I m a DEVIL of my ANGEL….. (part 24)

(warning: not for kidooos…… read on ur own risk….. dnt bash me afterwards)

Kunj is in his studyroom, working on his laptop and having a conversation on phone….
K: (on phone) ya Mr. Richard, we will surely attend ur party… it will be a pleasure to be ur guest
(suddenly a voice a falls in his ears…. “kunnnnj” his jaws get dropped is amazement…. He looks at the figure infront of her… and gulps in…. and disconnects the call)
K: (stammers and getsup from the chair) twii…. Twin… kle
(twinkle is standing near room door streching her hands at the entrance… she is wearing a skinny black knee length one-piece, with a deep neck exposing his assets and looking damn s*xy…. She moves sensually towards kunj… wereas he is still gulping in… and has a eyes wide open to watch such a sensual look of his angel…. Twinkle comes near him and now they are very close to eah other…. Twinkle entagles her hands on his neck and wisper in his ears softly… “how m I looking kunj?” kunj is speechless he is numb watching her actions… twinkle face him and moves her finger sensually on his forehead then eyes, them cheeks… finally the lips and then…. Her finger starts rubbing his lips causing his hormones go wild…. Twinkle’s gaze is locked on kunj’s lips and still rubbing her lips….)
K: twink….
T: (cutting him) kunnj… tell na? how m I looking? (saying this he gives a soft peck on his lips, the action was so sudden that kunj didn’t understud wen it happened… now her one hand is touching carassing his hairs at back….and other hand is moving sensually down his face near his neck) say na kunj…
K: twinkle… wat r uh upto?
T: (gives a naughty smile) don’t uh know kunj wat I m upto? (her hand slids into his shirt and rubs his body…. And leans her head on his chest and starts kissing him and within no time she unbottons his shirt)
K: twinkle….. (closes his eyes and enjoying her touch)
T: hmmm… (still busy kissing his chest, his abs)
K: (holds her by arms and make her face him) i said stop it twinkle… (and walks out on the study room)
T: (thinks… not bad kunj… uh hav so good hold of controlling urself… let me raise ur hormones more… and smirks)

Twinj’s room
Kunj gets in his room….
Kunj’s pov:
Wats wrong with her… y she behaving like this? I have to control myself… I want her to trust me first and then… ohgod… I m still surprised no shocked with her behaviour… she is looking damn hot and s*xy… and each movement of hers provokes me to have her… I have to maintain distance frm her… oh god…. Wat to do?
Idea, I should go for a bath… till that tym she must have slept… great

Kunj takes out his clothes frm the wardrobe and keeps it on the couch and he hears twinkle footsteps and he escapes inside the bathroom…

Twinkle comes inside the room and looks around the room…. And finds no one there… she notices kunj’s clothes on the couch….
T: aww so my darling is escaping frm me? (smirks)

After 20 minutes….
Kunj is in the bathroom…
Kunj’s pov….
I think now she must have slept… as there is no voice of anyone’s movement… let me go out then… oh shit, I forgot to take the clothes… never mind I guess she must hav slept uptill now…

