i make her MRS SANSKAR MAHESHWARI….. EPISODE 30

Epi starts

Swara:- leave me…..

Sanskar:- swara….

Swara jerks his hand n move on….

Sanskar :-let me drop u….the weather is also not good…..its a stormy night

Swara:- don’t worry…..I know how to fight with the storm….

Sanskar hold her hand n pull her on him….

Swara:- y u r worried…y u cares….whether I live or die…y today…..???

Sanskar:- u too cares for me….

Swara:- huh….bcz I never betray u…I never left u or my 6 month daughter…..I never raise my hand on u….for any other person…..I m not having any najaayaz aulad…..

Sanskar:- Swara

Swara:- come on raise ur hand beat me…….y u came back…?? 7 years. These 7 years….u never even call me ….so y now…….u know ….I wanna kill myself…. But live for mahira……only mahira…she is very much attached to laksh….n for her raglak sacrifices their married life….they live like friends…..on evey karvachauth….laksh break my fast n then ragini…..ragini always wear high neck suit to hide her mangalsutra…..n apply sindoor in such a way that know one come to know about it…….all this for mahira….

We all make sacrifices for her…n what her own father did??? He throw her out…..???

For u only ayaan is ur child….not mahira???

History repeats…..u r another shekhar gadodia…

He chooses ragini…

N u…u choose ayaan…..

Every girl want her hubby to be like her dad….but I never wished that….but see….what happen???

What was my fault…..???
My fault was that…I loved u……I care for u….I dedicated myself to u…..I trust u……

I was really a fool….what u get sanskar….???

Tell me…..
First u love someone…….marry her….give her respect….love…n care……make her fall for u….n then betray her……

I was just a use n throw material for u.. Right????

U break me…….u destry my lifet.. but now I will not let u destroy mahira’s life….

She cry so badly……her condition was not good….she was just crying….n cursing sanskar…

Swara:- but mahira ko mai swara nhi banne dungi…..never…..

Sanskar:- swara….I still love u…..I just stay with kavita bcz of ayaan…..bcz she try to suicide…n

Swara:- n u kill me…to save her life…..right???

Sanskar:- m sorry swara…..

Swara:- sorry…wow….

She hold his collar…..

Swara:- u know what. ..I don’t need u…don’t need ur sorry….ur money….n ur name…..u r nothing for me…..nothing……..I m ashamed that u loved u….

By saying this she faints…n sanskar hold her in his arms……

At home

Ragini:- laksh…..if u think m unaware of ur plans then u r wrong……I know everything…. U asked the driver to do all that…..

Laksh:- yah…I did….bcz I wanna,swasan be together…I have seen love in sanky eyes….

Ragini:- love…??? I think u r out of ur mind….what he did …I think u forgot….

Laksh:- ragu. ..

Ragini:- listen…I will not let u play with my sister life…..n I warned u ..if u did anything now then….I will divorce u….

Laksh:- ragini

Ragini:- enough …

The doorbell rings…..

Ragini open the door…..n saw swara in sanky arms….unconscious…..

Raglak shocked ……

Precap:- SOMEONE IS COMING……kavita’s truth….finally out

guys.. Hope u like the epi…. ..thanks all who comments earlier…. Keep reading n commenting…….

53 comments

  1. AnuAnn

    AnuAnn

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    Awesome yaaar.. Loved this part.. Feeling really very sad for swara.. Don’t make her forgive sanskasr so soon .. He have to bear more punishment

  2. Madhu

    Its good kavith’s truth coming but dont want to see swasan together….its hurt me dr…..dont know why i dont like swasan in this ff….plz dont unit swasan and mahira….mahira and swara shouldnt forgive sanskar……
    If you can plz make that new entry as lights fr sawar and mahira’s life…….
    Sanskara deserve punishment…….
    Epi was awsome dr and so emotional…heart touching epi dr…..waiting fr next part….
    I m sorry dr if i hurt you with my comment….

  3. Arshaanya

    Arshaanya

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    Now dis is wat i want… loved it… swarazz everywrd is 👍… loved it he needs to suffer more give him punishment… let him cry for swara nd his daughter…loved 2dayz epi

  4. Mica

    Mica

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    yess.. well said Swara.. i really really love this part..
    swara’s words described everything that stuck on my mind..
    but something bothering me, why for mahira, swara and raglak made a drama ?
    it’s will bad for her, indeed, it’s bad for swara and raglak themself.
    it’s kind unnecessary sacrifice
    luv it soo very much mystery.. xoxo

    • Mica

      Mica

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      but if swara want to forgive sanskar.. let it be,..
      sometime love feeling is out of logical mind..
      you know, even ppl can forgive their parent’s killer for love sake

    • Mystery

      Mystery

      |Author

      Ty…n swara n raglak did this bcz they never want to see mahira alone….without his father……its very difficult… N swara has face it so

