I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 26)

Leap of 3 years…………….
A set is shown… some shooting is going on… a girl wearing a hot white gown is facing her back on the stage…looking gorgeous… she is none other then twinkle…. she is surrounded with few backdancers… the theme of the set is dark, mysterious… with black and red combination dresses… there is a red coloured royal chair on the centre of the stage… a boy is sitting wearing a mascarreate and shiny black shirt and pant…….
the song starts…… the girl turns and starts lipsing

Tu hai lajawab, tere jalve hazar
You are exquisite, You have an impeccable amount of charisma
(moves her hands at the chair sensually standing behind the chair)

Mera bhi patha hai, mein na manu kabi har
You also know that I never give up
(leaves the chair and comes in front of the person… pointing her own self from top to bottom in sensual way)

Teri meri duniya mein be hisab pyar
In our world, there’s an infinite amount of love
(rotates and leans at the person on the chair)

Main hoon ek angel aur devil mera yar
I’m an angel and the devil is my partner
(sits on his lap and the boy holds her by one hand… points herself and then the boy)

Tere jaissa duniya mein koyi bi nahi
No one like You exists in this whole world
(getsup and comes in the centre and dance… she points at the boy and then gives a no wala gesture by her fingers)

Jisse doondti nazar lage tu hi hai wahi
You’re the one that my eyes are searching for
(Puts her hand on her head and acts as searching for someone wala look… then at the boy pointing him)

Pariyon ki rani hoon main sabse haseen
I’m the queen of angels, I’m the loveliest one
(streaches her hands asif she is flying)

Par tere bina kick muje milti nahin
But I don’t get a kick (energy/excitement/adrenaline) without You
(shows the no gesture by her fingers and dances)

Tere bina kick muje milti nahin,
But I don’t get a kick without You

Tere Bina, Tere Bina, Tera Bina…
Without You, without You, without You

Je menu yar na mile te mar jawan, Je menu pyaar naa mile…. Je menu yaar na mile te mar jawan, main mar jawan
If I don’t find my beloved/partner, then I’ll die… If I don’t find love, then I’ll die… If I don’t find my beloved, then I’ll die
(the boy stands and start dancing along with her)
The song ends and then director yells….
D: cut….. wow wat a shot TWINKLE… amazing… and uh too Sid… this song is going to be the best album song of this year… great work… meet uh at the premiere… guys packup… (he leaves) {who all thot the boy is kunj? Tell me in comment}

The couple moves to the greenroom… the boy removes his maskeratte…
S: oh god twinkle how uh do it so well… uh were just so steamy… I myself only know how I controlled myself…
T: stop doing drama sid…
S: (keeps her hand on her shoulder) comeon yaar twinki, itni hot co-star mili hai… kon try nahi marega… (come-on twinkle, I hav got so-hot co-star… who will b not try to get her) (winks at her)
T: (smiles) wahi nahi marega… jisko mere hatho ki pitayi nahi khani… (that person will not try, who don’t want to get beating from me)
Twinkle starts beating him and he runs in the whole greenroom.. while twinkle catches him….. just then a girl enter with a phone in her hand…. She is twinkle’s PA… jasmin…
J: mam… (she looks at twinkle who is holding sid by arm and beating with the comb, sid seating in the chair and twinkle half leaned on him to beat him.. both stop laughing and composes them)
T: yes jas… tell
J: mam… sir tried uh calling many times. He has asked me to tell uh to call him as soon as uh get free… (she handovers the mobile to twinkle)
T: (concerned) omg… my jaan is relly going to be mad at me… (looks at the phone) oh shit 17 missed calls…. (turns to sid) its all bcoz of uh stupid… (fakes anger and leaves out of the room)
S: (yells… looking at twinkle going) hey what did I do… stupid grl…
Jas starts moving out of the room but sid holds her hand…
J: sir plz leave my hand (trying to escape from his grip)
S: no I wont… uh know jas… how much I love uh… y dnt uh accept me… it hurts me
J: Its ur problem not mine… (jerks his hand and leaves the room and sid punches his hand on the wall)