Kunj wears a towel and comes out…. Ohh god… the handsome hunk just in a towel, showing his abs and body which is drenched In water…. He enters the room, And is shocked again…. His eyes falls on twinkle, wearing his shirt and lying on the bed… twinkle standsup on the bed and calls kunj near her with his fingers…. Kunj is no more in his senses now… he slowly moves forward…. Twinkle comes down of the bed and turns her back and slids down the shirt… thw shirt falls down and twinkle is in two piece wearing only her undergarments…. Her hot figure is looking damn seducing and the butterfly tatoo on her back near her waist line highlights her boldness more… kunj within a fraction comes close to her and backhug her… and starts kissing her neckbone… twinkle smiles at his behaviour and slowly moves herself to face him…. Kunj stops kissing her neck and lets her face him… and both have an intense eyelock full of passion, desire, love….. kunj comes more close to her…. now no distance is between them… twinkle is breathing heavilly and her gaze is locked on his lips…. Kunj looks at her gaze… and smiles a bit and locks his lips with hers… and within no time… twinkle strted sucking, kissing, biting his lips… while kunj was kissing her less passionately this time… as he was busy enjoying the new shade of his wild angel with a smile…. And his hands exploring all her body…. And her curves…..
Just then …. “ouchhh” kunj pulledout from the kiss… and moves apart. his lips were bleeding… “twinkle are uh planning to chew my lips or wat?” twinkle looks at his lips bleeding and her gaze eyes turn down in embarassment. Kunj smiles at this from within and comes near her and holds again her frm waist and wisper in her ears with a smile, “I have named uh well jungli billi (wild cat)” twinkle pushes him away, bend down and grabs the shirt and wear it making a miffed face. she replies, “ and uh r not less then a hungry dog” and she giggles and start running in the room while kunj run behind her to catch her…
K: “ohh…. So I m a hungry dog, huh….” Both are smiling and running in the whole room…
T: (laughing and running on the sofa) look…. Kunj… uh shud accept wat u r… hehehe….
K: (tries to catch her wrist when she escapes) wait na… I will show uh now…. (follows her to catch)
Now twinkle is standing on bed… and laughing…. She says, “hwwwww…… wat uhh will show huh… kunj?” (Giggles)_ Kunj was standing near the bed…. he pulls her leg and with a fraction she falls on the bed… and within no time kunj gets upon her…
Twinkle is numbed… both are lost in each others eyes…. They are having an intense eyelock…. Twinkle carcasees his head…. With one hand and rubs his back with the other hand… making him come more close to her… the drenched body of kunj is on top of twinkle, making twinkle wet… kunj tucks her hair behind her ears…. And give a gentle peck on her cheeks… Twinkle closes her eyes and feels butterflies in her stomach….

Twinkle’s pov:
Oh god stop this butterflies… y they only get my stomach to fly…. Y m I feeling I provoked him very much… and maybe he will b unstopable now… oh damn… I m shivering with his every touch… his fingers are touching my whole body sensually and his lips sucking my neck… ya I m enjoying his touch bt everytime I get close to him, I remember the tortures he did on me… and I get scared…. Y m I always so confused? I like his touch… infact love his touch… but the gentle one… I m scared to his wildness…
Pov ends–––––––

Kunj looks up straight into her eyes… and after sumtime, his grip from her body lossens and he starts gettingup from her… twinkle notices this and hold kunj’s wrist… he is half standing and half on bed…
K: twinkle… plz leave my hand… uh r not comfortable… (Getsup completely frm bed and stands down)
T: no kunj I m… (Stands behind him) y will I do this things wen I m not comfortable… say?
K: coz uh thot this is the only option to make me talk to uh, as I was miffed with uh… (Twinkle is stunned as he is thinking right…. Kunj turns and holds her by arms) I even got carried away… but ur eyes made me realise that uh are still uncomfortable with my touch…
T: (cuts him) no kunj….
K: twinkle plz dnt lie… I know uh are still scared by me… by wat I did to uh… I m really sorr…. (twinkle cups his face and kisses him… and push him on bed and comes on top of him…. She covers themselves with the bedsheet and make love….)

Next morning
Twinj’s room
Whole room is messedup as they were running and catching eachother remember… the bed is messedup and the lovely couple sleeping in eachothers embrace…. kunj is sleeping showing his back to the ceiling and twinkle facing the celing. His head is digged in twinkle’s neck and his lips touching her neck… his hand is around her waist on which is twinkle’s hand holding his and her other hand is around kunj’s neck… they are almost sleeping in a hugging position…. still covered by the bedsheet… the sunrays falls on them… and twinkle makes faces as her sleep is disturbed… she opens her eyes and her eyes fall on kunj, she shies remembering her boldness last night. She finds her hand is beneath kunj and she slowly tries to slide her hand out… bcoz of the movement kunj wakesup and move a bit away from twinkle and rubs his eyes… twinkle doesn’t make eyecontact and looks other side, while kunj smiles remembering her last night and again digs his face in her neck and wraps her tightly in his arms…. To which twinkle makes a hww wala look….
K: (smiles within) twinkle dnt uh even try to do that, otherwise today I wont be able to control myself…
T: (beats him playfully on his back and blushes)
K: by the way I didn’t know my wife can be so seductive…. (Teasing her…. while she bites her lips)
T: kunjjj…
K: wat twinkle? I m telling the truth only na? uh knw uh were on fire yesterday… I didn’t knew being miffed with uh has so many pluspoints….
T: (controlling her blushing) kunjjj…. leave me… (he pushes him and tries to getup wen kunj makes her fall on bed and leans halfly on her)
K: wats wrng twinkle? Let me tell uh na… how much I enjoyed last night…
T: besharam (shameless) (pushes him hard on bed and runs inside the bathroom wearing his shirt)
K: oh damn! I love her…. (and spreads his hands on bed with a broad smile on his face)

