MY MAFIA KING- AN UNTOLD STORY OF UNDYING LOVE…..#3….(few shots)

Hey fellas……how r u all…..well a big wali bear hug to u all for giving such an amazing response…..thnk u so much…& I’m sorry guyz I’m not able to comment on ur ff frequently…..specially Myra,sathya,gauri,Astha,brin,sv,brin,Jess,rossy…..but will do it soon……& a very happy wala bdy to my dear rossy…may God bless u…muuuuuuuuha….love u….this one I dedicate to my cute rossy,myru…,Astha,kk,gauri,sv,brin & Roma…….love u guyz……..plz ignore my typos & grammatical errors…

Njoy d ride guyzzzzz

RADHIKA’S POV

I wiped off few tears rolling down my cheeks & continued… ” tell me Neil….how could I not think bad abt him….when he is d one who made my life living hell….it feels as if im living d worst dream of my life…..I can never forgive him….I hate him with everything I Hv….I hate him….” Hearing this Neil let out a sigh & said….” OK…leave all this….tell me did u eat something? ” I shook my head like a child …..Neil raised his eyebrow & said…” Thts not fair….why r u taking all this out on ur food….come-on….”….I tried to resist him …but he took me inside & held plate in front of me….I shook my head again & said…” No” Neil thn smirked a little & said ” fine…..don’t eat….I Hv other ways to make u eat…”….hearing this I raised my eyebrow at him… suddenly he started coming close to me…. & from close I mean close type of close….keeping his hands on my either side…all this while a smirk was glued on his face..thn suddenly he started tickling me…..oh God…no…no….no….how did he know….aaaah…..he continued his torture….& said….”aww…..how sure I was that u will be ticklish…..” Saying this he started chuckling when I said……”

Ow….ow….nah….Neil…n..no…please….please…” I was hopping from one place to another running away from him….he was chasing me…..when suddenly he caught me & said…..” Now tell me …will u eat or not?” I gave up & quickly nodded….suddenly a sound made us apart….when we turned around we saw Arjun standing at d door…..fear engulfed me & I quickly stood behind Neil ….holding his shirt in a tight grip……when I looked at Arjun …his dark eyes were piercing mine….for a moment I found his gaze shifting to my hand griping Neil’s shirt…….I quickly averted my gaze & started looking at my heels….biting my lips nervously……..few moments passed no one spoke anything……it took all of my courage to look at him again….but when I did…..I found he was standing at d same place burning hole in me with his piercing gaze…….thn I turned to Neil …who for some unknown reason was smirking at Arjun……thn Arjun averted his gaze to Neil & said…” We need to discuss few matters…..” Neil gave him a knowing smile & said…” Sure….in a minute….”…..I swear…..for a moment I thought Arjun rolled his eyes…..I’m not lying…..seriously….. But in a blink of my eyes his expressions changed & he turned around with a scowl on his face……were they having a silent conversation….?…..I was thinking all this when Neil turned around & said…” Eat ur dinner….OK?” I just nodded in rply…..when he left room with Arjun …I quickly went towards door & locked it out……..thn I went towards d food plate & Sat down to Hv dinner…..but as soon as I picked up a bite to eat…..images of man who was shot…..lying on d floor…..with blood all around….started moving in my head…..i stood up & moved towards d mirror….I stood it front of it looking at myself…at first I couldn’t recognize my self……thn slowly I traces d outline of my image in d mirror & said….” Everything will be alright……

U know that….don’t u?”…..saying this I started unpinning my dupatta from my head…..thn I slowly set my hairs free…..thn I moved my hand down & took off my nose pin……followed by necklace, ring,earing,bangles,anklet…..while removing each piece of jewelry ….I started remincing d thoughts I had while wearing thm….how happy I was …..in anticipation of my married life…..a life full of love & care…..a life with saral…….how happy I was to think of a life where I would Hv someone who would love me……who would be mine…..only mine….who would Hv a heart to win mine…..who would claim my soul with love & affection…..& where Hv I ended up…..thinking all this I laughed sardonically ……& went towards d bed …laid down & started thinking abt what kabir told…..” How even is tht possible at first place……

