Manan-Is it destined to be? (Episode-21)

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hello ppl…nivaan didnt have time to type nd my hand took this much time to give u an update ..sorry..(hiding back of a wall…dont hit me wth chappal or anythng)…i know im late but belated happy new year..cholly fr the late..ignore typos….criticsm accepted…suggestions r welcum…
……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………recap:manik going to nandu’s house for forgiveness..
nandu p.o.v:
i stared stiffened as if i have seen a ghost as i stared at him.His large arms embracng me in a hug the strng cologne scent rubbng against my sweet perfume as i took a step back frm his embrace makng him stiffen..
He is here after all this months as if nthng had happnd.As if evrythng is fyn nd as if dis is all my fault,i mentally whispered as i lukd down seeng abhi bhai coming near me..As abhi bhai knows d truth nd reason behind all this,i cud almst see his anger takng over him as he stood head to head 2wrds him glaring at him lyk he is a lowly peasant..
“nandu kanna..i told u he wud come”my mum spoke cheerfully walkng 2wrds me makng me stiffen as i lukd at her pleadngly.if only she know the truth..if only she knew he isnt here fr me..he is here fr his image..
“now dat they have cme 2gthr finally its best dat v sort dis little misundrstndng out eh”‘appa spoke as he walked frwrd standng nxt to me nd him..
“nandu my child there is no need fr such delicate heart-our manik is here..fr u..he has apologised fr his mistakes”‘üncle raj spoke patting a stiff manik on the back as he lukd at me darkly as if i committed a grave sin.
“im sorry uncle”i muttered all of sudden turning on my heel as i ran up d stairs leavng a shocked crowd behind me.But i cudnt do this..i ddint want to see him..
y was he here again???
wat does he want now????





Manik stared at her as she ran up d stairs wth so much hatred in her eyes..he knew she hated him..heck he hated himself but he had to do this…for her atleast,there is no other way..
“oh dear..its o.k…she will cum around…manik baby go nd get her nd njy a nyt out sumwhre to a restaurant we will stay here”nyo spoke as he lukd at her emotionless b4 walkng away frm d crowd feelng his blood boil..
he isnt d one who will blo*dy beg fr anyone’s forgiveness..if she wantd frgiveness he will show her wat crime nd frgiveness is..(author p.o.v: stupid fellow…bipolar much…)
Reachng up d stairs he came across a large hallway seeing various doors full of nandu’s photos depicting her bubbliness,childishness(manik p.o.v: she is so cute lyk a doll….full of lyf…wat have u done to her manik…..i will let her know evrythng…no no manik how can u..its better if u stay away frm her)…..He entered her room nd saw her sniffing wch boke his heart into pieces(no manik…no no)…nd she is silently mutterng sumthng..He saw her laying on bed curled up and lukng at d ceiling emotionlessly.D twinkle in her eeys was long gone as she stared ahead her ,soft breath cumng out slwly…
ÿ r u here?”‘she whisper yelled emotionless as he stiffened closng d door behind him..
“u r cumng home “‘he said harshly as she lukd up at him her long hair gettng messy against d large bed “r u tellng me or askng me?”she muttered as he walked 2wrds her makng d girl stiffen nd sit up..
“Depends how u see it”he muttered again standng nxt to her as she lukd up at him glarng at him..He could see d hatred in her eyes..The raw aggression as he sighed rubbng a hand over his forehead..
“nandini i dont have tym fr this come pack ur things ur going home”he spoke as she stood up lukng at him as her nxt wrds reachd his ears makng him stiffen as he stared at her breathless…
“i dont want to live wth u anymore-i dnt want anythng frm u…i hate u”she spat as she lukd up at him makng sumthng snap inside of him…
No one has ever dared to speak to him lyk dat..People shiver nd tremble in fear in his presence but dis nuisance didnt..God she is annoying..
“Nandini dnt piss me off..come home now”he spat as he slammed her against d wall makng her glare at him”leave me alone u coward-y dont u go tell evry1 d truth .Dat u have alone u coward-y dont u go tell evry1 d truth.That u having a stupid mistress u want to marry ..go manik tell them the f**kng truth”she spat wth hatred as he lukd at her seeng red as a loud slap echoed thrughout d room makng him stiffen as she cried softly sliding against d wall her soft sobs echoing lytly…
Wat d f$$$ did he just do?
“Nandini…”he whispered crouchng down nxt to her as big fat tears rolled dwn frm her eyes makng sumthng clench his heart..
Y is he actng lyk this?He’s nevr felt such raw emotons for any1..but this girl here-dat came out of nowhere seemed to dstroy all his thinkng nd morals..
“Im so sorry”he whispered cuppng her cheeks as he wiped her hair away frm her face makng him stare at d lrge fingerprints on her face..He is a sick monster.
“y r u doing this-y wont leave me why manik?”she cried lukng up at him..His name rolling of her tongue lyk sweetest of melodies as he placed his forehead against her grabbing her hand…(wat happened….to him?)
“bcoz u have not given me a choice”he whispered broken as she lukd at him tears brimming in her eyes”u dont have to do this—-u cud leave me,u cud give me a divorce”she spoke as she stiffneed slowly seeng his xpression..
Sumthing wthn him snapped.She wanted to leave him..(manik p.o.v:Hell…he will nevr let it happen..her going away frm him is nt gonna happen)-forever?…over his dead body,she will get it,he thought as he picked her up bridal style makng her stiffen as he leaned in muttreing darkly..
“THE DAY I GIVE YOU A DIVORCE IS THE DAY HELL FREEZES OVER NANDINI MANIK MALHOTRA……..”
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O.M.G Manik slapped nandu..monster kahika?but dont hate him may b he is havng his own reasons…bipolar..wat happened to him at d start of d update…..short update na…nxt will b a big one…SILENT READERS PLS DO COMMENT ND MY LOVELY REGULAR READERS PLS DO COMMENT….This update is dedicated for all the ppl who commented on d previous update(tash,anandi,kavina,shubhangi,aswini durga,piya,nitu,nee,nuramy1997,mithila,kyy,kavya,es,mary nd sorry if i had missed any1)…do comment nd let me know which is ur fav part/line in 2day’s update…luv u all.t.c..bye……