After sumtime…
Twinkle comesout of the bathroom wearing a cream bathrobe… drying her hair… she finds kunj sleeping on bed with a broad smile… she smiles looking at him… just then “knockkkk…. Knockkkk” many knocks were there… twinkle opens the door partly… the ppl were non other then mahiya…
T: wat happen? Y uh guys banging the door?
M: then wat we will do di? Huhhhhh… (lil anger)
T: wats wrng mahuuu, amuu wat happen to her?
A: not only her, we all are miffed with uh… (Anger)
T: (tensed) but wat happen my princesses?
Mahiya: we are goning.
T: (confused) wat?
Just then shruti comes….
S: let me tell uh twinkle… mahi – amaya uh guys head towards the car, go (they both leave)
T: wer are they leaving shruti?
S: (smiles) they are going for site-seeing with a tour-guide… they were waiting for uh bt from last night uh guys didn’t came out of the room so they are lil upset with uh
T: little?
S: I mean lil more….. (pats her shoulder) come down, the breakfast is ready….
T: ya… (she closes the door and went towards the bed and pats on kunj’s back) kunjjjj…. Kunjjj… getup
K: ummmm…. (sleepy tone)
T: kunjj getup yaar plz…. Our princesses are miffed
K: (sleepy tone) must b miffed with uh not me…
T: means uh dnt care if they are miffed with me? (pats him) kunj getup yaaar (irritated tone)
K: (turns and holds her wrist and pulls her on him, she leans a bit upon him) is this a way to wake ur hubby?
T: (tashan) ya… this is only the way
K: (holds her by her waist) I expected sumthing else… sumthing like last night…. (unties her bathrobe)
T: dnt uh knw expectations hurt….
K: is that so… (slides his hand on her bare belly… while twinkle widens her eyes and jerks him away… to which kunj smiles)
T: (getsup and ties her bathrobe) kunj plz getup now… we are very late…
K: someone used to tell me, that I dnt know to wish mrng and look nw who is being saduuu (makes a sad face and walks inside the bathroom)

After sometimes he comes out of the bathroom and notices twinkle applying eyeliner… she was wearing a sky-blue crop top and a long white skirt… making her belly visible.. kunj was memerised with her looks but controlled himself and started wearing clothes… twinkle looks at him… and pouts… kunj rolls his eyes looking at her pout…

Kunj’s pov:
Yeh or uske moodswings… humesha mein hi iske nakhre uthav?? Kabhi mirchi jesi tikhi ho jati hai toh kabhi samose jesi namkin… kabhi jalebi jesi sweet to kabhi karele ki tarha sadii hui… or muje sadu bulati hai… kal raat ko toh bada pyar aaraha tha mujpe… aaj ek kiss deti toh kya jata uska…. Kal raat k baad laga k subha toh subse achi hogi par isne toh pura mood-off kar diya… dekhta hu ab kese manati hai muje…

Twinkle’s pov:
Ufff!! Again mene usse gussa dila diya… oh no! kal raat ki baat pe itna sabkuch karke pataya tha toh again ek naya issue create kar diya mene… oh god! Firse siyappa…. Mere mood swings ekdin muje le dubege…..
Ek baju mahiya naraz hai dusri taraf yeh saduuu….. Ab kya karu???????????

Screen frezes on twinkle’s tensed face and kunj’s miffed face….

