MY MAFIA KING- AN UNTOLD STORY OF UNDYING LOVE…..#4….(few shots)

Hellllllllo fellas…..welllll a bigggggg wala thank u & a tight wali hug for such an amazing response…..love u all…this update I would like to dedicate to my dear Myra & Jessie……love u both….well guyz don’t kill me after d update……hehehe……& plz ignore typos & grammatical error…..& regarding rehnuma….I will update it after another update of MY MAFIA KING……..

So njoy d ride guyzzzzz

Radhika’s POV

I kept begging him…..I kept crying …..but he didn’t budge….I tried to assure myself that I can still push him aside….or throw something over his head to make him unconscious…… His every touch was breaking me & my soul in to pieces…..it was hard to breathe….. I couldn’t take it anymore…….I would rather die thn letting him tame me…..but how useless I am….there is nothing right now I could do….not even kill myself….another loud sob escaped my mouth…..standing against wall …..covering my front with it……my back was to him…..his boby was still behind me…..& he was laughing evilly……but as soon as he started moving his fingers over my spine……I broke down….I couldn’t even turn around to puch him….I lost all my hopes…..thn his fingers started moving up & he caught my hairs in a tight grip….thn he pulled it with force causing a painful shriek to escape my mouth……seeing my helplessness & pain….he chuckled evilly & said….” b***c….this is just starting…. By d time I’m done with u…I’m sure u won’t be alive…” Saying this he again yanked my hair……& dug his nails in my arms causing blood to ooze out of it…..my shrieks grew much more louder & painful….but there was something inside mr which keep yelling tht I can’t give up…..I pulled my elbow without thinking & hit him back in his stomach with whatever force I was left with……which didn’t do any bttr harm to him….except he grew more angrier causing him to pull my hairs again with all force he had….leading to another unbearable painful yelp to escape my mouth….this time he pressed his body with a lot of pressure causing mine unable to move at all……thn he brought his mouth close to my bare back…..I again begged him….I cried….& cried….but it didn’t had any effect over him…& he tilted my head with force to d other side……but when his mouth was about touch d crook of my neck…..he was yanked away from me….now my sobs & pain shooting up in my body…. increased….but thn I heard a frustrated curse from him…..followed by ‘what’ but thn he abruptly stopped…..i tilted my face a little all sobbing….my body was shaking with pain & terror…..I still stood against d wall covering myself….when my teary eyes landed over d figure standing in front of me….when his eyes met mine…..they were as cold as ice…….his aura was as intimidating as death…..whn he registered my tears & condition….I saw a flash of fire in his eyes for a sec…..seeing him I closed my eyes & sobbed brokenly…….my inner self said only one word “Arjun” ……..a wave of relief washed over my heart seeing him…….he as if listening his name from my inner self walked towards me….I felt him standing just an inch behind me……

