I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 5)

Hey everyone…. I m sho sorry for being demanding last tym….. and arundhati uh can surely call me di yaar plz…. Bcoz I myself permitted uh to do so…. Shams ty yaar for involving me also in urs…. Oops! I mean twinj engagement….. loved the venue dear….. I hope we gonna do enjoy very much over there…. I hope uh read my comment…. And guys uh know or not I m glad that uh all are liking the ff but let me tell uh plz don’t bang my head… wen uh come to know that to wat extend kunj has changed… plz plz plz…. Love dat kunj also as I do….. and all your ques are answered by my replies I guess uh r aware of that….. loveuh alll……
Warning I m bad at translations…. Plz bear me….
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After sumtime Amaya and mahi rushes to twinkles room and wakes her up as she is unconscious she doesn’t wakeup… mahi spills water on her bcoz of which she comes to her sences and wakesup…
T : (tensed) kunj…. Kunj…. (noticies mahi and Amaya) uh both here? Kunj nahi gaya na? dekha mein janti thi vo muje chodke kahi nahi jayega vo mere bigar reh hi nahi sakta….. ( getsup frm bed and about to run wen mahi holds her wrist and nods in a no) (twinkle yells at her) wat do uh mean ha….? (holds her by arms) tell ha…. Wat do uh mean by no? (starts crying)
A : (hugs her and she also starts srying with her) control urself di…. Plz stop crying…. Plz (trio hugs while crying and both sis consoling twinkle)
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Kunj’s flight takes off and he is angry and hates her and decides to never face twinkle again in his life…….
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Twinkle feeling like a deadbody…. She visits every places where they hav a memory….
Twinkle reaches a garden….. she touches the swing over there….
Flashback
Twinkle is sitting on the swing and kunj is pushing her (I mean the swing)
T: kunj yaar… zoorse dhakha do na…. [push me harder na]
K: ha twinkle ruk tuje itna zorse deta hu k tu angrybird ki tarha udd jayegi…. [ya twinkle wait… I will push uh harder that uh fly away like an angrybird] (still swinging her with the normal speed)
T: huh…. Khodoose kahika…. Stop now…. I wanna get down
K: thank god because of u fatso my hands began to pain…. (massaging his one hand with other in a way pressing)
T: (gets down from the swing but bcoz of the jerk by the swing she landsup on kunj and both fall down in the mud, twinkle upon kunj….)
K: (drama) aaaah… oh my god….. volcano, tsunami, earthquake…. Wait wat are the other natural disasters…. (acting to think… while twinkle is fuming still in that position upon him)
T: dnt give stress to ur brain bcoz its limited…. (streching the words and yells)
K: watever fatso…. Plz getup from me…. Ahhh(drama) my back is paining… ahhh mummy….
T: (fumes more) no now I will not getup till uh don’t tell me that I m not fat….
K: (kunj widens his eyes and gets serious) so uh will b on me like this only?
T: yes
K: cool den let us b like this only, let every1 eye us…. I don’t hav any prblm (hugs her in same position)
T: kunj lev me (she jerks him and getsup) I hate uh and I will never talk to uh…. And and and….. (thinks)
K: (getsup and tries to clean his clothes whch are of mud) aagey kuch bolegi and and…. Ur car is stuck on AND only….
T: urghhh I hate uh…. (fumes and leaves)
K: well as I love uh………. (runs behind her) arrey wait twinkle…… {then the dining table wala incident happen which ve already saw in kunj fb}
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Twinkle comes to a restaurant
Twinkle looks at one of the table
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Kunj(wearing red shirt black pant) is waiting for twinkle for more then a hour twinkle(wearing a black one-piece) comes and sits in front of kunj while he is just memerised with her beauty….
T: kunj…. Kunnnnnj (snaps her fingers infront of his eyes) wer r uh lost?
K: in uh….. (still staring her face)
T: (smiles) omg so I look dat s*xy in this outfit?…
K: (irritated tone, corrects her) u look beautiful, stunning, gorgeous…. Wat typ of language uh use yaar seriously like…. Just leav it… ( looks here and there)
T: (thinks… it just came out of my mid bcoz uv says that…. Oh again bcoz of uv I created a mess) kunj srry na it just split out of the mouth… unknowingly… (kunj rolls his eyes)
K: thik hai (smiles and orders the food… they both are eating wen dal stick on twinkle’s lips…. He forwards his hand and touches her lips with his thumb while twinkle is staring him lovingly…. He rubs his finger on her lips and cleans it )
T: kunj (he realises his thumb is still on her lips and he composes his hand) thankyou… I think v shud leave
K: twinkle I wanted to tell uh something…. (smiling and holds her hand)
T: (feels butterflies in her stomach) kunj plz not now, v will talk tomorrow bye (she getsup and about to go wen kunj holds her wrist)
K: sumtimes I feel uh know…. Sumtimes I feel uh don’t…
T: wat kunj?
K: That only that uh r not allowing me to say…
T: (phone beeps…. On call) ya maa… I m just coming…back (to kunj) I hav to go (hugs him) bye…. (leaves)
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Twinkle think…. I just wish at that time I wud hav listen to uh….. I wish I had a undo button that I can change the mistakes I did….. (cries) I love uh kunj……
After few weeks
Twinkle is sitting on her study table hugging tuffy very tightly and she is in depression from the day kunj left her. Family members are concerned about her and dats y dey hav started talking to her but now she doesn’t talk to anybody she behaves as a deadbody….. in the meanwhile UV has got a new gf to satisfy his needs and now he doesn’t pay any attension to twinkle. Nor twinkle is concerned of him.