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15 Comments
  1. Awesome di…n ya missed ur update a lot…fav line is nandini manik malhotra…?
    Eager fr next update

  2. Prahjuuuu….how are you….I missed you and your ff soooooo much….?. Anyways good to see you back…take rest dear….and why dont you try google speech to txt…it will be better no??…like.. u’ll get more rest for your hand too…Anyways Happyyyy New year dear…have an awesome and splendid year ahead…wishing you all the success and happiness in life…?. And my personal fav in today’s part was Maniks pov esp the ‘……over my dead body …..’ Part where nandu had asked Manik for a divorce…Waiting eaaaagerly for more updates…Take care dear…

  3. Ur updates r awesome waited fr it Nd it feels worth it

  4. One request if ur hand is fine now soo plsss do make a regular updates

  5. ??Hi ! I hope now your hand OK. And I like the one “THE DAY….

  6. Aswini Durga

    Poor Nandu …u never stopped amazing us wid ur cliffhanger updates…n today update was awesome…Happy New Year dear

  7. You forget me I also comment that was a very nice update Miss you very much thank you for the update that was a nice update.

  8. How’s your hand sorry I didn’t know that you have problem with your hand.Pliz take care of your hand for us .

  9. Kavina

    Loved it. What is this!!!! Your hand is not ok and your typing. That’s not good. Anyways Happy New Year. Please take yourself, we will wait

  10. Tanushree

    happy new year dear… this was short but amazing. take care of urself. i luvd the last lines, fantastic

  11. Happy new year dearvsuperrrr awesome part missed your ff soopo badly
    Last line are soooo magnificent amazinggggg superrrrr awesomeee
    Take care of your hand dear lots of love dear and a very prosperous happyyyy new year to you both love you loads dear
    Prahu you are soooo mindblowinggg writer super
    Todays part is full of emotion and all lines are really superbb especially the last one

  12. Sindhu_Varma

    hey Praha! hope u remember me can u just give me links to the previous parts please
    And everyone who read my story i have published it sorry for vanishing

    1. Praha

      ha but frm wch epi u req the links???

  13. Paaru Kutti05

    You always ROCK Praha…. I LOVE it…

  14. Praha

    ppl i have given then next update of mitdb and also the last part of manan -meri aashiqui..do check meri aashiqui as i have attached my new supernatural story alpha manik’s prologue wth that part ..so do check it and comment ur views on my new story’s prologue so as to continue or not

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