I turned my face a little towards him…..& again opened my teary eyes……to look strt in his eyes…..there was complete silence in d room except d sound of my broken sobs…..a look at him & I know…..he could see all d pain…helplessness & torture behind my tears……he thn closed his fingers tightly forming a fist….thn without saying a word turned around covering my body with his…. facing jai…..who was still on d ground….he quickly got up & said…” Arjun….it’s u man….u came just on right time ….let’s Hv some fun together…” ….now Arjun smirked at him & said…”fun…..together? ” jai got up d floor….& said ” yeah man…..it would be fun……look at her body……aaaah…….u can’t image how f**king addicting her smell is…” ….saying this he gave me a lustful look….terrified by his gaze I tried to cover my back with my hands…at d moment all my heart was saying was Arjun…& only arjun…..as if he is D only one who could save me from jai….I didn’t thought for a sec ..& quickly moved towards Arjun & hugged him tight from back…I clenched his shirt as tight as I possibly could ……thn I bowed my head down over his shoulder….all this time my body was trembling badly…… my tears didn’t stopped for a sec …..he too knew abt this as my tears started drenching his shirt…….thn again I heard jai..” Believe me man…….this whore will surely be much better in d bed….I can imagine her…” He stopped in between & chuckled evilly…..hearing this I tightened my grip over his shirt….I felt him stiffen & muscles at his back twiched….my sobs increased & I tried to breathe….. When suddenly arjun’s hand pulled me close to his body helding my waist in a protective sense…..thn slowly his hand found my other hand….& I held it tightly …..thn again jai continued….” So….if u want u can take her first…. I mean after all u r my boss….but let me tell u….this little whore is a little feisty….. But this only adds to d fun…didn’t it?….or if u want we both can njoy together… U know” saying this he raised his eyebrow at Arjun & smirked evilly…..his words terrified me to hell…& unconsciously I started digging my nails in arjun’s hand….as seconds passed…my nails dug deeper & deeper but he didn’t flinched…thn after few sec his thumb started caressing back of my hand…..this simple gesture made me feel safe ….for d moment a sense of warmth & safety engulfed me……this slowed down my sobs a little…..thn suddenly he took his hand off from mine smoothly….thn he turned a little towards me ….his eyes searched mine as if as asking me to trust him…..or may be thts what I concluded….. But without thinking I held him tighter as if telling him that yes I do…….thn he turned to jai…..keeping his hand in his pockets….& said in a firm but deathly cold tone…..” Why don’t u try first….after all u did a lot of hard work…..go on …..game is all urs …let’s c how u play….” Saying this he fixed his gaze on jai….& a shiver ran down my body…..i pushed myself as close to him as possible & my grip again tightened on his shirt & I know my nails were now digging his back……again I heard jai…” Really…..thanks man…..I’ll try my best to keep her alive for ur turn….” Saying this he started moving towards me….hearing his footsteps my heart started pumping fast in fear…..he came closer with a smirk on his face…..but when he was abt to touch my hand……when suddenly he pulled back with a painful shriek……there was long cut all along his right hand which started bleeding & in few sec it was fully drenched with blood….I turned my gaze towards Arjun……he was casually playing with a knife…..thn turned his gaze to jai & said while playing with it……” Ohhh…..thts a cut…..ooooph….u c I got this new knife as a gift…..I was checking it out…… I guess it slipped….u may continue”…saying this he shrugged & again started playing with knife….but as soon as jai took another step towards me…..another loud yelp escaped from him as there was another cut along d length of his other hand……this time Arjun raised his eyebrow & said ” aaaah…..this knife I tell u…..it just u know slipped again….ur cut….it looks deep….u alright???…” Saying this he again averted his gaze to knife….while jai winced in pain….he thn composed himself & said smiling…” It’s cool man…just b careful “saying this he again moved towards me….when suddenly arjun’s knife came towards jai in a fast moment…..but this time he dodged it & said…” It slipped….but still didn’t hurt me” saying this he smirked at Arjun….but Arjun didn’t looked at him…his focus was fixed on d knife….while he played casually with it……when out of d blue his muttered “u sure?” Now jai looked at him in confusion when suddenly he touched his neck……& noticed blood oozing out of it….thn suddenly he started screaming as soon as he registered pain….thn he pressed his hand against his neck …..& muttered with his eyes yelling blood…..” It’s all bcoz of this whore…..ill kill her” saying this he took his gun out & started moving towards me…..all this while Arjun played with his knife as if he didn’t cared at all……when suddenly in a blink of eye he pushed me away towards d cupboard….. Such that it covered my body & thn he removed bullets from his gun….it all happened in flash….which took jai off guard & left me shocked….thn he moved casually around jai…..while jai stood trembling with his gun still in his hand…….thn Arjun said ” u let me down jai….I thought u were good at d game….” Saying this he moved in front of him…..while another shriek made its way out from jai’s mouth….his back was all drenched in blood …..he cried in pain & fell down on his knees….when Arjun rolled his eyes & said….” Come-on…what type of knife is this….it keeps slipping…. Uuuuh…..need to change it…” While jai was panting on d ground….he slowly raised his head to Arjun & said…” All this for that b***c…..u r killing ur own family….ur own men…. For this f**king whore….” Hearing this Arjun remain as calmed as before & kneeled down at his level….& yanked his hair which led to another loud yelp from jai….thn arjun muttered ”