66 comments

  1. misha

    it was super duper awsome yyou are the best
    seriooosly
    but why so late
    i realy missed you soo much
    now dont be laate and atleast try to post evryday
    love it

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm shatuuu😘😘😘
      It was just a try to make sum changes…
      And I m really glad to see the response 😍😍

  2. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    My beautiful gorgeous sis…
    Warning was amazing…but no one will dare to bash this pataka…
    Wah wah fantastic…I loved each and every scene superb…kya baat hai yaar…The way you write superb…I love your ff a lot…not bcoz your my sis…bcoz your storyline is fab…
    Keep rocking…
    Chummm Di loves you soooo much…
    Mmmmmmmm

    • Saby

      |Author

      Omgggg my chummm di😘😘
      Oh itne sare compliments yaar…
      Beautiful… Gorgeous and pattaka ..???
      Seriously…
      Zarur me yeah Sab hu…
      Or akhir kese na hou… Apni chumm di par Jo gai hu….
      Vo bhi kesi patakke we kam nahi…
      Ty ty ty solo much again…. That u love my ff sho much…. Bt I love ur ff more😉😉
      Love uh toooooo….much 😍😍😍

  3. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Saby this was beyond description…… That bold twinkle was something new 2 ur ff
    And those last pov-s of twinj were so damn lovely that my harmones r not in control to see what’s up nxt in ur store

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm kruti😘😘
      I seriously try to do new thngs in my ff to make it interesting bt enup doing sumthng similar only… I m glad uh liked it….
      And I will try to keepup to ur expectations darling😍😍😍

  4. Rashiverma2199

    |Registered Member

    Wow…..Saby episode was awesome……lovely it was….beautiful…. ROM ROM romantic👏👏👍👍💜💜💚💚💛💛💙💙💖💖

  5. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Ok ok…toh abb aap ye sochoge ki aapne keh diya tha not for kiddos…and that why m I here…well…grp messages padh lo u will get to know….ok mera comment krne ka koi irada nhi tha…uska bhi justification group messages mein hai….and for epi🤐🤐🤐

    Baki i love u more than Kunj loves Twinkle😍😘💞

    • Saby

      |Author

      Ladooooo……😆😆😆😆
      Meli ichuuuuu 😘😘😘
      Jaan ty ty ty ty ty sooooo much😍😍😍
      And ha group me padha mene….
      Meli ichuuu me ache bacho ki tallhah…
      Sabse permission mangi and den melaa ff padha… Meli gooodd girlll…
      And I loooveee uu mieee ichuuu
      Molll dennn twinkle loves Kunj 😍😍😍😍

  6. manu

    Wowwww di it was super se bhi upar and speechless and must day dam hotepi loved it hey di u read my ff its in page 3 if u read it tgen plz comment I have wrutten something for u actually I ended my ff and I want my di my sis to comment and read it plz if u get time thenbtry ti comment plz and yeah plz post ur next epi asap……..eagerly waiting for it

    • Saby

      |Author

      Manu😘
      Ty sooo much dear….
      Will surely read it… Plzzz send me the links Jaan plzzzz…. And will surely comment too…
      And i will try to post the next epi asap….

  7. Aamu

    haaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww kitna cute epi………..
    just loved ittttttttttttttt to d core
    do cont soonnnnnnn

  8. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Saby …..aaj main koi meri jaan nai bolungi ….kyuki main tumse namaz hon ….bahut bahut naraz ho nd tum mujhe nahi mana paugi ….

    Areeee madam kahan chali aap …sunke toh jaiye ke main naraz kyu hoo …ye sahi hai jiski galati hai wahi reason nai sun rha hai …..
    Toh suniye ….tumsa aisa kyu krti hoo yrr ….tumhara ff padhene ke baad mere pass koi words nai bachte hai tumhe praise krne ke liye ….

    Nd u will ask toh isme tumhari kya galti …galti sarasar tumhari hai …u only write such a amazing ff ….that I’m always left spell bounded to compliment u ….

