl soo easily……
    Isliye mujhe lgta h….itni jaldi manik or nandini ke beech sab thik nhi hoga ……

    infact mujhe lgta h manik itna rude behave jaan bhujh kar raha h….may be koi reason hoo…..

    But it’s okk…..i will wait ki kb mujhe mere sare ques ke ans mil jaaiyege….through ur ff…..

    NOW….come too update…..aj ka update thoda chota nhi tha…..
    But koi nhi……atleast apne update too kiya….

    But ap bhut wait karate hoo…..seriously……plz plz hoo sake too ap ek schedule bana doo……kis din konsi story update karoge….
    Aise apki dono stories flow me rehgi….or hum bhi jada wait nhi karna parega….

    Too….
    Love u loads…..
    Stay happy……
    Keep entraining……

    EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT EPISODES OF BOTH FF’s……….

    • Praha

      |Author

      oh my sweet heart….today tym jyada nahi hai meer pass isiliye i gave a small one..sorry dear i said na thoda sa family prblms….nd tmrw Im going to U.S..so frm tmrw regular updates milegi aapko…hm I think i shud consider ur idea of making a schedule if all of u r o.k wth ir I’ll give 3 days one ff nd other 3 days another ff…nd sunday whatever my readers want…sorry bcoz of me u had to wait a lot kavya..luv u too loads….

      • Tash

        Oh my god!.. Sorry Praha for commenting soooo late… Actually Maine bahot baar check kiya but didn’t find ur ff… Sooo I thought u were busy n then I got busy n checked now… N I have to say it’s was toooooo good… Bechara manik… Lil sparks between manan… I think manik’s heart is broken so he again doesn’t want to come close to a girl…

        Pata nahi but I ll leave it to u…

        No guesses..??n kavya’s idea is good

        But u r tooooooooooooooooooo good writer…??
        Love u Praha
        n I hope tumhari family problems jaldi solve Ho jaye…

        N meri aashique bhe jaldi post kar do..??

        Tc
        Bye

  5. piya

    Woww amazing superb missed you eagerly waiting for your updates thanks for updating mindblowing update once again thank you so much

  6. Tanushree

    Finally… u r here. Was impatiently waiting fr u. Nice update. But why does he hate her so much?

    • Praha

      |Author

      yup Im here…sorry fr making u wait so much dear..u ll get to know y he hates her or is it pretending nd all

      • priya

        I wanna put long comment and my mobile got strucked and don’t know y and how my virtual keyboard of mobile isn’t working ……..so I need to wait till I reach office and so now its time to comment………..awesome update praha……….manik had a soft corner for nandu its soo good praha…….. h r u praha now………happy journey praha………..am eagerly waiting for ur next update………love u lots………..

  7. Tash

    Oh my god!.. Sorry Praha for commenting soooo late… Actually Maine bahot baar check kiya but didn’t find ur ff… Sooo I thought u were busy n then I got busy n checked now… N I have to say it’s was toooooo good… Bechara manik… Lil sparks between manan… I think manik’s heart is broken so he again doesn’t want to come close to a girl…

    Pata nahi but I ll leave it to u…

    No guesses..??

    But u r tooooooooooooooooooo good writer…??
    Love u Praha
    n I hope tumhari family problems jaldi solve Ho jaye…

    N meri aashique bhe jaldi post kar do..??

    Tc
    Bye

    • Praha

      |Author

      its o.k nd mene kitna baar bola aapko tash no sorry nd no thnk u..Its o.K u were busy nd cudnt cooment quickly nd evn I was busy nd so cudnt update all these days…thnk u fr ur compliment..hm jus liitle little sparks…luv u too tash..mene meri aashiqui bhi upload kiya..i think its under reviewing…t.c.Bye

  8. Sindhu_Varma

    |Registered Member

    Praha Bon Bon voyage..!
    Happy journey in French nd safe journey. I don’t want to tell how is ur update is.. Aur don’t upload ur ff until u r fine, u said na u have family problems nd that will disturb u all the time, so take ur time, chill pill with ur friends have fun nd then at last if u feel like updating then only update it ?
    Love
    Ur sister/friend

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