Essa non è una puttana ,si ventosa di sangue” with this he plunged his knife at d back of his palm & twisted it while moving deep …..now tears started rolling down jai’s eyes while he hissed in pain & thn arjun said to jai looking straight in my eyes ” Lei è la mia regina” I don’t know what he said but hearing those words my heart started beating faster……& at d same moment jai’s shocked face turned towards me……thn he bent his head down in front of Arjun & didn’t say a word…….Arjun thn stood up in a flash….& stared straight in my eyes..his eyes felt likeemitting fire…there was this sudden silence in d room…..which caused my gaze to shift at jai…..& a loud shriek escaped my lips seeing d scene in front of me….there was a knife plunged inside his chest & his head hung down……my head started spinning …when Arjun said….” It’s 1mm away from ur heart……it will only take me 10 sec to change my decision & twist it around if u didn’t get out ” saying this he averted his gaze to jai…..who started crawling at d door while hissing in pain….when he reached door Arjun shot his both legs & shrugged saying….” It wouldn’t Hv been fair with my gun u know…..5 secs” ….jai was crawling ….while his chest moved up & down while trying to breath….with every moment of his body….a loud shriek of unbearable pain escaped his mouth….but any how he made it out of d room…at that moment everything he did to me came to my mind & a loud sob escaped my lips…..hot tears again made their way out of my eyes….everything started moving in my head….& I felt he would come back….he…he won’t let me live….this thought made me cover myself with my hands tightly…..after few sec my sobs grew louder when pain in my body shoot up….this is when Arjun shot another bullet at jai in his stomach & said….” This one was for fun…..u asked for…..” Thn he moved aside from door causing it to close with a bang…..thn my sobs caught his attention….& he started moving towards me with his gaze fixed at my eyes….he didn’t moved his gaze even a mm down from my eyes…….seeing him ….I turned around…..with my back at him…..my sobs increased when I realised what had happened & what could had….if he didn’t came……..when he pushed his white shirt towards me…..between my sobs I turned my head & found Arjun shirtless…..he was looking away….with his hands stretched at me with his shirt….after few sec….I took his shirt & he turned around completely facing his back at me ……after I put on his shirt he turned around slowly & moved close to me…..tears were still rolling down ….he kept looking at me for some time……but when he brought his hand to caress d wound at my forehead…..I lost it….unable to hold any longer…..I hugged him tight & broke down……he held me tightly as if I would fall down in case he loosened his grip…….I cried In his arms…I could hear his breathing……..while he soothed me with his hands moving up & down my spine gently…..& then he suddenly moved his head in d crook my neck & thn he inhaled my sent & said more to himself thn me “Siete miei,solo mio” Saying this he brought me closer to himself……when suddenly a painful gasp escaped my lips….thn he looked at my arm from where blood was oozing out…..he quickly scooped me in his arms….while I wrapped my hands around his neck & snuggled my face in his chest all crying…..he took me to d bed…..laid me down & placed duvet over me……..& said….” Sleep…..u will feel better”…..saying this he stood up….when I quickly got up & held him by wrapping my arms around his waist…..& said between my sobs…..”p…ple….ase….d….do…nt…leave..m…me……he…he will kill m…me….p..please….” Saying this I cried…. He thn Sat down & said….” I’m not leaving u ….little regina….I’m right here…..right beside u…..now sleep….” Saying this he started caressing my hairs & again laid me down…..& thn started moving his fingers along my cheeks gently…..I heldhis hand tightly & thn….with his caressing touch I drifted slowly in to sleep while sobbing…..

Suddenly around midnight I woke up with a jerk….I saw a dream…a bad dream…..I saw him….jai….he…he was there…..tears made their way & I panicked when I didnt found Arjun around me…..I quickly got up sobbing & started looking for him….my body was trembling with fear….what if this dream come true…..my heart started repeating a single word again & again ……”Arjun…” After taking few steps……I found Arjun sitting at d couch….he was looking down…..when his eyes found mine….I saw something in thm….something different…. There was fear for a moment……but as soon as I saw him…I forgot everything & ran to him & fell in his arms all crying…..& said…” Please d…don’t l..leave..m..me…AR…Jun…” Saying this I hugged him tight…..while he wrapped his arm around me tightly & said…” Sshhhh……don’t cry……”…. Thn he slowly laid down on d couch… With me being on top of him….he held me tightly as if I’m a baby….& again caressed my hair……my face was against his chest….& I could hear his heart beat….. For a moment I forgot all my pain & let myself drown in his warmth……there was this feeling of being safe in his arms….my heart felt at peace…. At d moment he was d only thing I needed…..it felt if he left me now….I would die….& thn i heard him say….”goodnight little regina” with that slowly I drifted to sleep……..