Neil & Arjun….they r like two diff people from 2 diff world……..how could Neil live with a monster like him….I know even Neil is involved in this MAFIA or whatever it is….but still he is not a heartless monster…..on d other hand…..Arjun is surely a heartless beast…..he could kill anyone without thinking abt d person or his family…how could anyone be this inhuman?”…..my thoughts wondered from one event to another tht occurred tht day…….when sleep started taking over….& I wished tht d next morning when I wake up….this all turns out to be a dream….a terrifying dream…..& like this I drifted to d world full of dreams……

Tht night I felt a different sensation…I felt a feathery touch over my cheek…..my lips…..my nose……my hair……it left a tingling sensation all over my body…it felt as if someone caressing my body…….someone protecting me ….feeling of comforting warmth engulfed me……I felt melting at d very touch……. What is this feeling…I don’t know……but whatever it is I don’t want to let it go……it gives me a feeling of being safe……& thn I felt myself drowning close to d warmth….this feeling …..I don’t want to lose it ever….it gives me peace……I don’t know what happening….but mere with d touch of this warmth…..butterflies started doing happy dance in d pit of my stomach……I felt this sudden urge to feel this warmth more….to touch this warmth….but when I tried to touch it….to feel it…..it was gone…..I felt lonely……it left me alone…..my heart….my soul….my body kept longing for it…….what ever this warmth …this touch is doing to me….its not good….I know its not….mere a simple touch of it wants to make me feel it again & again…..sudden loss of it makes my body & heart ache for it……….next morning when I woke up…….I found myself laying on d same bed…..when suddenly i felt my hand started touching my cheeks,thn my nose, my hairs…& finally lips…where ever I felt tht tingling touch….i quickly pulled back my hand……wht kind of dream was this……..

I Hv NVR had this kind of dream…..it…it felt so real…..tht feeling….tht warmth….aaaah….what d hell am I thinking….it was just a dream…..a weird dream….I got up & took my shower……each passing second in this place makes me feel that I’m trapped in this hell my life…..when suddenly I heard a knock at d door……when I went to open it…..the was no one outside….who it could be…..was…was it jai…..

suddenly someone jumped in front of me ……I jerked back …closing my eyes as a response & started screaming …..after a sec or 2 someone started laughing ….when I slowly opened my eyes….I found kabir….he was laughing Iike a maniac….I raised my eyebrow at him & folded my hands over my chest….giving him a what-d-hell look ….whn he composed himself & said….”sorry” thn again he started laughing holding his tummy……saying “oh my god….u must Hv seen ur face…” I slapped him over his forearm & said…” Why r u here….this early morning?…” He arranged his shirt & passed his fingers through his hair & thn muttered bowing down a little ” of course….to escort u for breakfast my princes……..may I?” I gave him a sweet smile & nodded….on d way down to d kitchen…I observed d place …it seemed like a palace…. Or even bigger & beautiful thn tht…..it could be called as a dream palace…it’s wow…simply wow…..& tht stupid monster had kept me in tht room all day long ….. Thinking abt him….a scowl made its way on my face……I Hv no words to describe my hatred towards him….

but when I went down my mouth fell open in awe…..this place was big….real big…..wow…I never knew one can make this much money by killing someone……after all this was all blood money……but this place was really beautiful ….or I must say beautiful would be understatement……kabir seemed to caught my reaction…..he gave me a i-know kind of smile & thn he gave me a short tour of d place …..after tht he took me to d dinning room ….adjacent to d kitchen…….as soon as I entered in…..I stood frozen at my place…..I was shocked to see d scene in front of me…..my eyes widened in shock & disgust…….he really is a cheap,disgusting monster…….thr he was sitting at d chair of large brkfst table…..with a girl sitting on his lap….nope….sorry….not sitting…..she was literally clinging to him like a monkey….a stupid monkey….. & he being ….a bastard was touching him everywhere like…like….uuuuuh…..yuck…..when I met his dark eyes……there were fixed on me…….he was looking straight in to my eyes……how could he….I mean he was with a girl….being in such an intimate position….& here he was giving me those death glares…..uuuuuuh……

