M Still Waiting For u Both::: SWASAN OS by Kakali

Hello ev1.. here m with a tiny OS…it’s my 1st attempt to write an OS…
Hope u all like it….sorry for grammatical mistakes n spelling errors… so without wasting time let’s start d story..

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“Shona where r u baccha!! Come here,, ur mumma is waiting for u” says a 28-30 years lady..

” Mamma today i don’t want to go school,,, tomorrow is my birthday na,, so i’ll enjoy with u n papa..plzzz” says a 8 years old girl with innocent pleading eyes…

“No bacchaa,, tomorrow ur birthday na,, so why to miss today,, u r good girl na .. come u r getting late..” says d lady trying to understand her doll…

“No no nooo mumma,,, today i won’t go,, i want my mumma papa,,i’ll spend my whole day with u both…” says d girl keeping a cutee pout..

“Who is trying to force my princess when she has no mood to go school,,” says a man about 33-35 coming out from bathroom..

“Papa,, see na mumma is not letting me to spend time with u ..i dun wanna go school today” she jumps in her Papa’s lap..

“Haa!! My doll,, today no school.. u, me n ur mumma will enjoy,, what’s say Swara?” Says d man to lady who is glaring both father-daughter ..

“Sanskar!! Tum bhi na,, u have made ur doll soo stubborn,,” says Swara coming towards them..

(****Yeah guyzz both r our heavenly n EPIC couple SWASAN,, n d little girl is their life,, their symbol of love,, their PRINCESS, their Doll Rabia,,
both did arrange marriage n with time they fell in love with each other,,, after one year Rabia come to their life as a blessing of God,, who completed SWASAN,, who completed a family,,making them proud****)

“Yeeeiii!! Papa u r soo good” saying this she kisses her Papa’s cheek…

“N ur mumma is not good,,” Says Swara with a fake angry pout..

“Aww!! Mumma,, dont be angry u know na u r d besttt mumma in d whole universe
,,,” saying this she kisses Swara also..

“Awwww !!! n u r my bestttt DOLL”…she also kisses her cheek…

“Then what about me” says Sanskar to Swara pointing his cheeks…

“Hawww!! Papa have some same,, m still here.. n u r trying to romance with mumma,, soo bad” saying this she chuckles…

Swara playfully beats him “Shameless,,”..

“So tohh mai huuu,,(that’s i m) but only for u…” kisses her cheeks…

Swara turns into strawberry red…

Rabia hides her eyes with hands..

“Papa mumma,, u both carry on i m going to play”she runs to her room…

Swara glares her handsome husband angrily when Sanskar is starting her lovingly…

In no time he pulls her to him holding her delicate waist n she crushes on his hard tone chest “Soo can i?” gazing her luscious lips…

“Shameless fellow,,, don’t u know what to say in front of ur daughter,, what might be she thinking” turns her face ..

“Ohhhooo!!! So my senior princess is angry with me,,, but not for much time &&&& starts to tickle her…

Meantime Junior Princess also comes ” Papa what r doing? Waaa!!! Tickling Tickling game,, i will also play” she too joins her papa to tickle her mumma…

“Hahahah!!! Hahahaha!!! Hahahaha !!! Sanskar !!! Hahaha!!! Doll hahaha!!! God!! I can’t handle anymore..hahah!! Plzz stop hahaha!!

Sanskar n Doll(Rabia) is laughing like anything watching his/her life n mumma acting like maniac..bcz they stopped their tickling a decades agoo..though Swara is laughing..hahaha

“Mummma we r done,,,”(giggling)

Swara stops her laugh n this time trio brust out into laughter…

Swara adoring her family with teary eyes ” M blessed to get u Sanskar n Doll… u both r my life,,,”

Sanskar peaks her forehead” n u both r my jaan”…

“N u mumma n Papa both r my Oggy n Olly…” says Rabia …

Sanskar-Waise Doll anything special for today?

(*Now i’ll address Doll in her real name Rabia.)

Rabia-yooo!! Papa!! I have lot’s of things to do…

Swara-jaise ki ΒΏΒΏΒΏ

Rabia(trapping her finger at nose)- woohoo we will go to ice cream parlour,,then park,, then a tom n jerry movie,, then dinner at my fav Dhaba,, n at night in i’ll sleep in ur embrace… she peaks boths cheeks…

Sanskar-Soo we should get ready for ur plan? What’s say my doll?

