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THE MAHESHWARI BROTHERS
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Disclaimer ๐Ÿ“ƒ: This Fan Fiction carries swasan,raglak,ishveer,twnj and manan.The characters belong to their respective original show even though they had been tweaked alot.
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Genre:Romance๐Ÿ’ Bromances๐Ÿ‘ฌ,comedy๐Ÿ˜‚,love๐Ÿ’‘,
Tashan๐Ÿ˜Ž,Trust๐Ÿ‘,action๐Ÿ’ช,
serious๐Ÿ˜ ,sadness๐Ÿ˜ญ,drama.๐Ÿ˜ฑ
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๐Ÿ’‚ Characters ๐Ÿ’‚
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Main lead====>

Sanskar Maheshwari๐Ÿ˜Ž:1st, 27years old, very arrogant and strict no.1 business man.had a past.hate girls, His brothers are his life.He can do any thing for me.

Laksh Maheshwari๐Ÿ˜˜: 2nd son,25years old, talkative and flirting type.

Ranveer Maheshwari ๐Ÿ˜‰: 3rd son,23 years old,works at radio, a play boy

Kunj Maheshwari๐Ÿ˜Š :4th son 21 yearsold,slient guy and obedience
Book material.stdying final year

Manik Maheshwari๐Ÿ˜‰ :5th son,18years old funny and loving guy.

Swara boss๐Ÿ˜:a middle class girl.bubbly and smart girl.Always dreams about her future husband.

Ragini patel๐Ÿ˜ƒ: lives with her mom Janaki,

Ishani kapoor๐Ÿ˜„ : neighbour of Maheshwaris and friend of ranveer from childhood.

Twinkle Taneja๐Ÿ˜: very very rich family naughty and more talkative girl.

Nandini malhotra๐Ÿ˜‡: middle family and a traditional and fearful girl

Formal cast=====>

Durgaprasad Maheshwari ๐Ÿ‘ณand Annapurna Maheshwari๐Ÿ‘ฑ: father and mother of our five Maheshwari

Ramprasad Maheshwariโ˜บ: brother of dp

Sujata Maheshwari๐Ÿ˜ฌ: wife of rp,a selfish and jealous woman.Don’t like dp and his five sons.want her son to be the heir

Sahil Maheshwari๐Ÿ˜ช: eldest son of all ,a mental and useless guy son of rp and Sujata

Chirag Maheshwari ๐Ÿ‘ฟ: a split boy,does not like Sanskar and his brothers.son of rp and Sujata

Uttara Maheshwari๐Ÿ‘ง:a sweet of all the brothers. Especially the five Brothers

Deendaylan Maheshwari๐Ÿ‘ด: father of dp,rp and urvashi

Shoba Maheshwari๐Ÿ‘ต: second wife of Deendaylan.Dp is her son.Modern granny,a bengali.

Parvati Maheshwari๐Ÿ‘น: first wife of Deendaylan,mother of rp and urvashi

Urvashi Mehra๐Ÿ˜ผ: sister of rp and dp.wants her daughter to marry Sanskar

Kavya Mehra๐Ÿ˜ธ: obsessed with Sanskar.wants to marry him because of money

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๐Ÿ’œEpisode 1๐Ÿ’œ
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At Mumbai
”””””””””””””””””””
The day of Ganesh chaturti.All the people of Mumbai were celebrating with joy๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‡.
Outside the MAHESHWARI MANSION ๐Ÿฏ
A big Lord Ganesh statue is kept in the centre.It is beautifully decorated with flowers๐ŸŒธ.A huge group of people were gathered there.It was organised by Maheshwari & brothers Company.Every year the Maheshwaris gives funds๐Ÿ’ฐ, food ๐Ÿฒ and clothes๐Ÿ‘• to the poor

A lady comes everyone greeted them๐Ÿ™.