      • Mica

        Mica

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        i know, i mean it’s kind shorted a problem by create another problem…
        it’s simply introduce laksh as uncle but give fatherly love to mahira..
        since if mahira know the truth, it will break her more..
        sorry for blabbering hahahh

  5. anu

    awesome.. feeling bad for her.. but her everyword is true… gave punishment to him .. dont make swara to forgive him easily…

  6. Tulina

    Tulina

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    Swara shouldn’t forgive sanskar……….I don’t understand after doing such a sin how can swara forgive sanskar……….Please don’t unite them bcoz if you will unite them then it will show that whatever sin may boy do they only will win Just take ourselves in swara’s place will you forgive if you’re husband do the same with you……….bcoz I don’t have a big heart that I can forgive that person who destroy my life…….I know it’s a swasan ff but think also as a girl who lost her husband and happiness and her future………….If you will unite them that will show up that you are only a swasan fan but do you think what happens to that girls who’s life has been destroyed like this………

  7. Pramudi

    Awesome part. Swara is right.👍 sanskaar should get punishments for his deeds. Don’t make swara to forgive him easily. Precap is interesting.
    Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.

  8. G.Chandu

    G.Chandu

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    Yaar…!! What is this??!! I really didn’t like sanskar’s mentality…!! How can he still feel that…he loves swara… but don’t want to stay with her…because of his son…!! Even I don’t want swara to forgive him…!! Don’t unite them together easily…without making sanskar suffer…!!

  9. ruhi

    I am really confused…mystery how will u justify the title of the story if u seperate swasan…and if u will not seperate them then it will be injustice with swara and mahira…

  10. Vidhi

    Wow the way u expressed swara’s reaction was marvelous…. Really… Each n every word was correct….. Loved it dear…… N sanskar should feel guilty… He should…. N update soon…. Waiting😘😍😘😍😘😍😘

  11. jjjjjj

    plz author replz this question and clear answer give. sorry to say like this friend.if girls some are same i daily life see like sanskara shadow in girls some girls have a extra affair so that relative she go out her family and childern, when she return at husband had big heart to forgive him wife to reason him children.everyone have a make mistake in her life.so tha t notmean thev no forgive person and to live.i want u ask u frd who r want separate swasan in this ff and this ff author also.if girls or man they run out in house with love when they have not successful live life her partner so she return her parent’s house with her child they shout first then they accept .if they like u said that i already told her she didn’t got her ear then she run out her partner she gave she gave shame us so they didn’t forgive her when parent’s take this decision what will happen? they most of lover will died.a relationship are make a two person tied to have live not have separation.i aceepted sanskara charater but i want clear sanskar take dna test that will get positive because kavitha change report and then he is not tortes swara just keep separate him with his child.he didn’t separate her child with swara because he know swara have support live a hope,if any body in sanskar place think he didn’t s*x with kavitha because sanskara think aayan has his child.kavitha take dead daram with aayan that y sanskar fear take this.i didn’t say don’t give punishment to sanskar but punishment realise his get forgive to swara late then reunion.In ff is role of all person not do any if separate is a reason then all separate and died in her because all person do some mistake in this world everbody didn’t mistake and perfect in world no. plz don’t separate swasan and sanskar want suffer lot to get forgive swara.mistake make man perfect i did any plz send comment

    • Mica

      Mica

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      maybe in the next part, sanskar will know the truth about ayaan…
      about mistake, i agree that every human doing mistake, but sometime, it’s more than a mistake, there are also crime, sins, crossing limit of value and moral …..
      sometime, a bad deed can be forgiven, but not forgotten.
      sometime, the betrayal of our love one giving immense pain that death.
      what sanskar did, as a lover, as a husband, as a father is too cruel….
      maybe kavita was the one who ignitied the fire..
      but Sanskar himself was the sole reason of the misery..
      kavita just blackmailed him to marry her..
      but there was Sanskar who throw away his lovely wife on inhuman state
      there was Sanskar who throw away his lovely 6 month baby without any protection.
      there was Sanskar who torturing his lovely wife for other person
      there was Sanskar who said that he love Swara and his daughter but capable to do such cruel thing over them,
      there was Sanskar who said that he love swara and her daughter but never thinking about responsibility toward them
      there was Sanskar who blessed as rich person, able to bought everything but unable to hired expert to shorted out kavita case and give less pain to his love one, weird ha ?
      after everything he did, did you still believe that Sanskar love Swara ?
      NO… big NO…

    • Mica

      Mica

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      but jjjj..
      about unite of swasan, it can be happen..
      it’s depend on Swara and our writer Mystery,,,,
      so, let Mystery and swara make decision ..
      as i said, sometime there isn’t logical mind in love feeling..
      we can even forgive our parent killer for love shake…
      who knows! keep reading..*mystery wannabe

  12. jjjjjj

    i did any mistake plz sent comment author and other friend,because we are indians.we have forgive habities have nature.we are future if we are think like how can we handle our chiden’s.this rights and wrong we teach children???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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