Shona-Haa mumma papa chalooo,,, she drages them to car…

At ice cream parlour::

Trio is enjoying ice-cream..

Rabia-Papa i want 2 more…

Before Sanskar could answer Swara interrupts “Baas,, aur nehi milega,, u have already finished ur 3rd ice-cream…”

Rabia-Mumma plzz last one,, plzzz,,
(To Sanskar)- Papa bolo na,, mummy ko i just need one more pallezzz !!!(with puppy eyed)

Sanskar to Swara- Swara plzz na just one,, actually i also want that chocolate flavor wala..

Rabia-(clapping)- haaa!!! Me2 me2 want that chocolate flavor wala…

Swara-both father-daughter is same…smiles n nodes yes..

Rabia-yeeiii!! Mumma u r d best…(kiss her cheeks)

Swara notices Sanskar who is starting her with a naughty smile..

Meanwhile ice cream comes..
Waiter-here is ur order sir..

Rabia-Thnk u uncle..

Waiter-u r welcome beta..

Rabia is enjoying d ice cream forgoting about d surrounding..

Sanskar-Swara there is something in corner of ur lips…

Swara-(touching n checking her lips)- where??

But she didn’t take time to understand her Hubby’s intention n in no time Sanskar peaks her lips without anyone notice…

Swara widens her eyes,, covering her lips with palm n looks around whether someone saw them or not.. but phewww nothing happened like that…

Here Sanskar winks at her n gives a bright smile ….

Swara murmurs “Shameless”…n had a cute eyelock… ;P

Rabia- Mumma Papa m done now.. shall we go to park now?

SWASAN comes to sence – haa haa!! Chaloo..

After coming from park at home:::

“Doll we will watch Doraemon,, okk”

“Noo Papa Tom n jerry,,”

“Arrey doll it’s a new episode of Doraemon,,m sure u’ll love it”

“I want only Tom n Jerry movie,, i will watch that only”..

Both r fighting like kids..I know Rabia is a kid but this time Sanskar also becomes kid with her Dall..

Rabia-okk okkk!!! No arguments anymore we will watch both.. but 1st Tom n Jerry then Doraemon…is it okkkΒΏΒΏΒΏ

Sanskar makes faces n nods her head…

“Yoo yoooo go Pikachuuu!! U can do it,, use thunder ball,,yeei yeei,,, now use electric Shock… yooohooooo !!! I told u u can do that… (jumps in happiness n as a result all d popcorns fell down on floor)

Here Sanskar n Rabia is watching her without blinking n playing with d eye balls bcz they poped out from sockets…

Sanskar to Rania- Doll see ur mumma,, we were arguing about our fav ones… n She is enjoying alone Pokemon that too with popcorn….haww!!

Rabia-(shooking her head) Haa papa,, mumma is a big kiddo then u n meeeee also…

Sanskar-Yeahh,, doll… but i love this kiddo…

Rabia-Me toooo… Kiddo mumma…saying this both laughs…

At night 11:55…

Rabia(excitement has no boundary)-Toh Mumma Papa ready with my gifts…

SWASAN-not now,, u will get ur at evening…in d party..okkk

Rabia thinks something n nods okk !!!

Swara- Doll it’s 11;59… &&&& 12:00

“Happy birthday to u,, happy birthday to u,, happy birthday my dear Doll happy birthday to u…. ”

Rabia cuts cake n feed both of them n they also feed her…

After sometime:::

Rabia is sleeping peacefully at Sanskar’s embrace with a brightest smile ever…

Swara-Sanskar it’s heaven….m sooo happy today,, i don’t want anything from life.. me u n Doll…that’s enough for me….
I just thank God ji for blessing me with u n Doll…says with teary eyed n a bright smile…

Sanskar-u know what Swara we r getting old but Doll is teaching us to live life again…we r again enjoying our life(kiss Rabia’s forhead) ….& i would love to live everyday like today, a holiday, being thankful n spending time with u n Doll n looking hopefully to our future…
I also don’t want anything… Thnk u Swara for coming to my life n making it a heaven…(kisses Swara’s forhead)
Both slept in each other embrace ,, in between Rabia… all three had a big smile on face…

Next morning:::::

“Maa!! We will be coming back by 11:30… we have lot’s of shopping….,,,(to Rabia) n Doll Daddi ko pareshan mat karna okkk!!! “Says Swara to AP who had come for her granddaughter’s b.day….