One of the ladies : Happy Ganesh chaturti Mrs Annapurna Maheshwari

Annapurna (smiles):Happy Ganesh chaturti (while holding her both hands๐Ÿ™)

A girl๐Ÿ‘ฉ comes running : bade ma bade maa(about to fall๐Ÿƒ)

Annapurna(hold her): Uttara carefully what happened

Uttara(breaths heavily): badema….they both again started
fighting๐Ÿ‘Š
Annapurna sighs

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Two grandladies were fighting we can say mouth ๐Ÿ‘„ fighting๐Ÿ‘Š.One is looking like a modern granny another one is looking like a traditional granny.

Grandlady1: hey old woman๐Ÿ‘ต shut up your ditch mouth๐Ÿ‘„

Grandlady2:hey bengalan don’t you dare to talk about me the greek parvati Maheshwari ๐Ÿ‘น

Grandlady1 claps her hands and laughs: oye parvati that is great not greek you could not even spell the word also u r great ha ha ha
(smirk) I am only great the one and only Shoba Maheshwari ๐Ÿ‘ต

Both continue to argue.
Annapurna comes there with Uttara.

Annapurna(shouts): maa and mummy ji please stop it(clamly) what happened now

Parvati : ask that bengalan

Annapurna: maa please (parvati turns her face)

Shoba: that moti old woman๐Ÿ‘ต she insulting me

Parvati(angry): what I ? Really its you who is insulting

Annapurna holds Shoba and Uttara holds parvati.Both were still fighting

Annapurna(holds Shoba): Uttara take parvati maa somewhere.(to Shoba) mummy ji please come

Uttara nodded and takes her
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A lady walking ๐Ÿšถ here and there outside of a room.The lady is revealed to be Sujata.A boy opens the door. He wearing a green sherwani๐Ÿ‘˜.He stands there lifting his head smiling

Sujata(mesmerised):hey hey chora you are looking like rajkumar๐Ÿ‘‘ .sahil girls will surely go flat seeing you.(take kajol from her eyes)wait wait I will keep kajol so that no eyes ๐Ÿ‘€ will affect you

Sahil(shows teeth.๐Ÿ˜): mom am I looking beautiful

Sujata(hits his head):Sahil that is hand..what will they say(thinks)
Headsome

A boy comes there: that is handsome

Sujata(laugh): ya ya that is the one(shows) Chirag see see your bhai. He is perfectly looking like a heir๐Ÿ‘‘ of the family.

Sahil smiles sheepishly ๐Ÿ˜while blushing like a girl ๐Ÿ˜Š.

Chirag(sighs angrily): mom see this idiot.He is blushing๐Ÿ˜„ like girls.He is the heir of Maheshwari family.(slaps his forehead)he is eldest son but that Sanskar Maheshwari is treated as the elder son. Because of his foolishness that Sanskar become the heir and owner of the Maheshwari & brothers Company.(angrily get a wine ๐Ÿทbottle)

Sujata(stopsโœ‹): chora please not today.(slaps her both cheeks) Ganpati Bappa please forgive my son.

Chirag places back ๐Ÿ”™ the bottle and leaves from here.

Sahil(confused ๐Ÿ˜• ): what happened to him why he is behaving like that.I am looking good(checks himself)

Sujata(sighs๐Ÿ˜ฐ):leave that Sahil come it’s time โŒš

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A Oldman๐Ÿ‘ด comes there all become slient behind him a Man๐Ÿ‘ณ came pulling a wheelchair โ™ฟ in that one man is sitting.

Man1(whispers): hey who are these two men and that old man

Man2:don’t you know The old man is Mr Deendaylan Maheshwari and the other one who is pulling a wheel chair is Ramprasad Maheshwari and the man is sitting on the wheelchair is Mr Durgaprasad Maheshwari

Man1(whispers to Man1): why
Durgaprasad is sitting on the wheelchair โ™ฟ??

Man1(whispers back):hey don’t you know from last 2years he could not walk his elder son only handling the business.

Man2(whispers): oh this and all happened

Man1(whispers back): this all nothing.Do you know one thing Mr Deendaylan Maheshwari has two wife.Did you see two oldwomen fighting there.They are his wives.