God he was a shameless monster….there were a lot of people around d table..& I swear they were all very scary…..everyone of thm were looking at me like I’m thr food…..I can’t stay here…..between all these people…kabir seeing my reaction took me by my hand towards d other corner of d table where Neil was sitting…..I took a seat between thm both…..I Hv been sitting here for almost 10 mins…..all this while I was looking down….whenever I looked at him….I found him touching her like…like….whatever….& what kind of girl is she…..she was enjoying all this……anyways what I Hv to do with all this….he can do whatever he wanted….why am I thinking all this… But what really bothered me was his stare…..his cold piercing eyes as if again challenging me to look down…..I quickly averted my gaze….whn Neil looked at me from top to bottom & said….”morning……what will u Hv?” I looked at d table …there were a lot of things…as soon as I saw pancakes & scrambled egg….my eyes gleamed with happiness ….

Neil saw my reaction & quickly placed thm on my plate chuckling & said….”u really r like a kiddo radhika…..” Hearing this a scowl appeared on my face…..whn kabir said….” Yeah…..she really is a kiddo…..u remember ur face this morning princess.?…” Saying this he started laughing again……hearing this I felt little offended…..anger started boiling inside me & i threw a glass of juice over him…& said….” I’m not a kid”……his mouth hung open……i heard fits of laughter all around d table…..but whn he turned towards me all drenched & with a puppy face….I started chuckling…. Whn he said…” U r not a kid…..u r an angry kid……god….look wht u did…..it’s my lucky shirt….aah” ….saying this he threw his hand on d table in anger….whn Neil chuckled & said to kabir…” Suits u”….but I felt I overreacted in anger…..uuuh….whn will I learn to control my anger…. Kabir was being so nice to me & what I did….I turned towards him & said…” I’m sorry…..

I shouldn’t Hv done tht….I..I..sorry”…..I was feeling bad ….a tear rolled down my eyes when kabir turned to me …& held my chin up saying…” Of course u r an angry kid…..but still u r my princess….my cute princess” hearing this I smiled a little when he continued…..”but this…..this really was my fav shirt….damn u girl” Saying this he chuckled a little & kissed me on my cheek…..this sudden action made me blush a little…..I quickly looked down…….but whn I looked around d table everyone else was gone….except kabir ,Neil & Arjun along with tht girl……& again I saw Neil smirking looking at Arjun….while Arjun was staring at me …while his fingers were curled in to a fist…..his knuckles turned a shade whiter….I mean seriously again….

what is with all this staring….it seems a lion is looking at its prey hungrily….what Hv I done to him….tht he despise me so much….I flinched a little under his cold gaze…. Thr was only one thing tht was running in my mind…..run…..of course I Hv to run if I don’t want to get killed by him….so believe me I did d same….I quickly got up & ran away like deer running for its life….half d way to my room……I started walking slowly….when I thought I’m quite away from him….when suddenly from no where a pair of strong hand pulled me inside a dark room by my waist…..it was all dark….whoever it was ….I wasn’t able to see his face…panick struck me…..when his hand started moving improperly around my waist…I started screaming…..& pushed him with whatever force I hv…….but he was strong…..& thn he muttered ” thr u r baby…. Hvnt i told u …..u can’t run away from me….uuuuuuh….how f**king desperate I was to devour u….I must say u know how to wrap men around ur finger….in a day u Hv got kbir & Neil running behind u….not bad.” D moment those words escaped his mouth i knew who it was…..jai…….tears started rolling down….

