MY MAFIA KING- AN UNTOLD STORY OF UNDYING LOVE…..#6….(few shots)

Hellllllllo friend……….a super biggggggggggggggggggggggg wala thanks for ur response…….I feel honored…… Thanks a lot to all my readers……..this update I would like to dedicate to sangee ….happy bdy dear….muuuuha….,haya,sathya,Astha,brin & neetz….love u guyz….& of course my Jess & Myra…muuuha…..lastly plz ignore my typos & grammatical errors……

Let’s njoy d ride….

RADHIKA’S POV….

for few seconds I was unable to think or move…..I Sat there watching d wall in front of me……I was totally blank ….when kabir shook my shoulder & asked….” Princess…..princess….back to earth…….what happened?…. ” my head snapped towards him……& in a low stuttering voice I asked…..” U…u guyz did all this just because what he did to me….?….u took his eyes out……chopped his fingers….& his heart…..” ….cutting me in half Neil got up with a jerk & said a little frustrated….” I already told u we didn’t got d chance to do d last stunt….it was…..aaaaah…….what’s d prob radhika…..why don’t u just drop it….he got what he deserved…. End of d story….” Hearing this I lost it….& almost yelled at him…..” No…..he didn’t deserve this…..nobody does……he already paid for his deeds that night only…….u guyz r not bl**dy animals….to kill someone ruthlessly like this……what u did even animals won’t do…..u took his eyes out…..how could u…..how could u?…..u guyz r not heartless monsters…..I didn’t expect this from u guyz….I didn’t”……suddenly out of d blue Neil yanked me up from d bed by grasping my hand tightly…… He looked straight in my eyes & said in angry tone….” I don’t care…..what we did…..whether he deserved it or not…..I only know one thing radhika…..he was d one responsible for ur tears…ur pain…..ur painful shrieks……& believe me I would do it again…..& again….& again……without thinking once…if anyone even think of hurting u…& yes …I don’t give a damn abt how he felt….u know what ….it calmed my nerves…..when every single time he cried out in pain….when I cut his finger …how he let out a painful shriek….when I took his eyes out by my knife…..how he writhed in pain…..it was so calming………how dare he……” ….saying this he curled his finger in tight fist….thn he laughed sardonically…. & said… …”we actually did a favor on him….by killing him like this…..coz u Hv no idea…..what Arjun had up his sleeves for him……let’s call it jai’s luck that Arjun took his heart out….without playing much with him…..” Kabir cut him out in mid & called his name loudly….making neil come to his senses…..he quickly released my hand….& moved back a little……but i stood there all frozen….Hearing all this…..my heart stopped for a second or two….I felt numb…..AR…JUN….he took jai’s heart out….but why?….why would he do that ?….he clearly hates me to death….he….he despise me….thn why?…..suddenly arjun’s word from that day started replaying in my head..’well he was found to be a traitor….. & i had my way with him’…..thn it clicked me….he punished jai because he was a traitor….. Of course…..he did this for his business……..at this mere thought….my shoulders slumped…. A different feeling washed over my heart….I don’t know what it was……was it disappointment?…. No….of course not….why would I feel disappointed… In fact I should b happy that I’m not responsible for jai’s condition….. He didn’t do this for what jai did to me….yes….yes….I should b happy…..actually….I am happy….yes ….I’m happy…..I looked up & saw Neil & kabir ….they both were looking at me as if …I was an alien…as if waiting for my outburst….. Thn I said….” Oh…….I know why he did it…” …something flashed in Neil’s eyes….& kabir asked a little unsured.”….aahun… U do…..do u princess?”…..i nodded a little & said…” Jai was a traitor”…..Neil didn’t show any expression… But muscles of his face twitched…..& kabir asked all confused ” & why would u say that..princess..”…… I said in a small voice… “A..Arjun himself told me that day…..that he did all this to make him pay…..bcoz he was a traitor…. ” now a light smirk played on Neil’s face…..& even kabir’s face was mirroring his expressions …..what d hell is wrong with these two….they r behaving weird……it was thn Neil said… ” I c…thts what he said…..well yes….yes..jai was a traitor… “…..my eyes narrowed at his face…..but he shrugged