    So ab main ati hoon apne original Sayu wale avatar main …
    Saby meri jaan ….u nailed it dear …oh my goodness soooooo romantic episode….loved it yrr ….amazing …specially Twinkle’s boldness was superb …
    love u …muaahhh

    • Saby

      |Author

      Hwwwww…..😱😱😱
      Meli sayuuu ko kya hua???
      Naraz q hai???
      Bata bhi do koi…..
      Ye kya baat hui…. Jaan na bolne ki wajha kya hai????
      Humne aesa kya kar diya bhala….???
      Acha toh yeah baat hai k hum aapko speechless kar dete hai….😍
      Hayeeee koi toh roklo…. 😜
      Inke yeh compliments hume badi sharam aa rahi hai🙈🙈
      Saby wale avatar mein……
      Ty ty ty sho sho shooooii much…
      Meri sayuuu love uh shooo toooo 😍😘😘😘

  9. Priya tripathi

    Awesome n i write a ff under qubool hai LOVE STORY OF DEVIL N ANGLE (QUBOOL HAI ASYA SS) i hope u read

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm priyu😘
      I m glad uh liked it….
      And atb for ur ff and uh can and me the link I will surely try to read and comment if I get time… I hope uh undrstnd….

  10. zayb_zikra

    Hhmmmmmmmmmmm….😞😞😟😟😟😟
    Badi jaldi yaad agayi na hamri??????
    Nai nai sachi me yaar….!!!😜😜😜
    Ap toh jaldi agaye!!…😝😝😒😒😒😒
    Arre itni jaldi ana apko shobha naihi deta didu…..😂😂😂😂
    U kno na ki ap itni jaldi aogo toh mai pagal hojati hu…..😅😅😅😅
    Arre zyada socho mat ki mai pagal wagal toh nai hogai…😚😚😚
    Aur usse b zyada ye mat socho ki tariif karriu hu mai….😈😈😈😈
    Kyu ki tareef karna toh koi apse sikhe.,…
    Hame kaha se ati hai tareef karna…….
    Batao toh bhala…..
    Ok anyways ajkal apni bakbak se mai hi bore hogai hu…😂😂
    Toh socho ap ki kitna hote honge???
    Nai Sachhi Sachhi kehna…???
    Badi irritating hu na???.😂😂😂😂
    Ikr I m….😈😈😂😂😂😂
    Ok nw commin to ur ff yaar…..
    Wht toh say mujhe sachi me badi sharam ari hai…
    A..Ab wht to say yaar….!!
    Ki kya likha hai apne yaar….
    Matlab ki osmmmness ki height…..❤❤❤
    Muaahhhhhhh wah wah saby di mardala…..
    Uff ufff mardala….
    Itni thandi me ye hot hot epi de kar mardala….😂😂😂😂
    Superbbbbbbb yaar…….
    Jussssssssssssssss…..😘😘😘😘😘😘😚😚😚😚😚
    Out of d universe…….
    No words as he epi always make me so speechless…..
    Wht to do…..
    It ws jus beyond amazing…..
    Wonderful….
    Great job saby diiii…..❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
    Still finding words for describing……
    Tareef karu kya uski jisne tumhe banaya……
    Tussi na kamal ki ho….😘😘😍😍😍😍
    Kamal karditta……
    Luv u more n more…..❤❤❤❤❤
    Wid ur each n every epi m falling more n more….
    For uh n ur ff……❤❤❤❤
    Yaad kya kamal ki cheez ho….
    Apke toh haat chumlu….😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Still no comments so I think m first today…..
    Koi miracle se kam nahi hai mera first coment karna..😂😂😂😂
    Bt still ap ki tareef karna chahti hu yaar…
    Marvellous fantastic fab …….
    So finally yeyeyye I got sumthg for uh….
    Wait sumthng struck in my mind….
    Jussssssssssssssss wait ha..!!
    .
    .
    .mmm.
    Mmmmmm….
    Ya I got it..
    ACTUALLY, BASICALLY, TECHNICALLY,
    MENTALLY ,MATHEMATICALLY,
    PHYSICALLY,NORMALLY,
    N NOW FINALLY……
    UR SUPERBBBBBBB…..❤❤❤❤❤
    Muaahhhhhhh…..😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😝😝😝😝
    Hope uh like it….
    Ik it’s bad …..
    Bt is choti si nansi bacchi k …
    Is chote se dimag me bas itna hi aya….😂😂😂😂😂
    Ok bass bahut hogai bakwas meri……
    Do cont asap pleaashhhhhhhh…….
    Luv uh to d moon n back….😍😍❤❤❤❤
    Luv ur ff to d core…😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Lub uhhhh….. So Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much….
    Bieeeee…..
    Frm urs jhalli si dramebazz stupid si zikraa….
    N most importantly urs IMPATIENT DEVIL….😂😂😂😂😂😂
    Bieee bubayyeee……
    Lub uhhhh…..❤❤❤❤❤❤
    B back soon……
    Keep smiling….😊😊😊😊
    Keep writing…….😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤
    ….
    .
    .aur kuch baki to nai rehgaya???
    Nahi na???
    Ok finally bie…..