Man2(chuckled) :I think this family does not pride and prestige

This all witnessed by Annapurna.She marched towards
them.

Annapurna(controlling her angry): suniye tum both are invited here for the celebration not for critizing or making fun of us.so please stop it(holds her hands) ( proudly)
I have five diamonds which will raise my family.The diamonds are my sons.(smiles proudly)
My panch puttars are panch pandavas of the Maheshwari family. Yadhishthira of the Maheshwaris is my elder son Sanskar Maheshwari who always walk in dharma path.
( A boy’s back appears he is wearing white kurta ๐Ÿ‘• and pants ๐Ÿ‘–)
The Bhema of our family is my
Second son Laksh Maheshwari who is not strength ๐Ÿ’ช of the body but by strength of his heart
(another boy appear beside the first boy)
Arjuna is my third son Ranveer Maheshwari who
(another one boy stands beside another side of 1st boy)
Nakula and Sahadeva of our family is my forth and fifth son whom cure the problem of peoples and make them happy.
(two boys appears either side of the boys)

A five boys face revealed.Here comes our handsomes hunks.
Sanskar,laksh,Ranveer,Kunj and Manik.There face is covered with red colour.There shows aarti to Lord Ganesh๐Ÿ™ smilinglyโ˜บ

**Riddhi, Siddhi, Vriddhi hoti
Haan tere hi aane se
Aur sundar ye shristi hoti
HaMr. tere hi aane se
Moryaโ€ฆ Moryaโ€ฆ** plays in background.

All the family members stands behind them.sujata groups make irritated ๐Ÿ˜ค faces.

Ranveer started singing ๐ŸŽถ **Man ke andhere kone mein
Jo daanav chhupa hai Morya**
Laksh continues**Uspe hi jai ho to digvijay ho
Teri tarah Morya**

All shouts **Ganpati Bappa – Morya
Urja varshi – lavkar ya**

All five started singing while dancing.

Sanskar sings while applying colour on his forehead **Ho lakh koi de hunkaare
Lakh koi dhamkaaye**
Kunj sings**Ho ho hum teri raahon pe chalte
Hum nahi rukne waale**

Manik sings**Mera deva devon ka devta
Majha deva devon ka devta
Pair rukne na, sar yeh jhukne na dega**
All shouts:Morya re Morya, Ganpati Bappa Morya
Shambhu sutaya, Shambhu Sutaya
Lambodaray Morya
Morya re Bappa Morya
Ganpati Bappa Morya
Deva….

Ranveer sings***Sajjan ki aas, durjan ka nash**
All shouts **Tu kaisa bindas hai raja**
Kunj sings **Tu kaisa bindaas hai raja**
Laksh sings**Teri ho puja phir koi duja
Tu sabka vishwas hai raja**
All shouts **Tu sabka vishwas hai raja**
Sanskar sings **Yoon sabhi devon ke aage
Yeh sar jhuka hai Morya
Par apna hai tu ghar pe hamare
Aaya hai Morya**
All shouts **Morya re Morya, Ganpati Bappa Morya
Shambhu Sutaya, Shambhu Sutaya
Lambodaray Morya
Morya re Bappa Morya
Ganpati Bappa Morya…..

All claps๐Ÿ‘.Our heros takes blessing from elders and came ti Annapurna with a smile playing on their lips.
Sanskar: maa bless us
(all the five touches Annapurna’s foot)
Annapurna(smiles):God bless you my sons there is no shakti to separate you.you all will unity forever.
Annapurna hugs her sons.

Sahil hugs them : brothers u danced very well.