Twinkle is on phone…. Standing in the corridor….
T- hello mele malaayi chaap
he- huuh…bolo
T- sorry yr….mai kyaa karu pura din se bilkul bhi time nii mila baat krne ka….I’m so slly baby
he- toh btaa toh skte th nah….phone kuy off kiya??
T – ary yr…..battery kb khtm ho gyii ptaa he nii laga….
he- subha bhi off thaa
T – hmm…..subha galti se off ho gya tha baby
he- nhii sudhroge nah tum?
T – ab Maine kya kiya?.
he- pta hai…..pura din se preshan ho raha tha mai…pta nii kaaha hogi kyaa kr rhi hogi kuch baat toh nhi ho gyi…ye wo… par nhii….tumhe toh koi fikkr he nii hai nah
T – slly nah baby
he- rehne do bas tum
T – ab aise kroge apni rasmlaayi ke sath?? huuh???
he- wo toh Milo tum…btata hu kaise krunga
T – abhi bta do nah…kyaa krne ka irada hai mele malaayi chaap ka?
he- kaah jaaunga tumhe
T – shrm toh aayegi nahi nah?
he- mai apni rasmlaayi ko kaahunga…..shrm kaisi
T – hmm…..pitoge
he- meli rasmlaayi…usspar sirf mera haq hai…
T: (blushes) acha…. (A voice is heard from the room, twinkle gets frightened) kunj talk to uh later… bye… (yells turning to enter the greenroom) siddddd…….
K: I will kill this sid one day… (ends the call)

In the greenroom
T: sid are uh ok… omg wat uh did… dnt tell me uh punch the wall…
S: its nothing twink…
T: just shutup ok… (yells) jasmine…. Jasmine… (jas comes running and stays blogged looking at sid’s bleeding wrist) jas plz bring the first-aid box…
J: sure… (she was about to go wen)
S: no need jas… Its actually my problem that I m hurt… I can handle my ownself… (rushes out of the room)
T: (watches him going) god… wat type of person he is… 2 yrs of this project and I m still not able to undrtand him… (takes a pause) come jas we must leave)

Both leaves home… SARNA MANSION
Twinkle with jas enters the mansion discussing about sumthing…. But stops at the door looking at a small, 3 years girl running in the the hall… and mahi catching her… and vihaan and shruti giggling looking at mahi’s condition…
M: aarohi plz comena… we have to get ready…
A: no…. no… no… I want purvi…
V: (cupps her face) baby… purvi is cuming na, we will meet her at the function only
A: no mamu… she is not coming chachu told me…
S: we called her just now… purvi is coming with amaya and khush (purvi is daughter of amaya-khush)
A: (makes a cute pout) pakka… na mami?
T: pakka my jaan…. (aarohi looks at twinkle and a broad smile appears on her face)
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Wanted to end par kya karu yeh kambakth dimag hai k rukne ka naam hi nahi le raha…
Kya karu mein….. kya karu?… iss DIMAG ka kya karu… mein kya karu…. Mein kya karuuu….
So so so so so srry q matlab?
Srry bcoz I m not able to reply on ur sugar se bhi zyada sweet and mere tuffy se bhi zyada cute COMMENTS….
I m feeling guilty as I m not able to reply on ur comments bt I knw uh all undrstand me…
And lagta hai or ek epi jhelna hoga muje?
Hayee… yeh kesi lut lag gayi… lag gayi…. Zamane k liye humko likhne ki lut lag gayi….
Love uh all….. and do comment and shower ur love as humesha…..

50 comments

  1. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Wow saby just loved it
    Hayee sidmin n twinj both amazing
    I am glad that this is not last epi
    Uffffff can’t wait for next epi
    Hosakke to jaldi post kardena
    Sidmin sidmin sidmin can’t wait for their story haha loved it
    Love u too

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm Sam😘
      Jaan don’t get excited much… Sidmin hav just small part in the ff… And twinj ko or pass lane k liye hi hai…
      Glad I brought a smile on ur face…😆
      Love uh tooo jaan😘😘

  2. Sidhantfan

    Amazing one yaar….thanks alot tht ur writing again….really missed u and ur fanfiction💕💕

  3. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    WOHOOOHOOO!!!! What an episode! Awww Emmm Geee….!
    SidJas😍
    Rasmalai Malai Chaap😂
    I thought that it was Kunj with whom Twinkle was dancing….par yahan to massla hi alag hai…
    Saby di…aap novelist ban jao…m telling uh…
    Abhi lagta hai ye gaana gaana hi padega…

    Tu hai laajawaab tere jalwe hazaar
    Tera ye pata hai tu na maane kabhi haar
    Teri jaisi duniya mei behisaab pyaar
    Tu hai ek angel aur main hu teri yaar
    Tere jaisa duniya mei koi bhi nhi
    Jise dhundti nazar lage tera ff wahi
    Pariyon ki rani hai tu sabse haseen
    Par iss ff ke bina kick mujhe milti nhi…
    Tere bina kick mujhe milti nahi…
    Tere bina tere bina tere bina
    Je tera ff na mile te mar jaawan…

    Love uh Saby di…muaah..😍😘

    • Saby

      |Author

      Ty so much ichu….😆
      I m glad uh liked it…….
      And the song by uh….
      Awwww show shweet… So cute…
      Uh are not less janeman…

      Love uh toooo ichu😘😘😘

  4. Shakti

    I love this story & ur style of writing…
    I am or say was as I m commenting now..a silent reader…
    I read each & every update of the story & fell in love with the story…
    Somewhere it hurts that u r gonna and the story soon..
    But again it’s ur wish…
    Just wanted to say…u write really well…& do keep writing such wonderful Stories..