Next day when I opened my eyes…..I groaned loudly due to pain…..thn d first thing I thought abt was Arjun…..I got up & started looking around…when I didn’t found him around…..I got out of my room & started looking …..but didn’t found him……I was feeling restless….my heart was beating at much faster pace……I was walking down an extremely silent corridor…. When I heard few voices coming out from one room…….I got closer & tried to hear something…. But nothing came out……so opened d door…..but when I did……earth beneath me started shaking…….hot tears started rolling down my cheeks…….& a painful gasp escaped my lips….he was there on his bed with another girl …..he was kissing her….I don’t know why tears were rolling down.. …I don’t know…..thn he looked at me ….his eyes were again cold & distant…..with his eyes fixed at me….he started kissing his neck & shoulder….& thn he lifted his face a little ….while moving d girl comfortably on his side….thn he spoke….” U look like a drenched cat…..little regina……why r u here…..I thought tht drama ended last night…..I mean seriously u wasted a lot of my f**king time ….over tht stupid…..useless topic….anyways it helped me in killing jai……well he was found to be a traitor….. & i had my way with him……but still u annoyed me a lot……gosh…..it was hard to even stand in a same room with u”…..tears didn’t stop….at this point I felt something inside me broken……..anger & hurt both took over me & I snapped…” My name is radhika….not regina….” ….he rolled his eyes & said….” Whatever little regina……don’t u get it I’m not interested….. Leave……or is that u want something else from me…..like u know last night u said…..’don’t leave me…….please……’….remembered…..? ” ….saying this he again kissed her & thn got up & came to me …..he looked at me from top to bottom & said….” But still ….I’m not interested….. I Hv some standards…..u…..u little regina…..don’t Hv got anything special….I mean who in world would want u…u r just useless piece……” Saying this he laughed……anger got my best & I started hitting him at his chest & said in between my sobs….” U r a heartless monster….. U r no different thn him….no different thn him….bastard….” Saying this I continued hitting him…….but as soon as he heard me….a muscle twitched in his face ……his fingers curled in to fist & he yanked me closer to himself by pulling at his shirt….which I was still wearing…..thn he pulled my hairs….& lowered his mouth against my ears & said in an intimidating tone…..” It would take me only 3 sec…to kill u……so don’t make me……as I Hv told u regina……I Hv a little patience…. So don’t test it”….with that he threw me away & turned around saying….” Leave……before I shoot u….”…..I quickly ran away from there…..& came to my room all crying……how stupid I was to think that he was there for me last night….while he was just taking his revenge….. He is a heartless monster…….why did I trust him at first place…..it’s my fault….it’s my fault…..with this I rolled up in a ball & started crying……when suddenly door flung open & kabir got in…..he came to me ….I quickly got up & hugged him tight……I missed him….he pulled away….& said….” Thank God ….u r alright princes……thank God” thn Neil came in….as soon as our eyes met……I again broke down….he came to me & hugged me tightly…..I held my face at his shoulder & cried my heat out…….he looked at me sharply & said….. ” tell me everything radhika…..everything…..” With that I told then everything in between my sobs……when kabir came to me & kneeled down saying…..” I’m sorry princes….I wasn’t there for u when u needed me d most…..I’m sorry…….. Tht bl**dy jai is going to Hv it from me” with that he wiped d lone tear that fell from his eye…..but when I looked at Neil he was trembling with fury……he than quickly held my wrist with pressure such that it started hurting & thn he said in a deathly tone…..” Didn’t I asked u…..what happened this morning?……. Didn’t I?” …I flinched at his tone…..I hvnt seen him like this before……he was making me afraid……but thn he again snapped…..tightening his grip…making me sob in pain….”answer me dammit…..u stupid woman…….answer me” & with tht he stood up & went out leaving me all crying…….whn kabir Sat beside me caressing my wrist to sooth out d pain….he thn gave me a side hug……..after few mins he let out a deep sigh & said.. . ” someone’s gonna die today……….”