Sanskar (pats his cheek): thanks bhai

Sanskar goes to hug to Chirag but he turns angrily.Sanskar face turns pale.Laksh places his hand on his shoulder. Sanskar just nodded with smile

Sujata(jealous in mind): oh God why you made my sons brainless?? One is fool and another one is angry bird(to our heros who bends down for bless)(smiles fakely) God may give all the happiness

Laksh(to Annapurna): maa I heard some idiots talking low about our family (angry) how can they talk about our family

Ranveer(side hugs anu): don’t worry mom tomorrow’s show in my radio station is going to be them I will tear their faces(holds his first)

Kunj(clamly): Ranveer please cool down there is no point to insult them
Maa has given them good demonstration

Sanskar: guys Sanskar Maheshwari ๐Ÿ˜Ž is here.All throw all your problems in dustbin.I will handle it in my way(smirks ๐Ÿ˜)

Manik: oh oh I feel very pity for those two(gives hifi to Sanskar)

Annapurna: stop it all.No one should do anything. I will in Kunj side as he said the right thing.(side hugs him)

Manik:mom you always on his side(pouts)

Uttara comes there and shouts
“bhaiyus you all done a great job the dance was ultimate๐Ÿ‘Œ” (hugs them)
Sanskar: sweety
Laksh : joker
Ranveer: devil
Kunj : ladoo
Manik: moti

Uttara(pouts): huh bhaiyus please call me Uttara.

All laugh.sanskar phone ๐Ÿ“ฑ rings and about to lift the ๐Ÿ“ž but stopped by Annapurna.

Annapurna(angry ๐Ÿ˜ก): Sanskar please today no office calls beta please

Kunj: ha bhai please enjoy with us in celebration times only you are with us

Manik(teases):ha bhai for the first time Valmiki said right

Kunj(angry): what did you call me Valmiki??? I am not going to baccha

Manik starts running ๐Ÿƒ and Kunj chases him.All laughs

Uttara : stop it Bros.(whispers)see there(points ranlak)

Sankunman looks at ranlak who are busy in watching a girl and shakes their head in disbelief)

Laksh: hey Ranveer look at her man she looks gorgeous
Ranveer(points another): bhai that girl is also looks beautiful na
Laksh; ya she looks great ok let’s start the competition.
Sanskar places his both hands on either side of their shoulders.

Sanskar: what are you both doing

Ranveer and laksh shocks as they know Sanskar didn’t like all this.

Ranveer(stammering): bhai tum yaha

Sanskar: what are you both doing

Laksh(shows teeth.๐Ÿ˜): just playing games

Sanskar(raised his eyebrow): hmm playing games what type of games???

Manik: flirting,teasing,getting number from girls and so and so
(shows tongue ๐Ÿ˜œ)

Ranlak look at him angrily.

Sanskar(smiles): ok for this time I am allowing

Ranlak jumps in happiness and kisses ๐Ÿ˜˜ Sanskar cheek.

Sanskar(rubs his both cheeks):you can thank you in words not like this

Sanskar shows one person to Manik and Kunj and winks at eachother.
Manik(side hugs Ranveer):bhai see that in pink leganga

Ranveer: ya but I couldn’t see her.Her back only seen

Manik: bhai go here and see(smirk which is unnoticed by Ranveer)

Ranveer goes near that girl: hey beautiful what your sweet name ha????

The girl turns with angry face ๐Ÿ˜ฌ: Haan Ishani

Ranveer wides eyes ๐Ÿ˜จin shock: Ishani Tum(starts acting)(laughs๐Ÿ˜‚)hi Ishani how are you I know it’s you I thought to surprise u(shows teeth๐Ÿ˜)

Ishani(angry ๐Ÿ˜ก ): ha believed Ranveer Maheshwari I know about you very well.u know me right that I hate flirting with girls and u also u will not do but again started I am not going to leave you(start chases him)

Ranveer(while running๐Ÿƒ):hey leave me please I will not that again

Ishani(shouts) : I am not going to believe you this time.

