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Home»Fan Fiction»i make her MRS SANSKAR MAHESHWARI….. EPISODE 1
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i make her MRS SANSKAR MAHESHWARI….. EPISODE 1

administratorBy administratorJune 3, 2016106 Comments4 Mins Read
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Thankyou all of u for commenting…..tysm….

Sanskar POV
I went to my room n saw her …she was drying her wet hair with towel…..my sweatheart was looking as usual gorgeous in red nighty…..she looked me through mirror and lower her eyes….she is so innocent…….I moved toward her and put my head on her shoulder… She is still looking down….I put her hair at one side n kissed her neck…..she was shivering…..

Swara POV
I was unable to look at him……he was looking me so romantically…. I was just thinking about his next steps…..will he will took my virginity …..will he force me to sleep with him…..just then he kissed my neck…..i feel a current in my whole body……..plzz god help….save me from him….plZzzzzzz

Sanskar:- why u r shivering ?

Swara:- I m scared….

Sanskar:- scared…..!!!.u wife of Sanskar Maheshwari is scared …bt y???

Swara: I m scared from u…

Sanskar:- what??

Swara:- vo vo….I don’t want to ….to sleep with u ….I know u r my husband….but still …..m not comfortable…

Sanskar:- i know..

I looked at him …in surprise…..

Sanskar:- n dear….don’t worry….I won’t do that…

Swara:- then y u marry me???

Sanskar:- bcz I want to marry u…..n btw if I want ur body only then i would do that without marrying u…..swara now u eat drink milk and sleep…

Swara: I don’t like milk without chocolate powder. ..

Sanskar :- really!!!!

Sanskar POV
She is a child….omg…she want chocolate powder like a kid….oh god this girl…
She asked me the question whose answer I don’t know…..she asked me y I maary her??….honestly I myself don’t know the reason…. But yah I m damm sure that I didn’t marry her just bcz to get her body ……no I m not that type of man……its just that I just want to make her MRS SANSKAR MAHESHWARI….may be…..I never trust on LOVE….after I got betrayal….. I even never truated any girl…..but swara….she is different….. Whenever I see her….my heart beats gets faster …..I just want her in My life….in my house……I don’t know she has become my lady love or not…..in this context I m confused……

Swara POV
He is not that type of guy ….I mean he is different…..I m shocked that he let me take my time to accept him……he also bring chocolate powder from kitchen for me……n wish me gn n go to sleep on couch ….I m confused he is good or bad….bcz the way he marry me was wrong…..
Huh….whatever the good thing is that he didn’t force me….

The next day I heard a knock at the door…..it’s My mother in law..ap Maheshwari…..with Ruhani… Sanskar niece….. She is sanskar’s elder brother daughter….shee is the apple of my eyes……only we 4 are in the family….no one else….ruhani mom dad is dead……

Ap:- beta today is ur first rasoii… N muhdikhaai too…so get ready…..
Swara:- ji mom..
Ruhani:- di… get ready soon…..then u have to help me in my homework
Ap:- she is not ur Didi now….she is ur chachii….
Ruhani:- oops sorry…chachiiii
I just smile and they go…..when I turned I saw sanskar coming out from washroom in a towel…..first I get shy but then I thaght he is so hot…..he come towards me n give me a good morning kiss on my cheeks…..

Sanskar:- get ready sweetheart…
I took my clothes n went in the washroom……I undress myself n switch on the shower…..I was just thinking of him…..

Sanskar POV
She gets out in a red n green saree….she is looking like a newly married bride…..she goes to the dressing table n wear her mangalsutra and other accessories like ear ring..&..bangles….then she fills her hairline with vermilion….. I don’t know why …but I feel good to see sindoor in her maang…..sindoor which she fills for me…..I kept on looking her ….she is looking beautiful as always…..

So guys I request all the readers….for not being a silent reader…..bcz its ur comment only which appreciate me…..plzz comment..

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106 Comments

  1. Areeba nasir ishaqui on June 3, 2016 6:38 pm

    Loved it?? different story❤?? but plz make it bit longer next time

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 7:27 pm

      Thankyou…. I will try to make it longer….

  2. Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 6:39 pm

    Very nice, like in this FF, I liked Sanky’s shade?

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 7:28 pm

      Thanks dear….

  3. Yaz? on June 3, 2016 6:43 pm

    Superb…awsm epi…plz update Asap

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 7:30 pm

      Thanks yaz….

  4. Kanak on June 3, 2016 6:44 pm

    Awesome…..

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 7:30 pm

      Thanks kanak

  5. Sree on June 3, 2016 6:48 pm

    It was very nice. Waiting for nxt

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 7:31 pm

      Thnqq sree

  6. nehasuhana on June 3, 2016 6:48 pm

    Hey dude now i am not at all silent nice yaar make it lengthy and update soon

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 7:31 pm

      Thanks dear…….

  7. Shagun on June 3, 2016 6:55 pm

    Awesome

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 7:32 pm

      Ty shagun

  8. Purvi on June 3, 2016 6:56 pm

    Inspire of being a gangster sanky is chooooooo sweet……..

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 7:32 pm

      Thanks purvi

  9. ahana on June 3, 2016 7:02 pm

    Awsm

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 7:33 pm

      Ty ahana

  10. maya on June 3, 2016 7:07 pm

    super Dr…nice …..

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 7:33 pm

      Thanks maya

  11. B on June 3, 2016 7:16 pm

    Very good chapter

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:04 pm

      Thanks dear..

  12. Soujanya on June 3, 2016 7:20 pm

    Awesome….