& thn kabir said….” Now…let’s go for brkfast…..rats r literally doing karate in my poor stomach….” Saying this he made a puppy face …urrrrrgh……even I’m hungry….but how could I go down in these clothes….there would be everyone else….& even……aah….I don’t care…..” Ummm…I’m not feeling like having brkfast…..u guyz continue without me…” Kabir’s mouth dropped…. & said….” U….u….r not hungry?…What a day…d little dinasour is not feeling like having brkfast…… Wow…..wait…..am I dreaming?…” Hearing this I scowled & threw a pillow at him….even Neil hit him over his head saying….” Don’t call her little dinasour…. Only I can do that….” Saying this he pulled me towards kitchen & said….” Don’t worry….nobody’s there…..”….how did he know that….I quickly looked at him….he simply looked down at me & smiled…..that contagious smile of his……I could look at it all my life & never get bored of…..I’m sure if Sam would Hv seen it….she would Hv gone totally mad for him…..a simple smile came over my lips at d thought of Sam…..how I missed her all these days…..I know she would b worried for me….I hope she is OK….I don’t even know what happened to her that day…….with that we all headed towards brkfast table…..there was no one around…..as soon as Neil & kabir brought d brkfast….I started digging in….yummmmm…..oh God it’s really good…..ummm…..how badly I needed my pancakes……..I was so engrossed in eating….that I didn’t notice Neil & kabir….when I looked up….they both were giving me u-r-really-impossible look…..& thn kabir said…” I thought someone wasn’t hungry…..right princess?”….at this point I was confused what to do….I mean my pancakes were literally begging me to eat thm & here these idiots r looking forward for my answer….so I did d only possible thing….yes…I stuffed my mouth with pancake… & said while chewing…..”Thaidhontchare…”…..they both burst in to fits of laughter…….& Neil said….” What did u say little dinasour….. “…saying this he again started chuckling….. I gave thm a glare …& said after gulping….” I….DONT….CARE…u idiots….” Hearing this they again started laughing like a maniac…. Suddenly I felt something….like someone’s gaze…..I turned my head a little….but as soon as I did…..my heart skipped a beat….I stopped in mid of taking a bite…..there right right there stood Arjun…without his shirt…….he was leaning casually against d wall….his arms crossed over his chest…. His hairs disheveled as if he woke up just now…..his dark eyes held mine captive..his eyes told a million things which I couldn’t understand……..he looked at me as if he could see through me…..I started biting my lower lip nervously….was he looking devilishly hot, godly handsome & unimaginable s*xy?….. nope…….naaah…….not at alll….not even close to that…….ummmmm…..ok…….may be a little…just a little….suddenly a girl came by his side & hugged him like a….like a…gorilla…. Yes a gorilla….a clingy gorilla….I may add….thn my eyes went over to her clothing….& my eyes literally bulged out….she stood there in only a shirt….only a shirt…….stupid girl……..my eyes quickly shot up to c Arjun….there he was….looking strt in my eyes…..thn suddenly he pulled her closer by her waist & placed a kiss over her cheek……urrrrrgh….. I was wrong….he is not devilishly hot….neither godly handsome….nor unimaginable s*xy….not even a little….I quickly turned my head around…& my blood started boiling….kabir was looking at her like ….like he is going to eat her…& that stupid Neil ….he let out a whistle….& may I add…both of their gazes were fixed on her long s*xy legs….I mean seriously… Come on guyz……she is not that good……OK……may b she is ….but still……it’s been more thn 5 mins….& these 2 idiots are feasting over her body……& that monster was sitting right there in front of me with her being right beside her…..hell why don’t take his bl**dy business to his room….whatever….as if I care….it continued for next 3 min….enough…. Being irritated with it….I threw my fork with a force on my plate….& 3 heads snapped towards me….coz 4 one was already giving me death glare…..I raised my eyebrow at Neil & kabir….& Neil smiled at me smugly….while kabir mouthed…”she is damn hot”….now I threw a piece of my pancake at him….but he caught it & said grinning…. “Thanks”…. I scoffed & looked at Arjun….but that girl was gone….hmmmm….may b to get ready….what d hell radhika….why do u care?…..a small voice at d back of my head said……..ignoring d voice… I started attacking my food….taking all my irritation & anger on plate….that’s when I noticed Neil….he was again giving me that smug smile…..thn my gaze averted to Arjun automatically….. Again…..gosh really again….he was giving me those glares….I mean why…..why d hell he looks at me like….like he want to kill me right now…..that’s when I noticed that he was looking at something intensely….I followed his gaze being confused….. & thn I saw he was looking at my shirt….or I may say his shirt……my cheeks heated up…..I quickly averted my gaze to ground…..& my hand clutched my shirt tightly……I again started biting my lip….thn there was this complete silence for few mins….while I could still feel his gaze over me….but I didn’t had courage to look at him again….