……well that’s all for today……c ya guyzzz….silent readers do let me know ur views

76 comments

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hey sadia…..thanks for ur comment dear…..I’m sorry I won’t b able to update daily….but I’ll try my best to update as soon as possible…… Stay blessed

  1. jabbo

    seriously luv it….awesome ….inetresting…very nice…..did arjun luv her?waiting for next…. post next shot soon…

  2. Brin

    |Registered Member

    It was a very intense episode, I was like Arjun come fast save your Radhika, and finally he came, Meen you nail it, well done, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

  3. Nayan

    |Registered Member

    Wow … it was outstanding and thrilling epi ..m arjun’s entry was like hero’s entry in climax scene … felt bad for radhika’s state .. she was so helpless … arjun’s punishment for jai was too good .. jai deserved that punishment for his deeds .. as far as I understand arjin said that radhika is his queen in that latin or Spanish sentence .. Regina refers to queen right .. I loved the way arjun cared for radhika … but next moment he became totally jerk ..how can he hury radhika being with another girl .. I think radhika already fallen love with arjun that’s why she was hurt seeing arjun with another girl .. kabir and neil came back … Neil’s anger can be justified …. he asked radhika what happed but she didn’t open her mouth to tell the truth .. waiting for next epi so eagerly .. upadate soon :-D:-D:-D:-D stay blessed ♡♡♡

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii nayan….good to c u again……well u r right Arjun is being a total jerk…..lets c what happens next……thanks for ur lovely comment dear…..muuuha

  4. arti viswanathan

    Awesome episode… I thought arjun helped her with love but he was just taking revenge on radhika but why? He did it….

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii arti……well Arjun is just being a jerk…..as he said he was revenging jai…..coz he turned out to b a traitor….. Let’s c what happens next dear……a big thanks for ur comment…. Muuuha

  5. jabbo

    this is jabbo (jabin)….i just want to say that….i have become ur fan…..not only u meen but all the writer’s of mmz fantiction….amazing stories guyzz…like seriously guyz if any channel take ur story for their show…i swear it will be great hit…thank you very much for all ur amazing stories….keep posting…stay happy…may allah bless u all…

  6. farjana

    Mind blowing meen…feel so bad for radhika.. i think arjun is in love with her n cant confess abt it.. pls post soon as its very interesting.. i like this mafia king n his little Regina…

    • pia

      He is…. he prefer her as his queen in one line he said you are mine only mine….. it was in Italian…. how romantic he is…😍

      • Meen

        |Author

        Hiii pia……yes u r right it’s Italian that he is using…..yeah I know it’s sooo romantic……u know what I kinda like this Italian language…. I find it hell romantic……stay blessrd

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii farjana…..good to c u again…..well yes I too feel bad for radhika…..but there’s a lot more to come ahead….& I know she will become strong & come out of it all……will try to update ASAP…..thanks a tonn for ur comment dear….stay blessed

  7. heena

    when will u post next buddy todays episode is awesome but what did arjun told to jai yar i didnt understand anything yar pls tell what is it

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii heena ….well I was planning to keep that a secret that is to be revealed later….but for u I’ll translate d first phrase Arjun said to jai….he said….” She is not a whore….u blood sucker….” & for rest please be a little patient….stay blessed

  8. Myra

    |Registered Member

    meen….woman, I salute you! hats off to you girl…..
    woahhhhh ……..that just happened!!!
    whats with this bipolar guy? he says radhika is his queen then why the hell, don’t his actions say the same?
    one instance he is all…my queen…and stuff…the other is sleeping with some other woman…what the hell man…
    jai…..well, he deserved it.
    mind you, keep kabir and neil in the story forever…..I love them….I love the bond they share with radhika…..trust me, I love everything about this story….
    man, this is so addictive….

    and meen, you know Italian? ya google translator zindabad!

    love you so much……..

    can I please have a double update next time….please…..
    and since, now you have started posting this regularly, rehnuma kidhar hai???
    and since, we are humans and our demands don’t end….please post rehnuma and be active in the comments section please….

    god, I feel like I have blabbered so much….sorry!!! I am such a chatterbox, you know…
    update soon…..love you 🙂
    stay blessed always dear 🙂