  13. jaf on June 3, 2016 7:22 pm

    Continue pls i am loving it…. :-* :-*

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:05 pm

      Thanks jaf

  14. surabhi Srivastava on June 3, 2016 7:30 pm

    Awesome

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:06 pm

      Ty surabhi

  15. Bresh on June 3, 2016 7:31 pm

    Nice

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:06 pm

      Thanks dear…

  16. Ayesha on June 3, 2016 7:32 pm

    Nicr

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:08 pm

      Ty ayesha

  17. Priya on June 3, 2016 7:37 pm

    Super

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:09 pm

      Ty priya

  18. Fatima on June 3, 2016 7:39 pm

    Awsome epi ?

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:10 pm

      Thanks fatima

  19. Dev on June 3, 2016 7:40 pm

    Hey buddy….nc epi

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:11 pm

      Ty dev

  20. kaynat khan on June 3, 2016 7:44 pm

    loved it

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:11 pm

      Thanks dear

  21. oppi on June 3, 2016 7:48 pm

    Nice episode
    Continue

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:12 pm

      Thnqqq

  22. G.S on June 3, 2016 7:49 pm

    Nice…intresting.makeit long..

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:13 pm

      Thanks

  23. shan on June 3, 2016 7:57 pm

    awesome…..very nice…..

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:15 pm

      Thanks shan.

  24. Iqra on June 3, 2016 8:00 pm

    ???

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:17 pm

      Thanks iqra

  25. Divyarani on June 3, 2016 8:12 pm

    Amaaazing dr…continue

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:18 pm

      Ty dear…..

  26. s on June 3, 2016 8:21 pm

    nyc

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:19 pm

      Thanks dear

  27. Radhika on June 3, 2016 8:22 pm

    Lovely…. Bt too short…. N one more epi today pls pls pls plssssssssss……

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:20 pm

      Thnqq radihka….

  28. PRITY on June 3, 2016 8:35 pm

    hi
    I like it
    its interesting
    plz carry on

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:21 pm

      Ty dear….

  29. barathy on June 3, 2016 8:50 pm

    Superb

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:55 pm

      Ty dear

  30. AmMu on June 3, 2016 8:50 pm

    Good start.all the best dear:-)

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:56 pm

      Thnqqq

  31. Mona Swasanholic Varunholic on June 3, 2016 8:59 pm

    Awesome one ??

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:56 pm

      Thanks dear

  32. Arati on June 3, 2016 9:17 pm

    Nice one keep the pace

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 10:57 pm

      Ty arati

  33. mou on June 3, 2016 9:31 pm

    awesome

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 11:01 pm

      Ty mou

  34. Fransi on June 3, 2016 9:35 pm

    Love it superb start.all the best

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 11:02 pm

      Thanks dear…

  35. vennela on June 3, 2016 9:47 pm

    Superb….I really loved it….plz post asap….n try to write long one aa……n once again…..it’s really NYC n different

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 11:05 pm

      Tysm dear…..

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 11:06 pm

      Tysm dear…..n I will update long one

  36. Jaya on June 3, 2016 9:53 pm

    Interesting

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 11:08 pm

      Ty jaya

  37. Angel on June 3, 2016 10:10 pm

    Really nice and different but is there a flashback to the story ????bcz she said the way he married her was wrong. Make it a long one it should not end soon. …luvd this. …waiting for next update

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 11:10 pm

      Yah there is some flashback…. It will revealed in upcoming episode but slowly….. BTW tysm dear

  38. Pramudi on June 3, 2016 10:16 pm

    Beautiful dear.. ??

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 11:10 pm

      Thnks

  39. Anvi on June 3, 2016 10:27 pm

    very nice…loved it..

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 11:12 pm

      Thanks dear

  40. neoline on June 3, 2016 10:30 pm

    its really nice ..sanskar is not that bad update soon

    • mystery on June 3, 2016 11:12 pm

      Thanks dear…..

  41. Anu Ann on June 3, 2016 11:11 pm

    Awesome dear

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 9:30 am

      Ty dear…..

  42. Tweety on June 3, 2016 11:57 pm

    Awesome yaar

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 9:32 am

      Thnqqq tweety

  43. meena on June 4, 2016 12:44 am

    Its awsome dear

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 9:33 am

      Thanks meena

  44. Apurva Desai on June 4, 2016 1:02 am

    good story……but plz regular update karna

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 9:34 am

      Ty apurva

  45. Umme Hani on June 4, 2016 1:08 am

    The beginning is awesome let’s see what will happen next 🙂

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 9:35 am

      Thankyou dear. .

  46. aanya on June 4, 2016 5:37 am

    Superb

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 9:36 am

      Ty aanya

  47. Arohi :) on June 4, 2016 6:33 am

    superb…

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 10:36 am

      Thnkqqq

  48. Jasmine on June 4, 2016 7:37 am

    Nice story. But post long episodes

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 10:43 am

      Ty jasmine

  49. Lohitha on June 4, 2016 9:25 am

    Awesomeeeee

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 10:45 am

      Ty dear

  50. Iqra on June 4, 2016 10:38 am

    Awesome

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 12:51 pm

      Thanks

  51. Aleena on June 4, 2016 11:53 am

    Superb epi plZZ continue soon :*

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 12:51 pm

      Thnqq aleena….

  52. divya on June 4, 2016 2:07 pm

    very nice

    • mystery on June 4, 2016 2:43 pm

      Thnqq

  53. Tooba on June 5, 2016 6:07 am

    Awesome

    • mystery on June 5, 2016 11:37 pm

      Ty dear

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