after few secs kabir broke d silence while Neil kept looking at me & thn kabir said….. “Umm….Arjun….I think radhika would be needing some clothes….. So I was thinking to take her out today for shopping & all”…without wasting even half a sec ….Arjun said coldly without even looking at him…” No…”….kabir again tried….”i ll b with her all d time….there will b complete security…. ” Arjun now gave him a look & said “no…..means….no…..& this time believe me kabir I won’t repeat again….she can’t go out “… Thts when Neil interrupted casually while eating his brkfast…” I agree with Arjun…..she can’t go out” at this kabir & i looked at him all shocked …while Arjun raised his eyebrow at him….thn Neil continued with a smirk on his face…” Yup….I mean she doesn’t need to go with us for shopping…. I can get her anything she wants…. I know her size perfectly….. I only have a single doubt……..radhika what would u prefer a lacy one….or transparent one?..i mean I don’t know ur choice…..just tell me…or I’ll get u a lingerie of my choice….& believe me my choices r damn hot….” Hearing this I choked on my food & started coughing…..while kabir started chuckling….& out of d blue Arjun bumped his fist on d table & said dangerously…. “Neil….don’t…” What…..why is he getting bothered?….oh ….ofcourse he is controlling freak….& couldnt stand a thing against his wish….arrogant heartless monster…..At this Neil shrugged & said…”u were d one who said she can’t go out….so I’ll just”….Arjun cut him in middle & said…” I changed my mind….u know I could no more look at her in those clothes….” Saying this clutched his fist more tightly as if controlling himself….do…do I look that bad..?..”she is already ugly….& these clothes make her look worst….” At this neil smirked @gain & said….” Ahun…..i c” Now arjun’s eyes met mine…tears welled up in my eyes & soon started rolling down…he didn’t have to say that….he don’t HV any right to insult me like this…..his eyes didn’t move from mine for a sec…they as if telling their own story held mine captive…. His word stung in my head & I looked down hurt….thts when I again heard him….” & moreover we HV a meeting….she can’t stay here alone…I don’t trust her….” Now tears paced up…..I don’t know but his words hurt like hell……thts when I got up & ran towards my room…..soon I heard Neil entering….I turned away to hide my tears from him…..he didn’t said anything just passed me his kerchief like d first time we met….I quickly wiped my tears off…thn he pulled my chin up….& said looking strt in my eyes….” U know u r not ugly…..right?….but d most beautiful girl I Hv ever seen…” Hearing this a small smile came on my lips & I nodded….he thn leaned down a little & kissed my forehead….his lips rested there for a min….& he said…” Good…..”….”we’ll b leaving in next 15 mins…..& we will only get half an hour……so come-on change ur mood little dinasour… ” at this I hit him lightly….he chuckled & left….after 15 minutes when I came out….I bumped in to something…. Or I must say someone….looking up I saw same cold eyes….it felt as if I would get caged up in them….I quickly moved back a little & started to walk away…..when suddenly a warm pair of hands yanked me back by holding my waist….& in matter of secs I was pinned between wall & him….a weird feeling started building up in my chest…. He kept looking at me strt in my eyes…. I quickly looked down….thts when he said in a weird voice….” U won’t leave me even for a single second there….” I blinked at him…once…twice…thrice….thts when he said “I mean my sight……if u try to escape or something thn…” He stopped & came closer to me…my breath hitched…..my cheeks got hot….& I started shivering when his breath fanned my earlobe….I closed my this….after few sec I heard him….again in that weird voice…”Vorrei baciare il respiro al di fuori della bocca ” he said these word so softly & slowly….. Every word felt like caressing my earlob …shiver ran down my body….butterflies started dancing in my stomach….that’s when I opened my eyes…& looked at him….something flashed in his eyes & his eyes seems darker….but in a flash it went away & he said….”thn I’ll kill u….understood…?”….hearing this I looked at him all shocked…. I was terrified….scared & what not….he …he will kill me……thn he looked at my lips….my lips????….huh???….before I could think anything….he turned around & left…….what ….what did just happened…. Was he thinking of different ways to cut my lips before killing me..after all he is a bl**dy heartless monster…..so called MAFIA KING…..a frightening shiver ran down my body at d mere thought….