All laughs.Annapurna comes to Sanskar.
Annapurna(nervous):Sanskar

Sanskar : maa

Annapurna : wo wo I want to tell you something

Sanskar: ha maa say

Ranveer stops running : Ishani one min(Ishani stops)

Annapurna(stammering): Sanskar tomorrow…(Sanskar looks at her)
Urvashi and Kavya are coming to talk about your marriage with Kavya

Sanskar(angry):maa how many times I have been telling you that I don’t want marriage and I live for my brothers. Can’t you understand my feelings??(holds her hands and said clamly)You know na maa what happened 2 years ago(teared eyes) please don’t expect me to marry.i will never ever marry
(leaves from thgoe

Lakrankunman: mom we will also never marry anyone.(leaves behind Sanskar)

Annapurna cries Shoba holds her shoulder and Ishani hold her hand.sujata smirks.

Parvati(to anu):all this happening because of you ladiki. You are one who is giving place to them. You Don’t even know how to grow the children.

Shoba(shouts): chup karo parvati go from here (hugs Annapurna)

Parvati and Sujata leaves.

Ishani : aunty don’t cry everything will alright

Shoba(caress her hair):Annapurna stop crying. Ganpati Bappa will show you a way don’t worry.one girl will be born for Sanskar who will entry in his life…

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It’s Me. Swara.I am standing in dreamworld๐ŸŒˆ which is decorated with flowers๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’ and heart shape balloons๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ ๐ŸŽˆ.I was wearing a red frock๐Ÿ‘—.My Prince was sitting in his knees infront of me asking for dance๐Ÿ’ƒ.
I could not see his face.I placed my Hands in his while smiling like idiot.๐Ÿ˜„(gerua song played in background๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽน๐ŸŽป๐ŸŽบ๐ŸŽท๐ŸŽธ)

{Prince started singing๐ŸŽค while spreading his arms like welcoming me}

**Dhoop se nikhal ke
Chaanv se phisal ke
Hum mile jahan par
Lamha tham gaya**

{I continue singing while running to his arms๐Ÿƒand cups his cheek}

**Aasmaan pighal ke
Sheeshe mein dhalke
Jam gaya to tera chehra ban gaya**

{While lifting me in his arm}

**Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ho.. Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Haan nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Ho.. Rang de tu mohe gerua**

He slowly rounds along with me.
He makes me stand.
We were about to kiss ๐Ÿ˜˜. Suddenly a voice “”Swara””.I get shock to see my mom standing with a angry face ๐Ÿ˜ฌ.

Me(shocked ) : mom you here
(bite my finger)

Mishti(very angry): Swara get up Swara get up from your dream world(shakes me)

I wake up with a jerk from the bed. I find myself in my night dress.(sighs annoyed)huhhhhhh again it a dream ( while pulling off the bedsheet) I saw my mom shouting and scolding me for not getting up early as it was Ganesh chaturti.I slapped myself for not waking up.I just ran to washroom.I turned on the shower ๐Ÿšฟ but my mom’s radio ๐Ÿ“ป is still audible ๐Ÿ‘‚.

Swara’s pov end ๐Ÿ”š

Swara came out wearing a red anarkali looking damn cute.

Swara(while wearing her earrings): mom please help me wearing this necklace

Mishti(while wearing necklace):
Shona I don’t know what will you do when you went to your sasural

Swara: I will just romance with my Prince (giggles)

Mishti laughs: Shona come down
Colony people were gathered.I think it’s time for pooja
(goes down shaking her head in disbelief while smiling)

Swara lives in a Colony with her small family mom Mishti ,dad shekar ,little brother Aysh.
Bose family goes down and participated in the pooja and celebrated for hours and moves to their home.

In Swara flat
Swara came out from her room wearing loose top and palazzo Pant.

“mom I am going o parlour” Swara while taking her handbag.

Mishti(shocked): what today is Ganesh chaturti but you are going to parlour

Swara(dramatic ๐Ÿ˜ฑ): mom today one wedding๐ŸŽŽ is there for that I have put makeup๐Ÿ’„ for the bride ๐Ÿ‘ฐ.The bride said If I don’t come for her then she will stop her marriage. And I too promised her that I will come(smiles) So Ganpati will not punish me indeed he will bless me.(winks ๐Ÿ˜‰)

” Swara come home early today boy’s family are coming today to see you ” Mishti shouts back

“again an another goat๐Ÿ‘” Swara sigh with annoyed face๐Ÿ˜’

“Swara the boy is very good.He earns very much.They family was good,”Mishti continue her purnas while showing her 32 teeth.๐Ÿ˜

Swara makes faces.๐Ÿ˜ฃ

Shekar speaks who is sitting on couch and reading newspaper.