Kunj is engaged in his work in New York and doesn’t bother to wat is happening over here…..
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Twinkle’s pov..
I m all alone. No1 loves me….. my family doesn’t love me dey r just showing sympathy as I m ill…, my friends left me, the person I used to think is my love left me… by bestest frnd… my life… my everthing….. KUNJ…. He also left me… I m all alone over here….. I miss him so much… he always used to say me dat he will die if I leave him…. But its now he, who left me… so I will also die for him….
She takes a blade in her hand and slit her wrist…… and falls on table unconscious… aftersum time mahi notices her and family rushes with her to the hospital….. doctor informs Taneja and Sarna family that the case is critical…. Leela starts crying wer as Usha, Manohar and RT consoles her. Mahi and Amaya prays god FOR TWINKLES LIFE…. After sumtime doctor comes out of the operation theatre and announces that the patient is fine and out of danger but may face problem in her left hand (the wrist she slit) as the nerve was been cut and v sumhow managed to stich it… she was having nearly 7-8 stiches in her fair hand…. She was somehow rescued but the scar of the cut was visible on her wrist as a tattoo for lifetime…… After few days she was discharged and as informed by the doctor all the members were doing every possible thing to make her happy….. and get her out of depression…. Noticing all this efforts of her family she is also tring to b strong and wear a fake smile wen they are around…. She is engrossed with her modelling stream and…. She is slowly recovering from the handcut and also from depression but was still somewer not cured and dat was…. From heart. She used to talk with tuffy about kunj and use to sleep every night crying and missing kunj…. Amaya and Mahi were aware of the fact but were not able to help her in any manner….. everytime they tried to talk about twinkle, kunj used to turn anrgy and change the topic or disconnect the conversation….
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After 5 years……………………………………………….
Kunj is a famous entrepreneur in New York and a very successful person having a big mansion over der named KUNJVIHAR that to built by his own hardwork….. but he is not the same kunj as before….. he is a spoilt brat… apart from his work… he is mingled in every type of bad habits… like smoking, drinking, gambling, and even sleeping with girls…… he is a casanova now…. no doubt all this activities doesn’t affect his work……. He is totally changed…. He doesn’t trust any1, doesn’t he care for anybody, nor loves any1….. other then has two imp people over there…. They are bitoo and shruti…. Kunj’s neighbour…. And kunj’s best buddies…. Shruti is like small sister to kunj and loves her equally like mahi and amaya… while bitoo is his caretaker (I mean a helpful buddy)… he gets him home from wherever kunj has dozzed off in an drunk state….. and rescues him from his girlfriends…
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Twinkle is a top most popular model in India and is engaged in many big projects but apart from her work she owns many NGO’s… she lives alone in one flat in Mumbai… ya she is no more in Amritsar but has left her family 3 yrs ago and shifted to Mumbai…. But she is not alone as she still has tuffy with her…… she is still the same sweet, cute, beautiful, caring, loving …. She is still the same but the reason of her life has changed that’s her love KUNJ… She has many friends being a model… many handsome hunk approached her with proposal but she denied always…. She is waiting for kunj till date but till now never tried to contact him because of her guilt….. [SHE HAS NO IDEA WAT KUNJ HAS TURNED INTO]
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In Amritsar,
Sarna and Taneja family are very busy in marriage function…. They hav declared Mahi and Amaya’s marriage with their business partner Mr. Malhotra’s sons…..
MAHI TANEJA WEDS LUV MALHOTRA
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AMAYA SARNA WEDS KHUSH MALHOTRA
Kunj and twinkle both are called urgently as there is very less time in their sister’s marriage, but bcoz of sum work kunj informed he will b able to come at haldi ceremony…. Directly weras twinkle rushed to Amritsar without wasting a day… as der were only 15 days remaining….
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As there were two weddings and both together the marriage venue was kept at amritsar’s best hotel with stay facilities of the guest….. RT and Manohar have hired the best wedding planners BITOO SHARMA & SHRUTI KAKKAD to arrange the weddings….. still twinkle was the incharge to look after every thngs done properly or not….. from decorations to catreses each and every thing were supervised by twinkle…. She spent maximum time with both of her lovely sisters…. Shopping, gossiping, solving their issues with the marriage, making them understand about the rights and duties they need to follow, and even cried with them as they were leaving them…. Yes the marriage was arrange marriage but both couples were friends in the college so their were no prblms…. Twinkle made every possible thng to make them fall in love and understand each other and accept each other with every flaws and drawbacks….. she was very happy all this time…… but this happiness was the silence before the thunderstorm…. And the thunderstorm was about to come………..
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43 comments