Then we all sat in his lamborghini …gosh this car was a masterpiece…….car ride was silent….like icy cold silent….all d way…kabir played on his phone…..Neil played with his knife….while Arjun kept looking out d window…..& I …well I kept observing all three of thm…& finally started looking out….as soon as I stepped out of car….I was surrounded by 14-15 men….kabir walked with me….Neil was gone somewhere….while Arjun walked ahead…..he led us through d mall….but didn’t stop at single shop…..urrrrrgh….did he even know anything abt girls shopping… & here he is walking like KING….suddenly Neil came from somewhere & said…”yes Arjun….tell us which shop?…” At this Arjun groaned & Neil smirked while kabir chuckled….after few sec everyone looked at me….getting their attention suddenly I felt nervous & started biting my lips…..thn I pointed towards….pantaloons…. This time I led d way & they all followed me….& by looking at Arjun I can tell how displeased he was in doing so…..when I went in….other stayed outside but these 3 idiots came with me…& didn’t left me alone for a min….not for a single freaking min….urrrgh….a girl needs her privacy while buying clothes…so she could look at herself….select a perfect clothes out of bunch….thn again look at herself….thn reject a dress….& move on to next one….but these idiots simply don’t understand…..thn I walked out of shop …thts when kabir said….” Really…..u girls r impossible….. U spent 15 min looking & praising that dress.. & at d end u said u don’t like d color…..what d f**k…..” ….Neil nodded with him ….at this I rolled my eyes & moved on to next 2 with all d men following behind me……it would b an understatement if I say I’m irritated…..thn I suddenly saw d shop that I needed d most & stopped….yup…my dates r coming….& I need my stuff…..but how to tell these guys….thinking this I groaned internally……thn after few secs kabir asked…”why did u stopped?” While other kept looking at me…..I cleared my throat ,gathered my courage & said….”I need some stuffs….” At this Neil said…” Thn let’s go….why r we standing”….uggggggggh stupid boys….. Again I held myself together & said in a slow voice…” Um…u see…um …I need some….um personal stuff….” At this Arjun said all irritated… ” thn why r u wasting our bl**dy time….let’s go & get thm….or better we should go & get whatever u want…coz u r wasting a lot of time….stupid women…” Neil & kabir seconded him by nodding their heads……At this my blood boiled & I kept my hand over my hips & said….”OK….u guyz go & get me tampons & sanitary napkins….” Hearing this their mouth dropped….3 of thm turned red due to embarrassment & started looking here & there…. Wow….. I mean I didn’t knew it was that easy to close all of their mouths…..simply amazing…..a smile crept over my face….they stood there in silence….taking it as a hint…I walked in …..got my things…& walked out after few mins….then I visited few more shops to get other things…..& it’s hard to believe …but yes they all were silent like an obedient kind all d while….it’s thn Arjun said…”u got only five mins…”….I looked at him shocked…”um…I need few more things…um…specially clothes….” At this he groaned & Neil said…” I’ll handle d meeting with kabir & Rana….I think u should stay here” at this Arjun let out a sigh…& looked at me disgusted….thn kabir & Neil gave me bear hug & walked away…..thn I walked to my fav shop…..as I looked through d clothes…I spotted a a perfect po shirt….my fav cartoon…I love it…& a pair of shorts….. I looked around & saw that Arjun was looking at his phone…so I walked to trial room without telling him anything……I took my shirt out & was abt to take d skirt off…when door burst open & Arjun entered in furiously….. A shriek escaped my lips & I quickly clutched his shirt in front of me ……he came to me storming in anger….causing d door to close behind him…automatically…..he thn pinned me to d wall & said furiously… ” what…did…I ….tell….u…abt….not….leaving….my…..sight…” I cringed at his words & tried to wiggle out of his arm….but he didn’t let me….he tightened his hold on my wrist….& said…” Answer me ……before I kill u”….this time I looked at him strt in his eyes……& thn I don’t know what got over me but I asked him….” Why did u took his heart out?”….hearing this something flashed in his eyes…. Something that I didn’t understand…he thn slowly leaned down to me…..seeing him this close my heart started beating madly…I hope he didn’t heard it….thn suddenly he rubbed his stubble against my cheeks…. Shiver ran down my body…..I clutched his shirt tighter against me….I started biting my lower lip nervously…… When he leaned down a little more….. & his breath fanned my earlobe….. A tingling sensation build inside me.. ….& thn he said huskily “dont mordere le tue labbra la Mia piccola regina , it’s solo mio per fare….” With that he rubbed his nose lightly against my earlobe… I don’t know what he said ….but hearing this my heart beat stopped for a second…. Butterflies started dancing in d pit of my stomach….. My cheeks heated up…..& a gasp escaped my lips….He looked at me for few secs….& thn again said in a dangerous tone…..” Answer me….” His grip dead tight on my wrist ….a painful gasp escaped my lips….& I said stuttering ” I…I… wanted t..to…t…try…this….d…dress” at this he looked at me & thn he realised that I didn’t wore a shirt & covered myself with his shirt in front…..on feeling his gaze ….I turned scarlett & started biting my lips nervously……he quickly turned around….& said while he fingers curled in to fist….” U don’t need to try….u would look same….doesn’t matter what u wear….” ….”u r & will always b this undesirable…. U r nothing but a useless girl” saying this he walked out….& my tears rolled down my face….unable to hold any longer ….I broke down in to sobs…..

