Maahiya – Ek Rishta Aisa Bhi (Part 5)

Thnx guys for all the comments I got so far..As it is the summer holidays, I’m posting really quick. I might not get a chance to submit some of the days as I’m busy with family. So here is the next update. Enjoy. 😘
Recap: The girls need to leave the village and Teju hints that she wants the boys to get married but they don’t get it.

Kunal: Maa! What is it that u want then?
Teju: Think about it. It’s what every mother desires from her son
The boys look at one another confused
Rishi: Mom! Plz don’t say u r talking about a Bahu
Teju: That’s exactly what I’m talking about! Especially with u. U r the oldest.
A LOUD noise comes from downstairs and Uttara comes in shaking
Uttara: Mumma! Papa is calling u to come and he seems really angry.
Suraj: What does he want now? 😠
Teju: Uttara. U go down. I’m coming

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The girls are starting to pack their things
Tanuja: Massi and Imlu have gone out to the bazaar. In the meantime, we can just have a little rest
Chakor is spinning her basketball on her finger
Swara: Gudiya! Pass the ball! Let’s play catch.
Meghna: No pass it to me
Naina: Di. Pass it here
Thapki: If u guys want to play catch, go somewhere else
Chakor: OK. We’ll go upstairs
The 4 girls go upstairs
Ragini: I’m absolutely knackered. I’ll go make tea 4 everyone

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In the Rajvanshi Haveli, an angry man is seen kicking chairs and shouting at a servant.
Angry man: What r u looking at? U bl**** goose!
Ranjana: Don’t shout at him! Go shout at the person who is the cause of all this. Tejaswini ji . Where is she?
Teju: I’m right here Ranjana. Tell me what happened. What have I done now?
Angry man: What have u done?! U don’t know what u’ve done!
Teju shakes her head and the man starts cackling evilly
Angry man: Are Wah! Madam doesn’t know what she has done….She has no idea
The man starts laughing again which made Suraj angry
Suraj: Oh! Kamal Narayan
The man sops laughing and looks at suraj. He is revealed to be KN
Suraj: Is there a circus going on here that u r laughing ur head off?!
Rishi: Suraj! Calm down!
Suraj: What Calm down Bhai?! Just cuz he is ur father and the head of this Havel, it doesn’t mean he can always have his way.
KN pulls Teju and points at the boys
KN: This is what u have done Tejaswini! This is what u have done. U have given birth to some useless children who don’t even know how to respect their elders…This is what u have done!
KN laughs again

Precap: The 4 girls who were playing catch, r acting and talking very strangely and Kunal agrees to work 4 KN
Thnx guys, hope u enjoyed it and sorry if there is anything that confused u .Plz do comment.

35 comments

  1. Jiya09

    Jiya09

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    This was just amazing!! But one question , does here also Kamal narayan has two wife like udaan? Waiting to know what kunal has agree for. Update soon with a long one ( if u r ok with it πŸ˜‹)

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      Thnx Di. Nd No Ranjana isn’t KN’s wife here. She is his SIL and she is like sandhya from Swabhiman but not exactly like her. I’ll try and update a longer one next time. 😊

  2. Nemo

    Interesting update! Finally one the boys got what Teju meant. So KN is evil here? Can’t wait to find out what happens next.

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      Thnx Didu. Nd yah, KN is evil as he suits evil all the time. Nd I’ll try to update soon but as I said I’m a bit busy with family and some hospital appointments too. 😊

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        I’ll be at the hospital 2day overnight so I wont be commenting on udaan page or chupke chupke page. Will miss u. 😘

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        I have a medical condition since I was 2 years old. The doctors don’t know what it is, thus so many appointments. 😊

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        I am now thnx Didu. But I didn’t get a good sleep yesterday at the hospital. I had alot of wires attached to me and and this plaster thingy mujigy on my finger and it had a light on it- it was soo annoying. Ps it was soo cold I needed 2 blankets. 😠
        1 appointment over, loads more to go. The worst thing is that I need to go to a far hospital I cant go to the local one. 😠😠

      • Nemo

        Couldn’t they adjust you room’s AC? No wonder you couldn’t sleep. Travelling while unwell is exhausting. Take care of yourself !

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        There was no AC Didu. There was only a radiator and a window. We shut the window but it was still really cold. My dad got a good sleep though, I didn’t. I think I woke up at 5 in the morning thinking its 9 until my dad came in after praying. It was soo frustrating! I was mostly missing my annoying sister, my mum and u guys. Thnx Didu. I will surely take care of myself. No need to worry. 😊

  3. anu

    where is bihaan? I miss him any way its lovely and looking forward to next part wow KN intro was nice all the best update soon

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      I miss Bihaan too and thnx for the wishes. Don’t worry Moti buddhi and gajab B 4 Bihaan will be in the next part. I promise. Its just that I can only write upto 800 words and I’ve got so many characters so u will just have to bear with it. With the Jodi meeting I’ll mention which couple it is in the title. 😊

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      Thanku thanku thanku sooo much Anni Di. Iss baar jaldi main Thi isliye thoda short hain agli baar lamba zuroor karungi. AAP k baat main kabhi nehi ignore kar sakti. 😊 nd Maine Didu ko kehe diya hain k kyun main hospital jaa Thi hoon. AAP bhi Parle na.

  4. Inbisat

    Inbisat

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    It good but I want only thahaan ff and dear you add different pairs so it irritate me a lot to read sorry if any of my word heart you so sorry I just give you my point of view πŸ™…

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      Its ok i understand. I can write a thahaan ff if u want to. So it will be this story but thahaan POV. Just suggesting plz let me know if u like the idea or not. 😊

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        And I mentioned to someone else that when its the couples meeting, ill write it separately with each couples to show their points. 😊

    • |Registered Member

      Ok then ill start writing an ff on Thahaan very soon. Do u mind if I have just Chakor as Thapki’s sister and Suraj as Bihaan’s best friend? Thahaan will be the lead though. I just need someone to tease them and i love sukor alot. 😊 hope u don’t mind

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        I meant
        Can I fall 4 a goon like u?
        I’ve posted the character sketch now I’m just waiting for it to upload. Hope u like it 😊

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