i moved my body to wriggle out of his hold……when he moved his face a little ….thn he started touching my lower lip……his every touch on my body was disgusting me…..when suddenly I found pen …..a little bit of light from d corridor helped me to find it at d end of d table……I tried to moved a little towards left but his arms didn’t let me move….somehow I grabbed it & quickly plunged it inside his left arm….this caught him off guard for a moment….as a reaction he quickly moved his left arm away….I took this opportunity…. & ran towards door ….when he caught me by my hair & tried to pull me back….I winced in pain….i turned around & kneed him where sun don’t shine….he quickly got on d floor & I started running …..after few steps….someone held my hand from back…..now if he caught me he won’t leave me….I knew this……tears again started falling…..when he turned me around…..I tried my best to run out of his grip….when he held me by my waist….with no option left I started hitting his chest & said….” Leave me….please …leave me….” ….when I looked up…..I froze at d moment ….it was Arjun…..seeing him I started crying…..for a sec I felt relief…..but when realisation struck I started pulling out my wrist from his grip……he was no bttr thn jai…..he himself was a heartless monster…..his gaze shifted to my arms….where their was scratch…..his eyes quickly found mine & he looked confused for a moment….I quickly wiggled out of his hold & ran towards my room….as soon as I got thr I looked it from inside…..thn I sat against d door…..held my knees close to d chest & started crying… I was finding it hard to breathe…….I know he will come back….he will surely be back &….aftr few sec thr was a knock at my door….I at an instant moved away from d door & hid myself beside d bed…..after few knocks when I didnt answered…..I heard a voice…” Radhika…..r u alright?” Neil….I ran towards d door & hugged him tight…sobbing….he looked at me & said….”what’s wrong???” I kept sobbing….when he raised my chin & asked…” Why r u crying” I didn’t say anything ….I knew if I told him anything he would go to Arjun…..& thn…no…no….I shook my head ……thn he took me in & gave me a glass of water….” Drink …u will feel bttr…”

After 2-3 sips he said ” now tell me” I again shook my head……he let out a irritated sigh & said….” Radhika if u don’t tell me….how would I know ….what happened” I didn’t say anything…..he raised his hand in surrender & said…”OK…..fine…..don’t tell me ….but atleast stop crying..otherwise….” Saying this he smirked a little & started tickling me……due to d torture I burst out laughing…… When he said….”much bttr……I don’t want to c ur crying face before I leave” hearing this my eyes widened & asked “leave?” …..he quickly replied…..”yup…..work calls…..I will be leaving today along with kbir & others…….” ….”kabir….will also be going? “….he nodded his head & said….” Yup…..he wanted to meet u but he have make some arrangements…..

So.” …..”whn will u come back?”….he shrugged & said ” don’t know….may be a day or 2 …..depends on how other party settles with arjun’s terms & condtns”……saying this he got up to leave……at d door he turned around & said…..”stay safe radhika…..”…..after he left I locked myself down….in d room…..for whole day……around 11 at night…..I heard a knock…….I didn’t replied…… Thn another knock…..thn I asked ” whoz thr?” My voice cracked a little…….”food” came d rply…..”no I don’t want anything….” I said….aftr few sec rply came….” I’m keeping it here…u cn hv it latr if u want….” Aftr few sec I heard footsteps moving away from d room…..I hvnt eaten anything since morning…….so aftr few minutes…. I slowly opened d door…..but as soon as I did…..someone threw me back…….I stumbled a little & fell on d ground with a thud……when I looked at d person my breath hitched…..thr I saw jai standing at d door smiling evilly….he got in & locked d door…..& said….”gotcha……baby……missed me?…..aww”…..

I started crawling back….& called out for help……..I screamed on d top of my voice when he said….”u can scream out as loud as u want…….but no one’s coming baby…….tonight……u r mine to play……” Saying this he started moving towards me…..I started sobbing & pleaded him to leave me……..but he didn’t listen……in few strides he came to me & yanked me by pulling my hairs….a loud yelp escaped my lips……he pulled me closer & started licking my cheeks…..I pushed him with all force I had & ran towards door…..he quickly caught my hand…. He thn held my dupatta & threw it away & said…..” Come-on…..now don’t play hard-to-get……….just come to me……I’ll make u happy….” Saying this he started rubbing his body with mine……at this point tears were already rolling down my cheeks….thn he started rubbing my waist……unable to take anymore I slapped him hard…….now all angry he held my head by his hand & slammed it against d wall…..another loud yelp escaped my mouth……”enough…..