SARAL’S POV…..

it’s been 3 days….3 bl**dy days without radhika……radhika….radhika….radhika……u Hv no idea how much I love u…..u r everything to me……..u Hv no idea what I Hv done to finally get married to u…..I lied to u…..d only thing which I didn’t wanted to do…..yes it was all a lie….I’m not d person u see in me….I’m a killer….a bl**dy killer…..I tried my best to keep u away from all this….I wanted u to love me ….& I knew that u wouldn’t if u knew d truth……I know u don’t love me yet….but u will after our marriage……I’m sorry….but I couldn’t lose u…..not for anything in this world……not for anything……u will b mine….only mine…..& whoever will come in our way would Hv to die……I love u radhika….I love u so much that it hurts without u…..that day I had to leave ur hand…..I was helpless ….I had to listen to Mr mishra……u Hv no idea abt things around u……I let out a sigh….& held her photo tightly to my chest…..don’t worry my love….I’ll get u back soon….u will be soon at ur rightful place….yes….in my arms…..soon radhika……soon…

Well that’s all for today….I wrote it all in hurryy….so let me know ur views….. Silent viewers kindly drop ur views

43 comments

  1. Myra

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    Oh my god! Oh my god! Just by seeing the title my hearts starts beating faster….and i cant help but read it all in one go…..man, whats arjun’s problem? Neil and kabir obviously know something and thats the reason for being overly protective….please please…tell me naaa….if not here then give me some spoilers on personal message…i cant wait!

    And sweetheart, i have a suggestion if you dont mind, could you please provide english translations for the italian sentences in the bracket?

    And more over, why is arjun behaving like that…i mean, he obviously loves her then what in the world is holding him back….he is impossible…i feel like thrashing me blue and black until he confesses his feelings about radhika….god!!! My heart beat just doesnt slow down…

    Can i please have a double dhamaka next time?

    Love you loadsss….

  2. Jessie

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    Uff….the dp is hot….!!! Too hot…!!!😘😍😍😍😘 it was really hard to control my smile all the time staying amidst a bunch of relatives…!!Argh!! I wanna scream like Rads….Meen…will comment later….I wanna read again n again ….you know me….!!! Mafioso re playing the other way…!! Neil dialogue on lingerie…I felt like pulling my hairs…lol….all the while I cud feel Radz….brilliant writing….dear…..clinging gorilla..!! Hahah….Neil n kabir looking her….poor Radz….shopping!!!! I jus loved how u said abt shopping….yep a girl does. That…so beautifully said….Tampons..lol…the guys went silent…..idiots..!!! she was giving hints n they were argh…. Mafia king reminds himself not to cross his limits.,by saying that she is ugly…..Ugly means breath taking in Arjun’s1 dictionary….