  1. RiaA MendeZz

    Saby? Wow. This epi made me cry. Literally. I felt the emotions. I felt the happiness, the love and the sorrow all at once. This was so beautiful.

  2. diehard fan of sidmin

    Ur ff is really awwsummm..but I have a request that is can u plz give a summary of ur ff from episode 1-5 in ur next update…………plz plz plz

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm but i m really sorry to reject ur humble request…. Its just that i m too busy in job and cllg…. Sumhow i manage to post my ff…. It will b not possible for me to giv a summary…. I m really very sorry dear…. ?

  3. Poorvi

    Awesome.. Mind-blowing.. Deep.. The episode is just too good.. N the story is going just boom.. On the spot.. Great story

  4. Romaisah

    Woww… For some reason i think u rele have this whole thing planned out yaar amazing waiting eagerly for u next epi 🙂

    • Saby

      |Author

      Uh guessed it right Romaisah… ? the story is just planned I just need to portray it in front of uh guys

  5. zayb_zikra

    Hayye wht a epi dea loved it so much…….
    N each n every line u nailed it……..
    N made us understand d pain she was going through……..
    Loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much……….
    Do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz……….
    Luv u ..,……
    ???????????

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm zikra…? I am happy that I m able to portray the pain through my writing….. Luv uh toooooo…???

  6. sonali

    awesome epi yaar…..its too good….just loved it from core of my heart……pls pls if possible post next epi asap……ergly waiting for it.

    • Saby

      |Author

      Omg me also out of d box….. Thanx so much…. I like complement?? love uh dear….. The epi will b updated asap

  7. Shamz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Saby,
    This tym I’m not late…the epi was awsm….I’m really excited to see Kunj aka Siddhant I’m grey shade….so Saby start ur torture on Twinkle….. Hehehe..but seriously I’m keen to see how u’ll portray it…..be happy and keep smiling….

    • Saby

      |Author

      Oh shamz tysm? but today I m late….. Was very busy schedule today…. Monday uh see….. And the torture will b soon…. Stay tuned???

    • Saby

      |Author

      Ty priya….. And ya his entry….. His attitude…. Everything is interesting….. I hope uh guys like it?

  8. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    awesome. ..emotional….plz continue asap….waiting to see kunj’s new avtaar. ..

    • Saby

      |Author

      afa tysm for sending me the link…. rina literally made me cry….. her work is just awesome… the way she potrayed the feeling of a dad….. just the best

    • Saby

      |Author

      dnt wrry babyy…. kunj will turn good for sure… afterall this is my ff and i want him to appolozise for his mistakes…..

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