Shekar๐Ÿ˜Œ: Shona atleast today you say ok to the boy.This is the 15th guy you are going to see.All the boys likes you but you rejected all of them(sigh while keeping the newspaper on the table)

Swara(irritated๐Ÿ˜ค): baba all those boys were really dummo and their parents want me as a duck which lay a gold eggs.I don’t want to be a duck.I want to be me not as a golden duck ๐Ÿฅor slave(turns her face)

Mishti(angry): Swara it’s going over your baba giving more place to you atleast tell me why are you rejected all of them???

Aysh who is sitting in the couch and playing video games
“swaramayana is going to start”

Swara(smiles dreamingly):maa all the girls๐Ÿ‘ธ dreams๐Ÿ’ญ about their future husband๐Ÿ‘ค as like me.I want my husband to support me and stand ๐Ÿ‘ซfor me in each and every situation.He should care me๐Ÿ’†, love me๐Ÿ’•.As all girls I too want my hubby to be romantic๐Ÿ’ and handsome๐Ÿ’ƒ. Especially he should be understanding to me and my family๐Ÿ‘ช. After a girlโ€™s marriage her husband becomes not only his life partner, but also her best friend. He is the first one whom she addresses for any joys or sorrows.we girls loved to be pampered by their husband I too want that from my hubby.Every girl dreams of her prince charming๐Ÿ’ƒ, the perfect guy for her who will take her into her magical dream world ๐ŸŒ full of love. I too dream like this . I wants him to be the best for me. Of course, no singleย  guy is perfect in all the qualities a girl dreams about.All the girls need care for a little attention, love and care from their husband and the most important thing that is trust.Trust is the building block of a relationship. The stronger the trust gets, the stroner gets the relationship

Mishti(hold her both hands๐Ÿ™):Swara devi please stop your purnas๐Ÿ“–(continues her work)

Aysh(teases): di what if destiny bought you a arrogant man๐Ÿ˜  like who does not like girls then what will you do(raised his eyebrow)

Swara(thinks):hmm…..I don’t know it’s up to God(looks up)Ganpati Bappa please give me my Prince soon ๐Ÿ”œ

โ„โ„โ„Screen freezesโ„โ„โ„
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Precap
Others introduction
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Author note ๐Ÿ“
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Hi guy๐Ÿ‘‹,
This is nive here,please suggest me shall I CONTINUE or WITHDRAW this FF.Please comment everyone I want to know how of reading my ff.and love you ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
This is nive signing off.
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94 Comments
  1. IQRA222

    nive di
    the concept is really awesome
    just loved the episode
    waiting for the next part

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜.I am glad that you love the episode ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜.Actually I may be young to you as I am only 16.๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ so no need di.Call me as what name you like and bye๐Ÿ‘‹

      1. IQRA222

        di actually i am younger to you as i am still 13
        you suggest na what should i call you

    2. Nive

      What????????๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ it’s me ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜just call me nive only 3years difference na๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

  2. Sohi

    Very interesting plot
    Liked brothers bond very much
    Waiting for twinj scenes
    Do continue and post soon
    Bye

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ actually I never seen Tashan e ishq or any scene of twinj.I love the acting of jasmine in dil se dil tak.and sidhant looks awesome๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜. By this way I became fan of them.

  3. Vanisha

    Awesome concept… continue soon

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  4. Purnima.agrawal30

    Amazing awesome

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„

  5. Awesome navi do continue
    When are you going to post playful love story???

    1. Nive

      Hey Antara!!!! How are dear??? I will post tomorrow for sure and thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  6. my kunj is not valmiki ๐Ÿ˜.really interesting๐Ÿ’plzzz continue.