    Tesoro Mio…Ho apprezzato questo! Mafioso re….!! What to say….!sono arrossendo….She thinks abt Sam when Neil smiles…cute and lively…that’s one of my fav one…here..next to where Arju bangs his fist on table…and she thought he would cut her lips ..😂😂😂 Rads…..get neil mobile and Google else ask that dumb head back….am with you girl…heheh…..how dare he speaks a lang which she doesn’t know….ok …Radz…dont bite your lips….hahaha…..lo amavo.!!! Tesoro Mio…you bring it awesome….He isn’t MMK…its OMK..our Mafia King…!!!😉😉😍😍dont get me wrong…I mean he is good boy na….heheh….he took the heart out…one ques…!!! Did u learn medicine Mafioso re!! Jessie has her ques…lol…..kabir the chweeto…!! 14 to 15 guards around her when she walks in his shirt to pantaloons1 with Arjun behind…yaar…..what to say now…!! Arjun…golden.duck out before his Regina…!!!

    • Sangee

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      Hey jezz I too thought the same thing Neil pls get her a mobile so that she can translate his words…. If she comes to know abt that I am sure she gonna faint next moment 😛

  3. Shree

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    woooooowww!! wow wow wow!! nothing more!! and I loving it.. I hate it when arjun insults her.. aahh.. please put some common sense him.. saral ka thing I’m little confused.
    update soon.. love you

  4. Sathya

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    Giù i cappelli….. Meen darling… What r u made of… I m drooling on this arjun… U made me started loving this Mafia king… It’s not a good sign for me… Enda ammooooo…. Nyan entha seyyum…. Awww u rocked the episode Dear…. I just keep on reading reading reading n don’t want it to end at all…

    Vorrei baciare il respiro al di fuori della bocca
    (I would like to kiss the breath out of the mouth)
    What should I say for this…. Even my breathe out for a moment…. Intense intense

    dont mordere le tue labbra la Mia piccola regina , it’s solo mio per fare

    (dont bite your lips My little queen, it’s mine alone to make)

    Hmm soon Mafia king gonna mark her lips with some seal I guess…. Oh God what a statement it is… If rads would have understood this…. Like jai her heart would have pumped out. Gosh… I got goosebumps dear… Oh no… U made fallen for Mafia king meen…..

    Amo questo re Mafia, ….

    E ‘impossibile per me di andare il mio sguardo senza di lui ammirato …. calda .. s*xy bello

    Mi innamoro di questo re mafia

    I love u Meen per questo meraviglioso aggiornamento 😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍

    Lol u got task from me to find the meaning

  5. farjana

    Hi meen.. fabulous super mind blowing n wat not.. this story getting way too deep n intersting… Arjun n his contradicting ways of showing his care n love is so purely amazing.. im hooked to this story like bbatcb n all other kfar stories.. pls update sn.. atleast once a wk.. amazing.. take care..

  6. Brin

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    Mind blowing episode, you have out done it, absolutely love this ff, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

  7. jabbo

    seriously meen i m in luv with ur shots……loved it….nd plzzz…from next post arjun pov….i cant wait anymore…plzzzz

  8. Sangee

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    First of all thank you so soo much for the dedication and wishes dear 😘😘😘😘 iam dancing here while reading all your wishes 😁😁😁 thanks for every one… Comming to the shot.. You just nailed it dear… Fantastic… Fabulous.. No words to describe… Wah wah what a update… Y MR. MAFIA KING is behaving like this to her 😕 iam sure he loves her but what stops him to show it to her more than that y he is acting to hate her 😞 lots of questions 😞 I think I will get answers in upcoming episodes… Neil and kabir two cute devils.. Cute and devils will suit them perfect… So there is some connection between arjun and Rads.. Neil and kabir know that… Neil want arjun to tell that to rads so only he is provoking him ☺am I right? 😃what’s that Fb.. Before I start imagining a weird story pls u your self reveal that 😀 lingerie discussion 🙈🙈🙈hello guys is this the way you talk infront of a girl… poor rads… I
    was smiling at Arjuns reaction.. 😁😁😁
    Arjun is not letting her out because he is concerned abt her safety.. Ok .. Over protective MAFIA KING.. Shopping surrounded by 3 idiots ufff… Guys it’s shopping we will take atleast 3 hrs to buy a hanky you are giving her 15 mins 😒 very bad… “personal stuff” she was hinting you about that he he he if you don’t let her then get them for her 😝😜😛poor boys I think Neil and kabir left arjun with her because of some reasons 😁😁😁 ok ok no more questions barged into the trial room 😟 he is over protective… something fishy
    Turning around seeing her.. Oh Mr good boy what were you doing with that girl who came out wearing your shirt 😣 u shud not be doing this atleast when rads is around 😞… Saral POV now what he is upto… He too lied to radikaa let’s pray he will not end up like jai..
    Sry for the silly comment I can’t stop my fingers what to do got excited seeing the update.. A whole some update… Keep going honey love you loads waiting for the next one.. Lastly dp was super hot dear 🙈🙈🙈 morning doese of hotness 😛😝😜