SWASAN is going for some shopping for evening party…

Sanskar-Doll,, take care of yourself okkk,,, n yeah take ur Lunch at time…don’t irritate Dadi ….
Byeee…

Rabia-Bye Mumma papa,, come fast,,,,i’ll be waiting for u…both kisse Doll’s cheeks…

After 3 hour:::

“Triing triiingggg!!! ” beeps d telephone…

“Yes,,Maheswawi residents,,,yes,, they r my son n dil” says AP picking up d call…

Other side- Hello,, i m talking from APZ police station…sorry to say but they have met with n accident n d car fell from d clif..it has blasted at d spot… we r trying our best to find their bodies… Please come to APZ road as soon as possible…

“Whatt?? This can’t happen? Nooooo !!! ” the phone falls from her hand n she sits with a thud…

Hearing d scream Rabia rushes to her ” Daddi maa what happen? Why r u crying?
N where is Mumma Papa? It’s already 1:00 pm… why r they soo late.ΒΏ plzz call them na? M missing them!!! Plzzz Daddi,, i want to talk to Mumma..”says Rabia ina pleading manner…

AP doesn’t know what to say,, how to answer that her parents r no more,, they will never talk to her… she can never meet them…..

“Beta,, Mumma Papa will come soon,, (trying as much as she can hide her tears but as a failure she couldn’t do it)

Rabia- Dadii,, why r u crying? See na i have taken my lunch…plzz don’t cry… warna Mumma will scold me…

AP can’t take this anymore n brust out crying ” No beta,, they will never comee,, Swara will never scold u,, they have gone…she left u beta ,, Swara n Sanskar is no more”…

Rabia(pale face)- Dadi i know Mumma Papa planed a big surprise for me.. they promised me that they will come soon…we will celebrate my b’day together…

AP cries loudly n hugs her ” No beta they r now will never come”….

Rabia-i know u r joking… but i dun like this kind of jokes… i need my Papa Mumma…call them…(starts to cry)

AP has no words to pacify a 8 years kid that her parents r no more… though she tried a lot but nothing happened….

After 4 days::::

Rabia is sitting at Veranda eagerly waiting for her Parents with a hope that they will come to her,, ” Mumma Papa where r u? Coma fast na,, ur Doll is waiting for u… M STILL WAITING FOR U BOTH,,, u were not even present at my b’day also.. i know u both r playing with me … but at least come now,, it’s been 4 days i have seen u both… Plzzz Mumma Papa ur Doll needs u…

AP tries to understands her but Rabia always says” Mumma Papa will come,, n M STILL WAITING FOR THEM”..

8 years leap :::::

Rabia- Mumma how it will look on me,, this colour is nice naa!!!

Swara- My Doll is d most beautiful girl in d world n everything suits on her…She is made for all d colours….

Sanskar-Yes,, My Doll u look pretty in every dress like ur mother…

Rabia-Have some Shame Papa,, now m a big girl,, don’t start ur romance session here….(giggles)

Swara-U father daughter again started…

Rabia-Okk okkk give me a kiss… SWASAN kiss her cheeks…

Now i want yr blessing… today m gonna start a new life,, my college life… n i want u both at my side like always.. u both will be with me na??

SWASAN- we r always with u Doll… whenever u need us just close ur eyes n we will be in front of ur..

“Rabia beta r u ready,,, u r getting late,, come fast have ur breakfast” says a old lady…

“Haa Daadi maa coming!!!”

Again turns around ” Haaa toh Mumma Papa i’ll meet u later,,,” but they r not there,, just 2 big phots with garland n they r of SWASAN….who died 8 years ago in dat horrible accident…

Rabia’s eyes r filled with tear… but weeps it n says thnk u tooo them…

Rabia’s POV:::

Now it’s been 8 years Mumma Papa left me,, people says they no more,, will never come to me… but i knew they will come
N i was being proved rit…

they always come to meet me… at my Dream at my room… they r always with me… may b not physically but i can feel their presence around me… they r with me at every step,, at every second….

Mumma Papa is in my heart n will always leave in my heart.. i still miss them… Noo nooo nooooo I don’t miss them coz they r with me naaa… !!!!

POV ends…………

She smiles brightly n takes a step towards a new life with blessing of her parents… who is watching her from sky with a proud smile…

SWASAN together- She is our brave Doll RABIA…

THE END….