    • Meen

      |Author

      Yipeeeee…..I’m soooooo happy…..I’m doing a happy dance….u liked it?….really?….yoooohoooo…..& of course I can’t imagine this ff without Neil & kabir….& especially Neil…..u know he is my fav…..& I tell u at d end of this ff….he is gonna rule over everyone’s heart….awww u know what….if I keep typing…I ll blabber everything out ….that must be kept a secret…..hehe…rehnuma… Well ….just another update of MMK….thn I’ll update rehnuma……muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuha

  9. Rasha

    It’s really good dear.arjun characterisation is outstanding.really waiting for next update. And please translate that other language part.God bless you dear. And longupdate next time. Ok

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii rasha….thanks for ur amazing comment ……well I was planning to keep that a secret that is to be revealed later….but for u I’ll translate d first phrase Arjun said to jai….he said….” She is not a whore….u blood sucker….” & for rest please be a little patient……..I’ll try & update ASAP…..stay blessed

  10. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Tesoro mio… Amavo esso!!! Meen…I dint find a btr way to convey what I felt…gosh..girl….am speechless…guess what..I read many times..Arjun entry n his way of smashing Jai..👏👏😍😍 that knife part was superb.. when he slits Jai throat n he smirks ..hahah…U sure.! Girl. That was awesome…!! And Ardhika part…oh god…😍😘😍😘😘 am so into this story…Arjun with a girl…hehehehh…this Meen did it!! Am not angry…see…😀 I caught the note…woohoo…mia regina..!! 😍No Jess….don’t woot for a mafia king…hahah…you brilliantly brought it..how Rads fell for him…oh my…the way she held him in fear n he asking thro eyes…wow..!! My fav1 part meen..!! Neil.. kabir…nice part…so Neil gonna kill….ohk….

    Meen….bear hugs…thanks. for posting soon n dedicating yaar…that too this lovely chap…Twist wala chap….Jai’s Dialogue to Arjun…!! Gosh..I went off!!! Arjun assuring her without a word is superb…My fav…bear my lengthy one.. cudnt help…you did it girl..!! Love u loads…Excellent talent u have…pls post soon…!! Sono attesa…I so love this pasta lang…kept imaging Arjun spelling those..!! TC..stay happy

    • Meen

      |Author

      Jess…….do u want me dead due to a heart attack?…… Coz ur comment today is surely gonna do that……my poor heart!!!!!…..it hopping like a frog…..not fair…….La mia bella sorella………& what u r wooing for a MAFIA KING……not fair……think abt my jiju…….I’m sure he’ll b handsome thn Arjun……wink…wink……muuuuuuuuha….. A tight hug

  11. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Meen…beyond perfect….no I have not read such a perfect POV before….this was so touching…emotional…he saved her and then insulted her….loved Neil and Kabir and glad Jai is dead ….and please explain me the meaning of the two phrases in other language ….and post soon…love u sweet hrt keep rocking 🙂

    • Meen

      |Author

      Yipeeeee ……aaaaha aaaha aaaaha…ooooho ohoooo…ohooooo…can u see me dancing right now?……..these amazing words that too from u…..gosh …..beyond perfect!!!!…… What should I do????……should I frame it & hang on d wall……gauriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii……..thank u soooooo much…..it means a lottttttttttttttttttttt…..loveeeeeeeeeeeee u

      • Meen

        |Author

        Ooops sorry……actually I was planning to reveal it after few updates…..but how could I let u down…..so in first phrase to jai he said…..”she is not a whore ….u bloodsucker”….& will let u know abt d other two in upcoming updates…….I Hv planned a scene to reveal it……..

      • Meen

        |Author

        Aaah…..I can’t do this….u know I’m dying to tell u…..hell with d planned scene…..well in 2 phrase to jai he said “she is my queen…..” & when he hugged radhika he said ” u r mine & only mine”……ooooooph…..now I feel bttr…..otherwise d bomb ticking in me would Hv blown…..u know what I could keep anything with myself…..my stomach aches

  12. ana

    Wow Di….it WS fabulous …really kamal ka epi….enjoyed it fully…means the way u describe everythingeverything it was just amazing… Yr a the way arjun entered in the scene initially WS zordar …I really loved him when he consoled radz BT after that he really acted as a jerk ..hate him 4 that..BT loved the punishment given to jay..
    Overall a hit episode having everything in it….
    Plzz upload next soon Di..excitedly waiting 4 it
    Love u. Bye