  9. Sangee

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    Ufff how did I missed it.. He is thinking of cutting her lips in difficult ways… Lol I was laughing at her thoughts…. 😂😂😂

  10. Dipika

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    Meen this soooo breathtaking yarrr.. I experienced goosebumps… Neil asking her about lingerie.. Lol… Arjun insult.. God this guy is impossible… Her thinking n emotions all touched my heart… Saral pov… Ummm.. Beta u don’t gonna get her.. Hahaha.. Love u lots 😍

  11. Rasha

    Meen dear meen thank you and waiting .off course for next update. Plss ssss try to update soon. Sorry if I’m asking more it’s only your mistake.mistake of writing this amazing story.so no patience dear.ohhhh I can’t wait.it’s really very nice.each part is like u know. Anyways God bless you dear.take care.

  12. Nayan

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    It was outstanding …. I’m out of words right now after reading this chapter .. radhika’s reaction after listening kabir and neil’s justification was awesome … and after hearing arjun pulled out jai’s heart radhika reacted as she got a heart attack … I loved that part … Neil’s and kabir’s reaction make me suspect about arjun’s motivations .. they know something about his feelings … it ws really funny to see kabir’s reaction after seeing radhika eating pancakes like she was starving for ages … neil gave her cute nickname … little dinosaur 😀 😀 😀 ardhika’s eyelock was nice … I’m like a mad aftet seeing arjun’s, neil’s and kabir’s reaction after hearing that radhika want her personal stuff LOL .. last scene was fantastic … arjun entering trail room breaking the door and radhika terrified after his entry was too good … plz can you post arjun’s pov and his feelings about radhika in next update … if you don’t mind can you plz give the English translation of latin or Spanish sentence also … stay blessed ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ update soon .. eagerly waiting for the next update 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  13. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    My God…………its amazing……………why is Arjun soo rude??????? if he loves her, then why is he making her cry??????????? whoah! Saral is also a killer??????? poor girl…..every killer wants her…..but she only wants her Mafia King…………….Meen chechiiiiiiii plzzzzzzz give some ardhika scenes in the next……………will Rads ever find that it is Arjun who comes to her at night and lulls her to sleep and kisses her ??????????????? Neil-Kabir-Arjun scene was very nyc……..esp Neil’s dialogue……………….I was laughing like a maniac at that…………..then the shopping scene….and Rads dialogue…………..Arjun barged in the trial room????????

    • Aasthu

      |Registered Member

      I tot to read ur ff at ni8 b4 going to sleep………….so that I can enjoy it without any1 disturbing me…………but I couldn’t resist myself………………….

    • Aasthu

      |Registered Member

      Meen chechiiiiiiiiiiiii y is this Arjun a jerk???????? he kisses her at night without her knowledge….then whispers to her in the alien lang that he wants to kiss the breath out of her and also not to bite her lips as it is his………………….then y is he saying that she is ugly and undesirable??????????? Neil and Kabir knows Arjun’s love towards Radhika ri8????????? chechii where is Sam?????????? what happened to her???????????

  14. arti viswanathan

    Awesome, superb and marvellous episode meen dear… I loved it… I thought it will be saral but i didn’t understand who did he killed….. I hate saral…. I think radhika too loves arjun….. And they will be together…. And what happened to sam….

  15. arti viswanathan

    Don’t separate ardhika meen dear… I really hate that saral a lot…. tc loads of love muuuuhhh… and will be waiting for next episode.. muuuhhhh…..