RABIA DII IT WAS SPECIALLY FOR U,, HOPE U LIKE IT…

It’s a small Farwell n welcome back gift from me…. as i m with u in ur farewell but i don’t know na if i’ll be there to welcome u or not… sooo it’s a advance welcome gift…
I’ll miss u…. plz go slowly n come fast…
We all r badly gonna miss u…m crying like anything writing this…but what to do can’t stop my tears…huhuhuhu!!!!

Waaa !! Okk okkk no more senty talks…. i just pray to God u achieve everything for what u r going … God bless u… i can’t write anymore……sorry πŸ˜‰

Thnk u so much for reading…
Love u all <3 <3…

173 comments

  1. Trisha-Balani

    Trisha-Balani

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    Awesome kakuuu 😘😘
    But u made me cry….so emotionalπŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
    N where r u going??
    Sorry for late comment

    • Kakali

      Kakali

      |Author

      Awwww !!! Trisha!!! Sorry to make u cry dear… loo take my hanky…
      waaa u can never be late dear…haaa !!! actually m also leaving in few days… may 15 or Soo…
      hunhuhuhu !!!! Thnk u soooo much dear.. ;-*

  2. Vidhi

    O god it was awesome… Loved it😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍n may I knw where is rabia going as I can see everyone writing a farewell os for rabia… May I knw that…. 😘😘😘😘😘😘it was bit emotional too….

    • Kakali

      Kakali

      |Author

      Vidhi,,,, Thnk u sooo very much dear…m glad that u love it..
      waaa !!! Rabia dii is taking leave for 4 months from TU,, sooo we r writing or giving farewell gift as OS… haaa !!! u know she is so close to our heart … :-&

  3. Sanjanaagrawal

    Sanjanaagrawal

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    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

    U are very bad kakali !!!!!!! U made me cry …. loved it to the core dear ….. keep writing !!!!!’ I am still crying !!!!!!! Can I upload it on watty ???????? Don’t worry I will give the credit to u only … plz …

      • Kakali

        Kakali

        |Author

        Awww!!! Sanjuuuu !!! sorry to make u cry dear…n thnk u soooo much…

        waaaa !! u can upload it… do whatever u want man…huahh haa haaa !!!
        creditΒΏ what credit?
        but i dun have account on watpad…

        hmmm !!! Rabia di Iis taking leave for 4 months… she will b back in February
        …..
        n me2 also going in some days n will b back in April… huhuhu !!!
        Thnk u once again dear… ;-*

      • Sanjanaagrawal

        Sanjanaagrawal

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        All the best dear !!!!!! Love u ….

        * merry christmas
        *happy new year
        *happy holi …

        I am wishing u all the festivals till april in advance bcoz now we will meet in april ….

    • Kakali

      Kakali

      |Author

      I have nooo tissue,,, i have become a road side writer n reader,,, writing this OS,,, soo take my hanky,,,…*kangal yeh OS likh kar…
      Thnk u Anniya.. :-*

  4. chanu

    Wow dr!!
    Nw im speechless.
    Its rly beautiful os dr..
    it touch my heart…
    a bigggg hug 4m me… thank u 4 writing dis…
    Rly see bz f u im crying.
    I dnt hv wrds… sry…

    nw no more serious talks . Cz chanu and dat type f talks ddnt match well…
    πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    Huhhhh!!!!
    Kakuuuuuu…!!!!
    Im gonna kill u…
    y u kill my lvly sweethearts. My swasan!!????
    Soooo bad so bad…
    urrrrggggggg….. im angry nw…
    huh.. hw cn u do dis..

    and I think u hit ur head in da accident. Bz f dat dis hpns..
    or else my kaku ddnt write dis mch painful story.
    Hayeeee…
    god!!!! Plz gv me my old kaku back…

    I rly lv their fmly tym dr.. soo cute my drls r.. asanskari sanky.. aww I lv him..

    and yaa rabia dr we gonna miss u soo much…

    Keep writing dr..
    be happy always
    lv ya..