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm shakti….
      And I m glad uh commented today and broke ur silence…
      And happy to hear that u like my ff….
      I hope I can comeback soon to entertain uh again… Love uh dear….

  5. Paavu

    |Registered Member

    Love u saby thanks but pls write more and moer epis we do t want it to end as I just personaly love ur ff from the first epi itself and this thing I have mentioned I commnts on oter darlos ffs also as I just personally luv or just u can say above the world liv it so pls cont it and dont stop I luv it and ya one more thing I want to ask is that jas and sid of ff are sidhant and jasmine In this ff or kunj and twi as I just want ku and twi as jasmine and sidhant bcos from first epi itself I imagined them only In this ff

    • Saby

      |Author

      Ty so much paavu😘
      I m so happy to hear all this…
      Jas and sid uh can imagine anything its upto uh… And twinj are real ones so imagine them as sidmin… 😍

  6. Meeta

    |Registered Member

    Saby Baby.
    Sona kaha h?
    Sab toh yaha h
    Ayee
    I just loved it.
    Mat khatam karo
    Issi kambaqt Dimag se toh hume pyaar h. ×D

  7. Sara28

    |Registered Member

    OMG YES!!! Ur back and now for good! I was reading the episode and I thought all these new mysteries started so how can this be the last episode? So glad its not. Welcome back and the episode was amazing! Post the next one soon! 🙂

  8. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    I was going to sleep. .. Then I thought ek baar TU check kr leti hu….and when I saw “I am a devil of my angel”….mere to neend hi ud gayi….
    I am soooooo happy that u r back

    Coming to the epi… It was superb
    What a twist..loved it
    Sidmin❤❤❤…. Looking forward to them
    Continue soon

  9. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Saby,
    The episode was amazing. You know, from yesterday whomever I wanted to upload their fan fics uploaded. Hehe.. anyways, I am damn happy that one more episode is still there. Will be eagerly waiting and hope you’ll be back with a bang.
    Loads of love.😘💗

  10. Baby

    |Registered Member

    wow saby di luv u
    aap aa gye
    pta hai kitni khush hui mein dekh kr
    i m a devil of my angel
    omg exactly d song suited yr di osm
    speechless bcz i m so happy dat cnt express
    di itnma cute pyaala sa episode
    haan twinj scenes nhi the par
    agle mein honge
    srsly i wanna palty
    so mene phene party shoes
    gonna let my body saby sayu sattu sab hai sath gonna
    party on my mind
    ammu bhi i ryt
    lovely bhi hai sath
    ria ritzi sab mil jhul ke gayenge or maze udayenge
    jo bhikahoi sch hai meion nhi likhg skti hahah di it was jst mein sng likhne ki koshish kr rhi thi pr nhi likh payi pr di sch mein amazing episode luvd it
    n d song was jst perfect
    n for u it is
    i jst luv the way u are
    i srsly luv d way u ryt i addore ur ritings osm episode di luvd it post nxt asap

  11. Baby

    |Registered Member

    di sry song ke lyrics ko mind mat krna mujse likha nhi gaya bich mein bula lia mom ne n phir mene kuch bhi likh dia jldi mein glti se sry luv u all

  12. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it di Love you 🙂
    S:Sweet
    A:Adorable
    B:Beauty with brains
    Y:Youthful
    Missed you di I read the episode and when at the end there was still a question mark in my mind I thought that this can’t be the last episode I was literally jumping and saying yes Saby di will continue loved it and the song explanation was too good Loved it di Loved it Love you 🙂

  13. SidVee

    Wow such a fabulous epi.. really loved it.. and yea I thought twinkle was dancing with kunj.. and am really glad that this is not the last epi.. do continue soon 💕

  14. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Wowwwwww……what an episode
    Rasmalai and malai chaap…😂😂😂
    Sidmin also wowwww double dhamaal…….twinj+sidmin

    U surely must take up writing as ur profession….
    Superb epi…..and at a point i thought it was kunj with whom twinklewas dancing