    1. Nive

      OK ok your Kunj is not Valmiki awwwww so cute ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I think you are a twinj fan…๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™ thank you divya

  7. Awesome……..

    1. Nive

      Thank you purvi๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  8. Awesome please continue and update as soon as possible

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I will try to update as soon as possible ๐Ÿ™† ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„

  9. Very niz update nive. Love this plot
    The intro of five brothers and all the intro and relationship were so well written. Very interesting to read it. Y sanskar hating girls. They teasing ranveer by making him trap with ishani is so niz and funny. Swara char is so sweet. Waiting to know all others. And the plot is so much interesting dr. Ishveer part was so niz. And all others too. Love to read next part soon. Keep smiling and take care๐Ÿ˜€

  10. Maya-Shelly

    I have given the reviews in the previous comment box from other AC.
    Mayashelly

    1. Nive

      OK dear I understand..I will reveal after some Episodes why Sanskar hate girls?
      I will give cute love story of ishveer for sure ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ and loving you ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜

  11. Anjali30

    Love it niveeee.. How are you?? I thought you were writing some other story_?? Sorry….. I have no idea if you finished that or not… ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข

    How’s life??

    1. Nive

      Anjali omg omg I am big fan of your writings๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜ Thank you so much sweety.All super dupper

      1. Anjali30

        You’re 16 ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
        Wow…. I had you totally confused with another nive ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

        Aww.. Thnxx soo much… ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
        Looking forward to the next chapter ๐Ÿ™‚

    2. Nive

      Anjali dear that nive the writer of the way you are ff as changed her into **Frozen choco** because of confusion between us.I am big big fan of MMAI ff.I love the way of your writing.God may bless you
      Keep smiling book worm no book butterfly ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

      1. Anjali30

        Ohhh…. Woww… Shows that I really have to come to TU more.. *hiding my face*
        But I’m really really happy that you loved mmai…

        I don’t like the word fan… it’s too much for me.. But a friend sounds better ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
        Anyways… Can’t wait for next… In case I miss one.. Pls tell me in pvt message or in my story She’s not for me.. I’ll def check it out..

      2. Nive

        Sure anju๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜˜

  12. Atreyi

    Nice continue soon.

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

  13. Presha

    Awesome..
    Loved it…

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š

  14. Yaar good but too many characters to handle

    1. Nive

      Thank you dear ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„ ya it’s really difficult to handle but for your happiness that is not that much difficult ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

  15. Nyyyccc.

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

  16. loved it dear

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  17. Mahavir

    akka it was awesome u know i love it bromances….oh god apparam ishveer too cute….kunj oh god vaalmiki….and panchapandavargal….nd sanskar past i hate kavya…nd swara omg soooooo cute….loved it all in all superb cute akka continue soon….will be waiting….

    1. Nive

      Thanks thangachi๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I am glad that you love it๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š I will try to update soon ๐Ÿ”œ.And love you ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ I think you are a virat fan๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž enjoy watching ipl match ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ

  18. Nice update plz continue it’s interesting

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„

  19. Swarna01

    Update playful luv story also pls

    1. Nive

      OK dear as your wish. Tomorrow evening I will update for sure ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  20. Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy interesting , awesome marvelous amazing fantastic & what not๐Ÿ˜ . Love the bromance , swara is too cute & ranlak is always awesome flirty type ๐Ÿ˜‰. & Cute boy sanky๐Ÿ˜Ž. Plzzz continue soon.

    1. Nive

      Thank you so much dear ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ and loving you ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜

      1. Same to u ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ plzzz update soon next part , I know it is very difficult to handle all characters so take ur time baby but if possible post ASAP……. Keep smiling always ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  21. Nandana

    Nice one dear very very interesting waiting for the next and really liked the way u compared our boys with mahabharat brothers ….. Once again it was cute and superb…..