    • Kakali

      Kakali

      |Author

      New Kakali ::: Awwww Thnk u sooo much Chanu dear…sorry to make u cry sweety… u know na i don’t like tears in ur eyes soo wipe it woth my fav hanky… okkk !!! a tight saa hug from me toooo…

      Old Kakali:::: Waaaa Chanuuuuuuuuu !!!!don’t be angry with me … haaaaa !!! My tiny sa cute soul can’t bear ur angry.. it will break into 9999 pieces..*1 piece u’ll stole it..i know…

      huhhh !!! U only love him.. hawww !!! cheater m with u okkk…
      love u dear.. thnk u for ur day making comment…
      huhhh now m angry with u,, u didn’t tell me about ur sis marriage..haaa !!!*damn angry.. :0:0:0:0 :*:*:(

      • chanu

        Hey!!!!!
        I rply u in upper cmnt..
        bt it ddnt post.
        Dnt knw y!!????
        tu plz uplode it naaa!!!!???
        I swear I tell u abt my sisos mrg…
        hwwwww..
        dnt be angry with me…
        I cnt tolerate my kakus anger. Seeee….
        here my heart broken 2 soo mny pieces.. nooo noo nw my heart hv no pieces bt nw its nly powder. Its broke and nw I cdnt count hw mny prices..
        poor me…
        huhhuhu

      • Kakali

        Kakali

        |Author

        U 2 Sooooo cuteeee Chanuuuuu !!!!
        n haaa coming… but how… ? i don’t have ur address… it means now i have to convert myself to Musician… hawwww !!! *Jantar Mantar Phuuu Mantar…

        Chanuuu u r from India rit?

      • chanu

        Hee heee
        yaa I knw im cute..is dys im listing it again and again. Soo tell me smthng new..!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›
        lols…

        nooo im 4m sri lanka..
        cm 4m ur private jet!
        u cm 2 colombo and tell me.. ill pick u.. then we ll rock da mrg… im waiting 4 u…
        Awww nw im dreaming.
        We cn celebrate it in ur culture also.. I lv it…β™₯β™₯β™₯

        Hey hey!!!!
        Tell me when ur exam will start and when it end!!???? I want da truth nly..

      • Kakali

        Kakali

        |Author

        Waaaaa !!! Sri Lanka… Singhal Iseland… waaa it will dream come true if i can go there…. haaaaa but my bad luck that my private rocket’s tyres r puncture n i dun have spare one… soooo…

        N Chanuu my tests r starting from 12 November n will end it 17 November… tests r just for 5 days…

        n my Final Exams/High Secondary Exams will start in February 16 n will end in March or April… okkkk !!!
        soo from 21st November i’ll not b active…will leave the site for 5 months…

        n yoooo my 12th part has been posted… ;-*

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    • Kakali

      Kakali

      |Author

      Thank meee !!! that i didn’t separate them… they r together … haaaa !!! i can’t even imagine to separate them…
      it’s out of my coverage…
      Thnk u sooo much dear… *Dii is wearing oxygen mask for ur hug…

  6. Mirna

    Mirna

    |Registered Member

    Awwwwww my kaks OS was super duber loved it to the coreeeeeeee dear : aagain killed my swasan nottt fair bit it was toooo emotional dear πŸ™‚

    • Kakali

      Kakali

      |Author

      Awwwww my darlzzzz !!! Thnk u soooo much dear… m glad u loved u…
      heeh !! think they r only died coz i didn’t separate them… u know live together die together… huhyhuyu !!!;

  7. Mahavir

    Mahavir

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    diiiii…….!!!! i hate u di…..i hate u….*crying….

    di really u made me cry u know i read this at 5 am but i m commenting now beacause i was crying frm the past 2 hrs…this is not fair how can u do like this ΒΏΒΏΒΏ….this is first os i m reading after my exams but u made me cry di….hawww *commenting by controlling my tears….no more words di…and i want to know one thing when my naughty drama queen di became the fabulous writer…..???? *thinking by hiting my head against the walll..

    • Kakali

      Kakali

      |Author

      Awwwww !!! My Maha cried !!! huhhh !!! *giving my last fav hanky….
      take it n wipe ur tears… !! haaa !!!
      sorry for make u cry dear … huhuhuuu !!!
      this time naughty drama queen… goshhhh !!!
      But i love this name given by my Maha Sis.. hehehehe… !!!
      Thnk u soooo much dear for ur appreciation… it means a lot to me… thnk u.. :0
      n haaa bang ur head with slender… ;);) :0:0 .. it feels good…

      Anyway how was ur exam?? TC n give ur best okk !!!
      Byeeee !!!

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