    Love u …..muaaahhhh😘😘❤

  15. Priya_

    |Registered Member

    Hey saby,
    Glad u r back.. Missed ur FF .. More than happy that u didn’t end the FF
    Episode was too good… Amazing..
    I thought the guy was kunj..
    Waiting for the next part
    Plz post soon

  16. nrk

    saby you r back. dil kush kar diya tumne.missed u and ur ff.
    awesome episode.hope u post next episode very soon

  17. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Yay!! Saby dii is back!! And back with a bang yaar!! Oh my fav song 👌👌😍😍
    Too good everything about this episode was just hot and ek sum superb..
    Blockbuster ka episode 🙂
    Post soon and I’m really happy you’re back !! 💓💓💓💓

  18. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Diii
    Yayy
    You came back!
    Episode start actually I thought are twinj separated
    Thank god no
    I’m so happy your back
    Love you
    ❤😘❤😘❤😘

  19. shikha

    amazing chapter
    I was so happy when I first saw the update to this story
    finally you continued and I have my favorite story 🙂
    its really a very good one
    aweeeeee Kunj is jealous from sid hehehehe
    and sid loves jas ohhhh we have two stories
    continue soon

  20. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Yayaaaaaayaaaa
    Uff saby it was awesome 😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    I was really upset but after seeing ur episode nd specially the last thing u wrote i wassssss sssoooooo happy
    I know u r ending it 😓 But its okay as u will cm with another ff soon.
    Luv u😍

  21. jasmin

    Finally di u posted it..i was thinking that ifnu will post or not..but i m soooooo happy..u noe me na cycling karte karte message kar rahi hu..u srsly r starting a new story without ending it..firstly it was twinj n now sidmin…loves it to the core…love u…muah!!

  22. ranabulbul

    Awwwwwwwww

    Sho sho smcute episode di

    Amazing or Aapke isi dimag ki humne aadat hai

    Di kya episode tha twinj+ sidmin

    Or really maine nhi socha tha ki wo person sid nhi kunj yoga kunki main janti thi Saby di can’t separate them so Herr it was and thankyou so so much for extending the time of ur ff

  23. sujina

    God u r back i m so so so glad…
    song choosen was perfect thot kunj…
    bt it suits 2 d title yaar…
    u took d story in new start…awesome yaar…
    twinj n sidmin both in 1 its epic…love u 2 d core…n hope ur work pressure lessens so that u can entertain us…post nxt asap…

  24. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Omg SabySaby
    Aapne to kar diya mujhe ghayal
    Sacchi it was Awesome
    N twinj conversation was damn cute😘😘😘😘😘

    N thank u shoooo much for coming back….
    Love u loads❤💞💞💞💞

  25. Twinjfan.tamanna

    |Registered Member

    finally…finally…aaj lagta hai mera lucky day hai…ur not ending ur ff..hurray..am so happy …love u yaar…BTW the epi was so nice..I thought it to be kunj bt still I was confused that kunj is not an actor…hw come he..lets leave..ur back its party time…

  26. Aamu

    omg my saby di aaye…yea..yea
    dis epi was blast as always…
    tw to dance n 1 of my favourite song….muah
    loved d dance n yaa maine kunj ko hi guess kiya tha….sid ki place par…
    cute family……
    der kids…muah
    n yaa next 1 me aapke ff ko alvida bolungi LEKIN aapko nahi….
    U HAV TO COME BACK WITH ANOTHER FF N DATS MY ORDER

  27. Loveleen

    |Registered Member

    ohhhh saby dear m so so so happy u r nt quitting…..i thnk ur mind fr it….plz continue writing…..u knw i ws surprised to see ur updt tdy n xctd wen i knew u r back…..

  28. Fatima

    heyyyy sabyy diii
    I loved it..
    I m soooo happyyyyyyy
    that u posted
    u seriously made my day…..
    loved it to core!!!!!!!
    love u..

  29. Shan

    Suddenly i felt like a different story…. everything seems changed a lot…. i have to wait for couple of episodes it seems. As to know what will happen next… amazing writings saby…. as usual….. good work…. love you saby….

  30. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Shukr hai Allah ka ke tumne post toh kiya… But I’m sorry for commenting late….

    Episode was amazing… Awesome… Loved it…..

    Love u

  31. Fan

    |Registered Member

    Hey saby gald u didn’t end it abruptly..the epi was super..u know when i saw ur ff in the main page i was literally jumping with happiness..sorry for commenting late but i was out of station n i didn’t have any access to internet..love u loads 😍❤

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