I Hv been acting nice with u….but u….u don’t understand….. Don’t u….b***c” saying this he again slammed my head against d wall..blood started flowing down my head…..but he didn’t stopped……he turned me around…..with that he tore my ghagara(skirt) such tht…..now it came up to half of my thighs…..to cover myself I quickly covered my thighs with my crossed hands…& started sobbing badly..seeing this laughed & said……” Now d fun begins…..” Heavy sobs escaped my lips…..he is gonna ruin me.. Blood oozed out of my lips…I again cried ” please…..somebody help…..please……help me” now he slapped me hard & said “don’t make it more difficult for u…..listen to me…..& after this I’ll leave u alive….” Panic struck me & I started taking backward steps….thn he held my hand & twisted it beside my back….another shriek escaped my mouth……

I again pleaded him between my sobs….” Leave…me……p…p..ple..ase ….let me….g…go” he again laughed evily & said….”of course I’ll let u go…..but first let me Hv some fun” saying this he again started licking my face & with his another hand….he scratched my arms…..I cried louder……pain was getting over me….& I was feeling exhausted…….when he bend down to kiss me…..he held my jaw tightly so tht I don’t move …….but thn I again kicked him….this time I missed a little….& kick landed on his lower abdomen…. He moved a little….in mean time ….I went towards door & unlocked it….when I was abt to open it…..he grabbed me by my neck & threw me over bed……thn he came over me ….& again tried to kiss me…..I grabbed d clock beside d table & hit it hard on d head…..he let me go for a sec….but when I got up…..he stood behind me & suddenly ripped my blouse apart….leaving my upper body naked….& thn I heard him laughing behind me…..I quickly crossed my arms over my body & stood against d wall beside d door….my back facing him….my sobbing increased…… When I heard him….” Now I will get every ounce of u…..& make u my personal whore….” Saying this he lunged towards me…..& again started pressing his body against mine from back…..I cried for help….for God….for anyone……please save me…please

Silent readers thanks a lot for ur support….I really appreciate it

62 comments

  1. arti viswanathan

    Excellent meen. I liked it… But don’t u think that someone should help Radhika from this bl…dy jai. I think arjun will come and help her..

  2. KK(Krishna)

    poor radhika…overall it was good. when you will post your another FF “Rehnuma” ..i am so waiting on that one…please please post that one soon…its a request.

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii krishna………I know u r waiting for rehnuma……& I’m sorry for making u wait…..but I want to update it after another update of MY MAFIA KING…. But I can promise u whenever I do….it would be worth waiting…….. & thanks a tonn for encouraging….. Love u

  3. Brin

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    Awesome episode, I hope Arjun saves her? Eagerly waiting for the next update, and also update Rehnuma. 🙂

  4. farjana

    Hi meen, excellent episode.. i dont y i had tears in my eyes when im reading abt jai torturing radhika.. no girl sud go thru this torture , pain n suffering.. u have written well meen.. pls update soon..

    • Meen

      |Author

      OMG…..there comes d wonderful comment….I’m sorry to make u cry……but it’s a proud moment that my words can convey d emotions I wanted…..thanks a tonn….stay blessed

  5. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    📣📣📣📣AARrrrjuuuuunnnnn…….!!!!!! Come fastt…..🔫🔫🔫shoot him down…!!!

    Meen….a cliffhanger….!! Kyun!!.neil.,kabir.. koi bi aa ja…That jai…argh…monster…!! I felt tight throat.reading that part.. you write lively…gosh…some one help her!!