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hey Ana…….thanks dear for ur amazing comment…. Thanks a lot…….I’ll try to update ASAP. …….muuuuuha…..stay blessed

  13. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Meen it is so intriguing n interesting one. I found the meaning of those… Google helped me… First one when arjun said to jai is “She is my queen” wow I really felt that line n next when he hugs her n whispers “You are mine and only mine”… Correct na… Gosh dear when I read it I got goosebumps n I felt chillness n my spine seriously… It s beautiful

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hey sathya……yup u r correct…..that’s what those Italian phrases means…….Google zindabad…..even I got it from there…. Hehehe…..thanks for ur comment Darling sis….muuuha

  14. KK(Krishna)

    it was very one once again…poor radhika…and arjun sure wanted to punch him hard…waiting on next to see how neil and kabil will react…waiting on next one…thanks and lots of love…

  15. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    meen, this is amazing chapter… arjun’s punishment to jai, i liked that part a lot. But arjun, what he is doing. he said to jai that rads is his queen, and next time he is with other women. why he is doing this?? i liked ur way of writing a lot meen, waiting for next chapter….

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii jewel……& a big thanks for ur complement dear…..it means a lot…….muuuuuuuuha…….yup I know Arjun is being a jerk…..but I can assure u there is a lot more to come…….stay blessed sisi

  16. Haya

    I heard about your ff from my sis.i read all the chaps in one go.after reading it I don’t want to remain as a silent reader…. Couldn’t stop myself from commenting….it’s really awesome…
    Your way of writing is really nice. I believe you will reveal the dialogues in unknown language.want to know what he said.
    Waiting for next update….

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hey haya…..a big wala thanks to ur sis….for recommending u this ff……& a big big wala thanks for reading & commenting dear……yup u got it right….I will surely reveal those Italian phrases but after few updates……thanks for ur support…means a lot….stay blessed…..muuuuha

  17. sne

    wow !nice epi meenu and the way arjun help radhika its really super and Sathiya Akka sona language I like it and I am waiting for next epi so eagly.

  18. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uggh I feel like killing Arjun……………ardhika moments were awesome…………u explained every lil detail…………u know what I was thinking f the song “sanam re” while reading it……………

    • Aasthu

      |Registered Member

      wow just now only I understood what Arjun was saying………..but y is he being a jerk??? when’ll u make Arjun fall for Radhika??? or is he already???

      • Aasthu

        |Registered Member

        Meen chechiiiiii y is this Arjun being a jerk??? Is it bcoz though he didn’t want to he fell in love with Rads?????? Who was it that came to her room at night and caressed her face lovingly??? Arjun???? Chechi will you give Arjun’s POV in the next???? When’ll we get to see some ardhika moments???????

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii rashmi…..thanks a lot for ur amazing words dear….actually I can’t update in coming 3-4 days…..I’m stuck up with few modules…… But I’ll try my best to update ASAP…..& thanks for ur amazing compliment……. But I’m that good to write a novel…..I’m just a budding story teller…..I’m not that good yet….but I assure u I’ll do it in future.. Stay blessed….. Muuuha

  19. Roma

    |Registered Member

    Omggggg meen my lovely sweeeeeetheart darling. …this was amazingly awesoooooome. ..I never heard or read this unique, marvellous, outstanding update…..the episode was jaw dropping n thrilling to the coreeeee…wowwww my sweeeeeetheart u r tremendously skillful of writing this effective…my hands r shivering n legs trembling reading this remarkable story….u nailed it my honeyyy to the very perfection. ….rads so helpless in front of jai….n arjun how mercilessly punished him….took very gentle care of rads n in morning shattered her heart with his sneering words…uffff…n neil now what is he upto. ..can’t wait for the next episode now….it was really very heart wrenching n painful emotional yet outstanding…u penned down so marvellously….my head bows down for your splendid, stupendous thinking n writing skills. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling meen♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ 🙂 ;* 😉 😀

    • Meen

      |Author

      Omg Roma……what a comment dear……I’m literally doing a happy dance… Muuuuuha…..m to 7 aasman p hu…….hehehe…. Muuuuuha……thank u so much. Love uuuuuuuuuu

    • Meen

      |Author

      Sorry to keep uu waiting arnav…..actually I’m busy with my papers….. Well d next one will b updated by tonight or tomorrow

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