    • zayb_zikra

      N ya sho sho shorry
      For short comment…..😂😂😝😝😝
      Naraz toh nai hona???
      😂😂😅😅😅

  11. tanishasharma2108

    I was a silent reader of your ff mostly I don’t comment in Nanny ffs but I comment very rarely and you ff just made me comment what should i say about your ff its more than anything else

  12. Meeta

    |Registered Member

    Ishq ho gaya h Aapke iss likhe ki Adaa se.
    These episodes kill me, Damn.
    I loved it to the core.
    Shit.
    Spellbound.
    Update soon.

  13. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    Loooovvveeedd it….

    Their hot romance😍😍😍

    Looking forward to see the “kunj manao. mission”….

    ur ff is fabulous….💞💞💞💞💞

  14. jasmin

    Hey di..i noe i usually dont comment..plzz forgive me..but i have read all ur epis..all r amazing..n i just love ur ff..u r an amazing writer..m soo glad that i came to tu n found soo many super writers + sis..u noe its just a fantabulous epi..i srsly loved each n every line..loved the bold twinkle..i must say..a hot wala epi..hehe..bacho ko aisi baat shobha nahi deti..hehe..but srsly..love u loads..muah!!

  15. Jisha

    |Registered Member

    Awesome episode…so romantic… loved it dear… warning was the highlight…😃😃😃
    Wilder side of Twinkle…

  16. Kai

    Awesome. I didn’t understand the Last POV of Kunj and Twinkle as I don’t know hindi. Can someone translate for me please. Thanks.

  17. Sidhanshi

    Wowwww…saby saby saby!!! U r toooo much good yaar.. U r da best… Nd the wild side of twinkle,,, oh i just love it.. Love this hot wala episode & love u too…:-*

  18. sujina

    wow wow wow…
    finally twinj romance tht was incomplete in tei is complete…OMG how can u write such romantically…twinkles bold avatar is jst on d top…n kunj don have words 2 explain…happy 4 kunj…n loved it 2 d core..
    u were suspense queen n now romance queen…n post nxt asap…

  19. foreverfanoftwinj

    Saby Saby Saby jee chahta hai teri tarrefon mein burj khalifa ka cousin bana dun…
    Itna accha epi …
    Ab bolne k lie kuch nhi bacha Jo bolna tha vo aadhe se zyada zikra ne bol diya…
    Baki bachi kuchi kasar sayeeda di ne puri kr di.,.
    But phir bhi desh ki acchi nagrik hone k naate mera ye farz banta hai Ki mai is desh k upcoming romantic writer SABY ko comments se nawazun…
    Seriously it was damn killer one…
    Chalo ab bakiyon k lie bhi kuch chod deti hu ..
    But shi mein dil chura lia aapne…
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  20. Angita

    |Registered Member

    He he I know you said kiddos stay away….I just saw your episode so first I scroll down to see the other comments…..and read the episode despite your warning but it was nice dii……how’ll I dare to bash you up di…you’re saby di….