    Neil….kabir n Rads part was so cute…wow…2 ppl entirely diff…and Arjun…with a girl..🙈🙈on dining table… womanizer..hai kya…like jai said…!! Am like will this Meen turn him blackest of all…lol…Mafia itself black..am going deep… jai should be punished Meen….don’t leave him.. Best assassin…come down man..!! Am.waiting yaar…pls post soon….like real soon…Radz ke vaaste jaldi update karo…love u loads….TC…

    • Meen

      |Author

      Let me tell u something Jess…..if u call out Arjun like thisthis …he will leave radhika & will follow u all ur life………& that my dear sissy won’t b fair with my jiju…..(future)……& yup a box full of choc for u for such a lovely comment

  6. Rasha

    Really great episode. Waiting for next one eagerly. Please update soon dear.awesome writing.feeling sad for radHika.don’t be late. God bless you dear

  7. Rossy

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    Thank u very much meena….awww but u stopped at a wrong time…very bad…naughty girl…lol😉😉 jai…jai. .yeh toh pura duryodhan ban Gaya hai…uffff….someone plz kill him or let me do that favour…aargh man…what Arjun is doing…taking girls on lap and holding waist…idiot go soon n save her….in other words rads why don’t u keep a knife or revolvers from Neil or kabir?? It help you time like this…update soon meena…both this and that…otherwise I’ll come in ur dream n scare u…😉😉😉

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hey Rose……well I can’t take risk of u getting ur hands dirty by killing jai…..coz I know u won’t let him live for a sec……so I’ll call ur hero to do that….hehehe……how Hv u been rose?…..& tell me how was ur bdy?????…….thank a lot for ur comment……. & a box full of kisses,hugs & choc for u….as ur bdy gift…..muuuuuha….love u

  8. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    mafia king come and save rads plzzzz….. and kill that jai….. now kabir and neil is also not there… i wish they come back and kill that jai…. and arjun, i don’t like him, he is sitting with a girl in his lap infront of rads, i feel like go and slap him…. raneil bond and rabir bond are superb…. bt when i am thinking about this story jai’s torturing is coming to my mind, plz someone come and save her, meen i can’t wait plz plz post soon….

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii jewel…..don’t worry nothing will happen to radhika……& u r welcome if u want to slap Arjun……may be that could tighten few screw of his brain……hehehe….thanks for ur amazing words sis…..love u

  9. Nayan

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    What a thrilling episode … after reading this the first thought came to my mind was I’m going to kill jai for his behavior … plzzzzzzzz arjun save radhika … poor radhika she is suffering a lot … kabir neil and radhika’s scene was really good … kabir’s reaction after radhika ruin his favorite shirt was really funny … I think arjun likes radhika … radhika stupid girl if she told about jai when neil asked about the matter neil would be stay with her … but I’m sure our mafia king will save radhika … update soon dear … stay blessed … 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii nayan…..thanks for ur precious comment….. I’m so happy that u express ur thaughts like this……thanks again….as I Hv already told u….ur words reaches SRT to my heart…….& I’m sorry that I didn’t wrote long reply….but I truly value ur comment….love u

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hey anushka……thank dear for ur comment…..I Hv already updated d next one……..would like to know ur views…..stay blessed

  10. amita

    superb meen i like ur both ff ‘REHNUMA’ AND ‘MAFIA LOVELY. ……..Plz update rehnuma too much waiting yr….

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii amita…..I’m glad u loved both of my ff……a big thank u for that……I hope upcoming episodes just add it up to ur hopes…..muuuha

  11. Sangee

    |Registered Member

    omg what is dis mean…iam sure arjun gonna kill that jai …poor rads tears welled up in my eyes while reading jais torture to rads…pls this time next post soon i cant wait to see arjun killing jai:) super work…keep going honey 🙂

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiiii sangeee…..I’m glad u liked it…..& of course jai will pay for his deeds….he Hv to…….but thanks a lot for ur support….stay blessed

  12. Myra

    |Registered Member

    Okay….okay…..what just happened???!!!!!!
    Why the hell neil and kabir had to both go leaving her alone….i swear i can kill jai with my bare hands…

    And arjun….dude, you gotta do something atleast…come on man!

    And the classic cliff hanger…ahh..
    Update soon….
    Rehnuma kidhar hai yaar????!!!!!
    I desperately waiting, i told that to you…right?

