The Magical Love ( Chapter 1) ~ chiku

Hello guys. I am back with a new ff. I promised u all that i will be coming with a new ff so here i am.
I am extremely sorry that i didnt revert to all ur comments on my last five short chapter. I am so sorry. I was hell busy but this tym i will try doing so.

Guys in this ff i am keeping myself in my mind for twinkles character. She is like me outspoken, sometimes extrovert, sometimes introvert, completely unpredictable, cut3πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ˜˜, sometimes depressed and upset ,sometimes full of life.
Hope u like her character. I hope u are pleased the way she beahves. I am showing her thinking completely as mine.

SO here we THE MAGICAL LOVE..(chapter 1)

Mahiiiiiiii said a girl shouting her lungs out.. mahiiiii again that same girl shouted..
What happened twinkle?? Asked mahi.

Mahi i am planning to run away said twinkle full of enthusiasm.
Shut up twinki. U always say this thing to me…. said mahi with an annoyed face.
Araaaae itna senti na ho baby….( dont get this much senti mahi) i got acceptance letter for my job in Scotland… wohooo i am going baby… said twinkle jumping happily.

Sachi kya ommggg i am so happy said mahi and hugged her bestie tightly.
U know mahi…. wahan jake life set. Achi life, acah job, itna sundar place hai woh and pata hai kya i will marry a Scotland ka ladka jiski neeli aakhein hogi ( u know what mahi life is set, life is good now, good job,its such a beautiful place and i will marry a Scotland guy who has blue eyes) said twinkle with a wide grin on her face.

Ok ok now when are you going asked mahi.
Umm i am applying my visa tomorrow and most probably maybe after two weeks because they might do my work early because i am going for work purpose. Lets see what happens said twinkle.
I will miss you twinkle said mahi with tears in her eyes.
Aweww meri baby i will miss u too said twinkle with a wink

Lets go to shopping yaar i am soo excited. Omgg!! What if my life completely changes after going to Scotland. You know unexpected thing.. wowww i am damn excited said twinkle.

Oh twinkle you are mad said mahi with a giggle.

Shukriya shukriya ( thank u thank u) said twinkle giggling.

Twinkle what did auntie uncle said asked mahi.
They are happy aakhir unki beti india se bahar ko jaa rahi hai.. ( they are happy after all their daughter is going out of India after all) said twinkle with attitude

Twinkle along with mahi did lots of shopping as twinkle was damn excited for this amazing turn in her life.

At night twinkle and mahi were sitting in the garden and where talking about random stuffs
Mahi our life changed so much.. we were kids then teenagers, and now adults. Like completely changes haina mahi said twinkle engrossed in her deep thinking.

Haan twinkle now you will be going away said mahi slightly being upset.
Oyee b*t*h dont be so upset. Mien tera peecha na chodungi soniyee said twinkle with a laugh.

Awe meri baby said mahi and they gave each other a hug….

Eventually two weeks passed and everybody was elated and little bit scared to as twinkle was going out of India all alone.

In these two weeks mahi and twinkle did lots of craziness. They totally enjoyed as much as they can. They did prank call to random people, did pani puri race, climbed top floor of their building and came down running riniging every house door bell. Twinkle even did setting for mahi with her crush. They enjoyed like they used to do in their teenage and adolescence.
Like lot of memories stored in a hug secret box. They wrote dairies about things they want from life, clicked slefies with alot of crazy posses

We are never to old to enjoy our life and do stupid and crazy things and they did that only.

Last day ( Airport)
Twinkle so finally you are going today said mahi. Haan and dont worry i will miss you alot. We will chat daily stupid said twinkle and hugged her tightly. She then proceeded towards her parents and hugged them too. Twinkle had always been close to her mother as compared to her father. She has been a completely stupid ass. Being single child she was pampered but due to some family problems , she stayed away from him. They didnt talk to each other to that much. So she didnt had any regret about not even giving him the last hug before going to some other country..

Soon she bid adieu and went inside.

I hope u like this. Plz tell me how it is???? Is twinkles character good??? Like completely unique and unpredictable. ( ps dont think it is same as mine , so u will not say anything.
U r free to give ur opinions. I will be pleased if u all truly gave ur opinion about it)

Is the title good… is my story gripping.
Plzzz do tell me through ur comments.

Guys do comment πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ™ˆβ€οΈπŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚
It means alot.

Baby u asked me to write something so here it is…😘😘😘😘
Nd to all my tu frnds , it is for u all.
Hope u all like it
Do comment
Love u all❀️❀️


  1. Adya


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    Awwww kuku di…
    You are back , you are back, you are back..
    Yaya .. balle balle.. oyee hoyeee… I’m do happy !
    Well I loved twinkle’s character.. that was mind blowing as usual .. the way you described her relationship with mahi was superb… Plss plss post soonest di..
    I’m so excited…
    Love you !

  2. Komal123


    |Registered Member

    Wow! Chiku!…..
    This is amazing!.
    Carefree Twinkle and the chapter was really sweet!
    I loved it! And the title is magical!
    Post soon

  3. Kritika14


    |Registered Member

    Chikkuu! So happy you decided to write again! Loving this new story alot. Twinkle’s character is really amazing! Post the next one soon!

    Lovess! xx

  4. Ayu


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    Awww meri pumpkin pieeee!!!
    Sachchi kahun? Ye Twinkle ki harkatein tera naam pukaar rhi hai…ye Ladki mereko sachchi tu hi lag rhi haiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    No doubt…tu hi hai…wahi cuteness wahi shararat aur questions ki dukaan…
    Ye ff mast hai shuru se hi! That is so damn sweettttt!!!
    Loving it!!! Post sokn😘

  5. Kruti


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    Finally so happy that u decided to write a ff……Nd this twinkle is completely like me totally unpredictable….Nice start….cute epi
    Looking forward to d nxt epi….continue asap

    Love u loadsπŸ’•πŸ˜˜

  6. Aksa_Nikoria


    Amazing start..splendidβ™‘β™‘
    loved it
    and Twinkles character us Awesomeeeee(in short like ursβ™‘)

    Post the next one ASAPβ™‘β™‘β™‘
    love you

  7. SidMin


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    Loved it Loved it Loved it πŸ™‚
    Really awesome πŸ™‚ I am sorry for the late comment πŸ™‚
    Love you πŸ™‚ Post soon πŸ™‚

  8. SidMinTwiNj


    |Registered Member

    Hey Chiku
    I’m so happy to see you back with a new ff… I so loved twinkle character… Very desperate for Kunj’s entry… Try posting soon…

    Love you😘

  9. Shalini15


    |Registered Member

    Hi Chiku, how are you? sorry for late comment I was busy so since few days I was absent from Tu.. sorryyyy..

    Well episode was superb n mindblowing…. n I love twinkles character….. mujhe nahin pata tha meri sweet si chiku aisi hai bilkul jakkas n bindas….love you yar…. post next epi asap…


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