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Manan-Is it destined to be? (Episode-1)

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So,here goes the first update…
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This is not how it was supposed to happen..
This shouldnt be happening…
I didnt want this.
I never wanted this yet here I was made to sit,as the father(church father ) asked me “Do u take Manik Malhotra as ur groom?” nd all eyes trained at my words that are about to come out…(We were already married in Hindu style nd I was anyway binded to him by the pious thread nd three precious knots forever nd ever)
With a shaky voice I sucked in a breath staring at my hands that were decorated with various henna patterns
“yes”
I whispered softly ,tears forming in my eyes but luckily for me they arent seen as the white veil covered my face,making me look down nd choke back on a sob.
How unfair was life?
The one I was meant to get married ran away with his sweetheart nd here Im getting married to his brother to save the family’s honour
This isnt supposed to happen but yet it did I thought as I glanced his way,his black blazer nd his dark eyes staring at mine making me look down,avoiding his gaze
MANIK MALHOTRA…
One of the most successful businessman in society’s eyes and the cruelest and most heartless criminal to others..
Everyone feared Manik
He is the most feared criminal known and all are petrified of him.
He is the man you tell children about when they misbehave,he is the man that woman died for and he is the man that every male feared in London and wished they never crossed paths with him.
Just looking at him made me look down in fear,as he sat there proudly,his dark aura radiating of him whilst his eyes are trained on me..
As if he is a predator and I’m his prey…
“May Jesus always keep u happy nd now u may kiss ur bride”the church father spoke nd he just pecked me without any emotions nd I didnt respond too..nd we walked from there..
Looking around I saw my mother’s teared nd stained face as she smiled at me reassuringly but i could see the pain and hurt evident in her eyes..
(Oh I forgot to introduce Nandini’s mother Srinija Murthy, a caring housewife who runs ana NGO “APNA” nd very helpful lady..Nandini’s name is kept by the combination of her father NANDkishore murthy and srINIja)
“Thank u baby”my mum whispered as she kissed my forehead helping me stand up..
“It’s time to go”she spoke softly as I walked out of the room holding onto my long white gown as we stepped inside the large venue while ppl cheered and wished me gud luck for my new life
Little did they know my life ended the moment i married him..
The criminal
MANIK MALHOTRA…
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So,Im back with first epi or update of my ff…Ignore typos…Criticsm accepted…Suggestions r welcum…Let me know how it is…Voice ur opinions…Im really happy with the luv u r showering on me..Luv u all…T.C bye…This update is dedicated to Aanandi,Kavya,kyy,piya nd jasi..
Hope all the names of my readers are correct

23 Comments
  1. Nice start… keep goin….

    1. Praha

      thnk u…hope I’ll keep up to ur xpectations

  2. Kavina

    Hey didn’t read you prologue but was captivated by the story’s name. I love the way you write. Update soon.

    1. Praha

      thnk u kavina..nd do read the prologue too fr better understanding

      1. Kavina

        Sure, just read it after this

  3. Sindhu_Varma

    Praha this is an kickass start keep going nd plz update soon

    1. Praha

      Ha I’ll give another update tmrw…

  4. Amazing nice story keep going and pls update soon

    1. Praha

      updated epi 2 already nd epi 3 tmrw..tq fr ur support

  5. nice and interesting pls keep going…

  6. This is a SUPERB starting. I loved it a lot. Update soon n take care: )

    1. Praha

      thnks fr ur compliment…tq..luv u too

  7. U r too good yar……

    thanks for this amazing update……

    Keep going…..
    Love u loads……

    1. Praha

      tq kavya….luv u too

  8. Heyyyyyy!!tooooooooooo good… Awesome start…. Btw I am one of ur readers too but anyways.. N let me tell u the name of this for is sooooooooo good n also the cover pic of this ff is soooo beautiful n mesmerising… Thanks for the ff

    1. Praha

      tq tashs….tq so much fr ur compliment…nd if anyone can get me more beautiful coverpic for both of my ffs do comment..i’ll give my mail id so that i can get that cover pic

  9. Salley145

    Nice update, if I was in Nandini’s place I would’ve suicided after leaving a sorry note as I would love to die instead of marrying such man ?
    Kyyrocks

    1. Praha

      hey salley dont judge manik so easily yaar….kyy rocks

  10. The update is very and about manik its awesome good luck

  11. Soo sweet of you praharika….luving this ff…awesome start…waiting for more updates from you…

    1. Praha

      tq anandi…ya I hope I’ll live up to ur xpectations nd sorry if u feel rude my name is Prahathika

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