    1. Nive

      Thank you thank you ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ hehe I try to update soon ๐Ÿ”œ

    1. Nive

      Thanks anu dear ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

  22. Simi

    Awesome dear…
    So many pairs…. It’s good ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    1. Nive

      Hey simi!!!!!! How are you????? Thanks dear keep writing๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      1. Simi

        I’m good.. ๐Ÿ˜Š

  23. Scooby

    Lil sis nive ฿˜อฐ฿˜อ semma po. Un characterization super ah irundhuchu.. Na five bros sonna udaney pandavas nenaichen u too described them in same way฿˜สฐ฿˜ส aprm swaramayanam ฿˜ยฐ฿˜ยฐ฿˜ย ippah purna poitet iruku…
    Jooper do continue choti฿˜สฐ฿˜ส€f

    1. SNY

      Pangu..๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜..epdi irka????pesi rmba naal achu …

      1. Scooby

        Ama pangu๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ epudi iruka??
        Missu yax๐Ÿ˜‹ na nala iruke machi..

    2. Nive

      Nanri thala๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž.I am your sisy we will same idea ๐Ÿ’ก. I missing you very much ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ how are you akka?? You are not messaging me๐Ÿ˜” As always loved you,loving you and will love you๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

      1. Scooby

        Aww sisoo… Adhu tu pakkam ipa varadhu ila romba.. Sorry for not msging u.. Na unaku ipa reply panuradhuku munnadi, msg panen.. Go read dat.. Tc ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    3. SNY

      Naa nalla irukken pangu……neenga dhan rmba nalla msg pannala๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

  24. Ramya

    Hey nive
    It’s awesome amazing Superb
    Just do continue
    Loved it
    Loads of love
    Keep smiling

    1. Nive

      Thanks ramya ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ loads of love ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’— to u too*** keep smiles that will you more beautiful ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  25. Nice…… Continue…..

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜„

  26. SNY

    Kutty nive semmaiya irukku paa stry…..plz continue๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šennaku ella chrctr-rum rmba pidichurukkuโคโคโคโคโคโค
    Nxt one soon…….

    1. Nive

      Ennakko ungala rumba rumba pidichurukku๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ Thank you akka๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      1. SNY

        Ayyo ennaku vekka vekkama varuthu๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
        Ennakum unna rmba pidichurukku nive๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

    2. Scooby

      Enna da nadakudhu inga?? Rendu perum open romance panitu irukeenga๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

      1. SNY

        Pangu poramaila pongatha๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

  27. Awesome

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

  28. Its mindblowing continue it and plz post it regularly as I love all of them

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  29. Mica

    i love it i love it i love it

    1. Nive

      Thanks micu๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ and love you too ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

  30. Seebu_s

    awesome dear…continue soon…take care

    1. Nive

      Hi!!!! How are you seebu???Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€ for reading and you too take care ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  31. Loved it… Just wanna knw what’s sanskar’s past ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜update soon dear

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ you will get to know soon ๐Ÿ”œ

  32. Hahaha bechari swara
    Tooo awesome
    All brother introduction by annu is wowwwe

    1. Nive

      Thank you sus๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  33. Shifa96

    Nice..continue

    1. Nive

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  34. Baby

    Hey nive speechless….is d word dat describe it….I mean wow …
    ๐Ÿ™‚
    Jst sooo vry amazing osm marvellous kunj was tooo cute….loved d intros….n d chapter d way dey all took dere entry wow….. ๐Ÿ™‚
    Beautiful…loved it…. ๐Ÿ™‚
    Umm….frnds……?

    1. Nive

      Thank you babydoll๐Ÿ‘ฏ sure we can be friends ๐Ÿ‘ญ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  35. A.xx

    nice and sorry for late comment xx

    1. Nive

      It’s OK dear all fine ๐Ÿ˜˜ Thanks for reading

  36. Plz post the next part soon . This much wait is not good aapi. I hope I can call u aapi and u wont mind it

    1. Nive

      I am very very sorry ๐Ÿ™ dear….I updated today…you can go and read…and you can call me aapi I don’t mind…

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