  16. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    Meen this chapter is amazing as always. If I started to point out my fav scenes I will write the whole chapter here. Jez is correct u just change the title as omk, we all are fan of this mafia king. Really I am a big fan of this story. And meen I am really excited for the chapter in which Arjun explain all Italian words, I got the meaning of all words then also. Waiting for next post soon…. Plz

  17. heena

    wowowowow…………….
    what an update yar loved it
    arjun what he is doing i dont understand his latin language yar pls put english subtitle for it and i want to know tha translation of latin words from previous episodes yar pls pls help me
    and neil and kabir are very funny yar and pls pls update soon pls pls

  18. ana

    You blast it Di….u really rocked it….I was really waiting for this mafia lyk anything…. I really wish real life mei bhi itna hot, possessive nd caring mafia…..no doubt I will never ever in lyf leave him…..nd the Dp is lyk icing of the cake ….
    Its 1 of my super duper favorite story….really the way arjun reacted…everytym WS very well explained nd u kn 1 thing u really write radzz POV.awsm evrytym it feels so real…..nd the bond of the trio WS perfect … They r frnds who barely kn each other BT what they feel 4 each other sometimes never cm from several yes of frndship also….
    Nd Di why u r not posting our mafias POV…..we all want to hear him ….what he exactly feels 4 our sweetheart…..
    Nd
    Di …..1 more thing….I kn its so mean from my side …I kn u would b busy….BT can u plzzzz post it soon…. I really wait for my mafia king….plzzzz post asap….whenever u get tym
    Bye
    Love u …..see u soon

  19. Kanthi

    Yaar meen! You are just awesome!!!!! I was laughing reading the shopping sequence and my frnds declared me as a insane person .😂😂😂😂😂😂😂yaaar !!!please update the next part!!!!I i just love arjun! And Neil and kabirs’s bond with radhika is simply awesome!!!!!!

  20. lapooh

    I am really in love with this story……it’s so intense…..Arjun is deeply in love with radhika…..he loves her so much that he is not able to control himself…….he really loves her madly….I loved d moment when he turns around & tightens his fist…& his words ‘u would look same….doesn’t matter what u wear…’ …by this he means that he doesnt care whatever she wears….she’ll always b beautiful in his eyes…..Gosh….he loves her so much…..there r a lot of questions…. But I would like to wait for upcoming episodes…… Just there is this question which keeps pounding in my head……is Neil also in love with radhika?????…..

  21. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Amazing Meen….this guy spks hs hrt in a language she dosent understand and then hurts her in the words which pierce her heart….Neil and Kabir seem to understand his likeness towards Radhika…waiting to see what Saral does to get Radhika back 🙂 amazing shot 😘😘😘😘😘

  22. Aastha

    Meeeennn…. amazing chappy… loved every bit..oh !! It’s very irritating when Arjun speaks his heart in GODS KNOW WHICH LANGUAGE !!!!.. Meen just surprise him by making Radz understand his language .😃😃😃….. shopping part was hilarious and mostly because the personal stuff…Ufff !!!! these guys don’t understand and Radz straight answer was mind blowing….😁😁😁… ..and do update soon … love you dear …

  23. Roma

    Wowwww. …awesoooooome Meen…I salute u my sweeeeeetheart darling. …u have sooooo muchhhhhh talent in you which shows in your each word…..the way u narrated every character here is mind blowing, dynamite, thrilling and astonishing. ….both neil n kabir punished jai brutally n arjun also with same ruthlessness. ..rads is shocked n surprised but then thinks as jai was traitor so got punishment. …arjun’s words shattering her very badly but neil soothed her telling her to be most beautiful girl…awww…then the shopping scene was very awesoooooome. …but I don’t get arjun’s Spanish words….can you give translation of those please….saral was trapping rads so she start loving him…hmmm…but looks like she is already falling for her Mafia King…..keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling. …I’m very thankful to you for sharing this unique splendid amazing story. … I love love you soooooooo muchhhhhh my dear. ..muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug ☆♡♡♡♡♡♡☆ 😉

  24. Simple

    Awesome story, read it today in one go all your chapters… I don’t know the language Arjun speaks but it was fun typing the whole thing in google translation to know the meaning.

    You are an awesome writer. I will be waiting for your update.

    Please try to update soon even if its a short update.

    Thank you.

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