    And sorry, for the late comment, was a little busy..
    Love you…

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiiii Myra…….well I will update rehnuma after another update of MY MAFIA KING….. I’m sorry for d delay sisi…..but I just wanted to give another update of MMK before rehnuma……but don’t worry I will make it worth waiting…..with all my love…..muuuiha …..stay blessed……..& yes tell me do u Hv a bf?…..sorry…..just curious to know

  13. Sangee

    |Registered Member

    I forgot to say I think that rads dream Is not a dream its arjun who was carseing her …did anyone else think so 😅

  14. heena

    the story stopped half way yar
    pls pls update soon frnd
    pls pls pla pretty pls pls pls
    and todays update is very awesome

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hey heena……don’t say please……u just Hv to say & I’ll do it…..well I Hv already updated d next one……stay blessed

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiii sne…..thanks for commenting….. & don’t feel bad…..till radhika Hv his KING nothing will happen to her…..stay blessed

  15. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    Feeling sorry for Rads………..pz kill that Jai or make him paralysed………why didn’t he go???? Who was in her room at night???????? It wouldn’t be Jai….bcoz he doesn’t love her…..he just lusts her………was it Arjun??????? I think it was…………….Meen chechiiiii plzz do something to that guy…………….right now I’m having fun with my sis………..hehe poor girl she is in hostel and I have made a deal with her…..if she wants chocolates she must bring me biriyani……Kozhikode biriyani……………….its very tasty…………do reply……….love u…………..tc……….

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiiii Astha……my cutie pie……I must say thts a deal u got thr with ur sis……u know what even I can do anything for panipuri……..& my sister they so cute devils…..what to say……hehehe……thanks for ur comment Darling…. Muuuha

  16. Starz

    |Registered Member

    Hello meen….good girl…loved it cliff hanger….. stopped at a crucial point….now I am crying… please post next one quickly…I have become addicted to this…love you dear and take care…if u have time do read my os a slightly insane friendship…

    • Meen

      |Author

      Don’t u dare to cry……& where r ur updates dear…..& I’m waiting to read something…. Anything from u…..plz…..consider my request…… & a big wala thanks for ur precious comment….muuuuha

  17. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Meen… I don’t know what to say… It’s very painful episode yar.. Generally I can’t see this scenes even in movie n while reading this I could not even imagine rads like this… My heart is pondering for someone to come n save her…. Very painful one for me…. 😞😞😞😞

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiiii sathya…..thanks a lot for ur support dear…..I know how it feels reading this type of scenes……even I want to strangle people who do these kind of cheap things….useless human being they r……take care dear

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hiiii sathya…..thanks a lot for ur support dear…..I know how it feels reading this type of scenes……even I want to strangle people who do these kind of cheap things….useless human being they r……take care dear…..stay blessed….muuuha

  18. Shruti

    I want arjun to reach there like as if he has forgotten something and came to pick it and hears radz voice and saves her,something like that kinda of.very nice update,meen.pls post the next as sson as possible.

  19. Shree

    |Registered Member

    One scary update this was.. girl you gave me chills.. poor Radhika.. Arjun aaahhh..

    Why girl why? Why cliffhanger?! Aaaahhhh

    Update soon please.. love you 😍😘

    • Meen

      |Author

      Hey shree…..thanks a lot for ur amazing words ……..I’m glad u liked it dear……thanks a lot….I Hv already updated d next one…..muuuha

  20. Roma

    |Registered Member

    Meen …my darling sissyyyy. …wowwww….I’m speechless. …I’m out of words here….it was really superbbbb n marvellously narrated episode. …your every explanation drew the scene in front of me….the lovely bond between rads n neil….so cute…rads fears n hatred for arjun…her dream of secure warmth…..n the palace description was very brilliantly narrated…the dining table scene was so funnyyyy. …but jai…omg get is real monster n filthy dirty cruel beast….rads in so much trouble. ..I hope arjun come n save her in time….u left it at cliffhanger. ..I can’t wait for the next episode. ..so curious to know what will happen next. …how will rads escape or will she find arjun as her savior ….keep it up honeyyy. ..so sorry for late comment. …love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my darling ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ 😉

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