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm angita😘
      So sorry for telling to b away…… to my sisiii…
      And shorrry that I thot uh wud bash me…
      Of course I know uh won’t do that….
      Bt was nt confirmed wether its appropriate or not…. So said that….
      Bt I m glad uh liked it…. Love uh😍😍

  21. Chehak

    |Registered Member

    Wohooooo. Itna romance omg. Itna zyada
    Kamaaal kar diya 💕❤️😈👻😻😺😽🙀😱🤐👏🏻

    • Saby

      |Author

      Chehak ki bachi😘
      Atlast dekh mene post kar diya tere lia…
      I love ur impatient behaviour….
      Love uh…. Will post asap for uh😍😍

  22. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Damnnn romantic yaar 😍👌❤❤ don’t worry i read on my own risk 😂😂 it was damnn hot and superb do post next one soon … Can’t wait !!! 😂❤😍😃

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm romaisha😘
      And wat uh read on ur own risk???
      Kuch hua toh nahi na….
      Oh god warning an padhti hu toh lagta hai… Bomb thodi tha k mene aesi warning de di… Nvr mind….
      Glad uh liked it ..
      Next will be posted asap

  23. AYESHA KHANUM

    amazing awsome fabulous mind blowing episode koi aap ke tarah likh nahi sakta ap kya kahon aapse mai aapse pyaar karne lagi hoon saby iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii llllllllllllllllllll oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm aayesha😘
      First of all…. Tera naam bada hi pyara hai…. I love ur name… I guess I have TLD uh b4….
      And meri Jaan… Uh words are lil exaguratted… Baby mujse bhi acha acha likhne wale log hai… I m not the best just trying to improve myself….
      Thanks for ur lovely comment and
      I love uh tooo Jaan😍😍😍

  24. Saira

    Amazing
    TwiNj romance was Superb
    looking forward for kunj manao mission and more TwiNj romance
    Love u ☺️

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm saira😘
      I m glad uh liked their romance
      Yeah and many more gonna come in next epi….
      Love uh tooo darling😍😘

  25. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Saby,
    I’ve already told you everything I guess. Anyways, the episode was really superb. Loved the bold Twinkle. Aww..the last POVs were so cute. Ab Kunj ko bol ki shaadi ki hai toh jhelna toh usse hi padhega😂😂 tikhi mirchi, Namkeen samosa, kadvi karela aur aur yaad nahi second last wala. Waiting for another ruthna-manao mission.
    Love you loads.😘
    You know who’s this but still, let me tell you again.
    Your Riu💞💞

    • Saby

      |Author

      Awwwww my riu…. 😘😘😘
      Ty ty ty ty shoooooo muchhhhh
      Ha tune muje sab already bol dia hai….
      Bt then too ur comment brought a smile…
      See ab feeling like Hayeee koi toh roklo…
      And tuje namkeen yaad hai, tekha yaad hai, kadva yaad hai…..
      Tu meetha kese bhul sakti hai its jalebi jesi meethi…. Nvr mind… I undrstnd…
      Mein bhi toh ff k titles bhul jati hu😉
      Another ruthna manao mission k liye me too excited… To post…. Let’s c…
      Love uh toooo much…😍😍😍

  26. Shan

    Omg omg omg….. the writer seems in a great romantic sense lol….. extremely its amazing…. the use of words pumped up lot of loveliness… good going saby… love you

    • Saby

      |Author

      Tysm shan😘
      I didnt knew i cn write sumthng like this…
      I was just a try yaar….
      I m glad infact to much happy witg the response….
      And love uh tooo deardear😍

  27. Baby

    |Registered Member

    omggggggggggggggggggg saby di hell romantic chapter luvd it 2 d core naugty twinj n d cute mnmts understanding kunj evrythning ws jst fab i cnt ryt d big cmnts bt can tell sum wrds about u lets say saby di
    S Stunned by d episode
    A ur ff was Angelic lyk a bride dressed on her wedding
    B ur ff was always Breathtaking d romance pain love passion was always dere in ur ff
    Y di maaf krna Y se toh mein kuch nhi janti hahaha but u r amazing di luv u sooooooooooo sooooooooo.
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    • Saby

      |Author

      Ty ty ty shoooo much baby😘
      Baby ur comment was as cute as uh….
      Seriously I m having a broad curve on lips….
      That’s bcoz of ur comment…
      Caush the way uh described the letters I loved it baby…. Yes the letter ‘y’
      It has no meaning in my life bt though,
      It is inseparable from my name….
      The epi….. Ummmmm….
      It was just a try from my side to write sumthing like this… I m glad uh liked it…
      Love uh took baby😘😘😘😘

  28. Priya

    Loved it.. So glad to know that everything is well b/w the love birds..
    Waiting for the next part

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